| Burning Moon |
Author has written 70 stories for Religion, Fantasy, Nature, Life, General, School, Love, Friendship, War, Family, and Song. I was born in Israel and my first language is Hebrew, though I also speak English fluently and Spanish haltingly. I like to sing. I'm a perfectionist and a hypocrite. I think too much. Or not enough. Sometimes I'm honest, and sometimes brutally so. I write poetry (though not recently). Mostly for the feel of words flowing out, but sometimes to address issues I feel strongly about (you can tell these apart by the large drop in quality) and sometimes to get a two or three line rhyme out of my head. I can be arrogant. I get pissed off when others are arrogant. Like I said, I'm a hypocrite. I'm 20, three-quarters of the way through a Computer Engineering degree, and in need of direction. Anything else you'll have to figure out as we go along. | |||||||
1. Escape reviews...i'm hoping in time that my memory won't fade / and i'll keep on believing you wait for the day / when not closer are even our hearts than our shapes / for that's why you told me you wanted escapePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-18-08 - Complete2. summer reviewsi'm electrified, but listless / (as i list this litany of wishes for you; but always wordless in the stead / of effort-driven expression)Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-25-063. lengua reviewscon cada cambio de lengua, / el sonido se pone raro, y los ideas empeza a parecer desconocidosPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-13-064. language reviewsthe struggle for words, for language (constraints of custom / and caprice complicating further)Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-13-065. found wantinga hundred thousand brilliant suns (they pale before your smile) / couldn't warm me today (and so like it, bright and cold; fake and meaningless and oh god so distant)Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Published: 4-20-066. theft'tilMyCheeksAreHeated(ThisExchangeOfWords,OfMemes Perceptions(InAPerfectWorld,ButAllThatTravelsIsTon e;/WeBothKnowYou'veWon)/ Nature,AsEver,ProvidingTheCure:ByMeansOfRisingMois ture(OurVoicesFollowSuit),'til,AtLast,/WeBothAreCo ldPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Published: 4-20-067. romance reviewsAtTheVeryThought,ThereComesA/PendulumStrobelight(S uddenHeat BitterCold/ SweatingThroughBoth)/ButPullingOff(ThroughNoFaultO fHisOwn)/ACasualQuery(ThePulsingRhythmHidden,Just; / FastEnoughToShameAHummingbird-TwiceThirty-OddScore EachMinute/HeThinksOfHer)Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-5-068. spat reviewsyour lips part, the dam opens / and streaming forth (in equal parts spit and spite) / come epithet epiphanies: / revelations (though neither revels), / insight (though we both are blinded - by love, by pain, by having lain so long like so much carpet)Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-3-069. flow reviewsthe transfer of heat/a capella - bereft of accompaniment/whether by emotions untold, unwanted/or strings that show only in the light of feverish paranoia/brought on by grasping insecurites, fishing for compliments/and getting back an empty hookPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-1-0610. sol reviewsglistening dew(s dont's)/bring light 2 this fiasco/that, 4 how many months now?, you i act out/on grass the shape of which is not the same 4 our passage/(our imprints on the earth, on each other)/it was inevitable that we should reach this night.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 329 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-29-0611. the drummer whose beats mete out rhythm for sleep reviewsyes,every action effect,their cause lies firm in retrospect / within the confines of those hands that,us,like mannequins,direct / the drumbeats ring out,strong,like a dictator's song / regardless of your own volition,you will end up in the throng.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 641 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-15-0612. out » reviewslong walks back to doors with locks/and windows, blinds;/ blinding truants from wrath forthcoming - a rich crop from rich sowing/and stopping for nothing is this cyclic action, by instinct, not thought/not quick, but hard fought...[lipogrammatic]Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,095 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-21-0613. naïveté reviewsand so the flick'ring of the screen / controls the every movement, sound / that comes from kids: unsung, unseen / yes, even as they get aroundPoetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 422 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-7-0614. sermonthe rhythm, forceful, filled the air / the strident beat compelled us there / and we were forced to think of sin, / our lives all full thereof, and thin / was the disguise before the law / or so he would have had us thoughtPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 373 - Published: 2-7-0615. well, i'm nothing reviewshere's a song for the forgotten, for the getting and forgetting / yes, an anthem for the singing by the loners at the weddingsPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-4-0616. noctum reviewsor perhaps the click-click of the computer's keys resounds as an amplified measure of the speed of your thoughts (a beacon to all who groggily appear at the foot of the stairs demanding to know the time, as if you both didn't already know)Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-29-0617. affiar reviewsabove the world, grey skies hide shining stars / viewed by bright eyes, while the wrists just crawl with scars / and the rhythm gets slower as the time goes by / until the end becomes a jumble and the meaning has gone dry.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-22-0618. forgotten reviewsand the chorus to this song does not exist at all, you see / 'cause what interests me is testing all your lyric memories / so here again with metalyrics (as i rhyme about the rhyme) / i end this song forsaken 'cause i'm frankly out of time.Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 450 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-22-0619. breakdown reviewsand the taste of tears that burn your tongue / joins bitter thoughts of what you've done / and ev'ry thing you've ever said (ends up as fuel for nameless fears)Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-22-0620. silence reviewsdis silence stretches,expectant,poignant,full o'pause(n'effect)\as t'anticipation o't'next moment fills t'world w/breaths held2long,\&heads dizzy w/excitement@t'prospect o't'future\&t'calm b4t'storm's got nothin on t'static dat fills my ears n dis moment.Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 404 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-22-0621. rea lie ty reviewssince when do you know how to kiss? / and who the hell is this with you, / to steal what we could never do?Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-14-0622. resignation reviewsso with the wobble of the earth and the pull of the moon, he joins the peaceful waters and knows his cares are gone (soon).Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-26-0523. Mask » reviewswith a sigh, sigh, sigh, he passes them by / and the words on his mind spell 'why, why, why'Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 632 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-5-05 - Published: 11-24-0524. Mirror reviewslove songs at midnight and the sound of everyone asleepPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-28-0525. the walk reviewsred heat rushes, shading cheek and filling head / with untoward glimpses into futures that cannot bePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-10-0526. Bright Eyes reviewspromises whispered in the unlit grass, / as hands brush and hearts race, as eyes shut / and tears flowPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-8-0527. War » reviewsshe rages out on her front lawnPoetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 398 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-5-05 - Published: 2-21-0528. The Fire reviewsa fire burns behind his eyes / as shapeless words march 'cross the screen / fev'rishly he breaks all ties / with half-baked words and half-truth screens.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-22-0529. Wounded reviewsyour wings are bent, but not broken / you've not flown for so long . . .Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-21-0530. Illusion reviewsraise up your weary eyes / unto the cloudy skies / and ask your endless "why's" / as stupidity and lies / run rampant in disguisePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-0531. Oblivious reviewsyou play along, you joke, you leap/through hoops while in your mind you weepPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-10-0532. Big Shoes, Strange Town reviewshis shoes are big, he knows the town / but still his feet move up and downPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-13-0533. unable to connectwhen i write, i find myself / unable to connectPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Published: 5-13-0534. fourty two reviewsincoherent thoughts jumbled together, at times resembling poetryPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-2-0535. Insomnia reviewsyou struggle (to fall) / a sleep like deathPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-30-0436. Breath reviewsdid not know that i would care/take a breath of perfect air;/[her personality]Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-7-0437. Such Great Heights llrewritell reviewsrewite i did of Such Great Heights by The Postal ServicePoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 367 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-31-0438. Unwritten reviewsA re-write of Sugarcult's "Memory"Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-17-0439. Futile reviewsrated r for language . . . a rant at society for its treatment of mePoetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 2-23-0440. Pointless reviewspointless is my very life and all the things i do . . . pointless is how i expected different things from youPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 375 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-23-0441. Modern Angel reviewstryin to figure out why i keep fallin . . . [for her]Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-18-0442. Lost Ilcausell reviewsthe world today . . . or is it [just] me?Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-13-0443. Lament to the One reviewsmissed her . . .Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2-3-0444. Falling Angel » reviewsangel can't deal . . . (TWO CHAPTERS)Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 472 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-8-04 - Published: 12-17-0345. Relationship x incomplete x reviewsincompleted poem i've been workin on . . . relationships always seem to end in failure . . .Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-30-0346. Moments reviewsslice-of-life . . . of what is up to youPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-2-0347. CrushEd Heart reviewswhat you learn/feel from a crushPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-2-0348. Mistake reviewsdws driving while stonedPoetry: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-21-0349. Song reviewsiambic pentameter poem i had to write for english last yearPoetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-21-0350. Thank You reviewspoem thanking my dad/mom . . . generally mushyPoetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-21-0351. Teacher reviewsstupid poem i wrote when i was bored. enjoy? lolPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-0352. The Price of War reviewspretty costly . . .Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-21-0353. Suicide Note reviewsguy loses girl, guy loses head, guy loses lifePoetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-21-0354. Moved reviewsa good friend moved away recently . . .Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-0355. For You reviewsbig mistake . . .Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-0356. Nerd reviewsstory of my life . . . lolPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-21-0357. Not Quite Shattered reviews. . . relationship on the brink of breaking . . .Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-21-0358. Pain reviewsa little ditty about an acquantance of mine . . .Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-0359. Secret reviewsmy ballad to an oblivious angelPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-0360. Vicious Figure Eight of Knowledge reviewswhat else is wrong with humanityPoetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-0361. Vicious Realization reviewswhat's wrong with humanityPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-21-0362. School Day reviewsA normal school day.Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-11-0363. Life Story reviewsAverage no-gooder's life story.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-4-0364. Library reviewsPom about libraries.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-4-0365. KnowledgeOpinions on the nature of humanity.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Published: 8-4-0366. Invasion of Light reviewsLife goes on, peace is possible.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-4-0367. Drown reviewsSuicide by waterPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-4-0368. Sins reviewsHumans are condemned for poluting the earthPoetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-4-0369. Celestial Bodies reviewsPoem about the sun moon and earth.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-3-0370. Anti Semitic World reviewsThere are too many anti-semitic people in this world.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 355 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-2-03