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Author has written 96 stories for Haiku, Fantasy, Love, Romance, Nature, General, Life, Friendship, Essay, and General. I'm trying to work on fiction right now...poems will be few and far between, I expect. And any stories will be taking a while, what with the story that I'm probably NOT posting that I'm working on for the next two weeks and 3 AP classes and piano and the final revision of dandelionia's and my novel. Because a publisher is looking at a couple chapters, so we've got to get the rest done before they reply, just in case *knocks on wood*... Just thought I'd let anyone who cares know. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ I'm a sixteen-year-old girl in Michigan and I've been writing poetry for a little over a year. I love to read and I love music. My favorite book is the Lord of the Rings, although I like most things I read and remember. I play piano, was teaching myself wirestrung Gaelic harp, and I love John Mayer's music. John Mayer above all else, and the only others I will mention here are Graham Colton Band and the Old 97's, but I like lots. Dandelionia (here on FP) and I have written a novel--I don't think we're going to post it here, though. That's been taking up my time lately, editing and revising and rereading and revising... I believe in returning reviews. I might take a while at it, though. My entertaining wit is not apparent in this profile. Oh well. | |||||||||
1. Psychoanalysis reviewsOveranalyzing is stupid and only results in being upset.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-9-06 - Published: 4-9-062. Your Presence reviewsHis person is gone but his traces still engulf her, almost unbelievably. What a great summary. But I really like it.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-053. hands clasped tight reviewspretty self-explanatory. the parenthetical comments are supposed to be indented but I can't get them to stay that way on here.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-054. Miss You reviews"I miss you,/poetry" Missing writing poetry, and writing prose instead-because excitement has fallen awayGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-16-05 - Published: 2-16-055. And So She Wandered Blindly reviewsproper stanzas now...About being sick of change-always growing and then having to re-evaluate who you are. About being lost in your present, and knowing the present's more important than the past.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 460 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-30-05 - Published: 1-30-056. Kindred Spirits reviewsThere are two ways friendships can go...Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,152 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-16-05 - Published: 1-16-057. One Night Is Nothing reviewsI wrote this originally only for myself, but I kind of love it so I'm posting it. I guess it's a look into my beliefs in life.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-058. Inexplicably, Inextricably reviewsThis is from a while ago, and it doesn't mean anything to me any more, but I really like some of the phrasing, some of the words. About someone taking up all your thoughts for no real reason, unknowingly.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-059. Survival reviewsAbout centering your life around a countdown of days, surviving just so many more. Needs a better title, can't figure out formatting on this new thingLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 551 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-7-04 - Published: 12-7-0410. Empty reviewsI wrote it almost w/out realizing it...pretty self-explanatoryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-30-04 - Published: 11-30-0411. Forced Evolution reviewsA little bit rough still, but-SHORT story of an unrelenting, useless crush. I don 't know about the title, I just came up w/it nowGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 963 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-29-04 - Published: 11-29-0412. Lightfilled Dreams reviewsAbout idyllic daydreams of my future...if you're an ardent feminist, don't kill me. Looking it over, maybe it is mostly inspired by being cold.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 693 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-24-04 - Published: 10-24-0413. Apparently, That Hope Was Very Strong reviewsRefers back to "failing hope"...Basically, it's a stupid idea, about a guy I like not being in any of my classes...I like a lot of the formatting, thoughLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-31-04 - Published: 8-31-0414. Rewind and Start Over reviewsReplaying the same daydream again and again.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,559 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-28-04 - Published: 8-28-0415. failing hope reviewsAn almost certain feeling that it's hopeless, that it won't happen. This poem, actually, makes me feel better about my poetry, at least.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-26-04 - Published: 8-26-0416. Alone reviewsI've lost all confidence in my poetry, with all the failed attempts this summer, but I decided this one was better/I may be confused. About feeling alone, no matter what.