pippin tomson
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since: 09-18-03, id: 374621
country: UK
Author has written 82 stories for Fantasy, Religion, Family, Life, Friendship, Nature, War, School, General, Fantasy, Love, and Song.

Hey

Hope everyone's ok, I used to be a regular on here about two, three years ago, and I decided I should write again, because I enjoy it, but havn't written poetry in a long while, and it needs a lot of work. I've grown up since I last wrote, and will continue to do so, and want my writing to grow with that. That is why I would really appreciat reviews with Constructive Critisim. I'm probably better at writing fiction, but have so much, it will take a lot longer to type. I'm an appauling speller, and If I can, I will correct any mistake that have been pointed out to me. If you review me, it's only fair that I will return that, even though I may not have time straight away.

What's to know..?

Not too much, I like a lot of things, and have an open persoanlity. I like lots of music, and particularly Jack Johnson I love films too.I want to Travel when I'm older and really would love to go to New Zealand. I like to snowboards, play piano and guitar and think that young people should have an opinion on what's going on in their world, and do something about it.

This link I found on "Lie to me// I -love-you-for-it"'s I thought it was interesting, so, if you could take the time after you have read one of my poems, and let me know the impression you got from my writng. IT will help with the people percieve me through me writng. Thanks xx

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pip xx


1. Beauty reviews
A poem about realising the selflessness of love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-7-09 - Complete
2. The Smell Of Old Books reviews
I love the smell of old book, they have so many memories.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-1-06
3. The Pretty Girl Laughs So Loud reviews
Pretty Girls can Laugh Loud, because they're a flock, all laughing at something they don't find funny...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-1-06
4. Count the Stars reviews
There is distance between us and the stars, but it feels as though anything is possible when you gaze at them. That they comfort you, but they remain an enigma.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-1-06
5. AA 7P 608
The World is a database
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Published: 8-1-06
6. AT 16 reviews
Not my usual style, but deffinatly a commenton peer pressure and how has effected so many of my friends. xx
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 387 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-1-06
7. Predicament reviews
SOmething that has happened recently, I'm not sure what to think about it. xx
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-1-06
8. The Honest Travel Agent
I like this one. Those of you who are up to date with Celtic Mythology should have no problem. Prehaps obvious, but written from the point of view of ... a travel Agent! yeah... please R R, be intresed to know what you think. xx
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 447 - Published: 7-31-06
9. Penetrable Mask reviews
Everyone carries a mask. It's about finding one that will work, and how to do that. Sound complicated? It's not too bad. xx
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-31-06
10. My Pen Wont Stop Today reviews
Influenced by Western issues, like materialism. Quiet short, and exact.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-31-06
11. Pescimist or Optimist reviews
Sometimes I think about stuff like this, and it seemed a pretty good way to express it. The Title makes it quiet clear
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-31-06
12. The Weaver Girl reviews
A sweet poem with many subtel points .
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-31-06
13. Nameless Future reviews
Just something that I think about sometimes and tried to piut into words.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-31-06
14. Friday Night reviews
Hey... Trying to find time...Just written when I was really sad at the end of a very pointless realationship...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-13-05
15. Hello Tommorow reviews
Just a song I made up...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-24-04
16. Gilding Thoughts reviews
I based this on the tune of a soing from Jesus Christ Superstar. It's about facing the little datails of whop you think you are, but being able to let go. It's been a whilke, but I'm trying to get back to my old standard of poems.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-17-04
17. Sorry reviews
An apollogy for everyone on this site who I should of caught up with. I promise I am going to spare time, still reall miss FP
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-12-04
18. Happiness reviews
It's a light hearted poem, don't take to seriously if you don't like it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-4-04
19. A Moment to Live Life reviews
I wrote it based on Twelfth Night. there's different character views in it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-4-04
20. I Want reviews
About me, I'm sure other's realate. Also, don't concentrate on the words used, they are simple, but concentrate on the menaings of the words
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-4-04
21. Who Are We? reviews
Who are humans? (not all humans are like this)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-4-04
22. A Secret Box reviews
Whatever you want to be in there, will be, so go on and find out...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-4-04
23. Once Again Margret reviews
This is for someone who I know who died. She was such a lovley person, and I shall not forget all her kindness and lovliness.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-4-04
24. No Escape reviews
I wrote the is a while ago, about the time before and the waiting, before something terrible you know that is going to happen, like my other poem Trouble, but better explianed.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-26-04
25. The Hal Horse » reviews
Another fantasy tale, but for children this time. Pplease could you suggest improvements, and state if you prefere The Ledgend of Celandine, those of you that have read it, that will tell me which to continue. Thanx p.s. Foes- mistaken word!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,848 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-16-04 - Published: 1-5-04
