Hey everybody! I'm really looking forward to hearing some awesome stories from you guys! I know that all of you have some great talent and you all can use it to write some very fantastic stories! I hope you like mine too!
6/3/08- Wow, it's been over a month since I've been on fictionpress! Sorry 'bout that! I've been doing things on Facebook.com everyday and pretty much ignoring this site. Also, I'm just not inspired a whole lot anymore to write stuff, and I'm not sure why. Hopefully I'll still write some and finish changing the names of my Haiku categories.
My birthday is in 6 days! I'm so happy! I'll be 19! Man, one more teenage year left, eh? It's been a long decade, that's for sure, and I hope my 19th year will be awesome! Anyway, I just wanted you all to know that I'm still alive, so you don't have to worry about never getting anymore of my poetry/Haiku/stories to read! _
4/27/08- I'm back yet again! I changed my homepage to the forum that I've made! It's called "Followers of Christ!" and is at www.followersofchrist.proboards80.com. Anyone and everyone can join if they like! You can post discussions about the Bible, Jesus, personal experiences you've had with God, and you can even post up poetry and stories you've written. There're 2 different sections separating regular stories and poems from Christian ones (cont. below).
So, basically, you can talk about virtually anything, it's just exclusively for Christian stuff. I wanna show everyone that Christianity is different from any other religion out there. It's a relationship between you and Jesus Christ/Yahweh (God)! I won't shut anyone out, just like God won't shut anyone out! :) The only reason I would delete a member's profile is if they were being extremely disruptive on the forum, and even then I would give them plenty of warnings and chances to stop before that :) So anyway, just wanted to give you all some information about that and the option of joining and having lots of fun! ;) Hope to see you there!
4/12/08 cont.- (Yes, I'm actually writing this in a different "entry" so to speak :D) I almost forgot! I'm going to change the titles of my Haiku categories! They're way too boring and "obvious". I want them to be catchy, ya know? So, for "The Planets" I thought about "Planetary Paradise" and for "The Weather" I thought about "Weather Wonders" or "Wondrous Weather". Now doesn't that sound so much better?! Yep, I thought so, hehe Ok, my updating for now is over! Love you guys, and keep reading and writing, although I barely read anymore... :\
4/12/08- Hey, guys! I finally got all my Haiku organized and added some new ones to the categories I created! Feel free to check them out! In other news smile, I actually wrote a new poem! For you guys, they will both be new poems, but look at "Emotional Wreckage to Euphoric Paradise" and check 'em out! The sequel to the first poem I just wrote last night (which was actually only about an hour ago... I'm up right now at 12:40 a.m.!) and the first poem I wrote back in like... October maybe? Somewhere around there. Anyway, I was thinking on categorizing my poems. What do you guys think? Do I even have enough, really, to do a good thorough categorization, or should I wait until I have more poems to categorize(Hehe, it'd be funny if you could post polls on here)? There are 2 sets of poems I am categorizing because they're all in a series of sorts. The poems "It is Me" and "It is Me SHORT VERSION" I'm putting into a category simply called "It is Me", lol Talk about redundant. I actually laughed out loud at that... WOW. Hehe, anyway, the next 5 poems I'm categorizing are the "I Am" poems, simply because they are pretty much in a set, and I'm just gonna write more and more of them as time goes on. Better to keep them in a series that have them crowd my profile and what not. You get what I'm sayin', right? :) Well, thanks for reading if you did! Please r&r my stuff if you get the chance! I really appreciate it!
4/1/08- Ya know guys, I'm just gettin' tired of writing, I think, which would explain my lack of it lately... I know, it's dumb, too, and I've had such fun on this site with the people and everything. I'm just gonna have to take down everything and post a farewell note on here... (cont. below hehe)
-APRIL FOOLS!! Did I fool anybody? :D Haha, probably not... ;) oh, well, but yeah, I just wanted to do something that would commemorate the day, and I actually haven't done anything much for April Fool's day since I was a kid, so it's fun to try something and think about old times. What is true and is why I'm actually writing this is the fact that I think my Haiku are starting to get cluttered and unorganized. I think it would be better if I organized them into broad categories like "The Planets" and "The Seasons" and stuff like that and put whatever Haiku fits that category into that category as a chapter in it. That way, it'll be easier for people to read, and people'll be in the "mood" I want them to be in when they read the Haiku, I guess. So, just wanted to update you guys on that, and hopefully I'll be able to get some Haiku organized soon! :D
--Still goin'--
Hey guys! Shazaam Onatopp and I have created a joint account! If you wanna check us out, just click on our joint name! Shazinco
Now, here's some more info about me:
So, there ya go! A bunch of emotional and statistical facts about me! WHOOH! He, he
By the way, thanks to ANYONE and EVERYONE who has or will review/reviewed me! I REALLY appreciate it! Thank you SOOO much!
You wanna talk, e-mail me!
I am a Christian for those who don't know that yet. I don't care if you flame me, because I know that no matter what anybody says, God is real and he's living. Also, I know that I will go to heaven along with all the other Christians and good will prevail in the end.
MUSIC
Basically TECHNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I like all kinds of Techno! I probably like Rave the best, though. I also like Dance music A LOT! Many times, I can't really tell the difference in between the two, though. I also like Enya, exclusively, cause she's like the only New Age I really listen to, I think, but I love her music SO MUCH! In fact, when my husband (then, he was just my best friend :o) first surprised me with a kiss, we were listening to Enya! Hehehe. I also like some pop, rock, hard rock, etc. That does include all kinds of Christian music, too! ;)
I’ve made some of my OWN music too on two different, very basic keyboards. No words, just music. I haven’t come up with a tile yet for all of the “compositions”, so I won’t list them out. I don’t see what the point in doing that would be in the first place, since, nobody but some of my family members have ever heard me play any of my music (bummer...)! Maybe if I can ever get into a recording studio and record my music it could go public... hmmmm...
