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since: 06-20-03, id: 360814, Profile Updated: 01-25-10
country: United States
web: Homepage
Author has written 19 stories for Romance, Supernatural, General, Love, and General.

Name: Sarah
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Birthday: June 8 1988
Hometown: Atlanta, Georgia, USA
Current place of residence: Roswell, Georgia, USA
Occupation: College Senior
Major: History
Minor: Geography
I'm studying to be a history/geography teacher.

Favorite Authors: Meg Cabot, Sue Grafton, J.K. Rowling, Rachel Caine, Martha Grimes, L.J. Smith, Laurell K. Hamilton, Amelia Atwater-Rhodes, J.R. Ward, Lara Adrian, Sherrilyn Kenyon, Kerrelyn Sparks, Gena Showalter, Jeaniene Frost, Harlan Coben, Alexandra Ivy, Amanda Ashley, Charlaine Harris and Lynn Viehl

Favorite Genres: Romance (mostly supernatural in nature), Sci-fi/Fantasy (mostly vampire related material), Young Adult (occasionally) and Mystery

Favorite Quotes:
"Assert your right to make a few mistakes. If people can't accept your imperfections, that's their fault." - Dr. David M. Burns

"Love isn't about finding the perfect person...it's about seeing an imperfect person... perfectly."- Anonymous

"Real girls aren't perfect and perfect girls aren't real."- Unknown (I found this on an icon and I liked it because it's so true)

The following quotes (plus many more) in the form of icons, can all be found here.

"Twilight makes me weep for the future of literature."

"Twilight made me cry because I could feel a part of my brain dying"

"My boyfriend is better than both Edward Cullen and Jacob Black"

"JK Rowling proved that some young adult novels can be over five hundred pages. Stephenie Meyer proved that some shouldn't be."

"Cold, dead and sparkly? In what way is that hot?"

Goal: Get at least one story published before I graduate from college!

Likes: writing and reading (duh!), Titanic (ship not the movie), vampire romances, Harry Potter, history, Lost, So You Think You Can Dance, etc.

Dislikes: rude and obnoxious people, cliched high school romances, cliched and purple prosed filled novels (ex: Twilight) and oh, people who accuse others of doing something without the full story and/or without listening to the the other person in the first place.. etc.

TO ELLA: I don't know if you will read this, but since you reviewed one of my poems and not one of my stories and you left no email address (how cowardly of you) then this was the only way I could think of to respond to your little comment. But, let me get this straight... I have a right to my opinion, but I'm not allowed to express it since you don't agree with it? Wow, that makes a lot of sense. You, my dear, are a hypocrite. I don't constantly say I hate it on here, I only mention it once in my dislikes and I have a few quotes from avatars that I found were pretty funny. There is absolutely nothing wrong with that. It's not like I'm insulting you for liking the book. Yea, I hate it. But, I don't go around starting fights with the fans (like so many of the fans seem to like to do with the haters). And, you think Stephenie Meyer is a good writer, I happen to disagree. I think she has some good ideas, but she just doesn't execute them very well. Her writing is full of amateurish mistakes that I would not expect a woman with a degree in ENGLISH to make. There are many grammatical, spelling and sentence structure mistakes as well that could have easily been caught, had Meyer read through what she had written or her editor had actually done their job. I could really go on with more reasons as to why I hate the book and Meyer's writing.

And, I attempted to read The Host, really I did... but I just couldn't stomach it at all. Also, there is a line in there that goes something like this: “This body did not belong to me or to Melanie, but to Jared”... No... just NO. I'm not that big of a feminist, but that line alone really pissed me off. It's completely disgusting and so anti-feminist. I mean women are not objects for men to claim as "theirs".

Sorry, but I'm not going to change my profile information, because, honestly, it's the internet, I can say what I want. It's not like I'm insulting you. Or hurting you in anyway. You're just mad because I don't like a book series that you do. Please go read some real vampire literature and stop getting all pissy just because I dared to insult your "precious" book series.