26. What We Fight in Hope For reviews
Again, it's about LOTR, and how people will not loose hope and shall fight, giving their lives for what they believe in. One of my favoutrite, though could do with some suggestions. If you read this, please read each line deeply and discover its meaning
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-9-04
27. A Drinking Song » reviews
I based it on a short song from LotR. It's not long and only meant to be read lightly. Feel free to flame, It's just for fun!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-6-04 - Published: 1-4-04
28. Phantom Mills reviews
PG because of main theme. Largely about death, but looked at in a different way. Please give me your opinion and R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-30-03
29. Read Me reviews
Can I ask you all a question?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-29-03
30. All's Song reviews
This is a folk song written so that almost every character in LotR could sing or mean it. Please R&R LotR fans!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-23-03
31. Sweet Minor reviews
I heard a song, anfdd the voice was by far the most touching and innocent and emnotional voice I've ever heard singing. It touched me, so I've tried to decribe this, with a few repeating words.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-23-03
32. Listen to Me reviews
very simple language. It's about being an individual, probably applying to a lot of you on this site. I have writen this specifically, and it is for somone.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-18-03
33. Trouble reviews
err, well, I wrote this when I was scared of getting told off, because I was just waiting, and I knew what the reaction was going to be.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-18-03
34. My Vow I Hold reviews
this isn't the best, but I've also based this on LotR, and it's based on Sam, and how he will die for Frodo. I love the Loyalty and the depth of emotion reached, and I've again, tried as hard as I can, to capture it within this poem. Please R&R LotR fan
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-15-03
35. Archer's Bow reviews
Very much so based on LotR, again, I know, I'm sorry, but I think that this realtionship occurs more than once, this only touchs the surface of the depth of emotion in LotR. Legolas has a bow, but this bow is not based on his. Please R&R LotR fans!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-11-03
36. Whistler's Thread reviews
It's a folk song, I really like the words to it and it's about anyone who has a dream, the dream that they will always see fufilled, no matter what they give.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-11-03
37. What I Will reviews
erm... well This is about my feelings for what I want. They've been getting me down, so I really wanted to write something possitive about them. There is deep influence from Tolkien, and I don't know if you will understand this, but the poem means a lot
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-5-03
38. Feasting Upon the Carol reviews
It's about Christmas as the seasons coming up! I really wanted to write this one. It's not that good, but It's only meant to be a warm poem. I really hope you enjoy readin it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-28-03
39. Under the Shell reviews
I wrote this about our enemies. They are not evil people, but good people, because they follow what they believe in, as do we. It is about niether of us being wrong, but both of us being right. Unless it is Sauron in lotr, cus he is pure evil.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-26-03
40. Bourrée reviews
One of my favourite poem I've written, based on how I felt after something really upsetting happened. It's haunted me every day since. I hold a sincre feeling of wanting to communicate with this other person. please R&R
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-23-03
41. Ignorant Child reviews
When I felt down, I wrote this. I was ignorant and I was really stupid, but I wouldn't take it back, because I learnt something. This is something I wrote during the process of it. Not about suicide!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-19-03
42. Rats Feet reviews
I know that the title doesn't sound very nice, but their nothing wrong with rats! anyway, this is not about them, but it's about thives and about their sly ways.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 11-19-03
43. One Love reviews
It makes you think and is about finding the one person that is right for you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-18-03
44. The Legend of Celandine reviews
Kyal is born to the Line who protect the Kings. Through battles over belief, magic and fantasy, reincarnation, human nature at its purist and most shadowed and the vast beauty of a an old country, love shines... Not all up here yet
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,509 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-15-03
45. Search reviews
I wrote this a while ago. It's written about finding your own fantasy world, if you get what I mean.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-13-03
46. The Future reviews
This is really about determination, in any shape or form, and I think that ambition has a lot to do with it too.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-13-03
47. Sore reviews
I think that I was in a redeaming mood when I wrote this, but it came as an idea, and I really wanted to write it. It's not the best, but I really like it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-13-03
48. Monopoly reviews
I don't know what to put for this one, but read it, if you want, and find out.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-13-03
49. RoesHip Song reviews
No, it's not a song, it's about a flower!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-13-03
50. Traverllers Joy reviews
I think it'a nice poem, quite clam, and it's from flowers point of view!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-13-03
51. Eternal White reviews
I don't think that this poem was has an obvious theme, but I do like the words and I wrote it based on some music that was heard at the time and the images they conjured up and I really like the feeling this poem gives me, but I would really like your opi
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-10-03