Anyway, here’s some other stuff that might interest you :)
Some MAJOR COOL people on this site!
bg bear 350 hasn't written anything yet, but he's my bestest, bestest, bestest x INFINITY, friend! He's a Christian like me and is 14! He's been my friend for 2 1/2 years! He's a real dork, but he's really nice and has always been there for me! He said he'll have some stuff up soon, so please check his profile every once in a while to see if he has anything, and if he does, please read it!
ShazaamOnatopp is definitely one of the COOLEST dudes I've ever met! He's just really awesome and nice and I love his reviews! And the fact that he respects my beliefs makes him even more cool! He writes some really cool poems and short stories and you should really check 'em out!
TiEka Koniku is one AWESOME girl! I love her reviews and she's really nice and she also respects my beliefs! She's got some major cool stuff up on this site and y'all oughtta check 'em out!
Morbid Mind is REALLY cool! Unfortunately, she has schizophreniform disorder. But she's real nice and she respects me and my reviews and I love her stuff as well, although her stuff is pretty gory (sorry morbid, it's just a warning for those who might get sick reading your stuff_ But you know it wouldn't really make sense if they didn't like it, right?). But if you read her stuff and review it, she'll respect what you think and even appreciates flaming reviews sometimes, just don't offend her! She's my friend and I love havin' her as one of 'em!BroKen aRroW is WAY cool! She's really nice too, and I also LOVE her reviews! She's got some real cool stuff up! By the way, PLEASE READ "Vision" by her! It's REALLY good, and only a couple of people including me have reviewed it so far, I think, so PLEASE READ IT! It's SO good! She's really great and I love having her as my friend!
nutcase is ALL COOL! She's a Christian like me and is real nice! She's also one of Shazaam's and TiEka's friends so you can see why she's so nice! He, he! But it's her too! She's totally AWESOME and's got some TOTALLY COOL things up on this site, so please read 'em!
J.M.W. is also WAY COOL! She writes some AMAZING stuff and she helped me improve one of my stories called, "Dreams of Love", by giving me some WAY AWESOME advice! She's really nice too and she's just REALLY great!
PunkishGirl is one of the most AWESOME girls I've ever met! She's TOTALLY nice and we're SO much alike, which I found out by reading all of her TOTALLY AWESOME poems! She's like THE-BEST writer OUT THERE! She's just TOTALLY great and I love having her as my friend!
Belle of the Ball is one AWESOME girl! She's REALLY cool and I absolutely LOVE her story, which many of you may have already read called, "Unexpected Royalty"! It's SOOOO good! She's a teriffic writer and I LOVE reading her story (which I still need to finish reading the 10th chapter of! He, he!)! She's real nice too and I hope that we can become friends in the near future!
Heart of the Sword many of you've probably heard of since she's probably one of the best writers OUT THERE! She's really nice and is a Christian too! She's just TOTALLY AWESOME and I would LOVE to be as faithful to God and as AWESOME A WRITER as she is!
LengendaryPunk29 is ONE AWESOME DUDE! He's TOTALLY nice and has some really good poems! A BUNCH of 'em too! Just like Heart of the Sword. He's really cool, and I hope that one day I can read the rest of his stuff!
Artemis Astralstar is just SO MAJORLY COOL! ALL of her stuff is just AMAZING! I get awed EVERY TIME I read any of her stuff! She's just such a WONDERFUL girl and (She's my age... 15... AND SHE'S AS GOOD A WRITER AS SHE IS! WHOOOOAAA_) she's just such a WONDERFUL writer! Anybody who hasn't read any of her stuff is just missing SO MUCH! PLEASE r&r at least SOME of her work! MAN this girl is just SO MAJORLY AWESOME!
glitch804 is a REALLY COOL girl! She writes really cool reviews and her stories and poems are AWESOME! She's really nice and you can tell she cares a lot about people!
Aposhi Enae is REALLY COOL! She writes WAY COOL reviews and she's a really nice friend to have! Her stuff is AWESOME too!
BlackFeatherLintu is a really good writer, and she's a really nice person too! She's got a brand new story up called "Twilight" and it's awesome so far! I think her works are beautiful and inspiring, and they all have great meaning :) I recommend her to anyone and everyoneout there! I guarantee you'll like what she writes ;)
POEMS AND STORIES :)
I really encourage you that if you think that no one knows your pain, you should read "Someone Knows". I thought it up while I was at church one Sunday morning. It just kinda hit me! It's really powerful and it'll give you some hope if you're willing to believe it. So please r&r it!
"Who You Are" is definitely not one of my best, but it does make you think. So please r&r it!
I think "I Know You!" is probably one of my best. It shows you just how much my friend who died meant to me and meant to the world. She was SUCH a wonderful person and I STILL can't believe she died! But luckily, she didn't go to a bad place. She went to heaven and is SO much happier than she ever could've been on Earth. So I'm really glad for her. Please r&r!
"It is Me" is a really good one. Most people could probably relate because of the reviews I've gotten on it. It tells of how I can't believe that what I'm seeing is me... you'll have to read and find out what I mean... please also review!
"A Ray of Hope Seeps Through the Darkness" almost seems like a suicide note... well, the way I see it at least... but I think it's really good and it's got some harsh stuff, but I think you'd like it. Please r&r!
"God Is Always There" is really good I think. If you wanna know who you can have hope in and trust, read this poem. It tells about all that God is and that he will answer your prayers. Please read it. Maybe it will give you hope... review too please!
"Hate" is one that maaaaaybe you could relate too. It's probably a tad confusing but I think it's pretty good. You'd like it I bet... at least a little... _ Please r&r!
"How Did this World Change so Fast?" definitely makes you think. That is, according to ShazaamOnatopp (he's really cool!). _ I think you should definitely read it. Gives a view about how the world's changed so much over the last 50 years. I like it lots! Please r&r!
"It Never Leaves" used to be "Intense Emotion". It's one that I think most everybody would like. It's about how my anger just won't go away and how I feel about that. Please r&r!