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-26-04 - Published: 8-26-0417. Memories Flash and Freeze reviewsKeep getting reminded of what I thought I no longer cared about. Don't know if I should've posted it, but it's all I could write tonight.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,043 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-4-04 - Published: 8-4-0418. Fallen Into Memory reviewsDon't really know what this is, but it's about something bringing back a memory and getting stuck in it. A bittersweet, pointless memory.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 990 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-24-04 - Published: 7-24-0419. Can't Think To Write reviewsDidn't know where I was going, then my mind was so full and then...I'm not quite sure. Sad, though, I think. I think it's forced and kind of dumb, actually, but some clever lines.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-19-04 - Published: 7-19-0420. Nothing reviewsSurprisingly I remembered this through a night of sleep and until tonight...about realizing he's been nothing/always was. Kind of simple, about the same guy yet again. AGAIN. Haven't seen the kid since June 10, though.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-18-04 - Published: 7-18-0421. Finally reviewsSummer wasn't feeling right, but then I was looking at the really not-that-great sky the other night, and it was suddenly just /right/. I really like this one, I think.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-0422. Spring: Dreams Walking reviewsThis is from...May? The title is odd, I know. "Points to remember from walking home [I’ve these dreams I’m, walking home, home where it used to be (fights urge to listen to “83”" It's thoughts during a walk, about nature and dreams?Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 586 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-14-04 - Published: 6-14-0423. yawn reviewswrote it in chemistry, that might explain some of it. Formatted diff, w/ indents and italics... um...it means many different things on many levels-levels of thought and levels of reality. I guess you could keep in mind the school year's ending-a year hLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-5-04 - Published: 6-5-0424. This Afternoon reviewsUm...what can I say? I love it, I think, and I don't want to give anything away. Whatever it was was there is all I'm certain of, but that's not the point. Point being...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-26-04 - Published: 5-26-0425. Hopeless reviewsSchool is ending, chances are fleeing, nothing will happen. PLEASE review, no one is reviewing me anymore really. Not sure about the word 'context', but I kind of like it...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-24-04 - Published: 5-24-0426. Waning reviewsHmmm...it's a very not obvious poem for a change...chances are ending, school years coming to a close, and also...well, your ideas about it would be very interestingLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-28-04 - Published: 4-28-0427. It All Depends On You reviewsDwindling feelings...but could it build up again? I don't know, that's a funny sounding summary. I have no idea if I like this.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-18-04 - Published: 4-18-0428. Old Dreams reviewsRemembering old dreams, that haven't come true and no longer can, and therefore realizing new dreams might not then either...it's really depressing, exaggerated from what I feel, I think.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-8-04 - Published: 4-8-0429. Nothing More reviewsMy thoughts seem all repeated, every last one of import-this was the only poem therefore that I could write...oh well. Read and review, please?...not really about writer's block, but about thinking about the same things again and againLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-3-04 - Published: 4-3-0430. You Are Not reviews...read it please? It has a lot of repetition..that makes it easy to read...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-2-04 - Published: 4-2-0431. Starless But WishFull reviews...what a great title (that was sarcasm)...just wanted to clarify it wasn't the adj 'wishful' but that it is full of wishes...not really that much about nature maybeNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0432. What's Better? reviewsjust read it, I don't want ro give it away ...btw I do NOT LOVE the real person, that would be strangeLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0433. Talking reviewsReally, truly, very much so talking! It was exciting then. Not so much though now.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0434. That Which Will Never Be reviewsThe rhythm of this scares me-singsongy? Basically, I have been confused about the tear-prone-ness of my eyes lately. A lot. And, yeah...don't. make. up. perfect. boyfriends. Actually, it's great fun.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0435. Reality? reviewsSo reality is becoming confusing...that's what happens when you and your friend have a 400-page novel that includes yourselves with fake characters...Just read the poem as a poem, it's about imaginings and possibiliites melding with what's realLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0436. Happily I Cry In Sadness reviewsNot happy crying-happy and about to cry, at the same time. How can this be so? Seriously.