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Author has written 75 stories for Life, Friendship, Religion, Young Adult, Love, Song, Family, Essay, War, School, and Romance. Hey, I live in Minnesota. I'm currently 20 years old (I was born in 1988, in case this doesn't get updated often, as is bound to happen). I enjoy reading, writing, painting, drawing, singing, playing guitar, taking photos, puddle jumping, watching movies, making movies with friends, politics, and concerts. No form of art is higher to me than any other. Please, read and review, I'd like to hear what you think - especially on those pieces that have yet to be reviewed. However, be respectful. There is waste in pain with no purpose. If you do not like a poem of mine, I would like to know that, but also tell me why you don't like it so I can better myself and my writing. If you review one of my poems, even negatively (provided it's constructive), I will review one of yours honestly. I hope you enjoy. "Every artist dips his brush in his or her own soul, and paints his or her own nature into his pictures." - Henry Ward Beecher For me, these poems represent my growth - as an artist and as a human being. You will notice quality and topics follow a distinct pattern from the most recent to the oldest - these trends were (and are) the movements and motions of my life. You may not enjoy all or any of them, but they are real, and they are representative of a person in all stages of their development. | |||||
1. You » reviewsAbout long term love and coping after break ups, inspired angst, one might say. Also, there are 3 chapters, unconventional as it may be for poems, so read them all before reviewing. Title suggestions would also be greatly appreciatedLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 3 - Words: 872 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-11-07 - Published: 10-11-072. Lost Tentative Title reviewsLove lost in cyberspace. If you have any title suggestions, please, let me know. I could really use some good ones.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 351 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-5-07 - Published: 5-5-073. Enchante reviewsA poem about young love and how it's not so different or distant from nowlove. Author's Note: There are some words between which there are no spaces this is entirely intentional.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-30-07 - Published: 3-30-074. UntitledA short story on a missed out chance uses metaphors of the political playing field, a teenage girl, and the path of life and relationships.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,284 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-19-07 - Published: 3-19-075. Distance reviewsA poem about the difficulty of young, longdistance relationships.Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 297 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-19-07 - Published: 3-19-076. The PrettiestAbout who I was several years back, and a scene with a boy that is essentially a representation of my dating experiences.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 526 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 3-20-067. What Is This Sickness? reviewsYou'll have to read it to find out. I'm thinking about taking out the last stanza though, so let me know what you think!Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-4-05 - Published: 9-4-058. Red Pavement reviewsCommentary on society's obsession with pain.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 310 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-16-05 - Published: 7-16-059. Just a Friendly DisagreementAbout an argument and fairness.Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-16-05 - Published: 7-16-0510. Dedication reviewsWritten when I was still in 10th grade, so two years ago, about a none too pleasant emotional situation.Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-16-05 - Published: 7-16-0511. Deadly Silence reviewsIt was written a couple of months ago, I'm not really sure whether or not I like it yet, so I'd really appreciate your input on this one. :) thank you. It's sort of dark, not one of my better pieces.Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 571 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-23-05 - Published: 2-23-0512. Goodbye reviewsUm... yeah. My friend left reccently, and it's about fear of losing her as friend, for i've been told that high school friendships don't last long and this is one i'd like to keep for a while. My first poem in a while... Enjoy.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-19-05 - Published: 1-19-0513. TieDye reviewsSorry for the harsh rating, it's sort of a dark topic, not self-harm, but still none too pretty. RnR please, it's a new subject for me.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-4-04 - Published: 10-4-0414. Broken Love reviewsI sort of think the title sums it up. RnR please!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-19-04 - Published: 9-19-0415. The Cynic's lovers' confusion reviewsAnother one of those continued sentence thingers... I really like this one, but it's got sex and swearing, thus the rating...Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-17-04 - Published: 9-17-0416. Streams of consciousness writing reviewsI think that's what this type of writing is called, i think... it's a series of thoughts put together using the end or middle words of the previous sentence... I don't know how to describe it so i guess just RnR pleaseYoung Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-15-04 - Published: 9-15-0417. Here for you reviewsIt's about trying to comfort someone I care about, I guess, what I'd say to them if I was with them comforting them. I wrote it in Chemistry class. I don't know if it's at all very good, same with my last couple, but i hope you enjoy it. R and R please.