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| JJR Meerraf |
Author has written 148 stories for Friendship, General, Love, Life, Fantasy, Family, Religion, Humor, Song, and Haiku. Hey! New quotes, other well known ones probably. "Everything falls apart "Why I stay Pushing Me Away, Linkin Park, Live In Texas Here's another one: "And I don't want the world to see me Iris, Goo Goo Dolls "I... I feel so alive "And now that I know you Alive, POD, Satellite a non song quote, that i just love, i think it's brilliant: "There's no such thing as too late. That's why they invented death!" Walter Matthau said that in the movie Out to Sea, it's supposed to be humorous but i think it's brilliantly true. :) NOTE: For those of you who read my novel: Seperate Circle, a few vocab words for you, cause I know it's confusing. Kip is roughly a foot, hion is roughly a yard, and pag is like a kilometer. Another note, this is a work in progress, so if you see something that contradicts something beforehand, either I made a mistake or I just changed something while writing it. Oh, last thing, the spelling sucks, in the novel, so please forgive. This is like my first serious book also, so please be honest in reviews, tell me how to make it better, but at once also don't be too harsh please :). I know I already said last thing but there's one more thing, there's a lot of geography in it, and I'd like to get a map up online but I can't figure out how, any pointers are greatly appreciated!!! I have a plea for all writers out there. I'm looking to be published so if any of you know people, or can help me out with names to call, PLEASE HELP!!! I will be eternally greatful, seriously. Just email me, or leave it in a review. any help with publishers, PLEASE My name is JJR Meerraf, I'm a 16 year old guy who lives in maybe the most boring place in California. I'm also a stout Christian, and I'm not afraid to stand up for my Savior. Please don't flame my religion, only judge my works on its skill, and if you do flame me, thank you for taking the time... I'll put you on my prayer list and make sure to return your reviews. :) I find inspiration in the comings and goings of my life, God, JRR Tolkien, and lots of music artists like Linkin Park, Evenesence, and Nickleback. I also find inspiration in KJ-52, DC-Talk, POD, Kutless, Switchfoot, and many other Christain bands, I love all these guys too. I'm also miles behind in my uploading. So if you're a regular reviewer, I've been uploading so much becasue there's a lot to do :). Any reviews are appreciated! And I'll always return them as well. Another note about my writing, I rhyme almost ALL the time. So please don't flame me on that, it's just how I write. Feel free to email me about anything, especially religion. I love to talk to people. I love to travel, do crazy stupid things, and travel. Huge thanks and hugs for Tenika Dargon and swirlygirl for being the first ones to put me on their favs authors list. Another big thanks and hugs for Soryu, me10, pippin tomson, jez-arinn, AbunaiChikara, Kamai-Kun and Eshana for their constant reveiws. Another huge thanks for all the writers who have read all of my novel so far! Namely, jez-arin, AbunaiChickara, Eshana, Kamai-Kun and pippin tomson. Thank you so much you guys! And once again thanks to everyone who's ever read my stuff! I highly recommend these authors and all the others on my fav's list. The biggest thanks to AbunaiChickara, for giving me the most reviews, constantly! And reviewing all my work! thank you! I love to stand under the rain and feel the droplets fall over my face. I love hugging people, any girl and almost any guy 'cause I believe hugs are like the best things. I love christmas, swimming, writing, and friends. A final note, my spelling isn't that bad, but I do make some stupid mistakes. Please forgive me, and please forgive me again when I don't fix it, 'cause I'm pretty lazy about that :). But I try. Thanks for taking the time to read all of this and hopefully read and reveiw my work. God bless! | |||||||
1. Burning Pictures reviewsI ususally don't put songs up anymore, but I LOVE this one! I just wrote it and thought, I have to put this up now! Please tell me if you get the meaning, lots of analogies and hidden meanings, but please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-18-042. A Desire To Worship reviewsThe very beginning is a quote from "As The Deer," so please don't sue me, lol. hope you like!Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 433 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-18-043. Obscurity reviewsThe ending of this 3 poem series thing about a relationship going from happy to sad, but not just a breakup. Please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-18-044. My Moment With You reviewsIt rhymes a lot, but i still like it, cause it's personal, hope you like it!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-18-045. Reminded reviewsThese next poems that I'm uploading together are like a series, talking about a relationship and how it went from happy to sad. please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-18-046. Little Boy reviewsNot really angst. It's sort of a hip hop song about trying to help the little boy stray from a path known as destruction. This is one of my favorite poems so I'd really like to know what you think! Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-9-047. Losing You reviewsIt's sort of a song, but I decided not to title it as one, cuz I only really have a tune for the chours. Another love poem, please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-9-048. Inside Of You reviewsMy lyrics, AND my tune, which is very strange, hehe. Anywayz, something a little different, tell me if you like!