52. Twister reviews
Please don't pay any attention to the meaning of the words in this poem, it's just a tounge twister and I just want to know how easy it is to read. The words in it are absolute rubish!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 11-6-03
53. Conn reviews
About my favourite character from a series of books, and I do know that i write a lot of things from books, but I think that I really mean them.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-5-03
54. What Ought a Man to Be? reviews
Based on the last book I read. It's very questioning and is one of my favourites I have written so far.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-5-03
55. Where I live reviews
It's about the same fantasy world that I always visit, it just cheered me up because I was upset. It's not the best of poetry, but it made me fell much happier. Hope it will make you happier too.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-3-03
56. Lands of Mystery reviews
Just describing a mystery land, don't know what else to say.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-3-03
57. May it Be reviews
It's for a close person, with cancer, it was influenced by my favourite Enya song- Mayit be, the lotr one. This is dedicated to all suffering from caner.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 10-17-03
58. My Story reviews
I wrote it when I was 11,and I think I based it on Grendel from Beowulf, but we wearnt readin it at the time. I've always like it, but I was only young, so it's not serious.
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Horror/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-15-03
59. Blood City reviews
Again, this was influenced by something I've read. I hope you can see the theme in it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-15-03
60. Curly World reviews
I think I know what this poem is about, but it's really a load of nonsense that i decided to try to turn into poetry. Hope you enjoy it.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10-14-03
61. How did this happen? reviews
I put this under PG because no one shouls ever feel like this, but i did, It's changed me and I'll never feel like that again, it was quite a scary experience to feel that strongly, I tried to write a poem abou it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-13-03
62. Weapons reviews
It's just about older weapons, cus I love learn about them.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-13-03
63. Tartan reviews
It's about scotland, because I love that land, and about what I think is quite magical about it.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-03
64. English Elm reviews
about England's past, sorta lamenting some of the recent building of indusrty.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-03
65. He is One of Us reviews
once again, this comes from my feelings from the book I've just finished, I had to write about a legend who was killed in the book, This is a brief poem about how this man kinda lived on , even when I had finished the book.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-03
66. The Crab and the Otter reviews
just something to cheer people up and not ment too seriously.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-10-03
67. Their Depth of Friendship reviews
This is based on Merry and Pippin from lotr and it kinda mixes bits from the books called Ravenheart and Stormrider. I don't think it's that great, but I enjoyed writting it.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-2-03
68. Gypsy Dog reviews
I fell in love with this dog while I was working at the kennels and he's so sweet, I had to write a poem about him. Hope you like it.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-29-03
69. Hail Great Master reviews
About an old King from a fantasy land and the land he rules.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-29-03
70. Braken reviews
This is for my friend, who reared a lamb and now has to say goodbye to it because was reared to sell for meat. it's totally unfair, I feel so sorry for her. This peom is for her and her lamb xxxx :(
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-29-03
71. Green Trees reviews
About the memory of trees, a seven year old asked me to write this one, so it's really for her.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-29-03
72. Two Sparrows reviews
I was working one day and I saw two sparrows sitting together, so I thought it would make a nice peom. What do you think?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-29-03
73. Grey Day reviews
It may be a bit of a tounge twister, and about looking underneath the surface, let me know what you think because I don't like it that much.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-29-03
74. About Fay reviews
This was for a friend, I wrote this just before we fell out for the last time. I stilll really want to be friends with her, but I don't know why it doesn't work out. Hopefully we can build a friendship up like we used to have. I'm still loyal to her.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-26-03
75. Death of a saint reviews
Based on the book Stormrider, and how I felt after finishing it. About a triumphant death.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-26-03
76. It's all I can say reviews
about yet another, different person, Iknow, who's too negative. Small, but not suicide bit, applies to me too.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 383 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-26-03
77. Disgrace reviews
About someone I know, who doesn't know, but may realise, this is what they face.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-26-03
78. Joan of Arc reviews
About the betrayed and Innocent Joan of Arc, who still stands in history to God's word.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-25-03
79. What Was reviews
A pleasant View of a magical world when looking at the times past.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-24-03
80. A Short Poem reviews
A bout the influence and the comfort taken in reading the things you love
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-24-03
81. Eyes of Heavy Ways reviews
Inside a guilty man's soul ( again, from the past)
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-23-03
82. A World, from the past, I see reviews
A world deep in war, set in the past, forced on by kings, be nice:)
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-22-03