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0437. Softly But You Heard reviewsTalking to myself but he heard and looked at meLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0438. If Only What Was Fair Ruled Fate reviews...yeah...that break, I was really kind of depressed, wasn't I? The injustice of feelings not returned?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0439. Why reviewsWhy-the depressing reality of why I shouldn't like him...is that what this poem is? It's sooo depressingLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0440. Something reviewsIt's not enough, glances aren'tLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0441. Now I Can See reviewsThe depressingness of the sky mixing with being stuck alone and bored and depressed...great break that wasLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0442. Reality Drifts and Bends reviewsAll I want to do is sit here of think...fantasize...think of you Title not completely relevant? I love this one, so much.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0443. Now Today Thinking I Realize reviewsRealizing that what I'd been reading into meant nothingLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0444. Please Stop Looking At Me reviewsThe confusion of not knowing where to put one's eyes...avoid, or stare? The funniest part is that I wrote it later that day, while sitting right next to him...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0445. It Scared Me reviewsread it...basically, the scariness of this glance? ugh it is ALWAYS eyesLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0446. Walking Away for the weekend reviews...eyes meeting eyes, again-but this time staring almost? How obvious it must've been.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0447. You Saw Me reviewsSimple, just as the title suggests...not sure if it's worth it, but the ending is powerful, I think, and I just like it-I never wrote more, I never finished it-that was all there was to sayLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0448. Decreasing Importance? reviewsabout coming back from a break, and him not mattering as much, and why was it-desperately in need of a new title, suggestions welcomeLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0449. So Close To You reviewsIt's just a moment, really...a moment first of bliss and then of loss? Having fun summarizing cooly Read it, I guess...I'm not sure-it's pointless?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0450. Keeping Me On TrackHaha, Right reviewsthis is a response to another poem of mine, "As You Entered the Room"...I think that I like it...about how I act...yeah this is weirdLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0451. Walking Up the Stairs reviewsWell, I like how on the side of the original, unrevised version it says "not paying attention" in a lazy script (I wrote it in Math) but it's about going up the stairs and just knowing someone was there, and actually not feeling stupid-though that might'vLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0452. I Am So Aware reviewsThis sounds rather stalkerly, I realized...that's scary. I actually scared myself, typing it up...about knowing when someone should show up, and trying to act normal around them...I'm not actually sure I still like itLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-14-04 - Published: 3-14-0453. With So Much Time Passed reviewsI hadn't been at school, hence, seen certain people, for a while...ALL of THANKSGIVING break...wow that's just four days...it's really kind of sad actuallyLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-14-04 - Published: 3-14-0454. I Know You Looked At Me Today reviewsUm...train of thought, moreso than usual...it is long, but I think it's worth it, this poem meant so much to me when I wrote it...the commas need work I know, but please review it...I was so proud of itLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-14-04 - Published: 3-14-0455. Why Do You Have That Face? reviewsOr should it be titled "That Face? I think that the title is pretty self-explanatory...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-13-04 - Published: 3-13-0456. If I Thought Long Enough reviewsAngst too? Anyway, for real, in my head, it's romance, it's a disappointed love poem, but I guess to the general person it is not that specific. Basically, power of thought over what happens.