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-04 - Published: 9-3-0418. Sway reviewsIt's about music I guess, and how wrapped up I can get in it sometimes. I wrote it at french camp (as nerdy as that is, it rocks so :-P) while listening to this guy sing a song he made up. RnR if it honks your donkey, I know it'd honk mine to get one.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-04 - Published: 9-3-0419. Realizations reviewsUm, losing love? Maybe? I'm not quite sure I guess, RnR please!Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-04 - Published: 9-3-0420. Forget reviewsWasn't sure what to rate it, so put it as PG-13 to be safe. Um, it's a weird poem because i started it at one point and finished it later... RnR pleaseLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-04 - Published: 9-2-0421. Contemplation reviewsuhh... yeah...it's about... stuff, i guess. I don't know how to describe it, R n R pleaseLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-04 - Published: 9-2-0422. The Fight reviewsMy immortal enemy... sort of a new style (well not style, but it's a new topic for me) for me, please, read and review, I really want to know what you think about it.School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-29-04 - Published: 8-29-0423. War is Pending reviewsAbout 9/11 and war... i think i'm going to make it longer eventually...War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-0424. Gone reviewsThis is a weird song I wrote a couple years ago, forgot about, and just found. I thought I'd post it. It's not my best one, but I like it anyways. RnR pleaseLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-0425. Stop and smell the roses reviewsI was in a very morbid mood a couple of nights ago and this is the product of it. I don't really want to describe it here, PG13 just to be safe. Read and review please.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-0426. Blah reviewsThis is a poem I wrote a long time ago about a guy I was involved with and was stuck on (i've moved on since) as well as a bunch of other things. Found it while browsing through my desk and decided to post it. Read and review please.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-18-04 - Published: 6-18-0427. Homophobia reviewspro-gay poem i wrote just frustrations with homophobia put on page there is a lot of sarcasm and blatent homophobia that i've heard that i put into this poem, things such as the fourth stanza are not my opinion just stupid things people say that upset meLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-20-04 - Published: 5-20-0428. This is me » reviewsThis is as the title suggest... a compliation of essays I write randomly about things in my life.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 642 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-12-04 - Published: 5-12-0429. Black Heart reviewsIt's about something that i'm not happy with myself about read n review pleaseLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-24-04 - Published: 4-24-0430. The Art of Feeling reviewsRead and review please. Rated for references to self-harmYoung Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 358 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-26-04 - Published: 2-26-0431. Blank Paper reviewsDepressed night... wrote it as an away message... um... yeah... shortest poem i've ever written...rated for references to self-harmLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-21-04 - Published: 2-21-0432. Perhaps reviewsi don't know... it's hard to describe... RnR pleaseLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-19-04 - Published: 2-19-0433. Born Sad reviewsJust... read... RnR pleaseFriendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-8-04 - Published: 2-8-0434. This Is The Song I Wrote reviewsThe title sucks, I know, because I can't think of anything more creative. I was at a party, and I mentioned it, so Bri decided this should be the title. Send me a review with other suggestions, that'd be awesome.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-7-04 - Published: 1-7-0435. Sick reviewsRated for language.R&R pleaseFriendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-3-04 - Published: 1-3-0436. Christmas Eve reviewsRated for self-harm references... R & R pleaseLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-1-04 - Published: 1-1-0437. Eskimo Kisses reviewsNot-so-random, random thoughts...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-21-03 - Published: 12-21-0338. Dear Me reviewsA poem I wrote to myself - rated for self-harm references.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-29-03 - Published: 11-29-0339. Abandoned reviewsA poem about life as i see it right now.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-21-03 - Published: 9-21-0340. Yours reviewsA poem about being completely devoted to someone... and having them rip you apart.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-19-03 - Published: 9-19-0341. HimA personal essay i had to write last year for my english class. I really like it. RNR pleaseEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 728 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-19-03 - Published: 9-19-0342. Safety Pin Pack reviewsA poem about cuttingLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-19-03 - Published: 9-19-0343. One by One reviewsA poem about how i'm turning into one of the girls that hurt me the most.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-19-03 - Published: 9-19-0344. Reflection reviewsI hate myself and life somedays.