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-9-049. Learning To Smile reviewsLeaving a life of hate in the past and what that might do for you, Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 388 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-9-0410. Flower's Heart Revised reviewsOne day I just thought I'd do a remix sort of poem, I decided to do it on one of my favorite poems. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-9-0411. Rambling Fool Strikes Back reviewsIsn't there a Dumb beyond dumb catagory? That's what this should be. Seriously, I don't know why you would read this, it's the final piece to the Rambling Fool TrilogyPoetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-16-0412. Unbeatable reviewsJust basically defiance to authority, refusing to back down but instead promissing to fight, please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 285 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-16-0413. Shining Stars reviewsA poem that's not a song, and that isn't about teenage stuff. kool. a little bit of my past writing, returning to how and what I used to writePoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-16-0414. Lost Without You reviewsAnother love song... please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-16-0415. Drowning Tears reviewsA song about constantly living in sadness, and what it takes out of you, please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-16-0416. An Unwanted Life reviewsA poem dedicated to all those who live a life feeling unwanted, and abused.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-16-0417. The Stranger reviewsI really like this one! I think it's a good analogy, but tell me what you think, and see if you can figure out what I'm talking about before reading the A.N., please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-9-0418. Unsolved reviewsWhen a couple runs from their troubles... it only hurts them. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 350 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-9-0419. Because I'm Killing You reviewsI don't really know how to describe this one. Someone is destructive, but can't change it. Just tell me what you think, Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-9-0420. Children Of The Night 3 reviewsThe Final piece! The rhyming is a little forced, but I like how it ends it. You need to read part 1 & 2 beforehand to fully understand it. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-9-0421. Chameleon reviewsThe consequences of being what everyone else wants you to be, instead of what you want to be. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-9-0422. Broken Man reviewsNow they also need a "sad" genre or something like that, tragedy is just the wrong word. A song about being unwanted and the pain it causes. I really like it, so hopefull you will also. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 425 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 5-1-0423. Running Away reviewsWhen the person you love avoids you and flees from your presence. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-1-0424. Joker Man reviewsReally cool! (hopefully), it's one of my favorites, a touch of my abstract side again. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5-1-0425. Whirlpool reviewsDepressing piece I wrote a while ago, can't remember if I was in a bad mood or just felt like writing it. Have to give credit to inspiration, Linkin Park, the inspiration to a lot of my work. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-1-0426. I Would Tell reviewsPart one, to my other poem "Now I'm Holding Your Hand," the two go together as you'll see soon. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-1-0427. Now I'm Holding Your Hand reviewsPart two to my other poem "I would tell." I wrote the first when I failed again to tell this girl I liked her, I wrote this song that night when I asked her out. So a true story behind this one. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 401 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-1-0428. The Worst Of Stains reviewsNot really tragedy, rated 13 only to be safe. It's about the horros and addiction of cutting, and what it can do to you. Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-21-0429. Your Mask reviewsThought of it while listening to "My Immortal" Evenesence. I like it, and it seems to be something more and more people have to deal with. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-21-0430. Imprisoned reviewsThey should have an angry genre :). This is the first of many "angry" poems I've written in the past (I'm so behind uploading) but I like it. Another song! I seem to be writing a lot of those recently. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-21-0431. I Am Still Strong reviewsWhen people try to beat you down, you're still here, and you rose above it all, and your still strong. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-21-0432. Matchless Beauty reviewsI LOVE this song. I thought it up while... well... thinking. Tell me what you think, Please! Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-21-0433. I Can't Leave reviewsI can't leave without a kiss... A song about the desire to express your emotionsPoetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-21-0434. Thank You reviewsMy first haiku! So please don't be too critical :). Compared to many I've read it's not that good, but please read anyway. To probably my closest friend on FP, Abunai Chikara, thanks for reviews, words of wisdom, and more.Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-2-0435. The Worst of Friends reviewsMore like a sad romance. When you finally get over someone, and then they come back... it's too late. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-2-0436. The Perfect Moment reviewsI love the song "Thinking About Forever" by P.O.D. I wanted to write something like it. I didn't mean for it to end up like this, but as I wrote it it just sort of evolved to something different. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-2-0437. Maidens of Red Robes reviewsIt's sort of romantic, but still really weird. Inpriation: Moody Blues. Hehehe, please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-2-0438. In Closing reviewsThis is just really stupid! Don't ask me what I was thinking. It's sort of like a song, it's actually from a budweiser commercial tune, of all things! Just stupid, read and tell me what you think! PleasePoetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-26-0439. Your Beauty In The Skies reviewsI wrote a song a while ago titled "Falling In Love With You" I really considered calling it "Your Beauty In The Skies" but didn't. So I just wrote another song. The chorus is the same as "Falling..." but the rest is different. Plese R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-26-0440. The Red Inside reviewsThis is really abstract, but really cool! I hope at least. I love writing stuff like this, I just think it's so much cooler than other stuff I write, tell me what you think! PleasePoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-26-0441. Do You Mind reviewsReally romantic, at least I think so, maybe you'll think it's really lame, who knows? The longing desire to be with someone you like, please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-20-0442. How To Breathe reviewsA little weird, I don't know where this came from, about someone learning to stand up for themselves after a... just read! Please.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-20-0443. Damaged Rose reviewsJust read, it's about the aftermath of a bad relationship. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 275 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-20-0444. Drowning My Heart reviewsVery repetative, but I really like it, in fact, I LOVE this one! Forgive the repetativeness (made up word) and please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 378 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-10-0445. The Race Called Man reviewsI like religious poems, but I don't know if this is the best, but if you guys could please tell me what you think! No flames please! If you don't like Christian stuff then don't readPoetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-10-0446. The Last Charge reviewsThis can be applied to my book in furture chapters, lotr, anything. Just a show of nobility, and exactly that, the last charge. Read it and you'll understand. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-10-0447. Seeing Through Eternity reviewsThis is one of my favorite poems! I think it's really cool, but maybe I'm just self righteous :). Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-10-0448. There's A Time reviewsI put it under Fantasy because I was thinking of my book when I wrote it. The title says it all, tell me what you think. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-10-0449. Life's True Test reviewsThe question: is dating worth it? The answer: eluding me. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-10-0450. Dear God reviewsI really like this one! Thought of it while listening to KJ-52, a really cool Christian singer. It's really repetative but I think it gets the point across really well. If you don't like then don't read, but if you do know flames please!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 555 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-20-0451. Your Sadness Is Known reviewsOne of my anonymous friends told me a lot of the troubles they had been facing lately so I wrote this for them. Please R&R!Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-20-0452. A Prayer For The Lost reviewsNo flames please! Just expressing my opinions, but I will stand by them 'till the end. Just a lot of stuff about God and the messed up things of this world. If you don't like, then don't read.Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-20-0453. Make You Smiling reviewsThe format is really weird, I wrote it a while ago. Please tell me what you think!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-20-0454. Family reviewsWrote it around Christmas, so yeah... explains a lot. Please R&R!Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-20-0455. Ugly reviewsMy 100th poem! I actually wrote it a long time ago. I'm miles behind in uploading. It's about how this world has taken everything good it seems and trahsed it, how this race has become an ugly race to speak. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-13-0456. Complete My Fate reviewsAnother one from lotr, I thought of it while seeing Frodo climbing up Mount Doom, determined not to fail. Please R&R!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-13-0457. Weep reviewsMy inspiration was the song Pippin sang in the ROTK, just a really sad sort of poem, but I love it! It's one of my favorites in a while. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-13-0458. Different From Before reviewsEver begin to hate your enemy? This is what it's about. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-13-0459. The Smell of Gunpowder reviewsSuicidal poem, about putting a gun to your head, yeah... a little depressing. Let me press that I never felt this bad, but it was just somehting I wrote. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-13-0460. The Puppet reviewsI just put it under Romance for the heck of it. It's just like someone trying to control the relationship and tell you who you ought to be. Tell me what you think!