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Author has written 28 stories for Life, Family, Love, General, Friendship, Song, Essay, and Nature. I'm a High School junior with an obsession for dragons and Japanese (anime and the language). I write nice, happily morbid poems (Occasionally with a morbid subject hidden below happy words or even a happy subject, such as in "Call for Hate's Bane" where the subject is love) and science fiction/fantasy. Attempt to write 'short' stories, but they usually end up.. longer than intended. I've a tendency for sesquipedalian writing. I usually write poetry in free verse, but sometimes I'll use rhyming schemes and--even less often--spend ecessive time editing the poem to have alliteration or meter. My poems tend to be raw, unabashed emotion... the angry poems scare me when I'm in a cheery mood. Please review with suggestions or just general comments; merely saying that you really like or don't like the work isn't very constructive, if you don't like it please tell me why so that I can improve what I do. Flat out praise is very good for my ego, but I know my poems aren't perfect, so even little suggestions (such as if there's a typo) are helpful. Even if it seems insignificant, tell me so I can watch for it. Or, you can not take the time to really think about the review and just tell me your opinion on it. :P But Constructive reviews are much more useful, which is really the point of this little rant. I personally think that my three best poems are "Angels Burn and Demons Sing", "Numb to Pain", and "Call for Hate's Bane", so if you like one of my other poems I personally think that those three are better, and "Call for Hate's Bane" is the most edited of the three (it actually has things like alliteration that I put in on purpose O_O! lol.). IM me!!! Just tell me that you're IMing me from Fictionpress or I might go all Angels-Burn-and-Demons-Sing on you :P *paranoid* >.>;; yeah. prolly just completely deterred you from IMing me. | |||||||
1. TermesInspired by branches being blown by the wind, contains some LatinNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-7-04 - Published: 12-7-042. Genius in Our TermsWhat is Genius? A philosophical analysis of the word and its applicationsEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-30-04 - Published: 11-30-043. Genderless is Love reviewsWritten after listening to the presidential debate's piece on gay marriage.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-18-04 - Published: 10-18-044. Be My Hero NowRather sad, about the quest for my family, my safety netLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-7-04 - Published: 10-7-045. Fallen AngelsFalling to hell and the sun choosing not to rise again. Definately wrote this in a bad mood (I tend to do that >.>;;)Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-30-04 - Published: 9-30-046. Darkness's SearchAbout finding the 'darkness' (interpret as you wish) when it was looking for you. Found this in my room just recently, thought I'd post it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-30-04 - Published: 9-30-047. Power of Emptiness reviewsA short essay discussing the power and potential of a blank pageEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 432 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-04 - Published: 9-21-048. Wings of Hate, Wings of Knowledge reviews'nother one of my poems beseeching my rents to remember i'm not a lil girl anymore and let me beFamily - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-2-04 - Published: 6-2-049. Demon reviewsMy dark side, I guess is the best way to describe this-it's a poem describing the part of me which would laugh while on a homicidal rampage. Perhaps it's also the truly insane part of me... hmm. PG for contentLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-1-04 - Published: 6-1-0410. Demonic Angels reviewskind of an attempt to explain hate, anger, rage and who to blame it on. PG for concept, really...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-1-04 - Published: 6-1-0411. Forgotten Tears reviewsA kind of plea for freedom from ignorance/false love/overprotectiveness and the tears that are there but aren't criedFamily - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-27-04 - Published: 5-27-0412. You've Never Given Me That reviewsMusings about the effect of being shuffled from place to place, a silent way of saying thanks for nothing. PG-13 for language.Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-04 - Published: 5-9-0413. Daughter my DaughterSong version of Daughter of Misery; there was an issue with the upload, so most of the '.'s should be '...'s.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-28-04 - Published: 4-28-0414. Forgotten FriendsIn ten years of school I've been to eight, this is a tribute to everyone who's forgotten me and doesn't/didn't care; also, this loneliness I feel is mine, and you can't take it away from me. R&R please.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-20-04 - Published: 4-20-0415. Daughter of MiseryAsking what benefit could be taken from betrayal and transfer of misery, in the context of twisted 'friendship'. R&R pleaseFriendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-20-04 - Published: 4-20-0416. Demon's Eyes reviewsThe hidden goodness in a demon's eyes; Kinda about the good that is in all of us somewhereLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-11-04 - Published: 4-11-0417. Master of the Macabre reviewsPoem I wrote for a creative section of a research paper on Stephen KingGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-15-04 - Published: 3-15-0418. Freedom Fighters reviewsTalking about freedom and fighting for freedom. PG13 for concept.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-17-04 - Published: 2-17-0419. Combine Opposites to Save Emotion reviewsResroration of balance with love and hate. If you read, please review.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-04 - Published: 2-15-0420. Call for Hate's Bane reviewsAn expression of the feeling of searching for the feeling of love which i had before and have since lostLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-11-04 - Published: 2-11-0421. Spiral to Hell reviewsSadness, and thinking about those things which have to be controlled but i don't feel like i can anymore; kind of a biting remark towards a certain someoneLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-25-03 - Published: 11-25-0322. Fly Away reviewsThe box that parents put you in to 'protect you' from the 'big bad world' and how miserably it failsFamily - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-3-03 - Published: 11-3-0323. Wish to Freedom reviewsKinda wanting to be free of the restraints that parents induce upon their childrenFamily - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-2-03 - Published: 11-2-0324. Suppressed Feelingsabout overprotective parents and their insistance on responsibility and contradictiory natureFamily - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-7-03 - Published: 6-7-0325. Belong reviewsInspired by the song Somewhere I Belong by Linkin Park.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-5-03 - Published: 6-5-0326. Numb to Pain reviewsThe game of life, also deals with the subconsious [wings]Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-25-03 - Published: 5-25-0327. Serpent Instinct reviewsA poem about hate. Was originally rated R, but then i was told that it could pass as a slightly heavy PG-13.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-22-03 - Published: 5-22-0328. Angels burn and Demons sing reviewsa quite morbid poetry attack... (random poetry muse, to translate) Darkness, shadows, burningLife - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-19-03 - Published: 5-19-03
