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Author has written 28 stories for Religion, Life, General, Love, Song, Action, Haiku, Young Adult, General, and Sci-Fi. My name is Darthen An old fictionpress user. Twenty year old senior at the University of North Texas. I graduate next December. My major is Radio, Television and Film with a minor in German. I started a website to serve my old stomping grounds here. It is an e-zine/blog with links to good fictionpress stories. I look for the best so you don't have to! To submit, go to the website at My favorite authors, and the ones I sort of study to learn how to write, are Ray Bradbury and Edgar Allen Poe. Favorite filmmaker : Quentin Tarantino (who else?) Pulp Fiction for the win! I always pay back reviews. Always. If you have reviewed something of mine and I have not payed you back the review, just send me an e-mail or something, I probably forgot. One more thing, NO MORE CHILDREN SAVING THE WORLD!! Just please, for dear god's sake, no more. It's been done to death and it isn't even a plausible story. NO MORE, please!! Dear god, stop! Elemental stories have been popping up recently as well; I've got nothing against those excepting the fact that it's always children. I have some advice; unless it's original in any way, don't write it. Just stop, add 10 years to the character’s age, add some sort of sage wise man and add an evil villain with a grudge. There, now you have a formulaic myth. Now, kill off someone's parents/family/wife/girlfriend. Then kill off one or more of the main characters. Now add some more plot twists. It won't be any more original, but at least it adds depth to a flat story. Oh yeah, and NO MORE CHILDREN SAVING THE WORLD. Here's a general rule: Old enough to drink, old enough to save the world. Upcoming Projects: Cutthroat: TLB Chapter 16 (is up now!)- Its been a while since I thought about writing again, summer has been insane so far for me, but I finally found time in my days to write, yay. So chapter sixteen is going to be pretty cool. I mean The Apocalypse has whole new mess of problems now, doesn't he. Or maybe it's just the one. But he isn't the type to greive silently, is he? Cutthroat: Anthologies Half Jack - This short one shot chronicles an adventure of our late friend Nanashi as he confronts his past and his Hermaphroditism. His biological father has pissed off his adoptive one and Nanashi is out for blood. Space Pirate Jacob update: it is now Sean Lumbard: Space Pirate what can I say, I love the Irish) - The galaxies youngest and most renowned pirate has made a deal with the amphibious Cretorans but getting involved in their civil war and in trouble with the Human's empire causes him big problems. Dealing with the handicap of having one eye and romantic issues galore the man is living by the skin of his teeth. God Listens to Trance - Spin off of my short story The Atheist, and we find our good pal Vince has survived his ordeal, or did he? He finds himself visited by Demons and Angels and it turns out that God is not happy with him at all. Whoops. Can Vince save his friends and his soul or will he succumb to the darkness | |||||||||
1. Sean Lumbard: Space Pirate » reviewsThe galaxy's craziest pirate has made a deal with the amphibious Cretorans, but getting involved in their civil war and in trouble with the Human's empire causes him big problems. Having lost an eye and an overactive sexdrive means life is not easy.Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,139 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-14-06 - Published: 7-6-062. Cutthroat: The Last Berserker » reviews(CH 17 up,) A mafia related, gun slinging, murder/revenge story. 79 reviews, its gotta be decent, right? Why not give it a read? I need criticism, seriously.Action - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 17 - Words: 46,939 - Reviews: 86 - Updated: 7-14-06 - Published: 3-26-053. The Bodyguard reviewsStory about duty and love. One-shot told from three perspectives. (warning: rape and adult themes)Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,808 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-13-06 - Published: 3-13-064. Dangerous reviewsYou see, I am dangerous. The spade necklace swings in the same tired rhythm as my ragged hair and my arms hold my cigarette. [one shot]General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,232 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-2-06 - Published: 3-2-065. Cutthroat: Anthologies reviewsA series of one shot action stories dealing with the seedy underworld and hitmen galore.Action - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,016 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-28-05 - Published: 12-28-056. Hell Found Me reviewsBased on a prompt by some competition, I had to write a short story starting with the words hell found me. Please R and RGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,099 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 8-18-05 - Published: 8-18-057. The Atheist reviewsStory about the strength of love and willpower. One-shot told from three perspectives. Please comment, I crave feedback.Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,952 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 8-16-05 - Published: 8-16-058. Fred the Rat reviewsI tried to create a mood here, tell me if I acheived it. I am interested to hear what you think about it. Please comment.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 799 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 7-19-05 - Published: 7-19-059. The Emo Chick reviewsA story about honor and self worth. One-shot told from three perspectives. Plz review and tell me what you think. I crave feedback. (Now revised.)Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,289 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 7-15-0510. Gunshots and Roses reviewsEmotion!Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-13-05 - Published: 7-13-0511. Yellow Tide reviewsAnime is everywhere, nothing wrong with it, except when you let it blind you from good things just because its not japaneseSong - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-0512. Truth Revealing Shades reviewsIts got a ska feeling to it (a very happy beat but depressing lyrics)Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-4-05 - Published: 7-4-0513. In my wallet reviewsHaiku derivative from the first stanza of my poem: Stain On My Shirt. It's supposed to be amusing and stupid.Haiku - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-30-05 - Published: 6-30-0514. Stain On My Shirt reviewsI got sick of writing serious stuff all the time so I wrote this one just to be ridiculous, Its kind of got a ska/alternative feel to it. please read and tell me what you thought (aka plz R and R)Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-21-05 - Published: 6-21-0515. Poor sweet Gemini reviewsI'm still not sure, one of you tell me.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-20-05 - Published: 6-20-0516. Remember reviewsI am leaving for college (two years early, because of a special program) and I wrote this on how I'm sort of feeling about leaving everything and everyone I am.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-14-05 - Published: 6-14-0517. Electrified reviewsHave you ever met that one person that makes you feel, well, electrified?Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-6-05 - Published: 6-6-0518. Back Off, Fate reviewsRated T for language. When Fate pisses me off.Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-20-05 - Published: 5-20-0519. The Horseman reviewsWould you accept the apocalypse?Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-6-05 - Published: 3-6-0520. Thankful » reviewsJust when I was feeling worthless, this person came to me, and I'd like to thank her. You wouldn't think someone asking you how you're doing is a big deal, but it is, and this person did. I am thankful. R&R if you feel like it.Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-6-05 - Published: 3-6-0521. The Rusty Scabbard reviewsKing arthur returns!Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-27-05 - Published: 2-27-0522. Reality reviewsQuestions the nature of whats rea and what isnt. please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-19-04 - Published: 11-19-0423. Unrequited Love reviewstitle says it all, its about this girl at school that well, whatever, please R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-16-04 - Published: 11-16-0424. Screaming reviewsNot necessarily as demonic as my other ones, this one is more about futile strugling. Enjoy and review.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-20-03 - Published: 12-20-0325. Tortured Angel reviewsNot really one of my better poems, in fact i don't really like it, but some of my friends like it. So please read and reviewGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-3-03 - Published: 10-3-0326. Caged reviewsAnother of my odd poems. If taken a certain way it may make you question religion.(thats what my friend says.) Please Read and ReveiwReligion - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-1-03 - Published: 10-1-0327. Beleive in reviewsI wrote this poem as it came to me, so it might not make that much sense. Please R and R, even if you hate it.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-26-03 - Published: 9-26-0328. Satan's Eyes reviewsOdd poem, Can be taken several ways. Please Read and review.Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 9-23-03 - Published: 9-23-03
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