"Deep Down, I Wish I Knew" is the one I've gotten the most reviews on so far. Seems like most everyone can relate to it. And everybody likes it_ I think you would too... just read and check it out... please review too!
"It is Me SHORT VERSION" is basically the same exact thing as "It is Me" only shorter (hence the name) so, really, it needs no explanation except for I actually think this one is better than the long one in a few ways. Please r&r_
"If We Have Love, We Have All Good Things" I really don't think is all that good, but it has a good message. But hey... you might like it. So Please read and review_
"That's Cecil!" is one that I think has a lot of feeling since it's about one of my older, perky even, friends that had had so much happen to him, that when he got Leukemia he just lost the will to live. I think it's a really good poem and I'd love to hear what you have to say about it, so please r&r!
"What Happened?" is my longest poem ever since on word, it's just about (and that means, only a few lines away from being this long) 4 pages. That's pretty long! I think it's really good and has a lot of feeling in it because it's about something in my life I really consider to be a tragety... although, it's really not, that's just how I'd put it! Eh, he, heeeeh... Oh well, please read and review it and tell me whatcha think!
"It's There" tells about how bright love and hate are... kinda confusing but the poem isn't... oh, for heaven's sake! What I mean is, what I just said about-- just read the poem, you'll see what I mean! I think it's good and please review too!
"Brian" is a poem that I wrote about my best friend, hm, let's guess, BRIAN! He, he! I think it's pretty good and it tells what I see in him that makes him a true friend! Please r&r!
"Dashing to my Yard" is really just a fun one I wrote. It's about me coming home from my best friend's house. It's kinda weird, but cool! Please r&r!
"Winds of Flight" is actually a pretty good title for this. I'm not sure how I came up with it, it just popped into my head. I just wrote it for the poetry.com Haiku contest. I hope it's a good one, being the first ever Haiku I've ever written in my entire life! It took a few minutes to figure out what to put in it, but I got it. I think it's pretty cool. I like it so such, I am GOING to write more Haiku, maybe a bunch! And for it to be a Haiku, it has to be, the first line, 5 syllables, the second line, 7 syllables, and the third line, 5 syllables. I guess if it's not in that format, it's not really a Haiku, but who am I to be THAT critical? Ha, ha! Not me! Haikus are usually pretty confusing, but have meaning, and they're pretty cool! I hope you read and review this one and like it! Thank you!
"Dress of Nature" is my second Haiku. I think I'll enter it into poetry.com's Haiku contest too. I think it's really cool and y'all should read it. Please r&r!
"Catastrophic Acts" is really my third Haiku. It's really neat I think. It tells you some things that can be catastrophic!... ok, so the title explains itself_ Please r&r!
"Unexplainable Strange" is my fourth Haiku. I think it's cool, but strange! Does anyone get that last line? It just kinda came to me. It's got some meaning but even I don't really know what it is... hm, a poem without meaning... no, no, NO! It's got meaning because it came from my heart, but I'm kinda blind to it... ooooh, another idea for a Haiku... I'm always gettin' ideas for stuff unexpectedly! Cool! Well, please r&r it!
"The Adventure Pack!" I really like a lot! I'm GONNA write a story for it too! I said on my A/N that I PROBABLY would, but I know I will now because I think it would be so cool! You can just see the adventure! Whoohoo! He, he_ Please r&r!
"'Lil Crazy" is a poem about one of my best friends. He is a very special person and I'm so glad to have met him! I don't think you could have a better friend... he's so nice, and this poem tells about him and some experiences I've had with him! Please r&r!
"Death" is my fifth Haiku and I really like it. It's an exaggerated explaination of what death might be like. Hope you like! Please r&r!
"A Tiny Piece of Heaven" is just what the title says it is: a tiny piece of Heaven. This is my sixth Haiku. It's really good and I can't wait to see Heaven! The Haiku makes me wanna see it so much! It's truly an original! Please r&r!
"Deadly Sacrifice" is my seventh Haiku and definitely one of my favorites! The first line has an incomplete thought, but I don't think that's anything major. Please r&r! It's really good!
"Fantasies" is my eighth Haiku. I think it's just so MAGICAL! I love it! Please r&r!
"War" is my ninth Haiku (of course, you can see that I'm going in order, but since I don't think many people are gonna read this part, it probably doesn't matter that I put what number Haiku it is_). It's really good and gives you a pretty good picture of what war truly is... but this is really the bad parts. War can also be good... I might just write a Haiku about the good parts... yeah, that'd be a cool idea... ok, well, I think you'll love it, so please r&r!
"Butterfly" is my tenth Haiku. It gives you a good picture of a beautiful butterfly flying in the wind. Betcha you'll like it! Please r&r!
"Caterpillar" is my eleventh Haiku. I like it alright, but I don't think it's one of my best... of course, it does have pretty good imagery... yeah, and that's why I like it... ok, so please r&r!
"A Bigger Piece of Heaven" some people have told me to add on to "A Tiny Piece of Heaven" for like a 2 stanza Haiku since they go together. I might do that because I think it's a good idea. I guess it just depends on what other reviews I get on it. It's my twelfth Haiku. I hope you like! Please r&r!
"Love Sacrifice" is actually my thirteenth. It's about how Jesus loves us so much... well, it tells how we know he loves us so much... well, please r&r! It's my most IMPORTANT Haiku!
"Agape" is my fourteenth. It's God's unimaginable love for us! Please r&r!
"The Grave" is a little scary, but for the most part, it's just telling what a grave is... it's my fifteenth Haiku! Hope you like it or you can R.I.P.! Not! Well, I hope you LOVE it! I do! Please r&r!
"Music"... ah, the glory of it all! I just absolutely COULDN'T LIVE without music! It's heavenly! This is, of course, my sixteenth Haiku. I LOVE IT SO MUCH! He, he_ Oh, yeah, I forgot to tell TiEka Koniku that I play the flute too... it IS an awesome instrument! YEAH! Alright, well, I hope you like it, and please (once again!) r&r!