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-19-04 - Published: 2-19-0457. I Seemed To Feel You reviewsthis is from a point in time when I was just writing the poems, the thoughts, so these two stanzas might not be part of the same poem, and I never titled them, but they are together now-more 'eye poetry'Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-18-04 - Published: 2-18-0458. That Moment reviewsOkay, this poem is supposed to be merely thoughtful, explanatory-not narrative of my life, although in the second stanza it slips...this is purely what's on the paper, I have never edited it, so it's uncollected, but I was so proud of it at the time, in eLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-18-04 - Published: 2-18-0459. But Once reviewsFor once, slightly optimistic thoughts on people glances, gazes, etc...it's ALWAYS about that, have you noticed? These poems are all pretty old...try SeptemberLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-18-04 - Published: 2-18-0460. You Sit Next To Me reviewswritten while sitting next to the person in class...I don't think there's really any more to sayLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-18-04 - Published: 2-18-0461. Snow Does ItYes reviewsWritten in Algebra II first hour a couple days ago...since then we've had TONS of snow, but no snow day...should I add the ending and are question marks necessary, 'cause I like the dashes but 's look funny w/themNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 1-15-04 - Published: 1-15-0462. Home Alone I Am reviewsWhenever I have the computer all to myself, alone, and can therefore write poetry on it instead of by hand, I can't think of much to say. But the potential's there. Okay, that's a crappy summaryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-18-03 - Published: 12-18-0363. I'm Sick of All This reviewsThat's not really the title, I need one. About thinking about someone ALL THE TIME. I like it, I think.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-03 - Published: 12-17-0364. Every Time I Stop Thinking reviewsI've never called anything 'angst' but it probably is. I think that the title basically explains...please please please I want thoughts, especially on the first partLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-16-03 - Published: 12-16-0365. Giggling Incessantly reviewsWrote at hotel the night before a John Mayer/Counting Crows concert thissummer...which has nothing to do w/anything. My friends and I were really hyper, constantly laughing. Had forgotten about it, found it today, thought 'Eh, I'll post it. Why not?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-4-03 - Published: 10-4-0366. Perfect Fall Day reviewsSure, the title's not great, but oh well. Stuck in Chemistry yesterday, wanting a perfectlovely fall day, but thought it was still grey and cold like it was all week. Turned out, it was lovely butcold...I know that autumn is the cooler but fall fit thereNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-3-03 - Published: 10-3-0367. Can't Write A Paper reviewsbaically, I had a world history paper, and I was exhausted, but I was also hyper-neither of which are good states-of-mind when you are working. Not a great summary...anyway, I kind of like it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-2-03 - Published: 10-2-0368. Autumn Reigns reviewsWell, wrote this in World History yesterday...Monday, all of a sudden it became like it was November...yick, we need more perfect fall days first! Anyway, this is mostly a bunch of cool phrases that popped into my head, and upon rereading it,it actuallyNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-1-03 - Published: 10-1-0369. Black and White reviewsWrote in in Health class a week or two ago...orginally about boredom, the pages blurring together, but it came out meaning something else, probably. I think it's pretty cool.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 9-24-03 - Published: 9-24-0370. Moonlit Musings reviewsGirl in a tree, during a pretty night, thinking about traveling the world. Final poetry test last year, my only rhyming piece uploaded, it's completely fictitious. I like it, I think...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-13-03 - Published: 9-13-0371. Accidental Lying reviewsAbout lying by accident, and feeling bad, wanting to tell someone I lied, but it would give away the secret that the lying was protecting (my only real secret)...but since when do I care when I lie? (not that I do it much)...secret has been told to oneLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-5-03 - Published: 9-5-0372. As You Entered the Room reviewstruly, it's untitled, but I decided to title it here-suggestions please? In basically the same vein as the other two newest, but I am more satisfied with this one. It's really a basically happy poem, well having him in my class is.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 9-5-03 - Published: 9-5-0373. That Chance reviewsGoes w/Last Glimpse, same set up/rhythm for a bit, I don't like it as much. I need an ending that kind of goes w/Last Glimse, haven't thought much on it yet. What do you think of it, as a poem? I was actually happy-he was in my class...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-3-03 - Published: 9-3-0374. How Could It Be? reviews(you/across from me) so school started, and the schedule machine is nice or something. My summaries must be becoming really bad, no one is reviewing my stuff. I want to know, seriously, what people think of this as a poem.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-3-03 - Published: 9-3-0375. To Tell or Not To Tell reviewsShould you tell secrets, or not?