| pippin tomson |
Author has written 82 stories for Fantasy, Religion, Family, Life, Friendship, Nature, War, School, General, Fantasy, Love, and Song. Hey Hope everyone's ok, I used to be a regular on here about two, three years ago, and I decided I should write again, because I enjoy it, but havn't written poetry in a long while, and it needs a lot of work. I've grown up since I last wrote, and will continue to do so, and want my writing to grow with that. That is why I would really appreciat reviews with Constructive Critisim. I'm probably better at writing fiction, but have so much, it will take a lot longer to type. I'm an appauling speller, and If I can, I will correct any mistake that have been pointed out to me. If you review me, it's only fair that I will return that, even though I may not have time straight away. What's to know..? Not too much, I like a lot of things, and have an open persoanlity. I like lots of music, and particularly Jack Johnson I love films too.I want to Travel when I'm older and really would love to go to New Zealand. I like to snowboards, play piano and guitar and think that young people should have an opinion on what's going on in their world, and do something about it. This link I found on "Lie to me// I -love-you-for-it"'s I thought it was interesting, so, if you could take the time after you have read one of my poems, and let me know the impression you got from my writng. IT will help with the people percieve me through me writng. Thanks xx http://kevan.org/johari?name=pippin+tomson">http://kevan.org/johari?name=pippin+tomson pip xx | |||||||
1. Beauty reviewsA poem about realising the selflessness of lovePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-7-09 - Complete2. The Smell Of Old Books reviewsI love the smell of old book, they have so many memories.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-1-063. The Pretty Girl Laughs So Loud reviewsPretty Girls can Laugh Loud, because they're a flock, all laughing at something they don't find funny...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-1-064. Count the Stars reviewsThere is distance between us and the stars, but it feels as though anything is possible when you gaze at them. That they comfort you, but they remain an enigma.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-1-065. AA 7P 608The World is a databasePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Published: 8-1-066. AT 16 reviewsNot my usual style, but deffinatly a commenton peer pressure and how has effected so many of my friends. xxPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 387 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-1-067. Predicament reviewsSOmething that has happened recently, I'm not sure what to think about it. xxPoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-1-068. The Honest Travel AgentI like this one. Those of you who are up to date with Celtic Mythology should have no problem. Prehaps obvious, but written from the point of view of ... a travel Agent! yeah... please R R, be intresed to know what you think. xxPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 447 - Published: 7-31-069. Penetrable Mask reviewsEveryone carries a mask. It's about finding one that will work, and how to do that. Sound complicated? It's not too bad. xxPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-31-0610. My Pen Wont Stop Today reviewsInfluenced by Western issues, like materialism. Quiet short, and exact.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-31-0611. Pescimist or Optimist reviewsSometimes I think about stuff like this, and it seemed a pretty good way to express it. The Title makes it quiet clearPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-31-0612. The Weaver Girl reviewsA sweet poem with many subtel points .Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-31-0613. Nameless Future reviewsJust something that I think about sometimes and tried to piut into words.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-31-0614. Friday Night reviewsHey... Trying to find time...Just written when I was really sad at the end of a very pointless realationship...Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-13-0515. Hello Tommorow reviewsJust a song I made up...Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-24-0416. Gilding Thoughts reviewsI based this on the tune of a soing from Jesus Christ Superstar. It's about facing the little datails of whop you think you are, but being able to let go. It's been a whilke, but I'm trying to get back to my old standard of poems.Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-17-0417. Sorry reviewsAn apollogy for everyone on this site who I should of caught up with. I promise I am going to spare time, still reall miss FPPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-12-0418. Happiness reviewsIt's a light hearted poem, don't take to seriously if you don't like it.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-4-0419. A Moment to Live Life reviewsI wrote it based on Twelfth Night. there's different character views in it.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-4-0420. I Want reviewsAbout me, I'm sure other's realate. Also, don't concentrate on the words used, they are simple, but concentrate on the menaings of the wordsPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-4-0421. Who Are We? reviewsWho are humans? (not all humans are like this)Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-4-0422. A Secret Box reviewsWhatever you want to be in there, will be, so go on and find out...Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-4-0423. Once Again Margret reviewsThis is for someone who I know who died. She was such a lovley person, and I shall not forget all her kindness and lovliness.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-4-0424. No Escape reviewsI wrote the is a while ago, about the time before and the waiting, before something terrible you know that is going to happen, like my other poem Trouble, but better explianed.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-26-0425. The Hal Horse » reviewsAnother fantasy tale, but for children this time. Pplease could you suggest improvements, and state if you prefere The Ledgend of Celandine, those of you that have read it, that will tell me which to continue. Thanx p.s. Foes- mistaken word!Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,848 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-16-04 - Published: 1-5-0426. What We Fight in Hope For reviewsAgain, it's about LOTR, and how people will not loose hope and shall fight, giving their lives for what they believe in. One of my favoutrite, though could do with some suggestions. If you read this, please read each line deeply and discover its meaningPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-9-0427. A Drinking Song » reviewsI based it on a short song from LotR. It's not long and only meant to be read lightly. Feel free to flame, It's just for fun!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-6-04 - Published: 1-4-0428. Phantom Mills reviewsPG because of main theme. Largely about death, but looked at in a different way. Please give me your opinion and R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-30-0329. Read Me reviewsCan I ask you all a question?Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-29-0330. All's Song reviewsThis is a folk song written so that almost every character in LotR could sing or mean it. Please R&R LotR fans!Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-23-0331. Sweet Minor reviewsI heard a song, anfdd the voice was by far the most touching and innocent and emnotional voice I've ever heard singing. It touched me, so I've tried to decribe this, with a few repeating words.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-23-0332. Listen to Me reviewsvery simple language. It's about being an individual, probably applying to a lot of you on this site. I have writen this specifically, and it is for somone.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-18-0333. Trouble reviewserr, well, I wrote this when I was scared of getting told off, because I was just waiting, and I knew what the reaction was going to be.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-18-0334. My Vow I Hold reviewsthis isn't the best, but I've also based this on LotR, and it's based on Sam, and how he will die for Frodo. I love the Loyalty and the depth of emotion reached, and I've again, tried as hard as I can, to capture it within this poem. Please R&R LotR fanPoetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-15-0335. Archer's Bow reviewsVery much so based on LotR, again, I know, I'm sorry, but I think that this realtionship occurs more than once, this only touchs the surface of the depth of emotion in LotR. Legolas has a bow, but this bow is not based on his. Please R&R LotR fans!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-11-0336. Whistler's Thread reviewsIt's a folk song, I really like the words to it and it's about anyone who has a dream, the dream that they will always see fufilled, no matter what they give.Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-11-0337. What I Will reviewserm... well This is about my feelings for what I want. They've been getting me down, so I really wanted to write something possitive about them. There is deep influence from Tolkien, and I don't know if you will understand this, but the poem means a lotPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-5-0338. Feasting Upon the Carol reviewsIt's about Christmas as the seasons coming up! I really wanted to write this one. It's not that good, but It's only meant to be a warm poem. I really hope you enjoy readin it.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-28-0339. Under the Shell reviewsI wrote this about our enemies. They are not evil people, but good people, because they follow what they believe in, as do we. It is about niether of us being wrong, but both of us being right. Unless it is Sauron in lotr, cus he is pure evil.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-26-0340. BourrĂ©e reviewsOne of my favourite poem I've written, based on how I felt after something really upsetting happened. It's haunted me every day since. I hold a sincre feeling of wanting to communicate with this other person. please R&RPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-23-0341. Ignorant Child reviewsWhen I felt down, I wrote this. I was ignorant and I was really stupid, but I wouldn't take it back, because I learnt something. This is something I wrote during the process of it. Not about suicide!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-19-0342. Rats Feet reviewsI know that the title doesn't sound very nice, but their nothing wrong with rats! anyway, this is not about them, but it's about thives and about their sly ways.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 11-19-0343. One Love reviewsIt makes you think and is about finding the one person that is right for you.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-18-0344. The Legend of Celandine reviewsKyal is born to the Line who protect the Kings. Through battles over belief, magic and fantasy, reincarnation, human nature at its purist and most shadowed and the vast beauty of a an old country, love shines... Not all up here yetFiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,509 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-15-0345. Search reviewsI wrote this a while ago. It's written about finding your own fantasy world, if you get what I mean.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-13-0346. The Future reviewsThis is really about determination, in any shape or form, and I think that ambition has a lot to do with it too.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-13-0347. Sore reviewsI think that I was in a redeaming mood when I wrote this, but it came as an idea, and I really wanted to write it. It's not the best, but I really like it.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-13-0348. Monopoly reviewsI don't know what to put for this one, but read it, if you want, and find out.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-13-0349. RoesHip Song reviewsNo, it's not a song, it's about a flower!Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-13-0350. Traverllers Joy reviewsI think it'a nice poem, quite clam, and it's from flowers point of view!Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-13-0351. Eternal White reviewsI don't think that this poem was has an obvious theme, but I do like the words and I wrote it based on some music that was heard at the time and the images they conjured up and I really like the feeling this poem gives me, but I would really like your opiPoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-10-0352. Twister reviewsPlease don't pay any attention to the meaning of the words in this poem, it's just a tounge twister and I just want to know how easy it is to read. The words in it are absolute rubish!