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Author has written 65 stories for Humor, Love, General, Haiku, Family, Friendship, Religion, Essay, Song, War, School, Life, Nature, Humor, Mystery, General, Sci-Fi, Work, and Fantasy. Welcome to my profile! Thanks for taking time to read my work. Constructive criticism is really the best kind of reviews I could hope to get. Reviews only praising my work do nothing to help me improve it. If you notice something is incorrect or could be better, point it out! You will be helping me to become a better writer. A helpful site on how to give constructive criticism I found is http://www.wikihow.com/Give-Constructive-Criticism . I'm Rachel, a 19 year old who loves to write. I'm a sophomore psychology major ₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪͏₪ A lot of this stuff is pretty old. I hope to have some new stuff up soon. In the meantime, I plan to be reading a lot of what has gotten put up here in my absence, and reviewing lots! | |||||||||
1. She reviewsWhile my partner was not letting me help with our project, I wrote a poem about her. Maybe you know someone like this. Reviews appreciated and always returned!Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-30-07 - Published: 5-30-072. FIRE! reviewsThis started out as an unusual event at work that my imagination ran away with. Reviews appreciated and returned!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 448 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-27-07 - Published: 5-27-073. Mirror, Mirror reviewsNot quite the one from Snow White.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-27-07 - Published: 5-27-074. Bus Stop Daydreams reviewsA freeverse I thought of while bored waiting for the schoolbus. Reviews appreciated and returned!Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-27-07 - Published: 5-27-075. Keyhole reviewsA cute freeverse about a child's imagination. Reviews appreciated.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-27-07 - Published: 5-27-076. Escape! » reviewsChapter 3 is finito! My story is about a man who finds himself in a place completely different from his home and is trying to find a way back without getting himself killed in the process.Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,229 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-2-06 - Published: 7-7-047. Corrupted Fairy Tales reviewsSong that originated in the shower! hehe. I will write a series of stories based on it if i get positive feedback!Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-28-06 - Published: 2-28-068. A Moonlit Promise reviewsA heartbreak poem. Reviews are appreciated!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-26-06 - Published: 2-26-069. Perfect Symmetry reviewsCute little love poem...its actually about the samee guy as in waitingComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-29-05 - Published: 8-29-0510. Waiting reviewsIt's about a guy that I want, but he has a girlfriend, so I waitComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-0511. The Ultimate Revenge reviewsThis was an assignment for english class, but I thought that it turned out well, so I decided to upload it. Tell me what you think.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 381 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-0512. Anticipation reviewsJust something I wrote in the boredom of of the school day...Telll me what you think.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-5-05 - Published: 4-5-0513. Lost Innocence reviewsabout the lost innocence of a little girl who was kidnapped and raped...pretty depressing...please r and rComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 429 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-0514. Writer's Block reviewsI can never summarrize poemsComplete - Work - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-0515. Too Much reviewsA song I wrote during the depression I felt after being dumped by a guy I really liked... please read and reviewComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-30-04 - Published: 8-30-0416. First Kiss reviewsIts about the first kiss for a couple, not their own first kiss, but their first kiss with each otherComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-7-04 - Published: 7-7-0417. Hiding reviewsabout hiding...just read it, its not longComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-0418. Trust reviewsIts short, just read it.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-0419. Come to me reviewsA poem...theyre kinda hard to summaize, please R&R!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-0420. My Own Mistakes reviewsAbout relationships and needing to m,ake my own mistakes, R&R please!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-26-04 - Published: 4-26-0421. Love Rant reviewsAs a broken heart heals, I rant about my feelings. REVIEWS APRECIATEDComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-18-04 - Published: 4-18-0422. Tired reviewsI'm sick of a lot of things abuot life, and this is a poem describing it, R&R plzComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-17-04 - Published: 4-17-0423. Breakup reviewsthings are over with my bf, after four hard months. please R&R!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-16-04 - Published: 4-16-0424. untitled passion reviewspassion is wonderful, isnt it? this is basically whimsical thinking. reviews appreciatedComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-15-04 - Published: 4-15-0425. I love you reviewsAbout my BF again, reviews appreciatedComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-15-04 - Published: 4-15-0426. You reviewsAbout my boyfriend, reviews apprieciatedComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-15-04 - Published: 4-15-0427. New Day reviewsCute and succinct, reviews apprieciatedComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-15-04 - Published: 4-15-0428. Picture reviewsA poem that I wrote about a picture of my boyfriend that is next to my bed. Reviews appreciatedComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-15-04 - Published: 4-15-0429. Ode to Sugar reviewsI had to write an ode in english class, and sugar was the first thing that came to mind. Please R&R!Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-24-03 - Published: 12-24-0330. Blind reviewsthe angst of not being noticed. R&R!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-29-03 - Published: 11-29-0331. What to Say reviewsKind of humorus, plz R&RComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-29-03 - Published: 11-29-0332. Notes from Girl R reviewsJUST READ IT!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-29-03 - Published: 11-29-0333. A new life » reviewsSomething that I just had a crazy idea for and if you like tell me, and i will post more chapters. pleaseRRMystery - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,368 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 11-27-03 - Published: 7-2-0334. Chippy » reviewspoems about my hamster. REVIEW PLEASE!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0335. Unrequited love reviewsthe title kind of says it all...Please REVIEWComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0336. Fitting in reviewsJust something I felt like doing.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-17-03 - Published: 7-17-0337. Too Long reviewsThis is the way I feel in my heart...PLEASE REVIEWComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-17-03 - Published: 7-17-0338. My Space reviewsA song that describes how i feel sometimes. PLEASE REVIEWComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-03 - Published: 7-17-0339. Tough reviewsThis isn't really true. I wrote this cuz there was nothing else to write.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-03 - Published: 7-17-0340. Laughing reviewsa poem about laughing and making fun of people! PLEASE REVIEW!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-17-03 - Published: 7-17-0341. I Don't Know reviewsThis is kind of a personal thing pertaining to an incident between me and a friend if mine. It may not have an effect on you if you’re not involved, though you could find another meaning in it.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-17-03 - Published: 7-17-0342. My Name reviewsjust a short little poem on my name...Please REVIEWComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-15-03 - Published: 7-15-0343. Reading reviewsJust a quick little poem I did when I couldn't sleep...Please REVIEWComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-15-03 - Published: 7-15-0344. Spiders reviewsjust alittle poem I did on how much and why I don't like spiders.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-15-03 - Published: 7-15-0345. Nightmare reviewsThis isn't really how I feel, I wrote this when I was really depressed.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-15-03 - Published: 7-15-0346. How Do You Feel? reviewsI wrote this song awhile ago, it's about wanting to know how someone feels about you. Reviews are appreciated!Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-8-03 - Published: 7-8-0347. Stuffed! reviewsI wrote this when I had a sinus infection. please READ and REVIEW!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-5-03 - Published: 7-5-0348. Notebook reviewsA cute little diamante. Please RRComplete - School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0349. rain reviewsThis was a poem that I wrote when we had weeks and weeks of rain. Reviews are appreciated.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0350. April Fool's Day reviewsA very funny poem about the April holiday. Reviews are appreciated!Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0351. I'm Sorry reviewsThis is to a friend that I have hurt, but it can have other meanings. I appreciate Reviews!Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0352. Boy or Fish reviewsThis a nonsensical story about a dream I had. It should give you a good laugh. Please R&R.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 476 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0353. Spring Poems reviewsJust some cute little springtime acrostics. R&R.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0354. Opportunity reviewsThis is a poem I wrote in 7th grade when we each got a letter, had to make a theme, and write a poem. I got an a and I hope you like it too. Please R&R.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0355. Meitnerium reviewsA poem I did fro school when we were learning aout elements. Don't suppose you've heard about this one! Please R&RComplete - School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0356. The Holocaust reviewsI wrote this when we were learning about the Holocaust in school. Please R&RComplete - War - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0357. Life Goes On reviewsIt's about being dumped and how life goes on. Shelila wrote it with me.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0358. The Scary Moment reviewsA little essay on how I overcame my Bat mitzvah fears. Please R&R.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0359. Chanukah poems reviewsThese are good to read for any time of year! Please R&R!Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0360. What is a friend? reviewsA cute little definition poem that is the last of the 4th grade ones that I have. Please R&R!Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0361. Father reviewsA cinquain from 4th grade... Please R&RComplete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0362. Flowers reviewsAnother from 4th grade... Please R&R!Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0363. An Alphabet of Animals reviewsAnother one I did in 4th grade. I actually found an animal for N! please R&RComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0364. Mother and Father reviewsCute little acrostic I did in fourth grade.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-30-03 - Published: 6-30-0365. Hannah and Gerald reviewsAn outragous twist on the classic hansel and gretel.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 669 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-30-03 - Published: 6-30-03
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