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-13-0461. Magical Love reviewsI had the song from... Train I think, but it's still my own idea. Short and sweet, tell me what you think, please. R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-5-0462. Eight reviewsVery, very weird! I started to write it with the number eight in my mind, but then it turned into this. Think of eternity. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-5-0463. Black Haired Woman reviewsThis is really weird, I don't really know here it came from. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-5-0464. Falling In Love With You reviewsI actaully made up a tune for this one! Usually I only write songs without tunes or off of modifications of tunes. I really like this, I like the idea of it, please tell me what you think!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-5-0465. Sing and Shout reviewsA very strong praise song, very repetative but I think it gets the point across well. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-5-0466. Forever reviewsWhen love turns you down, you'll still wait, as long as it takes. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-28-0467. The Bottom of the Bottle reviewsPG-13 for drug and alcohol use. It's about how people use drugs and drinks to hide their troubles and stuff like that. Please R&R!Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-28-0468. Farther and Long reviewsA praise song that was inspired from Zoe Girls' song "Your Beautfiul Name," I'm not a huge fan of the group but it was a good song and I like mine too. Please R&R!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 322 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-28-0469. Loss Is Forever reviewsJust a sad sort of poem about when your love leaves you. Pl,ease R&RPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-26-0470. See reviewsI was in an abstract mood when I wrote this, so I wrote something really abstract then. I hope you like it!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-26-0471. Losing Myself reviewsSomething a little different. I rated it PG-13 just to be safe. It's about someone who has gone down the wrong road, but now that he's fixed his life, will his family accept him? Please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-16-0472. I Know reviewsThe reasons of how you know that a relationship will work out. Just a short little something I wrote. Please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-16-0473. Broken Heart reviewsTalking about addiction. Doing something stupid when you know it's only going to hurt you in the end. please R&R!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-16-0474. Mystery reviewsLike a love song, with lame rap sort of stuff, a little different, but I like it. Please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 352 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-16-0475. Real reviewsI put this under Fantasy because I didin't know what else to put it under. Just a little wierd sort of thing I wrote one day. tEll me what you think?Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-11-0476. Protect reviewsJust a brother who will protect his sister. R&R if you likePoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-11-0477. Plead reviewsYour friend wants to commit suicide, but you beg them to think otherwise. Hasn't happened to me, but I've been wanting to write it for a long time.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-11-0478. Of The Dead reviewsI wrote this after watching the Others. It's just sort of a creepy supernatural thing.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-11-0479. More reviewsA praise song of how God helps me out a lot when I'm depressed or sad.Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-2-0480. Destiny reviewsSomeone loves you as a friend but no more. This poem is a plead for that someone to love.Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 331 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-2-0481. A Question reviewsJust something a little weird. The ending isn't supposed to be taken to heart, it's just something I thought up one day.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-2-0482. Confusing reviewsFalling in love with your best friend, but afraid of losing them if you express your feelings. Please R&RPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-2-0483. My Love reviewsA very repetative praise song. Please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-2-0484. My Last Rhyme reviewsI just rated this PG-13 to be safe, but it's not that bad, just for angst and stuff. The woes of when someone you trust betrays you. please R&RPoetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-27-0385. Willow Tree reviewsJust a strange little poem. It is NOT based on Pocohontas, it's totally different! Please R&RPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-27-0386. The Unheard Poet reviewsI've always had this idea in my head but I've never been able to put it on paper. Please R&RPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-27-0387. Photography reviewsI reallly like this one! It's really abstract! Really! Please read it and reveiw, I don't really know where I got inspiration.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-27-0388. Children of the Night 2 reviewsThe sequal. This is from the perspective of the monster in the first one. Tell me if you like it. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 393 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-27-0389. Starving reviewsWhat does it feel like when you're unloved, when love surrounds you yet you don't feel it...Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-20-0390. Fall From On High reviewsA suicide jumping poem. R&R!