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 11-6-0353. Conn reviewsAbout my favourite character from a series of books, and I do know that i write a lot of things from books, but I think that I really mean them.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-5-0354. What Ought a Man to Be? reviewsBased on the last book I read. It's very questioning and is one of my favourites I have written so far.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-5-0355. Where I live reviewsIt's about the same fantasy world that I always visit, it just cheered me up because I was upset. It's not the best of poetry, but it made me fell much happier. Hope it will make you happier too.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-3-0356. Lands of Mystery reviewsJust describing a mystery land, don't know what else to say.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-3-0357. May it Be reviewsIt's for a close person, with cancer, it was influenced by my favourite Enya song- Mayit be, the lotr one. This is dedicated to all suffering from caner.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 10-17-0358. My Story reviewsI wrote it when I was 11,and I think I based it on Grendel from Beowulf, but we wearnt readin it at the time. I've always like it, but I was only young, so it's not serious.Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Horror/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-15-0359. Blood City reviewsAgain, this was influenced by something I've read. I hope you can see the theme in it.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-15-0360. Curly World reviewsI think I know what this poem is about, but it's really a load of nonsense that i decided to try to turn into poetry. Hope you enjoy it.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10-14-0361. How did this happen? reviewsI put this under PG because no one shouls ever feel like this, but i did, It's changed me and I'll never feel like that again, it was quite a scary experience to feel that strongly, I tried to write a poem abou it.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-13-0362. Weapons reviewsIt's just about older weapons, cus I love learn about them.Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-13-0363. Tartan reviewsIt's about scotland, because I love that land, and about what I think is quite magical about it.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-0364. English Elm reviewsabout England's past, sorta lamenting some of the recent building of indusrty.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-0365. He is One of Us reviewsonce again, this comes from my feelings from the book I've just finished, I had to write about a legend who was killed in the book, This is a brief poem about how this man kinda lived on , even when I had finished the book.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-0366. The Crab and the Otter reviewsjust something to cheer people up and not ment too seriously.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-10-0367. Their Depth of Friendship reviewsThis is based on Merry and Pippin from lotr and it kinda mixes bits from the books called Ravenheart and Stormrider. I don't think it's that great, but I enjoyed writting it.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-2-0368. Gypsy Dog reviewsI fell in love with this dog while I was working at the kennels and he's so sweet, I had to write a poem about him. Hope you like it.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-29-0369. Hail Great Master reviewsAbout an old King from a fantasy land and the land he rules.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-29-0370. Braken reviewsThis is for my friend, who reared a lamb and now has to say goodbye to it because was reared to sell for meat. it's totally unfair, I feel so sorry for her. This peom is for her and her lamb xxxx :(Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-29-0371. Green Trees reviewsAbout the memory of trees, a seven year old asked me to write this one, so it's really for her.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-29-0372. Two Sparrows reviewsI was working one day and I saw two sparrows sitting together, so I thought it would make a nice peom. What do you think?Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-29-0373. Grey Day reviewsIt may be a bit of a tounge twister, and about looking underneath the surface, let me know what you think because I don't like it that much.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-29-0374. About Fay reviewsThis was for a friend, I wrote this just before we fell out for the last time. I stilll really want to be friends with her, but I don't know why it doesn't work out. Hopefully we can build a friendship up like we used to have. I'm still loyal to her.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-26-0375. Death of a saint reviewsBased on the book Stormrider, and how I felt after finishing it. About a triumphant death.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-26-0376. It's all I can say reviewsabout yet another, different person, Iknow, who's too negative. Small, but not suicide bit, applies to me too.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 383 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-26-0377. Disgrace reviewsAbout someone I know, who doesn't know, but may realise, this is what they face.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-26-0378. Joan of Arc reviewsAbout the betrayed and Innocent Joan of Arc, who still stands in history to God's word.Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-25-0379. What Was reviewsA pleasant View of a magical world when looking at the times past.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-24-0380. A Short Poem reviewsA bout the influence and the comfort taken in reading the things you lovePoetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-24-0381. Eyes of Heavy Ways reviewsInside a guilty man's soul ( again, from the past)Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-23-0382. A World, from the past, I see reviewsA world deep in war, set in the past, forced on by kings, be nice:)Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-22-03