By the way, next time it might be to your advantage to send me a PM, email me (my email is located on my profile) or at least leave an email address so that I can answer you personally and not announce my response to the world on my profile. Thanks!

If it isn't already obvious... no, I do not like Twilight and yes, I have read the book. I have many reasons as to why I don't like it and to be honest, I don't really care if you happen to like it. As long as you are not a psychotic fangirl who thinks Edward/Jacob is real and is going to come for you some day or if you can respect the fact that I don't like the series (this means that you don't call me names for not liking it) then I think we would get along really well. I have many friends who love the series and we still get along well because they're not psycho about it and they respect the fact that I don't like the series at all. Please don't waste your time PMing me or leaving a rude review about how much you hate me or how stupid you think I am, because... to be honest... I DON'T CARE and all I will do is laugh at your pathetic attempts at insulting me. Please, people... go read some real literature and stop accusing everyone who writes about vampires as copying Stephenie Meyer... she did not invent vampires (or vampire romances), they have been around for years (Dracula, anyone?) and they will continue to be around long after the Twilight obsession finally dies down. I swear, if I get one more PM about how I am copying Twilight with my vampire stories, I'm seriously going to hit something or someone!

Other writing sites you can find me on:

www.writerscafe.org
www.storywrite.com
www.youngwriterssociety.com

But this is my main one.

I am also a member of youngwriters101 group on Yahoo.

CONTACT:
email:
saradams@mindspring.com

livejournal:
http://ms-sarabeth20.livejournal.com/

Note: If you do send me an email, please don't get offended if I don't answer right away, I am extremely busy with school, but please be patient and I will answer your email as soon as I get the chance!

I absolutely love to write. I don't think I'm that good yet, but that's why I'm here. I really want to reach my goal of getting one book published before I graduate from college. In order to do that, I need as much help with all my stuff, I need people to tell me what they like and what they don't like and what could be improved. The one story that I am really looking at for publication is "Expect the Unexpected", so I would appreciate as much feedback on that as I can get.

Anyway, now that that is said, time to bore you to death with my mini biography...

I'm pretty much your average girl, well, okay not really, I HATE TO SHOP. Seriously, anyone who wants me to go with them to the mall, has to drag me kicking and screaming the entire way... and I'm no fun because the whole time I'm like "are we done, yet? Can we go now?" :)

I'm also really kind of random. I mean, I laugh at the stupidest things. And I change the topic of discussion at random all the time. It annoys everyone, it's kind of fun and also kind of sad. But what can I say? I'm a dork.

I'd have to say, though, that only my friends know the true me, I come off as quiet at first... but I'm really not, once I open up to you.

My story ideas come from my brain most of the time. My poems, on the other hand, come from my heart.

My characters are loosely based on friends.

Okay, I lied, they're really the type of girl I sometimes wished I was. Yea, I know, I'm quite pathetic.

Please read and review my stuff! I love getting new reviewers/readers (makes me feel special :)) So, at least take a look, it couldn't hurt, could it?

And if you are a dedicated reader and/or reviewer, thanks! Your support makes me write more and more... okay, not really, but it makes me write faster knowing that people will actually be reading what I worked so hard on...(makes me get off my lazy ass). I would say that the more reviews I get the faster I'll update, but that is such a lie, so I won't.

Classes I'm taking Spring 2009:
History of Europe, 1914-1945
History of Africa Since 1800
Senior Seminar
Instructional Technology, P-12 Teaching Fields

NOTE: I don't own (or claim to own) the pictures that I have posted of my characters (nor do I know the models in them, so please don't ask!).