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-18-03 - Published: 9-18-0345. Friendships reviewsA poem about my best friend and i and how it feels like we're drifting apart sometimes...Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-15-03 - Published: 9-15-0346. Suicide Poem reviewsA poem i wrote a while ago as my suicide note.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-15-03 - Published: 9-15-0347. Anymore reviewsMy best friend and some stuff she's gone throughFriendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-11-03 - Published: 9-11-0348. Authour UnknownA poem i wrote after reading an poem with an unknown author.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-11-03 - Published: 9-11-0349. Green Drift AwayA random poem I wrote about jealousy and constellations... I don't know... it's weird.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-11-03 - Published: 9-11-0350. One Girl, One Night reviewsUm, I think this poem is really, i dunno... not my usual writing style, it's weird, so please, let me know what you think.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-6-03 - Published: 9-6-0351. Imperfections reviewsA poem about my insecurities, and some other stuff that i've gone/am going thruSong - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-3-03 - Published: 9-3-0352. Waiting reviewsA poem about my suicidal thoughts and things i envision happening... i guess...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-03 - Published: 9-3-0353. Used reviewsI really like this guy this guy for 4 months, we did some things together and now he's telling me to move on.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-30-03 - Published: 7-30-0354. Memories of 2 Bitter Ends reviewsAnother one of my 3rd person poems, it's about a break-up from the guy's perspective - don't worry, most guys don't do this when you break up wtih them.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-27-03 - Published: 7-27-0355. Mother, what would you do? reviewsI've been thinking about telling my parents about a lot of stuff i've kept hidden from almost everyone else... i don't know how they'll respond... i want to know what they'd doFamily - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-03 - Published: 7-25-0356. The Walls, My Tears, and Me reviewsa poem about my self-harm, from the beginning up till the only way i believe it will all finally end. And how sometimes you can be surrounded by everything but still be so alone...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-03 - Published: 7-25-0357. Time to die reviewsA poem about depression and friendship.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-03 - Published: 7-22-0358. Empty reviewsHow I feel InsideLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0359. Death reviewsA poem I wrote a long time ago about misery.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0360. Hidden reviewsA weird poem i wrote... I don't know how to describe it. I was trying a new repeatativeness, so I would appreciate reviews!Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0361. Am I Just Strange? reviewsJust a question I want answered.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0362. Here reviewsThis is pretty much a poem about loss of hope and motivation... pretty much about being caught in the teeth of depression and just deciding to give up.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0363. Angels reviewsThis is a poem about abusive relationships and the devistating impact they can have. Please, read and review, this is the first poem i've written in 3rd person.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-03 - Published: 7-21-0364. The Call reviewsSorry! I couldn't figure out what to rate this! i couldn't decide between PG-13 and R, so yeah.. but anyways, this story is just something I was thinking about.. i dunno, it scared me at the time. Please, review and gimme your input!Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,701 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-19-03 - Published: 7-19-0365. Don't Stare reviewsIt's a story I wrote a while back in school. It's about self-harm. Well, sorta. Tell me what you think!Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-19-03 - Published: 7-19-0366. Take It All reviewsThis is about... I don't really know. Feeling alone I guess. That's how I felt when I wrote it anyways. Alone and stepped on.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0367. A Face In The Crowd reviewsThis version has stanzas. It's about certain words and what they mean to me, i guess.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0368. Crucified reviewsA poem about my view on religion... kind of.. i don't know... It's a weird poem.Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0369. Betrayal reviewsIt's about one of my friend's betraying me, it's less hostile than "My Fake Friends" but it's pretty much the same message. It's to the same people so... yeah...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-0370. My Fake Friends reviewsA poem to my "Friends"Friendship - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-0371. Daddy's Little Defect reviewsA poem about me.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-0372. My Eight Week Demise reviewsAnother one of my poems about self-harm and suicide.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-6-03 - Published: 7-6-0373. Another Old Scar reviewsThis poem is about self-harm.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-6-03 - Published: 7-6-0374. Emotionally Drained reviewsA poem about a guy i used to like who basically was a jerk to meLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-19-03 - Published: 6-19-03