"Food"! Food, food, food! I LOVE FOOD! And you, literally, couldn't live without this! It's so yummy and tasty and massages your taste buds! Ah, it's just heavenly! It's my seventeenth Haiku! Please r&r!
"Friends"... they're so blessed... couldn't live without 'em either... and luckily (VERY luckily!) we always have at LEAST one friend (!GOD!GOD!). Eighteenth Haiku! They can be of great help to you and so you to them! PLease r&r!
"Love" is not what you think it is about. If you wanna know why, please r&r! It's my ninteenth Haiku!
"Wedding" is one of my dear favorites_ This is truly what a wedding/marriage is! My twentieth Haiku! WHOOH! He, he! Please r&r!
"Wisdom" is my twenty-first Haiku! It will teach you GREAT wisdom! No, actually it won't, but it will teach you what it really is! Hope you like! Please r&r!
"Holy Trinity" (Used to be "Trinity") is my twenty-second Haiku! Any Christian would know what this is! Anyone else can go ahead and read it anyway to see what you think! Please r&r!
"Sun" is my twenty-third. I just LOVE the sun! It's a great source of energy and is so bright and powerful! I hope you like this one, of course, I'm sure you will! Please r&r!
"Moon" is my twenty-fourth! I LOVE the moon too! And I love this Haiku better than "Sun"! Maybe you'll figure out why... well, to find out, please r&r!
"Flower" is my twenty-fifth (I've written so many Haikus in so little time, it's truly amazing!)! I ABSOLUTELY ADORE WRITING HAIKUS (like you can't tell_)! Well, this one will give you a really pretty picture, so please r&r!
"Spring" is one of my top favorites. If I had a top ten list of my favorite Haikus (that I'VE written), I would definitely rank this very close to one! One problem with it though, and TiEka Koniku mentioned this in her review, is that it has too many 'ings' in it. I agree completely. But maybe I'll be able to change that... yeah, and this one is, of course, my twenty-sixth! I REALLY hope you love this one as much as I do! Please r&r!
"Storm Approaching" used to be "Summer" but because it sounds more like a storm, I changed the name (And because, again, TiEka Koniku said something about that). I like it lots! This is my twenty-seventh! Please r&r!
"Fall" ShazaamOnatopp saidit didn't have quite enough punch, and I agree. It's my twenty-eighth! I love it! Please r&r!
"Winter" is the last of the Haikus in the 20's (He, he, kinda crummy, ain't it?). I love this Haiku SOOO much, it's just SO cool! TiEka commented about the first line! I love it too! Well, please r&r!
"Heart Ache" used to be "Cold" but again, I changed the name because of a review. From Shazaam actually. I really didn't like changing the name, but perhaps I can do the same thing I did with Summer and change the name AND write a better Haiku about it that describes it better... ok, I just repeated myself, I think... oh, well, I think we all know what I mean. This one's my THIRTIETH (is that how you spell it?)! I can't wait 'til I reach the fiftieth (again, is that how you spell it?) mark! That'll be a GREAT accomplishment... well, anyway, please r&r!
"Blind" is my thirty-first Haiku! I'm NOT gonna change the name of this one, because if you think about it, this really DOES have to do greatly with being blind... well, PLEASE r&r!
"Rain" is my thirty-second Haiku! I LOVE the second line and so does about everybody else that reviews! I hope you like! Please r&r!
"Lightning" is one talks about how powerful it is... and kinda what it is... ok, I think we all knew that_ My thirty-third! Anyway, I really like, and I think you will too! Please r&r!
"Hot" is one I don't think people are the "craziest" about, but I LOVE it! It my thirty-fourth! YAY! Please r&r!
"Summer" is (OF COURSE!) the one I redid for the last "Summer" I had that I renamed "Storm Approaching" (of course, that's not hard to figure out, now is it?... NO!). It's my thirty-fifth (you're probably wondering, "Why doesn't she just put it like '35th' instead of 'thirty-fifth'?" Well, that's quite easy to answer... I'M PRACTICING MY SPELLING SKILLS! Actually, no, I just want to for some reason... I don't know... _)! I don't think this is as good as the "original" but it's pretty good, at least. Please r&r!
"Ominous Storm" I dedicated wholly to !@~SHAZAAMONATOPP~@! because I know his ABSOLUTE ADORATION for storms! It's my 'thirty-sixth' (hee)! Hope you like! It's REALLY cool! Please r&r!
"Fire" is a pretty cool one! My thirty-seventh! I LOVE the first line! You've probably never heard of fire described THIS way before! PLEASE r&r!
"Ice" is such a cool one! It my thirty-eighth! You probably won't get why the last line is what it is once you read, but it's supposed to be like that for a reason (I explain it to you in the A/N below it). It cool! Please r&r!
"Water" is OF COURSE my thirty-ninth! It is SOOO cool! I absolutely ADORE it! Maybe you'll see why if you READ! Please do! And review to!
"Tears" is numba 40 (ha, ha, a CHANGE!... ok, I'm weird... DUH!)! I don't think I like this one as much as I like "Water", but it's REALLY good. Maybe it'll make sense to ya... YEAH! Please r&r!
--PLANET HAIKUS--
"Mercury" is TOTALLY AWESOME! I'm gonna write a Haiku about ALL the planets, of course, including Earth! This is my forty-first Haiku! I'm getting so close to the 50 mark! I can't WAIT! Everybody says they like the first line... actually cratered isn't a word, but IT SOUNDS LIKE ONE! So OONHH! Just playin' witcha! Hee! Ok, well, this one's really cool, so PLEASE r&r!
"Venus" is the last one I'm gonna write until maybe Spring Break or late April. It's my forty-second, getting EVER-SO-CLOSE to the 50 MARK! Only 8 more and I'll have REACHED IT! YAAAAYYYY! Ok, well, I think this one's AWESOME, so please r&r!
