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Author has written 19 stories for General, Love, Life, Friendship, War, Spiritual, Nature, and Song. I am a 17 year old guy from southern California. I am desperate for reviews! Plz give me as much HELPFUL info as you can. i love star wars, garth nix, les miserables, anime, Lord of the Rings, uh...will add to list as i see fit I mostly post poetry, but i have a short story in progress i am posting 1 ch. at a time. I'm also trying to write a novel, but it's not going so well. :( I created my own form of poetry, Penta-ku. First line is one syllable, then 2 lines of 2, 3 of 3, up to 5. Repeat for as many verses as u need. See my poems labeled as Penta-ku for examples. To all my fellow Christians out there, Shine the Light! To all others, I will be happy to discuss anything at all you might like to talk about with me, just e-mail me! I especially enjoy complicated philosophical/religious stuff. | |||||||
1. You Left Me reviewsA song about the time my girlfriend left me. Not as deep as it might sound at first, especially considering the ending.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-30-04 - Published: 7-30-042. City reviewsI don't exactly live in "the big city," but it is what it is. For anyone who hates not seeing the stars at night.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-27-04 - Published: 6-27-043. Summer Flies reviewsPractically every poet has writen one about the change of seasons. Here's mine.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-16-04 - Published: 6-16-044. How Great reviewsI always wanted to write a Christian hymn, and here it is.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-18-04 - Published: 5-18-045. Love is a rose reviewsAn attempet at extended metaphor, enjoy!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-18-04 - Published: 5-18-046. The Tree I Saw reviewsThis is about the tree in my front yard. It's pretty dumb, but some people might find meaning in it. R&R please!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-25-04 - Published: 3-25-047. Fallen Angel reviewsThis one is dedicated to, well, she knows who she is...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-20-04 - Published: 1-20-048. Judgment Day » reviewsA man dies and faces his final judgment at the hands of God. Yes I am a Cristian, and I know this may turn out a little sappy even though I hate 'Chicken soup 4 the soul', but oh well, R&R plz anyway. A work in progress, but CH 2 is up!Spiritual - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,149 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-16-03 - Published: 6-11-039. Everyday Battle reviewsEach and every day is a struggle. Just read, then review if you feel like it.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-16-03 - Published: 10-16-0310. Untitled reviewsThis mostly refers to one good friend, Mira-Chan. Just read.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-4-03 - Published: 9-4-0311. Warm at Last reviewsI wrote the poem Cold in Nov 02, i wrote this in June 03 as a counterpoint to Cold, to show how my life has changed. Please R&R both and notice the contrasts and ironies.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-11-03 - Published: 6-11-0312. Why Try? reviewsIf you read my poetry, you'll get the idea that I screw up a lot. I do. This is just another !@#$ I screwed up poem.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-30-03 - Published: 5-30-0313. A Civilian's Point of View, a pentaku reviewsThe title says it all. R&R! In my own poetry form, Penta-kuWar - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-30-03 - Published: 5-30-0314. Your Heart, A pentaku reviewsA penta-ku, my own poetry form. Goes with one of my other ones. R&R PLEASE!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-27-03 - Published: 5-27-0315. Rage and Hope, A pentaku reviewsA penta-ku, my own poetry form.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-27-03 - Published: 5-27-0316. If I Hurt You, reviewsTo all those people I've hurt, a song.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-21-03 - Published: 5-21-0317. Cold reviewsA poem. Just read.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-13-03 - Published: 5-13-0318. To the Girl I'll Love Forever a pentaku reviewsShe broke my heart. In my own poetry form: Penta-kuLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-12-03 - Published: 5-12-0319. Before The Game reviewsA short poem, an athlete's pre-game self peptalkGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-12-03 - Published: 5-12-03
