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Author has written 79 stories for Life, Song, Humor, Horror, Friendship, Nature, Love, and General. ooh id forgotten about this place. wahey. urm... well... i still write occasionally. i dont sit down an write a poem like i used to... it has to come to me. and i dont write about the moon anymore, thats for sure. another old habit that ive kicked is writing about emotions that i have no clue about. so many of my old poems are just bollocks - fanciful hyperbole from ideas ive gleaned from movies and fairytales. my more recent stuff is real. very real. in a way i wish i could go back tothe pretty pretty rhyming crap that i churned out 2 years ago. but... thats life. ive grown up a lot. its funny really - 2 years ago i wanted so much to be all old and responsible. now i yearn for the puerile freedom i had. then again, 18 is a milestone i cannot wait to reach... only 2 years 10 months to go... i still dont like capital letters, or apostrophes. and still dont know why. i think it has something todo with laziness... | |||||||
1. loss reviewsbereft couple make choiceGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-27-06 - Published: 8-27-062. death of eloquence'we speak with only our mouths now'Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-27-06 - Published: 8-27-063. what a way to end the day reviews'existance is too fleeting to let existing pass you by'Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-27-06 - Published: 8-27-064. untitled ix reviewsnot macabreLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-065. wanting to evolve too quick reviewsself explanatoryLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-066. still life pt ii reviews...the relivingLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-067. still life pt ithe execution...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-068. nonspectator sports reviewsi want to be on the stage. not watchingLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-069. nostalgia reviewswishing is pointless...but the view is beautifulLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0610. betrayal reviewsthats its name - this is its nature -Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-0511. Past reviewsi was wrong when i said i could move onLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-0512. lessons in livingwhat does make a human... just a thoughtLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-0513. untitled viiLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-0514. untitled vi reviewsLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 7-3-0515. untitled v reviewsLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 7-3-0516. untitled ivLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 7-3-0517. untitled iiLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 7-3-0518. untitled i reviewsLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-16-05 - Published: 4-16-0519. oddity reviewsno mind bending drugs were consumed prior to the conception of this poem. i would like to know what people think of this.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-7-05 - Published: 4-7-0520. Café Epiphany reviewsI am very reluctant to put this one up... the idea came to me and I loved it, but I have not done the concept justice... its really bad, but I hope you can see what Im trying to portray.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-15-04 - Published: 10-15-0421. Nadir reviewsWrote this one in a second today... uninventive, boring, bad comeback after a long time not writing... shrugLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-15-04 - Published: 10-15-0422. Born Actress reviewsA realisation I came to recently. I am the world's best actress.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-5-04 - Published: 9-5-0423. I reviewsOdd poem that I found in the dusts of my book that I had forgotten. How I felt, and still feel.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-0424. Roll Up reviewsUmm swears a coupla times... Very strange icky poem, feeling a bit strange and icky at the mo, so... hope you like it. About a puppet.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-21-04 - Published: 6-21-0425. On Climbing Trees reviewsLight hearted weird little poem I thought up in a second. Read it on any level you want, I really dont care.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-21-04 - Published: 6-21-0426. Cold Water reviewsSwears once. Spontaneous title, spastic poem. i kinda like it though.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-04 - Published: 6-8-0427. Happy Yet? reviewsSorry people I will write some cheerful (and much better) poetry when (if) I feel a bit happier. Dont ask about the title - it was a spur of the moment thingieLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-20-04 - Published: 5-20-0428. Winter Girl reviewsStrangely inspired... been rather depressed lately.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-20-04 - Published: 5-20-0429. Sad Truth reviewsStraaange poem... HATE THE TITLE! Any help on that would be appreciated...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-17-04 - Published: 4-17-0430. Piggies reviewsHmm... the idea came all at once, like it was already written in my head. Hope you like it, I quite like the concept. Rated for a couple of swear wordsLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-17-04 - Published: 4-17-0431. Stop Staring At Me reviewsHmm... strange one, this. Was feeling a bit isolated, like everything I did was one big show for them to watch.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-6-04 - Published: 4-6-0432. Lies reviewsI wrote this a while ago when I was feeling seriously low, and I just thrashed it out. I didnt want to put it up until now, 1. coz it sucks, 2. coz iIhurtLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-14-04 - Published: 3-14-0433. disILLUSIONment reviewsUmmm... dont ask. No, please dont.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-14-04 - Published: 3-14-0434. Crazy World reviewsWeird thing that comes from not getting enough sleep.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-9-04 - Published: 2-9-0435. Taunt reviewsBored in maths, had a pencil and paper, and 5 secs to spare. Result: twisted and scary poetry.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-28-04 - Published: 1-28-0436. Tide reviewsHmm... A somewhat cryptic view on what the world has become. Please tell me what you think it is about, I always enjoy seeing what people read into my on-the-spot rants. Mehmehmehmeeeh...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-6-04 - Published: 1-6-0437. Technicolour Films reviewsDoesn't it seem unfair that in films they always have everything? This is just me sitting in front of a film, wishing my life could be as perfect as theirs. SighLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-18-03 - Published: 12-18-0338. The Window Wall » reviewsYay! My first story! Don't let the rating deter you - it's only because it swears a few times. Okay, its all set in one apartment, but the story is about an underground movement to sabotage a political building. Its not very funny, but I think it has it'sHumor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 942 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 11-26-03 - Published: 5-31-0339. Shoulder For Rent reviewsAnother rant. Sorry. Unappreciated? Understatment. Im always the go-between and Agony Aunt for my mates, and I cant help feeling that they give nothing back. Sigh. Never mind.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-16-03 - Published: 11-16-0340. Porcelain Doll reviewsAbout how people will think that beauty is everything, and never judge on inner beauty. Basically a sort of rant.