"Earth" is my FORTY-THIRD HAIKUUUUUU! I'M IN A GREAT MOOD TODAY! YAAAY! He, he_ I think it's REALLY cool, especially the 2nd line! I wrote this one on Sunday, April 4! It was on my way back from Illinois (I was visiting my mom's parents with my sister and my mom)! I just got the inspriration_ Please r&r!
"Mars" is my FORTY-FOURTH HAIKUUUUUU! It's so GOOOOOD! PLEASE FEEL FREE TO R&R IT AND TELL ME WHATCHA THINK! THANK YOUUUU! WEE!
"Jupiter" is TOTALLY AWESOME, and it's my FORTY-FIFTH HAIKUUUUUU! WHOOPEE! I'VE ONLY GOT 4 MORE TO GO BEFORE I REACH THE 50 MARRRRRRK! YAAAAAAAAAAY (only 4 because I've written Saturn too; my 46th Haiku!)_ PLEASE R&R IT! THAAAAAANKS!
"Saturn" is my LATEST HAIKU! And as I said on my review for "Jupiter", it's my FORTY-SIXTH HAIKUEEEEEYYYYYY! I think it's REALLY AWESOME AND COOL AND STUFF and if you'll just R&R IT, I'll be HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! He, he_~ THANK YOUS!
"Uranus" is my FORTY-SEVENTH HAIKU! Oh, it's SO COOOOL! I'VE REACHED THE 50 MARK (I've got the rest of the planet Haikus too, so now I've got 50 HAIKUS!)! I love this one! It cool! PLEASE R&R!
"Neptune" is probably one of my favorite planet Haikus! It's so pretty and creative! YEAH! I LOVE IT! IT'S MY FORTY-EIGHTH HAIKU! PLEASE R&R!
"Pluto" is my FORTY-NINTH! I don't know a whole lot about Pluto, but I wrote a Haiku about it anyway! Please r&r!
"Sedna" is my FIFTIETH HAIKUUUUUU! WHOOOOOOOOOHH! YEAAAAAAAAH! He, he! I'm not sure if I consider it a planet or not, but I've got it in my PLANET HAIKUS section anyway! Please r&r!
--BACK TO REGULAR STUFF--
"Sacrifice of Malice" is one of my weirdest poems of all! Probably weirder than "A Ray of Hope Seeps Through the Darkness" (please r&r!)! It's in Old English, but It's REALLY GOOD! PLEASE R&R IT!
"Angel of My Heart" I hope no one takes the wrong way. I am NOT gay and JUST BECAUSE it's a MALE FAIRY'S love poem to his soulmate fairy (A GIRL FAIRY! CORRECTION, FEMALE FAIRY!) doesn't mean that it's gross or that I'M gross, it's just that I wanted to write in a male's perspective for once! It's a truly BEAUTIFUL poem full of TONS of creativity, so PLEEEEEEEEASE R&R!
"I Am" is a poem that's structure is made up (I think) by my 7th grade English teacher! It's just a real good and simple way to write your feelings down! I wrote this one (my first) 2 years ago for my 7th grade porfolio (but I never put this one in there). Please r&r!
"I Am 2" I just wrote recently. Friday, March 19. It's also a real good one I think. Please r&r!
"My Everlasting Solace" is one that I truly cherish, especially since I wrote it after I had just cried real hard (solace, by the way, means "to comfort" or just "comfort"). God is truly a BIIIIIIIIGGGGGGG solace and maybe you'll realize that when you read this... hopefully... well, hope you like! Please r&r!
“Me” I’m glad everyone likes so far! I LOVE it and it’s right to the point so it doesn’t bore you or nothin‘! It’s just about being who you are instead of someone else! Please r&r!
“Reality vs. Fantasy” is a real cool one too! It’s also pretty to the point! It’s about this question: “Reality over fantasy, or fantasy over reality?”. In the poem, I tell you what I choose! Please r&r!
"A Funny Poem of Truth" is DEFINITELY my favorite poem from me! OH, YEAH! IT'S SO CUUUUUUTTTTEEEEE!It’s got my little, cheery girl personality in it and I just LOVE it! It's just a really simple rhyming and rhythming (RHYTHMING?... THAT'S NOT A WORD, AND I'VE NEVER HEARD IT BEFORE IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!... OH, WELL!) poem that tells what GOD (you'll know why I've capitalized his name if you read the poem... I mean HIS name...) does and will do for you! And I hope you understand it too, because some of the parts could be a little confusing! I think it's totally AWESOME and y'all should read it! YOU'LL LOVE IT, I KNOOOWWWW! PLEASE REVIEW TOO!
"Pain of the Heart" is my FIFTY-FIRST HAIKUUUUUUUUUUUU! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY! THAT'S SO AWESOME! AND SO IS THE HAIKU! This is what I think pain of the heart really is... hope you like! Please r&r!
"An Ounce of Malice" is my FIFTY-SECOOOOOOOOOOOOOND! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I'm gonna KEEP 'EM goin'! YEA-HEAH! Alright, well, malice is a TERRIBLE thing, and we certainly don't need it, but we have it! So this is just a little Haiku (that's like an OXYMORON!) about a LITTLE bit of malice! Please r&r!
"Hidden Heartbreak" is my newest and FIFTY-THIRD HAIKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WHOOH (short this time_)! We all have heart break... and it's CERTAINLY painful... but what happens when people HIDE it?... that's what this Haiku's about! Please r&r!
"Losing the Clock of Friendship" is my (OH, YES!) 54TH... I mean, FIFTY-FOURTH HAIKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! And it's got a really deep meaning and means a lot to me_~ It's AWESOME! PLEASE R&R!
"Heart Attack of Life" is my (UH, HUH!) FIFTY-FIFTH HAIKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! I think some peole have said I'm the Haiku masta! I AGREE! I write 'em so much and I JUST LOVE WRITING 'EM! They're so COOL! So is this one, please r&r!