COMPLETED STORIES

Forbidden Love- 27/27 chapters
Summary: Alana has been a vampire slayer for almost four years. She thinks she's unstoppable, slaying every vampire that crosses her path. Well, until a vampire that she can't kill steps into the picture. He turns her world upside down. And just when she thinks she understands him, he changes everything once again. He's in this only to get the ring, but unknowing to both of them, as they spend more time with each other they create a bond so powerful that it can only be described by one word: Love. Is it so wrong for a slayer and a vampire to love each other?
Genres: Romance/Supernatural/Action/Adventure
Rating: T, for minor violence and language
Characters:
Alana
Logan
Started: March 5 2005
Finished: October 19 2006
This is currently being rewritten under the title "Forbidden", for more info see below

CURRENT STORIES

Expect the Unexpected- 32/33 chapters
...Because the unexpected WILL happen and always when you least expect it to.
Summary: Elizabeth Fitzgerald is pretty much your average sixteen year old girl. Until a strange boy starts attending her school and she can't help but get the feeling that he's watching her every move. And as she tries to avoid him, it doesn't take long for her to realize just how hard that is because he's everywhere she goes. And just when she thinks everything is alright, she's kidnapped and discovers something about herself that she never knew and a horrible secret that her family had kept from her, her entire life... thrown into a world of darkness and betrayal, what's a girl to do?
Genres: Horror/Supernatural/Romance/Angst
Rating: M, for mild violence, language and some sexual content in later chapters.
Characters:
Elizabeth
David
Kyle
Andy
Nicole
Eric
Carson
Darren
Updated: January 25 2010
Status: Chapter 32 was finally posted, currently working on the epilogue!

Everything I Never Wanted- 8/35 chapters
Summary:
Casey Jenkins lives in a world that has just been taken over by vampires where humans are captured to be either slaves or food to their vampire rulers. She's taken and sold to Damien, one of the oldest and most powerful, not to mention one of the coldest and most distant of his race. She becomes his personal servant... for him to do whatever he wants with her. Casey is not really happy with this change, but she's managing to tolerate it until she can somehow get away. She's waiting for the perfect time to stop acting like the shy, docile little human that Damien and the rest of the vampires think she is. But, while she's biding her time, she realizes something: Damien in the beginning starts treating her like most other vampires, but as time goes on she realizes that his actions towards her start to change. This just leads to her ask one question: Why?
Genres:
Supernatural/Romance/General
Rating:
M, for language, sexual content
Characters:

Casey

Damien

Jaren
Jerrick
Kale

Dominic

Natasha

Daniel

Anna

Lauren
Adrian
Christina

Melody
Luke
Updated: December 23, 2009
Status: Chapter 8 was just posted

Vampire World- 1/30 chapter
Summary:
Sarah Chambers has grown up in a strange world, a world that is run and controlled by vampires. Her city is run by a well known sadist by the name of Vincent, who has had his eyes on her since the day she was born. But, Vincent's affections are the least of her worries because, unknown to her, her life has already been promised to the most evil vampire of them all, the King himself. Julian is the oldest and most powerful of his race. Most humans have never seen him, but rumors say that the only humans who see him are the ones that never come back. He is said to be the cruelest vampire ever to exist, well eighteen year old Sarah is about to find out the truth whether she wants to or not.
Genres: Supernatural/Romance
Rating: M, for language and violence
Characters:
Sarah
Julian
Abigail
Sophia
Michael
April
Lilith
Cassandra
Marcus
Juliette
Jason
Seth
William
Vincent
Jacob
Updated: October 30, 2009
Status: Prologue was posted, but since it's a sort of a sequel to "Everything I Never Wanted", I won't be able to post much more!

Forbidden- 1/20 chapters
Summary: Alana has been a vampire slayer for almost four years. She thinks she's unstoppable, slaying every vampire that crosses her path since she believes that all vampires deserve to die. Well, that is, until a vampire that she can't kill steps into the picture. And he turns her world completely upside down. And just when she thinks she understands him, he changes everything once again. He's in this only to get the ring, a very powerful object that can do very bad things if it gets into the wrong hands. However, unknowing to both of them, as they spend more time with each other they create a bond so powerful that it can only be described by one word: Love. Is it so wrong for a slayer and a vampire to love each other?
Genres: Supernatural/Romance
Rating:
M for language, violence and some sexual content
Characters:
Alana
Logan
Angela
Cassidy
Landon
Evan
Updated: April 28 2009
Status: Chapter 1 was just posted, currently working on chapter 2

