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Author has written 53 stories for Friendship, Life, General, Family, and School. Hey, I'm Lora, 16 and living in Lichfield near Birmingham. I love music especially punk etc. I like Simple Plan, Fuel, Busted (matties so fit :D) Linkin Park, Nickleback, The Darkness and erm loads of others that arent coming to mind currently. Well i dont really have much else to say. I'm me, I like poeple reviewing me makes me feel loved :D Go read people on my fave authors list they're all really good writers..well duh. If they werent they wouldnt be there! I no nothing about poetry, English is my worst subject at school and i dont read. At all. (and you're all wondering what the hell i'm doing here arent you? Well your guess is as good as mine!) Please read 'Standing alone,' 'Untitled,' 'The last goodbye,' 'Exit this way,' and 'Me' They're my favorite poems, and probably my best. :) Oh and if you havent got anything constructive to say dont say anything at all. I dont care if you dont like my stuff but if you're gona say its crap atleast say why. Also if i say something about you're poetry like you need to work on something or whatever dont come and read mine and say its crap just because i've critisized yours, its immature. And to 'sacredthoughts' and her gang of paid friends. I constructivly critisized her work saying the spelling was bad and some lines didnt have enough syllables, she has a go at me. Then what does she do? Go and copy 'this poem is shit' into a review of like 4 or 5 poems, i'll ask you this...how the hell is that constructive critism? Grow up. Okay i've had nothing but shit from people the last few weeks although i have recieved good reviews too, the bad are just not needed.Theres really not much point me staying, i thought i'd just write this so people that actually liked my work (though i'm doubting now that there was anyone) wouldnt wondered where i'd gone. I dont need people to say that my stuff is crap. | |||||||
1. The Edge Just Got Closer reviewsThis is about how 'meaningless' words can push someone too far. This actually happened to me but he obviously didnt push me too far. But the rest of its true. I put 'gona' in the third para because it read better than going to.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-26-03 - Published: 12-26-032. Its a dream come true reviewsIts a dream come true, or is it? Things are never the way you imagine...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 12-3-03 - Published: 12-3-033. I'm Tired Of Hating reviewsI'm tired of hating, this world in which i'm living...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-3-03 - Published: 12-3-034. The bitter person that is me reviewsTitle says it all. Not one of my best but its just a poem about me and my bitterness.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-30-03 - Published: 11-30-035. Exit This Way reviewsIf only it was that easy and someone pointed a way out to you. This poems about how you should never lo9ok down on people and pity them because in the future you never know what could happen. Pls reviewLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-30-03 - Published: 11-30-036. The Last Goodbye reviewsThis is my favourite poem out of the lastest five i've uploaded its about suicide like the rest of my recent ones..Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 11-26-03 - Published: 11-26-037. Me reviewsAbout being empty inside..Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 11-26-03 - Published: 11-26-038. Little People reviewsStupid poem i wrote about the little people in my head..Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 11-26-03 - Published: 11-26-039. Fake exterior reviewsDunno where this poem came from but i like it... pls reviewLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-26-03 - Published: 11-26-0310. A day in the life of me reviewsJust sometimes i have days like this...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-26-03 - Published: 11-26-0311. Rumours reviewsI heard stuff about Jess and was unsure how much was true i asked her about it and now its all over. Its completly my fault. But i just wrote a poem about rumours only hurting people.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-11-03 - Published: 11-11-0312. The little fairy reviewsAme, one of my mates worte me a poem about faires so i wrote one back and i decided to put it on here Plz read :)Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-11-03 - Published: 11-11-0313. Changes reviewsHow you drift away from friends for no specific reason.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-3-03 - Published: 11-3-0314. Standing alone reviewsThis is about me standing on the edge. Wanting to fall but realising that people that hurt me dont deserve to win.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0315. Watching you laughing reviewsThis is about how some people dont realise how immature they are, i have a mate thats like this some of the time but this poem over exaggerates it somewhat! pls review :DFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0316. False smiles reviewsThis really short but i dunno how to add to it. Its about how i hate school, how i'm really not me there and how mates always see through you.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0317. Anorexia reviewsThis is a poem about anorexia although i'm not anorexic...i wrote it for a key skills project i'm doing.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-23-03 - Published: 10-23-0318. Packing reviewsPacking to go on holiday but wishing it was to move away... pls review :DLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-22-03 - Published: 10-22-0319. Who cares? reviewsThis is just about how only clever people are important to the teachers and people like me just arent important just because i'm not as clever as some.School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-20-03 - Published: 10-20-0320. Not knowing where you stand reviewsThis is an over exaggeration of the situation i'm in...i dont actually avoid the guy or anything you just never know what he wants from you kind of thing...Please reviewFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-8-03 - Published: 10-8-0321. Her reviewsOk so i nicked someone elses poem and wrote a poem around the structure and meaning...so shoot me, the original was about the girl looking in the mirror and saying what she saw.