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-20-0391. Violet Ivy reviewsIt doesn't rhyme! At least for the most part. It's just a big deal for me because all of my poems rhyme, until now. It's very abstract, but Ilove it! Please Review!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-20-0392. The Color Of Red reviewsQuite possible the most dark, twisted, and evil poem I've ever written. Very bloody... but if you like that sort of stuff, then please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-20-0393. Tuesday reviewsIt's sort of a Columbine take off. Just showing different teen problems and the worries and suffereings some of us go through, and what it can lead to. please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-10-0394. Dancing With Darkness reviewsThis is another monster piece. I really like it, about supernatural monsters who strike during the darkness of night...Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-10-0395. Black Void reviewsIt's not really scary, just freaky. It's a very weird abstract piece, please R&RPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-10-0396. Because It's There reviewsWhat summary do you need? Just look at the title. To all those daredevils out there. Just a personal note though, I've done all of the mentioned things in this poemPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-3-0397. Soldier Of White reviewsIt's just sort of a cool story giving a common day battle a new face. Please R&RPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-3-0398. Reflection reviewsReflection is exatcly that, a reflection. It doesn't really mean anything. In every signla line there is a title of one of my other poems, so if you haven't read much of my stuff this probably won't make sense, for thos regular reviewers though, please R&Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-1-0399. Dragonfly reviewsThe title of the poem is spelt wrong, please ignore. It's another piece from my novel that I've finally began to write. the same book with: Earth's Cycle, Circle, and maybe even Riders of Red. An archer is giving an aprentice instructions.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11-1-03100. Mirror, Mirror reviewsDespite the title it has nothing to do with Snow White. It's a rather ambiguous piece, so please read and tell me what you think.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10-29-03101. Haunting Love reviewsI keep telling myeslf that I've forgotten her, but someitmes memories and old feelings strike back with a vengance. Check it out!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-29-03102. My Own World reviewsAnother longing poem of wanting to live not in this world but in a nother. Please R&RPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-29-03103. Chains For Christ reviewsA story of just one of Paul's many transgressions. It's sort of in a song format but it's not really a song. Please R&RPoetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-27-03104. Living Bold reviewsMy 50th poem, but only a small step. Just something that popped into my head, please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-27-03105. Rambling Fool Returns reviewsI'm back! Why you would read this even I don't entirly know, but if you do read this sequal to the first, please review. Hope you enjoy the stupidity!Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10-21-03106. Children Of The Night reviewsUPDATED! It used to have a swear word at the end of it. My reviewers didn't like it much and I decided that I didn't either, so I redid it. A dark piece about revenge, on an unearthly scale, please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 370 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 10-21-03107. Evil Of Fire reviewsThere's a little note at the beginning, read that... it's loosely based, (saying that to protect myself) from lotrPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-11-03108. Armageddon reviewsIt doesn't get too in depth with the whole Revelation story, but I like it. That battle nears... a sword is drawn... please R&R and tell me if you like.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10-11-03109. Passing Time reviewsFirst of all, props and credit to my friend Izzy, (you know who you are), she gave me the idea for this poem. Life can pass you by in a blink, how sad it can be at times...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-11-03110. What Would I Give reviewsI wanted to write something that was actually uplifting and romantic. It's just about a lover who wants his love returned. Hope you like it!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-11-03111. Last Moment reviewsEver see Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon? This is a poem about when she jumps and emotions during that time, sort of...Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-03112. Sinner reviewsIt's not really spiritual, I just didn't know what else to put it under. Another song, I like it, talks about guilt and the sin that drags you down.Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-03113. Smile reviewsMy fortieth poem! I know, not that big of a deal, but it's a small step away from fifty! A poem about a depressed poem, regretting what has happened.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-10-03114. Young Sunflower reviewsI love this, I truly do, it's strange but i love the tune, please R&R. Warning: It's very repetative, if you don't like that then don't read it.Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-7-03115. Goodnight reviewsI've messed up many times in my past, but God was always there, here's a story of it, sort of.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-7-03116. Fight reviewsA poem about being bullied and fighting back, it's pretty cool, I think. I'm writing more and more songs, though I can't carry a tune. Hope you enjoy!Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-30-03117. Face The Red reviewsI don't really know why I rated it as PG-13. It's the wierdest poem I've ever written, but it's very serious and grave at the same time. Please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-30-03118. The One I Yearn reviewsThe tune is from a song that I really like, I think that it is dragged on a little but lets see what you like.Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-30-03119. Flee reviewsThis is a cool poem, I think so at least. It sort of coppies off of lotr but I hope you won't hold that against me.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-30-03120. What To Live For reviewsA poem about suicide and turning around to see someone betterPoetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 364 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-25-03121. Dancing Creatures reviewsWarm loving creatures that sort of popped into my head while experiencing writer's blockPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-23-03122. Blank reviewsA poem about nothing, yet something, I don't know how to describe it, R&R, see what you thinkPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-23-03123. My Child reviewsAnother religious poem, though I didn't like it as much as my other two, oh well, let's see what you thinkPoetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-23-03124. Lover's Hate reviewsJust what happens on a bad breakup, when one ignores the other who still lovesPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-23-03125. Hold Me reviewsAnother poem about suicide. hope you enjoyPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-23-03126. My Fantasy World reviewsA little plead that I ask myself all the time.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-21-03127. Flower's Heart reviewsThis poem isn't really about anything, it's more abstract, but I really like it, please R&RPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-20-03128. A Dream reviewsI like this one. I've never had a dream exactly like this but it conveys the message well I thinkPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-20-03129. Dear Father reviewsA little song I made up in church once, hope you likePoetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-20-03130. Evil reviewsMy darkest side, the title says it all. Maybe it's becuase I'm a kind hearted sould but this was almost too much for me.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Horror/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-20-03131. The Wanderer reviewsA tale of a man who lost a lot, I like it, it's long but please R&R!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 580 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-17-03132. Heart Of Ice reviewsA love life turned bad, and the consequences of the relationshipPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-17-03133. Crazy Times reviewsSomething about suicide. It's a mix of Linkin Park tunes and my lyrics. If you know the group you can hear tunes from "Crawling," "In the End," and "Faint"Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-10-03134. Why reviewsA depressing love poem about wanting the love you feel returnedPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 335 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-10-03135. Rambling Fool reviewsThe title says it all, rambling fool. warning you now, it doesn't make sense at ALL. you've been warnedPoetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 275 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-8-03136. Key To My Heart reviewsThe sappiest poem I've ever written, but it's one of my favorites also. Hope you like it!Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-8-03137. Two Men reviewsMy comedic debut! Hope you like itPoetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-7-03138. Irish Lands reviewsI've always like Ireland and their folklores, here is my bit.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-7-03139. A Good Day reviewsI just kinda sat down and started typing. I know that it's not my best, but it's ok.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-6-03140. My Friend reviewsMy colors show true in this one, my beliefs are finally knownPoetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 699 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-6-03141. Can You See reviewsThis was actually a BD letter to my dad, but I liked it so I"m uploading itPoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 398 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-4-03142. Wounded Heart reviewsA romance turned bad and the recoveryPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-4-03143. O Riders Fair reviewsThis poem came to me when I was reading Lord of the Rings. How I don't know, but I like it. I hope you do tooPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-4-03144. Dragon's Throne reviewsMy first attempt at a fantasy poem. The gold, the protective dragon, I hope you enjoy.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-4-03145. Spinning Tops reviewsOne of my favorites. A poem about life that applies to a lot of lives I think. Hope you like itPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-4-03146. It's Only You reviewsMy love poem/song that somewhat applies to my life. EnjoyPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 9-4-03147. The Race reviewsThe thrill of the race and the need for morePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 315 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-21-03148. Friendship reviewsA poem about the bonds friends can makePoetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-21-03
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