Play Ball- 3/30 chapters (not including the prologue)
Summary: When her high school suddenly cut the softball team, Victoria Clark had every intention of trying out for the baseball team. Jared Peterson was bent on keeping her off his field. They hate each other on sight and begin a fight that soon has the entire school in an uproar. They start out hating each other, but sometimes the person you hate the most is the one person you can’t resist.
Genres: Romance/Humor/General
Rating: T, for minor language
Characters:
Victoria
Jared
Thomas
Josh
Jesse
Brandon
Samantha
Jessica
Updated: December 29 2009
Status: Chapter 3 was just posted!

Love at Lanston- 2/15(maybe) chapters
Summary:
Catrina(Catie or Cat, for short) comes from a poor family, but she's very smart. And her brain has gotten her into the most prestigious, not to mention the most expensive, school in the country. She thinks jocks are horrible after what happened at her old school. But will ever popular jock, Jack Benton be able to change her mind?
Genres: Romance/General
Rating: T, for minor language and sexual content
Characters:
Catrina
Jack
Kristen
Amanda
Mark
Updated: April 15 2006
Status: ON HIATUS (I'm going to be editing the first two chapters before I continue!)


Two Worlds Become One-
3/20(maybe) chapters
Summary: When Danielle, the princess of Sernia and the only heir to the Sernian throne, ran away she never expected to be caught by an enemy kingdom and thrown into the harsh world of slavery. She becomes a servant in the King's castle. She must keep a low profile for if she doesn't they could discover her true identity and use her to their advantage... Title has nothing to do with story. Please bare with me while I try to think of a nice title for this.
Genres:
Romance/General/Action/Adventure
Rating: T, for minor language, sexual content and some violence
Characters:
Danielle/Catherine
Nicholas
Mary
Updated: January 19 2007
Status: ON HIATUS (Sorry, guys, I have MAJOR writer's block at the moment. If you have any ideas, feel free to share!)

Love of a Vampire-2/18(maybe) chapters
Summary: Anyone who looked at Lily Jacobs would never have guessed that she had any troubles at all. But underneath the facade, her life is pretty much a living nightmare. Being almost homeless and barely making enough money to live by, things could not possibly get any worse... until she attracts the unwanted attention of a deadly vampire who will do whatever it takes to get what he wants: her.
Genres: Horror/Romance/Drama
Rating: M, for language, sexual content and some gory scenes in later chapters
Characters:
Lily
Terri
Lance
Creepy vampire guy (lol, sorry, you guys don't get to know his name yet!)
Updated: June 17 2006
Status: ON HIATUS (I'm planning to rewrite the first two chapters of this story before I continue)

Any of my stories sound interesting? Then go take a look, and don't forget to review!

CURRENT POEMS:

I'm Sorry- a poem I wrote for a Creative Writing assignment. We were suppose to write down five things that people said to us in the past that hurt our feelings and include them in a poem... I think it's good for my first ever poem...
It's about being yourself, and not letting others influence anything you do...

Thanks- Just saying thanks to someone for showing me true love and seeing me for me... kind of personal.

Love is...- I wrote this for the Literary Art Magazine love contest at my school. It tied for third. Please tell me what you think!

I'm Not Perfect- This is similar to "I'm Sorry" but the message is different...

God's Angel- I wrote this as a dedication to a friend that recently died in a car accident, as well as her family for the dark times that lie ahead for them.

Sort: Category . Published . Updated . Title . Words . Chapters . Reviews . Status .

