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Author has written 71 stories for Young Adult, Life, General, Friendship, Historical, Family, War, General, Love, Essay, and Nature. Man, my old writings are utter shit. I hope my new ones are lesser shit. Read. Decide for yourself. | |||||||
1. anemic anemone reviewsFull Title: anemic anemone: take what you get, love; the love isn't yours. I see Brad and John in infatuation, love, that. shrug.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-16-05 - Published: 8-16-052. Kiss the coaster where you lost your lunch & love reviewscarnival lights and nauseating smells, smog, do you love me? it? what!Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-9-05 - Published: 8-9-053. Arend Apple Tree: Male reviewsPIDpidpidpidpidpidpidpidPIDpidPIDp / idpidpidPIDPIDPIDPidpiDpidpidpidpidpid / PIDPIDPIDPIDPIDPIDJonathan / never turns the music / down.Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-4-05 - Published: 8-4-054. Liquid Crystal Display reviewsThe Psychology of Marcy.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,155 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-25-05 - Published: 7-25-055. Streamthe words meandered across the screen is all. i just let them flow and so here's a comment on things at the moment.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-21-05 - Published: 3-21-056. what a night, huh kid? reviewsthings never seem real, really.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-6-05 - Published: 3-6-057. trapped detachment reviewsstuck in purgatorial stagnation, hoping for some sort of something.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-058. Snow 2 reviewsIt's snowed for nearly five days straight. It's been freezing and pure and the birds have been to visit on the back deck. No one else. We're all buried, I guess. But at least all we see is light.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-27-05 - Published: 1-27-059. finite infinity reviews..because there's you and three sets of breaths/and a quiet mess/a loving silence/radiating from the four some-odd white/walls..Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-17-05 - Published: 1-17-0510. September's conversation hearts reviews..nothing on a Saturday night/but a cheap/whore on the edge of logic/teetering cause I know this isn't/feeling..Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-17-05 - Published: 1-17-0511. Merry Christmas, Dear reviewsA second nothing written for English class. Full of resentment. Happy Christmas.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 677 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-0412. Island of Antiquity reviewsA little nothing of Martha's Vineyard I wrote for English class.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 538 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-0413. Christmas Parade reviewsThe wise men like their marijuana.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-0414. Yellow Balloons and Green Bubblegum in the Air reviewsI have no clue. I wrote this awhile ago. I think I was talking about being happy. It just sounds like I'm high.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-0415. Etc reviewsI started with an idea for a story but it just developed into a random spurting of my thoughts with no real structure or anything. I feel like Charlie from the Perks of Being a Wallflower.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 806 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-3-04 - Published: 9-3-0416. California reviewsHey, dad. This is for you. Pff.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-17-04 - Published: 8-17-0417. North River Bridge reviewsTime is yesterday and tomorrow but never nowLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-17-04 - Published: 8-17-0418. It's Poetic It's Pathetic reviewsThanks to the musical Rent for the title line..It expresses the uselessness I feel sometimes and the silly little caricature we can represent or try to be..Oh, poetry...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-0419. Deja Vu reviewsMust I explain..Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-0420. Ailis Waiting reviewsAilis is wishing, waiting for something.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 676 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-04 - Published: 7-21-0421. Tiled Walls » reviewsThe aqua of the glazed tile wall appeared dull in the minimal light of dusk that barely filtered through the square, pane less windows...Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,390 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-20-04 - Published: 4-12-0422. Depression » reviewsNew chapters up..All of these are my short little responses to the CircleofSadness post at TPS. Anyway, I guess they're just thoughts on how the feeling of depression can progress..r&r if you'd like..thanks..Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 9 - Words: 532 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-15-04 - Published: 4-13-0423. Fingers drop from a loose grip reviews...Years circled in parabolic ecstasy..and met here with all points converging..in an unintelligible mess of ruined lines...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-14-04 - Published: 7-14-0424. Building on Division reviewsPoem inspired by my dad and all the feelings around the whole situation...trying to forget just doesn't work because one has to deal with things some day. I'll try and disregard that for now.. R&R thank you.Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-21-04 - Published: 6-21-0425. People Wearing Different Hats reviewsWho remembers that commercial? People people people wearing diff-er-ent hats! Trying diff-er-ent uhthis-es, and different thats! That has nothing to do with anything. Here's a poem.