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| Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis |
Author has written 18 stories for Fable, Biography, Life, Friendship, Humor, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Spiritual, and School. I am Kate, a 17yr old Australian. I study Extension English at school and thus I value your tips very much as I am likely to fail without your help. Please read and review! I try to review your work very honestly but being young and inexperienced my comments may have little value. That is why I appreciate your negative comments so much as they help me improve. | |||||
1. Mr Derret goes to lunch reviewsA poem I wrote about a teacher at my school who is incredibly cruel. It is not a hate poem but a poem of resentment and wonder. Please r and r.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-17-052. Such is Perfection reviewsA sonnet I wrote to encapsulate my views of what perfection is: dull, boring, empty. Please read and review.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-4-053. The Under Inflated Tyre reviewsThis is a short poem I wrote to express my frustration. I tried to write using imagery just like Syvia Plath, but I am nowhere near as talented. I am not sure of its quality but you can tell me that! PS. THIS IS NOT ABOUT A FLAT TYRE OR A CAR!Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-26-044. Narrative of an intellectual Snob reviewsI am sick of reading stories and this is why! If you want to be challenged this will sure challenge you.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,001 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-14-045. A phantasmic tour reviewsCome on a tour with me potential reviewers. I will unlock to you a few secrets of my world, that is if you are not too afraid. This was my performance poetry piece for which I received 25/25. I lost my voice the next day for talking so loud but it was worPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 662 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-11-046. Just a song at twighlight reviewsA spiritual story focussing more on indiduals and their thoughts than actual actions. This was my official assessment story and my teacher gave me 23/25. Many powerful themes such as war and its effects. Very relevant to modern society. Includes Crosby, SFiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,895 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-11-047. Mr Dalloway reviewsThis is my favorite story. My extension English teacher gave me 19/20 for it. Read it and be moved by the tale set in the not-so-far-away future. Mr Dalloway is the husband of a MALE political aspirant and is planning a dinner party. Please, please, pleasFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,484 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-11-048. Old Friends reviewsRead this please! Although it is not action packed or mysterious, it has a very spiritual, emotive quality. My expert ext. english teacher gave it 17/20 and I want to know what you think!Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,036 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-29-049. A suspicious party reviewsI got 18/20 for this story. It is an exciting tale which follows an elderly woman as she tries to discover the whereabouts of her missing husband. Please R/R.Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,222 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-29-0410. A hyperbolic view reviewsFor this story I got 17/20 The word limit was 400 words, so it is rather short. Which means you will find it easy to read. It is about MURDER! AHHHHHHhFiction: Horror - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 532 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-14-0411. Dom, the jolly, corpulent, ice cream eating man reviewsDom is bored of his life as a gym instructor. Then he meets a strange pair: a man addicted to ice cream and a hate filled misanthrope. I had fun writing this but it might be a little silly. Please R/R.Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,690 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-29-0312. Sonnet of awe reviewsThis is a sonnet I wrote about an amazing gym instructor and when I showed my Dad he laughed. I wonder why?Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-24-0313. Prolonged Wounds reviewsThis is a sonnet I wrote for english. I am not much of a poet and I hope I do Ok.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-22-0314. Luca's Tale reviewsAre you sexually obsessed? If so this tale is a good lesson for you. It tells of an old lonely man, Luca, who finally meets somone and of how it fails miserably.Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,863 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-20-0315. Theta the Unnatural existence reviewsThe first human clone looks back on her life and her inferior treatment.Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 952 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-9-0316. Granny Frangipani reviewsGranny Frangipani is dead! Those who knew her looked back on this crazy ladies existence.Fiction: Fable - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 860 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-3-0317. Like Putty In their Hands reviewsA story telling of a ward of the states loss of innocence.Fiction: Fable - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,278 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-1-0318. 2034 The Unheeded WarningA person looks back on their time in the Big Brother House in the year 2034Fiction: Fable - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,014 - Published: 8-1-03
