SHORT PROFILE
Zanyuki ("snow sunderer")
male
22 years
Virgo
Gai'alshadar - the Order of the Shadow
Filipino
... and trying to earn a Bachelor of Arts degree in Journalism.
FP STATISTICS
On the favorites list of 32 members.
Submitted a total of 288 signed reviews.
Total words archived : 222,051 words.
Avg. number of words per entry : 18,504.
Total review count: 363
Most popular story so far: Tsubasa Reverse, 182 reviews at 15 chapters
RECIPROCAL REVIEW SYSTEM. donate a review, and I will return the favor (it might take a while but I will.)
THE WORKS
Tears of the Dragon
status: COMPLETE!
description: An episode that happens between the first and second books of the Elexiad. In this scenario Elexa Dragonwing, the first Resonant of the Testament Angel Serapis and last hope of her race, tries to destroy the Udjet, the Eye of God, with cataclysm looming in the horizon.
An Oath in the Storm
status: IN PROGRESS!
description: The Moonborn--a Wraith-Army from the East--has decimated most of the kingdoms of Men. Anima, sentient core of Elisseril and controller of Destiny, had been shattered. A land teetering on the edge of oblivion, where a supreme God had been destroyed by his own creation, and in a world where the very definition of life and freedom is unclear... Now what stood in the Moonborn's path is Leyne Moonfall, the Sonata--friend, lover, and sister to the Lord of the Moonborn, Zanyuki Tsukino, and the oath they had made, in a storm long ago. (heavy incest, please proceed with care)
Tsubasa Reverse: The Devil King
status: COMPLETE!
description: The three-part introduction to Tsubasa Reverse, the original fiction based on the now-defunct Ichiraku Ramen RPG “Kibou no Tsubasa” (which I wrote the original story for). The Devil King treats the main character of Tsubasa Reverse, Nive Eventide, and his confrontation with The Devil King, the leader of the fallen Elder Race in its quest to bring back the world under their rule.
Grandmother Fireside Tales - The Story of the Two Trees
status: COMPLETE!
description: The first part of the “Folklore of Elisseril” series of short stories. This is the Creation Myth of the world of Elisseril, the universe where “An Oath in the Storm” was set. This was written in the perspective of a grandmother telling a late-night story to her grandchildren. Note: experimental.
The World of Tsubasa
status: IN PROGRESS!
description: The history and background information of Nithelice, the name of the world where Tsubasa Reverse was set in. Most of it involves the country of Harmonia, the country central to the story of Tsubasa Reverse.
Tsubasa Reverse
status: IN PROGRESS!
description: My main project as of the moment, Tsubasa Reverse is a parallel world of Kibou no Tsubasa: Revival of Eternity, and a mix of high fantasy and manga elements. A deadly Winter had stayed in the world for nearly two centuries and humanity wages a contest of war every five years to rule Harmonia, the Promised Land of summer and plenty. But as they engage in petty squabbling a force of unimaginable power rises from the shadows, ready to retake a world that was once theirs. An outcast Silver Cross Judge, Nive Eventide, must then confront his humanity to save both himself and a world and time on its death throes...
Tsubasa Redux
status: COMPLETE!
description: 5677 Imperial Age, last year of the War of the Mages. Halifiene and Sindthar had been destroyed. Escaldan possesses the superweapon Avalon that would annihilate all of mankind. The last hope lies in the remaining force of Felgarde, sent on a desperate, final mission to prevent Avalon being activated again. And at the very center of the war are two childhood friends, Rian and Yuki, who fight on opposing sides of the war, and the inevitable conclusion of their battle.
Tsubasa Revolution
status: COMPLETE!
description: 4544 Imperial Age, during the final battle of the War of Flowers. Here is the fictional Monogatari no Sakura, one of the great feast days of Salamea, Harmonia's ally in Tsubasa Reverse. this is the curse-ridden love story of lovers forever bound in a cycle of death and rebirth - and the joy and pain of reunion and loss.
Tsubasa Radical
status: COMPLETE!
description: "Man is a wolf to himself." Building on the premise of this central concept, Tsubasa Radical is the tale that revealed the real beginnings of the end of the first civilization of men. Discover the real story behind the most destructive war ever recorded in Nithelice's history--and mankind's dark secret that had been lost during the time of Tsubasa Reverse.
UPDATE NEWS
June 1: Sorry guys for not updating, but my time had been occupied by the ANIMAX Awards 2007: A Story I wish to be Animated. It's a drawing/writing competition in which the grand prize is to be animated, plus 2 million yen (18,000USD) in cash prize. The submission has just ended yesterday, and now I'm currently writing the next chapter for Reverse. Sorry for the wait!