1. Expect the Unexpected » reviews
You can’t run away from love forever... nor can you hide from your past.. sixteen year old Elizabeth Fitzgerald is about to find that out... the hard way. Vampire romance!
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 32 - Words: 110,013 - Reviews: 200 - Updated: 1-25-10 - Published: 8-31-06
2. Play Ball » reviews
They took away softball so she tried out for the baseball team. He doesn't like the idea of a girl playing baseball. So naturally, they hate each other, at least... at first. Full summary in profile!
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 13,168 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 12-29-09 - Published: 11-3-07
3. Everything I Never Wanted » reviews
I never wanted any of this… never wanted the vampires to take over or to become a slave to a rather cold vampire. But, most importantly, I never wanted, or expected, to fall in love with one of them. REWRITE OF ORIGINAL!
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 8 - Words: 45,112 - Reviews: 121 - Updated: 12-23-09 - Published: 7-13-08
4. Vampire World reviews
Sarah lives in a vampire run world, but unbeknownst to her, when she was born, her mother was forced to agree to give her up when the Vampire King came for her. It took 18 years, but he's come for her, and her life has just gotten a lot more complicated.
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,653 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 10-30-09 - Published: 10-30-09
5. The Pregnancy Test reviews
Micheal finds something really interesting in the trashcan in the hall bathroom...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,468 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-18-09 - Published: 6-18-09
6. Exchange reviews
Ashton Humphrey is finally getting her opportunity to go to France on an exchange program, though her excitement doesn't last long when she meets her French family.
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 484 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-28-09 - Published: 4-28-09
7. Forbidden reviews
Rewrite of "Forbidden Love"! Alana is a vampire slayer who thinks all vampires deserve to burn in hell... that is, until Logan comes along and turns her world completely upside down. See profile for full summary!
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,030 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-28-09 - Published: 4-28-09
8. Untitled 2 reviews
This is just the re-edited version of the poem I posted a few days ago.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-8-08 - Published: 11-8-08
9. Untitled reviews
Random little poem I wrote for an exercise for my Creative Writing class that I think turned out pretty good.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-4-08 - Published: 11-4-08
10. Everything I Never Wanted: Original reviews
Currently be rewritten and reposted, see profile for information and to read the reposted version!
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 522 - Updated: 7-9-08 - Published: 12-23-04
11. Two Worlds Become One » reviews
When Danielle, the princess of Sernia, ran away she never expected to be caught by an enemy kingdom and thrown into the harsh world of slavery. She becomes a servant in the King's castle. How is she going to get out of this? ON HIATUS
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,425 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 1-19-07 - Published: 8-5-05
12. God's Angel reviews
I wrote this as a dedication to a friend who recently died in a car accident.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 336 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-29-06 - Published: 12-29-06
13. Forbidden Love » reviews
A vampire falls in love with a vampire slayer with my own little twists... full summary inside... Rated for language and some minor sexual content. CURRENTLY BEING REWRITTEN, SEE PROFILE FOR MORE INFO!
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 27 - Words: 52,825 - Reviews: 250 - Updated: 10-19-06 - Published: 3-5-05
14. Love of a Vampire » reviews
Lily Jacobs is a normal college student living a less than nice life and she thinks things can't get any worse until she attracts the unwanted attention of a deadly vampire, who will stop at nothing to get what he wants: her. ON HIATUS
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,806 - Reviews: 51 - Updated: 6-17-06 - Published: 12-4-05
15. I'm Not Perfect reviews
Just something I wrote to all those people who judge people based on looks alone...
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-6-06 - Published: 5-6-06
16. Love at Lanston » reviews
Catrina comes from a poor family, but her brain has gotten her into the most expensive school in the country, Lanston Academy. She thinks jocks are horrible after what happened at her old school. But will Jack Benton be able to change her mind? ON HIATUS
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,227 - Reviews: 33 - Updated: 4-15-06 - Published: 7-28-04
17. Love is reviews
I wrote this for the Literary Art Magazine poetry contest, it's kind of mushy... but good if I do say so myself. Please tell me what you think!
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-06
18. Thanks reviews
Thank you for what you have done for me...
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-14-06 - Published: 1-14-06
19. I'm Sorry reviews
I truly am sorry that you didn't see the true me...
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-14-06 - Published: 1-14-06
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