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-11-04 - Published: 6-11-0426. Letters reviewsSo, I guess strict structure stifles it all..Anyway, repost. This is about thinking about life, your past, all the thoughts that come, and that urge to record it all, posting it for all to see, each poem for certain people, a person...anyway..thanks.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-8-04 - Published: 6-8-0427. Weeping in an Unreal City reviewsWritten along with a painting I did for a project about World War I. Disillusionment, lost hope, all that. The title is inspired by some lines from T.S. Eliot's The Waste Land. Also written in similar style and theme.War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,064 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-6-04 - Published: 6-6-0428. A Dream reviewsI had a dream of this image; this wave of red falling over a city like some sort of video game. It was too real.War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-6-04 - Published: 6-6-0429. The Comedy that is Delia » reviewsWell, this isn't much of a comedy anymore, I realize, so, therefore, I've been trying to add some little bits of..funniness..into the chapters. Anyway, new chapter 14 up. Read and review please : )Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 14 - Words: 8,337 - Reviews: 45 - Updated: 4-23-04 - Published: 5-2-0330. Van Gogh reviewsI wrote this from Van Gogh's point of view..as if he were viewing his subject for A Starry Night, or actually painting it. R&R please.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-21-04 - Published: 4-21-0431. For My Friends reviewsI can feel hopeless when my friends aren't alright. Not only is it frustrating, but it's saddening as well. I wrote this while talking to one friend as she told of feelings of emptiness...but it's to all of my friends, cause I love them.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-21-04 - Published: 4-21-0432. A Quiet Bird reviews...In the night sky...Where the moon shone around uneven stars...A wire birdcage hung about the clouds...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-16-04 - Published: 4-16-0433. Perception of Eternity reviews...Circles must begin somewhere/And that line you draw on the paper will never end...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-12-04 - Published: 4-12-0434. Evelyn » reviewsOnce again, sorry for the long long long delay! I have plans for chapter 7 now, and Evelyn's Victorian tale will continue, hopefully, with a continued pace. Please r&r! Thank you.Historical - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,175 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 4-12-04 - Published: 8-17-0335. Nostalgia and Easter Eggs reviewsA simple piece I wrote quickly when I was thinking about, well, Easter. Nostalgic and whatnot, as you can see from the title. Read and review if you'd like. Thank you.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-12-04 - Published: 4-12-0436. Mes Espoirs reviewsI poem I wrote for a challenge at thepoetsanctuary.net. It's in French, but fear not those who cannot speak it! There is a translation. P.s. Mes Espoirs means My Hopes. Enjoy.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-12-04 - Published: 4-12-0437. But this poem sucks reviewsI was listening to some Coheed and just thought about this feeling.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-3-04 - Published: 4-3-0438. Wind reviewsAbout the wind. I wrote it as I watched the snow through the tiny window in my room. Then i revised it A LOT. Now, it is better. Suggestions are welcome. r&r please thank you.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-29-04 - Published: 3-29-0439. Along That Empty Road reviewsA re-post of an older poem, but this one has better format and such. Read and review if you'd like. Thank you.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-26-04 - Published: 3-26-0440. Starting Fire reviewsI suppose this poem is about how upset you can get sometimes, and how awful you can feel remembering everything before you felt like that...And then realizing that you had your part in ruining it, with your negative thoughts, whether you did it consciouslLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-13-04 - Published: 3-13-0441. A Brilliant Moment of Optimism reviewsThe sunset was so beautiful the other night and I can hardly describe it. This is my attempt to, and what I thought about as I looked at it all the way home. Reading and Reviewing would be appreciated. Thank you, : )Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-13-04 - Published: 3-13-0442. License Plates Litter my Room reviewsJust a musing of mine about the license plates I have in my room...A bit random, off beat almost. I don't know, I like it alright. R&r if you'd like.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-20-04 - Published: 2-20-0443. In Our Sadness reviewsTo my friends. You know, I love you jerks. And I wish everyone could just be happy. This poem is quite long, but please r&r cause it means a lot to me.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-24-04 - Published: 1-24-0444. Fluorescent reviewsI feel uncomfortable when i go to see that therapist woman, and it's just not helping because I can't say much of what's on my mind most of the time. Well, r&r s'il vous plait.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-24-04 - Published: 1-24-0445. Down Past the Fence reviewsI guess it's sort of about moving past the comfort of your friends, to go find something new. Be independent. Maybe it's how I would like to do that but can't really. yes well I kind of borrowed a Coheed&Cambria lyric, so thanks Claudio. heh. r&r please.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-24-04 - Published: 1-24-0446. Thought of an Old Habit on New Year reviewsIt's a new year and this old habit is still present. r&r if you like.