SPECIAL THANKS
To the ones who reviewed! Your feedback and your comments are much appreciated; you are the ones who had made the world of Nithelice, Elisseril, and all these worlds to life because of your support. I hope for your continued readership!
Special mention go to these people (check them out guys):
elisefey - for being the first person to really criticize the work and give me a chance to improve.
ainedamdz - fellow Pinoy writer... you rock, dude/gal/whatever (LOL). your ideas are one of a kind!
JJSLAM2129 - my soon-to-be beta, and a frequent reader!
Aki-kun: for drawing the first-ever Tsubasa Reverse art for me! Yay!
incandescente - for keeping track of my progress. tell me if you need help, okay! it's the only way i can repay you. XD
MaranweTelrunya - another frequent reviewer; i appreciate and respect your comments! i hope to hear more from you! btw your story Lily Payne is still the best story i've ever found in FP!
Noihseret - for being the current record holder of the most number of reviews in my stories. thank you so much!
felicia13: another frequent reviewer, and the one who gave me the 100th review for Tsubasa Reverse!
Fiore Chnudth: a really good writer and a better reviewer than some, a nice guideline as i unfold the events of Tsubasa Reverse. a very big thanks to you dude!
guys, go and read the stories of these wonderful people i've thanked above. you are doing me, them, and yourselves a very big favor!
and to all the unsigned reviews, who are often someone i know. thanks guys!
RANDOM / ANNOUNCEMENTS
All right I know I've been such a total wuss for not updating for nearly a year (or over? I dunno, I haven't really kept track--days fly by faster than a bullet) but for the loyal readers of Tsubasa Reverse and my other stories, please be patient as I will be rewriting a large material of the Tsubasa Universe, including a total revamp of The Devil King, The World of Tsubasa, Tsubasa Redux, Tsubasa Radical, and several chapters of Tsubasa Reverse. The reason is that I have found a LOT of inconsistencies in the overall universe, and it needs to be overhauled.
The following will list a few of the big changes that I will make.
1.) Exclusion of Aoi Leinster as a Tsubasa Reverse character. Instead he will feature in his own Tsubasa side-story.
2.) The removal of the Deimos race.
3.) The entire history of the Tsubasa universe.
4.) Removal of the Elves to become the Fae, and the addition of races called the Naga and the Vailed.
5.) Winter Wars mechanic and the Demeter Throne.
6.) Costume designs for Nive and Seles.
7.) Character biographies for Fyreon, Liera, and Fanella.
As such the aforementioned stories will be put on hold. I will fire off an update alert should they be modified to their final version. Until then, keep your eyes glued! Thanks!
CHAPTER REACTION for Tsubasa Reverse (15)
To keep the chapters from being cluttered, I will post the blurbs and review reactions I will make to the reviewers here, well, just because. NOTE that I am not disputing what you reviewed, I just want to give you some points for thought before the new update a week later. And as always, I'm very grateful for your reviews!
Lord of The Trees: Wow, thanks so much for keeping track of the story. I hope I won't disappoint as I unravel the world of Tsubasa.
JJSLAM2129: Again, you never fail to point out something that I needed to work on. The fight in midair was a little underrepresented, so the dimension of them "falling" and "hitting the ground" (which did not happen during the course of the fight, only during the initial attack) was a bit vague. But thank you for finding the descriptions and the action-y mood of this chapter cool. XD
anti-climax: Just when I thought you'd given up on TR, here you are with another review. Thanks! And yes, I know it was a little unclear, but Aoi's rescuer and the one before is ONE and the SAME.
Noihseret: I'm happy you found the last line enchanting; I put extra work on it. Naaah, not really. I actually thought it was pretty weak, but since you said it's nice, then nice it is. Thanks for the review!
felicia13: One of the key features in Tsubasa Reverse is my attempt to weave seemingly separate storylines at once. Forgive me if I shouldn't be able to live to your expectations, although you have my thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you'll still be here for the next one!
AND ONCE AGAIN, I'LL LOVE YOU FOR FOREVER (AND THEN SOME) IF YOU MANAGE TO DROP A REVIEW, NO MATTER HOW SHORT. I WILL GIVE YOU A REVIEW IN RETURN IF YOU DO!
~ diamond_dust08
WORDS OF WISDOM
"It is the nature of men to make monsters, and it is the nature of monsters to destroy their makers."
- Dr. Harlan Wade, from F.E.A.R.
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