"The Unimaginable Truths of Coldness" I just kinda came up with. I just started to let my mind go free and whatever came to my head, I wrote it down. So I got this! I think this really spells out what coldness is like (I'm cold right now! Except that's the OTHER kinda cold_)! I hope you like it! Please r&r!
"Love for A False Person" I wrote this after I had been talking on the internet to an Australian boy that was my age. It was so sad to me that I began to have feelings for him and he was so far away... I wrote this the day after I talked to him (Thursday, July 8th, 2004 was when I wrote this, I think). But it's real emotional, I think you'll feel and understand me feelings. I don't feel this way anymore, luckily though. I don't have to stress about it anymore. He ended up not being very cool because he didn't respond when I e-mailed him, but I still think he might someday... probably not though... oh, well, I hope you like! Please r&r!
"A Message from Jesus: JOYFUL TIMES ARE COMING!" is probably one of the best poems about God I've ever written! It really gives you hope! Consequently, I wrote this the very same day I wrote "Love for a False Person". I guess it was, in a way, a way to ease my pain, and also show others that they don't have to be sad, angry, or hate either. OH, GOOD! I'VE GOT ANOTHER IDEA FOR A STORY! Ok, that was WAAAY off the subject! Well, anyway, I hope you like this, please r&r it!
"Lovely Mysteries" is a fantasy poem that has pixies and darkness in it. It's one of those poems you might think that the writer has a mental problem or somethin', but really, I don't. I just got the idea to write it. It's really weird, but I think you'll like it! Please r&r!
"Sleeping Delight" is my FIFTY-SIXTH HAIKUUUUUUU! Yay! Ever heard of pixies sleeping on pillows of Venus? Well you will in this Haiku! I like! Please r&r!
"Lonely Mysteries" is my FIFTY-SEVENTH HAIKUUUUUUUU! Heh, heh, yes! I've been writing a few more Haikus now! It's got pixies in it too! Actually, only one, I think... Ahh, you'll like it! Please r&r!
"Sorcery" really defines the title! MY FIFTY-EIGHTH HAIK! Alrighty, then, a new slang for Haiku!... -_-... Oh, well, anyway, this really defines the evils of sorcery, it's good! Definitely read! Thank you! Please review too!
"Hypnotism" I just wrote today! IT'S MY FIFTY-NINTH HAIKUUUUU! YAAAAAAAAY! He, he_ Strangely, I thought it up in the shower! Heh, heh, heh! I think hypnotism is mostly used for evil like it was on my aunt...so I hate it! Well, please r&r!
"It's Nothing but Darkness Now" is my latest poem, and I think it's really deep and awesome! It's about how stupid meaningless anger is and what it does to you. It's really good! Please r&r!
"The Price of Life" I think is a really good Haiku that pretty much explains how important life is, and it kinda freaks ya out at the end, lol, but it's true:0 -- lol, I think that looks the best for it! Or maybe this: 8O lol ANYway, I hope you like this Haiku, and it's my sixtieth Haiku_ Please r&r!
"Depressed" is my sixty-first Haiku, and it explains basically what it is to be really depressed, and it also describes Depression (I, personally, don't have it, but some who've reviewed it say I described it perfectly _ Not to brag... lol). I just wanted to write something to describe these feelings because I also feel depressed a lot, myself, so it made me feel better to let it out _ Hope you like! Please r&r!
"Happiness" is my sixty-second Haiku, and it just explains in beautiful imagery what true happiness is! It'll cheer ya up if you're having a bad day_ Please r&r!
"Darkness" is my sixty-third Haiku and is written about where darkness starts in humans. Please r&r!
"Eyes" is my sixty-fourth Haiku and just captures the outer and inner image of the eye! I think it's pretty! Please r&r!
"Weather" is my sixty-fifth Haiku that describes the Weather in 17 syllables! lol That's a lot to capture with all the kinds of weather there are! Please r&r!
"Sleep" is my sixty-sixth Haiku and talks about all the aspects of sleep... at least, I tried! lol Please r&r!
"Mirror" is my sixty-seventh Haiku (I still don't know why I write that out like that, lol) and talks about what mirrors do for us! Sure glad we got those! Please r&r!
"Sunny Day" is my sixty-eighth Haiku and is the start of my weather Haiku! Although "Weather" is technically the start, this is the first type of specific weather, as you can see! lol Please r&r!
"Christmas" is my sixty-ninth Haiku and describes the true meaning of Christmas! Please r&r!
"Cloudy" is my seventieth Haiku and is the "second" of the weather Haiku! I actually sometimes like cloudy days! Please r&r!
"Rainy" is my seventy-first Haiku and describes the weather when it's rainy, lol Please r&r!
"Light Snow" is my seventy-second Haiku! Ah, I love snow... It's so pretty and fluffy and fun to play in! lol I LOVE IT! Please r&r!
"Snow" is my seventy-third Haiku! Please r&r!
"Icicles" is my seventy-fourth Haiku. I'm including this is my weather Haiku because it only happens when it's really cold, which is part of the weather! lol Please r&r!
"Partly Cloudy" is my seventy-fifth Haiku! Love it! Please r&r!
"Brushing Your Teeth" is my seventy-sixth Haiku and a new perspective on brushing your teeth! lol I love it! Please r&r!
"Terrible Feelings" is a poem I wrote that is more like ramblings about how some terrible feelings I didn't wanna feel were overwhelming me and I was desperate for them to go away. I still feel them, but they're more under control now_ Please r&r!
"I Am 3" NO, I'M NOT 3! lol It's the third "I Am" poem I wrote, and definitely a lot more positive than the last two_ I look to God in this one_~ Please r&r!
"Simple Lives" is a poem about how people (in general) just go around hating the world and other people. They need God, everyone does, and no one should hate! Can you imagine what our world would be like if everyone just followed the Ten Commandments? WOW! WHAT A LIFE THAT WOULD BE_ Please r&r!
