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Author has written 19 stories for Romance, Supernatural, General, Love, and General. Name: Sarah Favorite Books/Series: Favorite Authors: Meg Cabot, Sue Grafton, J.K. Rowling, Rachel Caine, Martha Grimes, LJ Smith, Laurell K. Hamilton, Amelia Atwater-Rhodes, J.R. Ward, Lara Adrian, Sherrilyn Kenyon, Kerrelyn Sparks, Favorite Quotes: "Love isn't about finding the perfect person...it's about seeing an imperfect person... perfectly."- Anonymous "Real girls aren't perfect and perfect girls aren't real."- Unknown (I found this on an icon and I liked it because it's so true) The following quotes (plus many more) in the form of icons, can all be found here. "Twilight makes me weep for the future of literature." "Twilight made me cry because I could feel a part of my brain dying" "My boyfriend is better than both Edward Cullen and Jacob Black" "JK Rowling proved that some young adult novels can be over five hundred pages. Stephenie Meyer proved that some shouldn't be." "Cold, dead and sparkly? In what way is that hot?" Goal: Get at least one story published before I graduate from college! Likes: writing and reading (duh!), Titanic (ship not the movie), vampire romances, Harry Potter, history, Lost, So You Think You Can Dance, etc. Dislikes: rude and obnoxious people, cliched high school romances, cliched and purple prosed filled novels (ex: Twilight) and oh, people who accuse others of doing something without the full story and/or without listening to the the other person in the first place.. etc. TO ELLA: I don't know if you will read this, but since you reviewed one of my poems and not one of my stories and you left no email address (how cowardly of you) then this was the only way I could think of to respond to your little comment. But, let me get this straight... I have a right to my opinion, but I'm not allowed to express it since you don't agree with it? Wow, that makes a lot of sense. You, my dear, are a hypocrite. I don't constantly say I hate it on here, I only mention it once in my dislikes and I have a few quotes from avatars that I found were pretty funny. There is absolutely nothing wrong with that. It's not like I'm insulting you for liking the book. Yea, I hate it. But, I don't go around starting fights with the fans (like so many of the fans seem to like to do with the haters). And, you think Stephenie Meyer is a good writer, I happen to disagree. I think she has some good ideas, but she just doesn't execute them very well. Her writing is full of amateurish mistakes that I would not expect a woman with a degree in ENGLISH to make. There are many grammatical, spelling and sentence structure mistakes as well that could have easily been caught, had Meyer read through what she had written or her editor had actually done their job. I could really go on with more reasons as to why I hate the book and Meyer's writing. And, I attempted to read The Host, really I did... but I just couldn't stomach it at all. Also, there is a line in there that goes something like this: “This body did not belong to me or to Melanie, but to Jared”... No... just NO. I'm not that big of a feminist, but that line alone really pissed me off. It's completely disgusting and so anti-feminist. I mean women are not objects for men to claim as "theirs". Sorry, but I'm not going to change my profile information, because, honestly, it's the internet, I can say what I want. It's not like I'm insulting you. Or hurting you in anyway. You're just mad because I don't like a book series that you do. Please go read some real vampire literature and stop getting all pissy just because I dared to insult your "precious" book series. By the way, next time it might be to your advantage to send me a PM, email me (my email is located on my profile) or at least leave an email address so that I can answer you personally and not announce my response to the world on my profile. Thanks! Other writing sites you can find me on: www.writerscafe.org But this is my main one. I am also a member of youngwriters101 group on Yahoo. CONTACT: livejournal: Note: If you do send me an email, please don't get offended if I don't answer right away, I am extremely busy with school, but please be patient and I will answer your email as soon as I get the chance! I absolutely love to write. I don't think I'm that good yet, but that's why I'm here. I really want to reach my goal of getting one book published before I graduate from college. In order to do that, I need as much help with all my stuff, I need people to tell me what they like and what they don't like and what could be improved. The one story that I am really looking at for publication is "Expect the Unexpected", so I would appreciate as much feedback on that as I can get. Anyway, now that that is said, time to bore you to death with my mini biography... I'm pretty much your average girl, well, okay not really, I HATE TO SHOP. Seriously, anyone who wants me to go with them to the mall, has to drag me kicking and screaming the entire way... and I'm no fun because the whole time I'm like "are we done, yet? Can we go now?" :) I'm also really kind of random. I mean, I laugh at the stupidest things. And I change the topic of discussion at random all the time. It annoys everyone, it's kind of fun and also kind of sad. But what can I say? I'm a dork. I'd have to say, though, that only my friends know the true me, I come off as quiet at first... but I'm really not, once I open up to you. My story ideas come from my brain most of the time. My poems, on the other hand, come from my heart. My characters are loosely based on friends. Okay, I lied, they're really the type of girl I sometimes wished I was. Yea, I know, I'm quite pathetic. Please read and review my stuff! I love getting new reviewers/readers (makes me feel special :)) So, at least take a look, it couldn't hurt, could it? And if you are a dedicated reader and/or reviewer, thanks! Your support makes me write more and more... okay, not really, but it makes me write faster knowing that people will actually be reading what I worked so hard on...