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-7-03 - Published: 10-7-0322. A year on reviewsErm wrote this for Jess...its a year since her dad died today...i was planning on emailling it her but it didnt turn out as well as i wanted so.. on here it goes!Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-29-03 - Published: 9-29-0323. Every smile holds a bold faced lie reviewsThe titles lyrics...i have no imagination...its about me and my love of school...and how i thought things would be different this year..Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-4-03 - Published: 9-4-0324. New beginning reviewsThis is about ame and the fact we're mates again now. This poems about wanting to move on but not being able to forget the past. Plz RnR.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-3-03 - Published: 9-3-0325. Friendship Poem reviewsOriginal title hey! O well. Cant be arsed to use my imagination. I wrote this a while ago but only found it earlier its kinda short.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-3-03 - Published: 9-3-0326. Regret reviewsJust about how my feelings towards my dad have changed...Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-25-03 - Published: 8-25-0327. False reviewsI have no idea what this is about its kinda messed up, it makes no sence...well it might to someone else...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-23-03 - Published: 8-23-0328. Results reviewsThis is a short poem about the day i got my GCSE results...School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-22-03 - Published: 8-22-0329. Pain reviewsThis is just about my parents, divorce and how things are now...Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-16-03 - Published: 8-16-0330. Moving on reviewsThis is kinda about Ame but more about moving on...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-15-03 - Published: 8-15-0331. Daddy reviewsWhat i want is a Daddy... About the fact that my dad just doesnt seem to care..Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-14-03 - Published: 8-14-0332. Divorce reviewsDamnit i hate tht word, but theres nothing else i can call it. Its about my life and divorce i guess. Please R&RFamily - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-14-03 - Published: 8-14-0333. Hatred reviewsThis is about ame, and yes i meant it at the time but i wrote it five months ago and situations and people change!Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0334. Hello! reviewsI dont know where this poem came from i just kinda wrote it in a couple of seconds when my brother was watchin the tv really loudly!Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-11-03 - Published: 8-11-0335. The real you? reviewsJust about you not really knowing a person unless you're spending time with them. I have met this guy but i talk to him online.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-10-03 - Published: 8-10-0336. One wish reviewsI wrote this for Jess, after her dad diedFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-10-03 - Published: 8-10-0337. I'll be here for you reviewsThis poem isnt really meant to have a set end to it as friendship is never ending... :)Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-10-03 - Published: 8-10-0338. That night reviewsThis is about the night that Jess's Dad died...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-8-03 - Published: 8-8-0339. I cant make it through on my own reviewsThis is just a short poem i wrote...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0340. Untitled reviewsHmm, I was feeling really down when i worte this...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 8-4-03 - Published: 8-4-0341. Indifferent reviewsThis is just a quick poem i wrote about how i feel...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-3-03 - Published: 8-3-0342. Happy reviewsWell erm, this isnt very good. I dont write about being happy well cus its something i dont experience very often :)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-3-03 - Published: 8-3-0343. Open reviewsThis is just a poem about how i find it hard to open up to people.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-2-03 - Published: 8-2-0344. The world hates me reviewsJust another poem (cant think of anything interesting to say about it)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-30-03 - Published: 7-30-0345. Happy times reviewsI'm not sure if this works...? Needs something...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-27-03 - Published: 7-27-0346. Jealousy reviewsIm not a jealous person i just feel i appreciate some things that others dont... err...yeh...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-27-03 - Published: 7-27-0347. Keep hold reviewsNot really much to say!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-27-03 - Published: 7-27-0348. Thankyou reviewsFor Jess.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-26-03 - Published: 7-26-0349. Life reviewsThis is just about how im feeling atm.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-20-03 - Published: 7-20-0350. What do you want from me? reviewsIts about a mate that only tells me he's down, not the reason why.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-20-03 - Published: 7-20-0351. Will you be there for me? reviewsThis is written for a mate that I always listen to but doesnt seem to care when I'm down.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-19-03 - Published: 7-19-0352. Used reviewsI think everyones used by mates at some point.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 7-17-03 - Published: 7-17-0353. I'd tell you reviewsThis was written for a mate, Ame that no longer talks to meFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 7-15-03 - Published: 7-15-03