"Fantasy World" is about how the internet is just a fantasy world and I used to be so into it... ok, so I still get on the internet everyday, but I mean you don't know who to trust and who not to trust because you can't see them, don't know them in person, don't know if they're lying about who they are... you just can't trust them, and I got mixed upin the fantasyby talking to so many people on the internet. I got out of that. I still talk to people on the internet, but it's very limited. I mostly talk to people I actually know, now_ Please r&r!
"He Lost It" is about a person who lost his faith in God because a friend of his died and he couldn't understand why it happened. He couldn't accept it, he just... couldn't believe God would take his friend away. This is a poem about that and how sad it is that he lost it... I mean, I've lost many friends... but I'm still here with God, faith stronger than ever_ Please r&r!
"Almost A Haiku" is exactly what the title says! lol It's got like 4-6-3 syllable lines! lol But it's my favorite "Haiku" and is so beautiful and so deep! You wouldn't believe how deep you can get with so few words! Pleasxe r&r!
"The Ruin of Innocence' Mind" is about how innocence can be taken away so easily and so many times it is. I was REEEEEEEEEEEALLLY mad when I wrote this, and it took like 5 minutes, but it's really deep, too! Please r&r!
"Bitterness" is about bitterness, lol I was really bitter right then, I think because of my sister... yeah, because that was before my sophomore year got out, so yeah, I was so angry at her and bitter that I wrote this to get it out and describe bitterness in a Haiku the best I could! Hope ya like! Please r&r!
"Harlot" is about false prophesy (I thought a harlot was a false prophet, but it's really a prostitute, but, I guess this could just be a different perspective? lol) and how it twists the truth. Please r&r!
"False Prophets" is about what false prophesy does to people. I got a review on this one by someone who said that the Bible was described perfectly by this poem. How can I blame her? Someone who doesn't know God is not going to know what His word provides. This is about the opposite of what God teaches us! Please r&r!
"When All Hope Is Gone" Ha, ha, this one is so cool! It looks like it'll be one of those angsty poems, but it really isn't! Gotta read it to find out why! Please r&r!
"The Way, the Truth, and the Life" is about the questions people ask about life and the one answer to them all! Please r&r!
"Blizzard" is exactly what the title says! A BLIZZARD! lol Please r&r!
"Venus: Ch. 2, by o n a t o p p" Specially written by my friend, Shazaam Onatopp, now o n a t o p p, this is his perspective on Venus! Please r&r!
"Binding Storm of the Fuzzies!" is a one stanza poem about dust! lol Please r&r!
"Dark Reflection" is a poem I had to write for art class the first semester of my junior year (which is nearly over! 11 more days_) and talks about a specific artwork by Picasso. Please r&r!
"Dancing Dust Bunnies!" is about dust bunnies! They hop around everywhere when you're not looking! lol So cute! Please r&r!
"Blue Heart" is about someone when they're sad and gloomy. Just describing the feelings. Please r&r!
"The Loving Souls"
"No Doubt About Jesus"
"Little Tiny Christmas Gift"
"If Only"
"A Torn World"
"Ultimate Freedom!"
"Laughter"
"Sudden Elation"
"Choose Your Path"
"Finally, the Chains Have Broken"
"Maze of Memory"
"The World's Demons to be Defeated"
"Malicious Cyclone"
"I Am 4"
"I Guess I'm Just Stupid"
Now we're gettin' to the stories_ "Dreams of Love" is one of my personal favorites (and one of the only 2 that are finished... eh, he, heeeeh! ~_~) and is SOOOOO romantic! I absolutely LOVE it! Makes me feel all lovey-dovey and stuff! How I LOVE that feeling! Heh, heh, heh! I think you should read it and tell me whatcha think (please!) _ And actually, now this one has really just begun because from advice from a fellow member of this site, I'm pretty much changing the WHOLE thing around. I've already got ch. 1 finished and have it posted now (the "new" ch. 1) so please read and if you already have, tell me how much it's improved! Thanks!
"Hearts Sealed" I've taken off for now because nobody was reviewing (except for TiEka, who I asked to review it). I've taken it off to make it better and to perhaps give it a catchier title. But when I put it back up, PLEASE, PLEEEASE r&r it_
Dude, this one is definitely my favorite story from me! It's also the first one I REALLY wrote... not for school or anything... well, I had another one that I lost but... anyway, it's called "Imperial Light of Shelana"! It's about a Roman girl who tries to bring peace to Italy with a boy and a few other friends she meets on their adventure! I think it's totally AWESOME and I think ya'll'd love it! Please r&r!
"Mushidu and Mesumie" is probably gonna be one of my favorites when it's finished. It's a lot like "Hearts Sealed" but different (if ya know what I mean). It's about this guy named Golginei who is trying to rid the people of Planet Serenity of their peace and happiness. But two certain people might just stop him. The story's named after them! Yay! Ok, well, anyway, so I think it's really good so far and I think you'll love it! Please r&r!
"Mysterious Love, but Beautiful" I've only got one chapter for so far, but it's REALLY romantic too! It's about a girl named Abigail and she tries to convince the people of her town that her best friend, Edward has been kidnapped by a mad man and his servants and will kill him unless somebody doesn't do something about it! Will she be alone on this job? Or will she have some help in saving him? Read and find out! I'll have the second chapter up soon! Please review too!
"Preppy and the Prince" is just SOOO funny! It's a kind of sequel to "Beauty and the Beast"! I love it a LOT! Please r&r!
"My World!" is what my world would be like if it really existed! I think it's totally AWESOME, and it's NOT A POEM! Some people think it's a poem because of the way I wrote it but it's not! It's in the "fiction" category! Ok, Lydia, calm down, it's ok! Aheh! Ok, well, it's just AWESOME so yeah, please r&r!