(makes me get off my lazy ass). I would say that the more reviews I get the faster I'll update, but that is such a lie, so I won't. Classes I'm taking Fall 2009: NOTE: I don't own (or claim to own) the pictures that I have posted of my characters (nor do I know the models in them, so please don't ask!). COMPLETED STORIES Forbidden Love- 27/27 chapters CURRENT STORIES Expect the Unexpected- 30/32 chapters Everything I Never Wanted- 7/35 chapters Vampire World- 1/30 chapter Forbidden- 1/20 chapters Play Ball- 3/30 chapters Love at Lanston- 2/15(maybe) chapters Love of a Vampire-2/18(maybe) chapters Any of my stories sound interesting? Then go take a look, and don't forget to review! CURRENT POEMS: I'm Sorry- a poem I wrote for a Creative Writing assignment. We were suppose to write down five things that people said to us in the past that hurt our feelings and include them in a poem... I think it's good for my first ever poem... Thanks- Just saying thanks to someone for showing me true love and seeing me for me... kind of personal. Love is...- I wrote this for the Literary Art Magazine love contest at my school. It tied for third. Please tell me what you think! I'm Not Perfect- This is similar to "I'm Sorry" but the message is different... God's Angel- I wrote this as a dedication to a friend that recently died in a car accident, as well as her family for the dark times that lie ahead for them. | |||||||||
1. Vampire World reviewsSarah lives in a vampire run world, but unbeknownst to her, when she was born, her mother was forced to agree to give her up when the Vampire King came for her. It took 18 years, but he's come for her, and her life has just gotten a lot more complicated.Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,653 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 10-30-09 - Published: 10-30-092. Play Ball » reviewsThey took away softball so she tried out for the baseball team. He doesn't like the idea of a girl playing baseball. So naturally, they hate each other, at least... at first. Full summary in profile! CHAPTER 2 UP!Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,241 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-16-09 - Published: 11-3-073. Everything I Never Wanted » reviewsI never wanted any of this… never wanted the vampires to take over or to become a slave to a rather cold vampire. But, most importantly, I never wanted, or expected, to fall in love with one of them. REWRITE OF ORIGINAL CHAPTER 7 FINALLY UP!Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 39,355 - Reviews: 101 - Updated: 8-2-09 - Published: 7-13-084. Expect the Unexpected » reviewsYou can’t run away from love forever... nor can you hide from your past.. sixteen year old Elizabeth Fitzgerald is about to find that out... the hard way. Vampire romance! Better summary in profile! CHAPTER 30 FINALLY UP!Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 30 - Words: 102,411 - Reviews: 183 - Updated: 6-26-09 - Published: 8-31-065. The Pregnancy Test reviewsMicheal finds something really interesting in the trashcan in the hall bathroom...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,468 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-18-09 - Published: 6-18-096. Exchange reviewsAshton Humphrey is finally getting her opportunity to go to France on an exchange program, though her excitement doesn't last long when she meets her French family.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 484 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-28-09 - Published: 4-28-097. Forbidden reviewsRewrite of "Forbidden Love"! Alana is a vampire slayer who thinks all vampires deserve to burn in hell... that is, until Logan comes along and turns her world completely upside down. See profile for full summary!Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,030 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-28-09 - Published: 4-28-098. Untitled 2 reviewsThis is just the re-edited version of the poem I posted a few days ago.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-8-08 - Published: 11-8-089. Untitled reviewsRandom little poem I wrote for an exercise for my Creative Writing class that I think turned out pretty good.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-4-08 - Published: 11-4-0810. Everything I Never Wanted: Original reviewsCurrently be rewritten and reposted, see profile for information and to read the reposted version!Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 522 - Updated: 7-9-08 - Published: 12-23-0411. Two Worlds Become One » reviewsWhen Danielle, the princess of Sernia, ran away she never expected to be caught by an enemy kingdom and thrown into the harsh world of slavery. She becomes a servant in the King's castle. How is she going to get out of this? ON HIATUSRomance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,425 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 1-19-07 - Published: 8-5-0512. God's Angel reviewsI wrote this as a dedication to a friend who recently died in a car accident.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 336 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-29-06 - Published: 12-29-0613. Forbidden Love » reviewsA vampire falls in love with a vampire slayer with my own little twists... full summary inside... Rated for language and some minor sexual content. CURRENTLY BEING REWRITTEN, SEE PROFILE FOR MORE INFO!Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 27 - Words: 52,825 - Reviews: 250 - Updated: 10-19-06 - Published: 3-5-0514. Love of a Vampire » reviewsLily Jacobs is a normal college student living a less than nice life and she thinks things can't get any worse until she attracts the unwanted attention of a deadly vampire, who will stop at nothing to get what he wants: her. ON HIATUSSupernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,806 - Reviews: 51 - Updated: 6-17-06 - Published: 12-4-0515. I'm Not Perfect reviewsJust something I wrote to all those people who judge people based on looks alone...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-6-06 - Published: 5-6-0616. Love at Lanston » reviewsCatrina comes from a poor family, but her brain has gotten her into the most expensive school in the country, Lanston Academy. She thinks jocks are horrible after what happened at her old school. But will Jack Benton be able to change her mind? ON HIATUSRomance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,227 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 4-15-06 - Published: 7-28-0417. Love is reviewsI wrote this for the Literary Art Magazine poetry contest, it's kind of mushy... but good if I do say so myself. Please tell me what you think!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-06