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-17-03 - Published: 8-17-0376. Silence Because? reviewsWhy didn't she ask about my poems...the ones I hadn't planned on showing herFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-17-03 - Published: 8-17-0377. How Do I Know? reviews(that I like you)...old compared to some of my poems, but pretty recent, I really like the end.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-17-03 - Published: 8-17-0378. A Fruitless Recount: He Loves Me Not reviewsYou know how you you take straw wrappers and pinch them, turning them about ninety degrees in between each inch and do the whole "He loves me, he loves me not" thing...at least according to my mom...well self-deception doesn't always work.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-17-03 - Published: 8-17-0379. Such a Bittersweet Dream » reviewsUpdated w/another dream that goes w/it. Based on dreams I had, tragedy only to me because I never get to know what happened. How well is it written? although the dialogue's right from the dream, so I dont' think it's too great.Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 563 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 7-10-0380. I Think of You and Wonder reviewsSchool's been out for a good bit. Haven't seen anyone but my darling bestest friends and then relatives. See Last Glimpse and Split-Seconds.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0381. They Dance Crazily reviewsRandom dancing by friends in the basement, just as the poem says.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0382. What I Didn't Want to Say reviewsThe frustration of having nothing to write/writing rambling poetry.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0383. Hopelessly Bored reviewsI was really bored the day I wrote this and the haiku, dragged off shopping w/my parents and none of my friends could come. Do you like the [brackets] 'cause they were editing that I forgot to take out but some people like them.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0384. Sitting Here Alone reviewsThese are a bunch of haiku that go together, not completely true as I have had no chance to wonder "what we could have been" and I wasn't depressed then; they were just sposed to be bored poems but the other things sounded good. Anyway, this is too longHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0385. Cityglow Sky: No Wishes reviewsThe other night I couldn't see the stars, and I wanted something descriptive (not depressing) to write. A couple nights later I realized it just probably wasn't late enough, because if you wait you can see them. I think it's a pretty cool poem.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0386. Faerie Rain reviewsOne winter night the rain (I guess it wasn't cold enough for snow) was really, really tiny and barely felt wet...that's basically what this is about. Itwas really cool!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0387. Winter: Wonderland or Wasteland? reviewsAlso from seventh grade, this poem kind of shows the way we tend to get snow in my part of Michigan-when we get enough (I like a lot) it stays forever. Don't get me wrong, I love snow, but the same old snow gets so yucky...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0388. Ideas reviewsThis one's from seventh grade. The simple title explains it, basically.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0389. Fantasy is reviewsYet another sixth grade poem...it was titled Fantasy is...Magical but that seems a bit silly to me nowFantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0390. March reviewsI don't know if I should call this March, or March Slips In, as Microsoft word titled it. It's another sixth grade assignment that I still like, using a cat instead of a lion and a lamb.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0391. Autumn reviewsThis is a poem about autumn, obviously. I wrote it 3-4 years ago, in sixth grade, but I still like it. I'm not sure the metaphor is completely clear, however. What do YOU think the pillars are? Please tell me.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-12-03 - Published: 7-12-0392. Last Glimpse reviewsThis poem was on the last day of school. As w/my other poem like this, I would really like to know what people think of this, as I have no other source for criticism.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0393. SplitSeconds reviewsPlease review this poem...I don't really know if it's good and I don't have anyone here I want to share it with.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0394. A Magical Instrument reviewsI still haven't come up with the right title. This is a poem about the ancient, wire-strung Celtic harp, which I am learning to play. It was also a school assignment, but I still like it.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 359 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0395. Haiku 2 reviewsHaiku I wrote when I should have been studying for finals, the two go togetherHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-10-03 - Published: 7-10-0396. Haiku reviewsA haiku I wrote for school, but I like it a lot. Incorrect number of syllables fixed...I can't believe my English teacher missed that-or that I did. This is alos posted on a seperate pen name of mine, soHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-9-03 - Published: 7-9-03
