Please read my poetry and give me some constructive criticism on it. I'd love to improve all of these! Thanks a bunch.
"Don't take life too seriously, you'll never get out alive."
"Behold, how good and how pleasant it is for breatheren to dwell together in unity."
"Never stop smiling because you never know who might be falling in love with your smile." 

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1. Reflections reviews

Reflections are decieving in everything...

Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-5-03 - Published: 6-5-03

2. Whirl Pool reviews

Just some thoughts on life/nature/circle of life.

Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-5-03 - Published: 6-5-03

3. Martha Bennett King 19021994

This is kind of a tribute poem to my great-grandmother.

Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-5-03 - Published: 6-5-03

4. A Tanka reviews

This is an observation of man I saw on the BART in San Fransisco over Christmas.

Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-5-03 - Published: 6-5-03

5. Forgotten Souls reviews

I was inspired to write this after I saw the exhibition of shoes at the Holocaust Museum in D.C. It was so powerful that I couldn't get it out of my head.

Politics - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-4-03 - Published: 6-4-03