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-24-04 - Published: 1-24-0447. Another Pained Christmas reviewsAbout, well, another pained Christmas in my family. Something always happens that takes away the joy we feel during the time, and I wish it would change, but I guess it never does..I really love this poem, because it's about Christmas lights, so, er, pleaGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-24-04 - Published: 1-24-0448. Wave Away reviewsI was sad and sitting at the ocean right before I wrote this. Something had happened and I just sat in the chair and the water kept running over my ankles. So I wrote this as we were driving home...Read and Review please. Thank you.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-9-04 - Published: 1-9-0449. WishingThe deep, infinite sky The darkest shade of blue A bed for restless stars to lie Yearning for freedom as we doGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-9-04 - Published: 1-9-0450. At This Moment reviewsI just wrote this man. I wasn't thinking about much structure or poetry. I wanted to convey something of what I felt. And this is it. So. Insight into how I'm feeling, how I do feel sometimes. Shrug. Read&Review if you like.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-9-04 - Published: 1-9-0451. Winter...Still photographic slides running through my mind::The paper on which these images lie::Is so light and unassuming::Until it leaves these papercutsLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-7-03 - Published: 12-7-0352. Deep Blue reviewsfriendship problems. you feel like you keep trying and putting yourself out there only to make the problem worse. it becomes useless. the inspiration for this poem was kind of. all in my head...in a way. well this is an interesting summary right? still,Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-0353. Losing My Place reviewsa short poem about that feeling you get sometimes. like you've lost yourself.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-03 - Published: 10-30-0354. Beyond the Pane reviewsTired Intense light Lost in the darkness. Somber eyes, You look different to me.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-30-03 - Published: 10-30-0355. Lighting All That Was LostAlong the deep forest Unsure steps Fall amongst the trees, Darkening all with shade, While stagnant air creeps.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-30-03 - Published: 10-30-0356. Neverending Circle reviewswell that's redundant isn't it? eh, disregard the title. and read please. danke.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-10-03 - Published: 10-10-0357. Hopes Fallen reviewsnothing seems to be good anymore. is it worth trying? no, but i do..Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-10-03 - Published: 10-10-0358. Cherished Forgotten Star reviews"the first star i see. may not be. a star." -jimmy eat world...yeah well that kind of pertains. but not really. yeah so something beautiful can be only thought of for a moment and then it's gone. shrug.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-10-03 - Published: 10-10-0359. A Star Among the Clouds reviewsThe clouds have disappeared Leaving a dark blue sky The moon shines so clear It was hidden in haze these nightsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-17-03 - Published: 8-17-0360. I Must Accept It reviewsMisconceptions of you alive and well I listen with my best stone face You began sincere and earnest Telling all that cannot be erasedFamily - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-17-03 - Published: 8-17-0361. Surrounded and Forlorn reviewsI feel so alone. Surrounded by the people I know. But do they know? Do you know? I am stationary in the sea of movement.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-31-03 - Published: 7-31-0362. Our Table reviewsOur table Is laden with good intentions. All my attempts to share. Our table Is laced with indifference For you don't really care.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0363. A Drop of Water in the Desert reviewsA drop of water in the desert. You fight for continuation. An oasis in an arid world. Life surrounded by desolation.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0364. The Words reviewsSometimes things are just too hard to write down. Eloquence is the suppressed rain during a drought. There are no words to describe. There is only what you feel within.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-0365. Useless Catharsis reviewsI yearn to scream. The loudest cry reverberates But inside my head it seems. Holding it in will never abate.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-30-03 - Published: 6-30-0366. Numb? reviewsNumbness. Most say it is this. The lack of feeling. The indifference. Spinning into a world. Nothing matters.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-03 - Published: 6-27-0367. Knot reviewsI sit here at this screen A knot within my stomach. Not a reason to be knotted. It still remains to be seen.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-25-03 - Published: 6-25-0368. I Stand in the Center of a Hurricane reviewsI stand in the center of a hurricane Screaming out for help. Calling for a savior. No one came.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-9-03 - Published: 6-9-0369. Orhcestra of Denial reviewsProblems fall below the surface As the disease unfolds. Scars run along the surface Yet their stories remain untold.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-7-03 - Published: 6-7-0370. The Sea reviewsI am in the ocean. I spend my days awaiting a new wave to bring alteration. A variable in the vast expanse that is feeling.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-03 - Published: 5-9-0371. Realization reviewsbasic plot line, i suppose. just a girl who kept things it and had to let them out eventually. don't be too nice with the review, but don't be terribly mean either..i'm new to this.Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 472 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-17-03 - Published: 4-17-03
