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DrunkenMonkeyKing
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since: 07-31-03, id: 367439
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Author has written 8 stories for Sci-Fi, Life, Humor, Humor, Fantasy, Mystery, and Fantasy.

Yo everyone, DrunkenMonkeyKing here. Funny screenname, I know but I like to think my writing isn't as crazy as it is. Now I'm a junkie for reviews and do return reviews for anyone who reviews me. Don't worry I'm not a "good stuff, keep writing, yo!" type of reviewer, I will honestly put effort into it because I hope you guys do the same for me.

Now, if you really don't care what you review, I'd prefer reviews on Echoes of the Dead, as that is what I'm hoping to finish up first. It's a type of noir mystery with a touch of fantasy tossed in. (Yes, I'm a huge nerd when it comes to fantasy, though others more so than some stories). I'm a bit proud of this one, has some great ideas in it but it is a bit rough when it comes to grammar and other small nitpicky things, so obviously I'd love people to review it who can point those things out to me.

The Order in Chaos is a bit of a science fiction story, (again with fantasy elements scattered throughout). You'll notice a definite change in quality as I had started to revise the story from the beginning toward the end. As the chapters go on the revisions become less and less (still working on that) so feel free to be as harsh as you want.

The Melody of Fire is your stereotypical fantasy story. Swords and (just a touch) of sorcery. It's more of a story about political intrigue than good vs. evil, but I am a bit proud of this one as it was one of the first stories I'd ever created. Again, since it is so old, feel free to be as harsh as possible, I honestly won't mind and I'm more interested in improving than getting my ego fed. (My ego is big enough as it is).

The poetry sucks, but I leave it up there just to prove I'm not good at everything. If you need a laugh, feel free to check it out.

Anyway, hoping to get back into the swing of things. Like I said, I R&R in return, so if you're looking for a good reviewer, let me know!




1. Echoes of the Dead » reviews
In the City of Vynam, it's hard to find the truth behind the machinations of the State Inquisitors and the lies of the Guilds. Sometimes, the only way to get to the bottom of things, is to listen to the Echoes of the Dead.
Mystery - Fiction Rated: M - English - Mystery/Supernatural - Chapters: 10 - Words: 16,458 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 1-31-08 - Published: 1-28-06
2. The Order in Chaos » reviews
Technology and magic mix in a tale of desire, mystery and action. 2nd edtion. Just check out the prologue and tell me if you want to read on.
Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 37 - Words: 65,237 - Reviews: 141 - Updated: 7-6-07 - Published: 7-31-03
3. The Melody of Fire » reviews
Destiny. Innocence. Corruption. Betrayal. Four fates of four strangers interwine in the Empire of Loste Mor. The battle for a crown, for the truth, for the right to live, and for the right to die, all become one.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 26 - Words: 64,144 - Reviews: 59 - Updated: 7-6-07 - Published: 1-2-05
4. Fire Poem reviews
A Poem about Fire
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-6-07 - Published: 7-6-07
5. Dream
A Dream
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-6-07 - Published: 7-6-07
6. Declaration of Independance reviews
What to do when your neighborhood is overrun by a Super Villian Hugarian Mouse Corp.
Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 675 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-31-03 - Published: 7-31-03
7. Drunken Monkey King reviews
Just a bunch of nonsense
Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 7-31-03 - Published: 7-31-03
8. Hope and Despair reviews
For anyone who wonders whether the glass is half empty or half full.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 7-31-03 - Published: 7-31-03
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