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-16-03 - Published: 11-16-0341. Untitled reviews...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-11-03 - Published: 10-11-0342. Illegal reviewsNot my best, I dont really like it, but its about this boy i loved and i knew he could never love me back, but i convinced my self otherwise, until...Swears once, s'all.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 313 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 10-1-03 - Published: 10-1-0343. Double Helix reviewsI must be going through a seriously weird streak, because this one is just... spaced out. Read whatever you want into it. I would be interested as to what you think about it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 9-22-03 - Published: 9-22-0344. Train of Thought reviewsa very weird but very personal piece. dont really like the title, so any suggestions...? it has to be said, i didnt knowingly do it, but when i wrote this poem i had one of my favourite poems in mind - Candy Apples and Redemption, by Saki Taka. read it -Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-25-03 - Published: 8-25-0345. Opposites » reviewsTwo poems that are total opposites of each other - and i wrote them both ina bout five minutes read the bit at the end, it kinda explains.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 8-9-03 - Published: 8-9-0346. Object Of Hate reviewsokay, so this is bad, but i wasnt feeling very good, at all, so it was just how i was feeling at that time.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-9-03 - Published: 8-9-0347. Soar reviewsShort and sweet.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0348. No Next Time reviewsAbout... repetition. Im not sure if this is about hope or being bored. you figure it out.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0349. One Nutter and Her Pen reviewsNow this one really is strange. About someone who is neither a pessimist or an optimist. Short n sweet. I think. (As for the title, I got pissed off with it having no title, so... TA-DAA! Result.)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0350. Cause and Effect reviewsIm not sure about this one... its kinda vague. And yet specific at the same time. Oh, just read.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0351. Perfection Embodied reviewsAnother love thingy. I was writing this at something to one in the morning, and it just came to me. It means a lot to me. Dont steal it.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0352. You reviews*Looks embarressed*... a poem about love... What on earth am I doing!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0353. Get A Life reviewsStrange, I know. Just... read it...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0354. Moon reviewsWhat do you think? Yup, well done. It's about the MOON. I know I don't normally do description poems, but I felt like it, okay?Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-13-03 - Published: 7-13-0355. Sun reviewsWhat do you think? Yup, well done. It's about the SUN. I knwo I don't normally do description poems, but I felt like it, okay?Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-13-03 - Published: 7-13-0356. Definitions reviewshmmm... even im not sure what this is about. well, i'll try to explain. i think its about how we are all insignificant, and how we really dont careLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0357. Just Be reviewshmm... basically about how people are too busy to care about this world. however, the first bit is different. i started, then changed half way through. thats me for ya!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0358. Still Be Here reviewsjust a poem about friendship :DFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0359. Nameless reviewsgod, i hate people. this is about... how people really couldnt give a... shed. they only think of themselves!Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0360. The Run reviewsOmigod PLEEEEEEASE dont ask me what this is about. it is based on a nightmare that I had. need Isay more? it is strange, at the very least...Horror - Fiction Rated: K - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,971 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-0361. Scream reviewsme. again. ... read the NB, it kinda explains it. hopefully...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-19-03 - Published: 6-19-0362. Stuck in the Middle reviewsabout me. i wrote it a while ago, when i was... not so good at writing poetry. its more of a song than a poem...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 375 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-19-03 - Published: 6-19-0363. Don't Panic! reviewsa feel-good poem. (wow... a happy poem? by me? whats the world coming to...) just DONT PANIC!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-19-03 - Published: 6-19-0364. Time reviewsread the title ^^ :DLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-19-03 - Published: 6-19-0365. No More reviewswar. i hate it. i hate it! thats basically what this poem's about.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-19-03 - Published: 6-19-0366. Why? reviewsrather doomy and gloomy, buthey, i was depressed when i wrote it (no suprise there...)... Its about... how we have dug ourselves into a hole, and we only have ourselves to blame.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-17-03 - Published: 6-17-0367. Could you tell me? reviewsQuestions - do you really know the definitions of these words? not my best, by far. but it just flowed, so...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-12-03 - Published: 6-12-0368. Would You? reviewsA poem about... friendship, love, whatever you want it to mean. it can be as personal as you want. it kinda just came to me. enjoy...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-10-03 - Published: 6-10-0369. Deep Down reviewsJust about how i feel inside. Had to be said. I know the rhythm goes a bit haywire in places, but i dont care. it gets a message across.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-7-03 - Published: 6-7-0370. Desolate reviewsQuite scary actually... about being lost inside yourself whilst soul-searching...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-31-03 - Published: 5-31-0371. Fray reviewsAhhh... relief... its a not-very-philosophical poem for those whose heads hurt... ;) About being INSANE!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-29-03 - Published: 5-29-0372. Haunted reviewsAbout beaing HAUNTED by memories... we've all felt like that at times...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-29-03 - Published: 5-29-0373. Breaking Through reviewsI dunno... read whatever you want into it. Its rather vague...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-29-03 - Published: 5-29-0374. Pointless reviewsIt's a ... poem, but I'm not entirely sure what about. I just knd of wrote it. It just flowed.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-28-03 - Published: 5-28-0375. Titleless reviewsV short poem about... Im not sure really. Just about how afraid we are to change things, I suppose.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-27-03 - Published: 5-27-0376. Numb reviewsJust a little song I wrote about how I hate it when people judge others on one aspect of their personality.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-25-03 - Published: 5-25-0377. Tomorrow reviewsA very short piece of advice really.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-25-03 - Published: 5-25-0378. The Lowliest of Creatures reviewsA long poem about how much I hate mankind.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-25-03 - Published: 5-25-03
