| catviolist |
Author has written 5 stories for Politics, Life, Family, and Nature. Please read my poetry and give me some constructive criticism on it. I'd love to improve all of these! Thanks a bunch. "Don't take life too seriously, you'll never get out alive." "Behold, how good and how pleasant it is for breatheren to dwell together in unity." "Never stop smiling because you never know who might be falling in love with your smile." | |||||
1. Reflections reviewsReflections are decieving in everything...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-5-032. Whirl Pool reviewsJust some thoughts on life/nature/circle of life.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-5-033. Martha Bennett King 19021994This is kind of a tribute poem to my great-grandmother.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Published: 6-5-034. A Tanka reviewsThis is an observation of man I saw on the BART in San Fransisco over Christmas.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-5-035. Forgotten Souls reviewsI was inspired to write this after I saw the exhibition of shoes at the Holocaust Museum in D.C. It was so powerful that I couldn't get it out of my head.Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-4-03