"Living in the Past" is probably gonna be my best story EVER! The most detailed, the most humorous, the most romantic (well… MAYBE, but personally I think that “Dreams of Love” or “Hearts Sealed” which I will be putting Hearts Sealed back up when I get a better title for it and better story! will always be my most romantic work, but we SHALL see! He, he_), just the most magnificent story that perhaps I will ever write! It's my newest story, and I think y'all'll LOVE IT! It's about this girl who gets "kidnapped" by a man who speaks Old English and says he's the "King of Scotland". He takes her to the past where she learns things she never wanted to hear and that make her wish she was still in the future and was still ignorant about her horrible history. Will she EVER be able to cope with this? Find out by READING AND REVIEWING... PLEASE! He, he_ THANKSYAS A LOTSAS!
"Suicidal Feelings" I wrote 2 years ago to express my feelings about kids at school, how I feel all the time, my past experiences, and my views on the world. True feelings, true experiences! Please r&r!
"Adenoid Surgery" is the surgery I had on March 12, 2001. I was 11 years old, and I had always had a plugged up nose. That's because I was so STUBBORN and I didn't BLOW MY NOSE! So I payed the price, and am still (I'll tell ya about it in a second_). Anyway, I love the results and always have cause I can breathe out of my nose! I still breathe out of my mouth though most of the time. It's because I was so used to it, I didn't stop! That could be an advantage to me... he, he, well, it ain't gonna be all that good for a 15-year-old girl because I wrote this for my 7th grade portfolio, and because of that, I didn't change it, except to take out the hospital I was going to and the city (safety reasons). Well, please r&r!
"Glass Cut" is one of those, that when you read it, you'll be like, "How stupid WERE you!" Yeah, it's one of those that you may laugh at after you read it, course, I coulda died under slightly different circumstances, so, maybe not. Ehehhh... well, anyway, I was 10 years old at the time of this accident, and boy did I bleed a mess! I wrote this for my 6th grade practice portfolio, so you're looking at an 11-year-old's work. It's still pretty good, though. Please r&r!
"A Diary of the Best Week I Could Ever Wish For" is the diary I kept at church camp here in Kentucky! Lots of emotion: humor, drama, sadness, and everything in between! It's wild, I think you'll like a lot! Please r&r!
EXTRA MESSAGE
This is for the people who read my review on "Adenoid Surgery". I said I would tell you why I'm still paying the price for not blowing my nose as a kid Well, I have an underbite. My lower jaw sticks out too far past my upper jaw. That occurred because I could only breathe out of my mouth, which meant that my tongue was never sticking up there on the roof of my mouth. If that's not happening almost all the time, your jaw becomes underdeveloped and becomes smaller than normal. That caused the two teeth beside my front teeth to regrow, after I'd lost them, on the roof of my mouth behind my front teeth. Then, my lower jaw became overdeveloped and grew too long. And now, because of that, I'm gonna have to have jaw surgery sometime, hopefully, during Spring Break of next year. So you can guarantee sometime I'll be writing a portfolio piece about that. By the way, my jaws are off center too, so I can open my mouth REALLY wide. Wider than a normal human. MY JAW CAN UNLOCK ITSELF. I can feel it everytime I do it. It's opening wider than it should. I think that's pretty cool, but it's not normal, and I think I'll be much happier with a normal jaw... aren't you? Hm, hm_
Quotes (NEW! LOL):
All of these quotes are mine and my friends being silly or funny!
“That’s bombkiller!” -Angela-
“Hey, Lovemuffin!” -Angela-
“Wha-ev-ah! I do what I want!” -Angela-
“Aw yeah, I can feel the love!” -Nick, the cook with the glasses-
“Happy birthday, Lydia! Man, that never gets old!” -Justin-
“YAY-ah!” -Patrick-
“WwwHAT!” -Patrick-
“I don’t like that tone you’re lookin’ at me in!” -Freddy-
“The whatchamahuchi. The thingy.” -James-
“Hamana, hamana, what?” -James-
“I’m taking James’s place while he’s not here.” -Josiah-
“I’m NOT an a-DDICT!” -me-
“Oh, for heaven!” -me-
“Yepsey, yepsey!” -me-
“Anytime, anywhere, anyway.” -me-
“You would say that, wouldn’t you?” -Freddy-
excitedly looking at ketchup “Oooh, e-coli!” -me-
singing “Ohhh, I smack myself!” -Brian-
(low, narrator-type voice “That’s insane.”
“Brian, if you say that one more time, I’m gonna hurt you!”
“That’s not insane.”) -Brian and me-
“Yes’m?” -Jerred-
“You’re a duck!” -Jerred-
“Chicken wafers!” -Jerred-
“I think you need some sexual healing, Lydia.” -Christine-
“50 ways… to leave your lover!” -Cathy-
“It’s up, it’s up, it’s up, it’s gone!” -Jerred-
“Ya little nasties!” -Anna-
“What’s ‘and stuff’?” -Jessica-
“I hate the name ‘Lydia’, too.” -Jesse-
“You dumbwad!” -me-
“Yeah, you stupid wall, shut up!” -James-
Uncle Arthur voice and accent “Merci beaucoup!” -James-
“Giant chipmunk!” -Jerred-
“You’re a monkey!” -Jerred-
“That’s what’s up.” -Jennifer-
“Are you serious?” -me-
“She’s MY lovemuffin!” -Ronda-
“Hey, salad slut!” -Joan-
“Whatcha doin’, 48 days?” -Paul-
“He’s a suckaface!” -Ricky-
“Oh, now she’s salad chic.” -Jeffrey-
“How’s little one today?” -Bambi-
"She's my lovemuffin, now." -Emily-
"I'll get 'im, Lydia. I'll be your honeymuffin." -Ronda-
"Investigator Paul's gonna find out!" -Paul-
“Doin’ 7 jobs as usual.” -Patrick-
Kind of a passionate tone “Enjoy your time getting paid for doin’ nothin’” -Nick, the dishwasher-
("What do you think about. . . pre-marital drug use?"
"Pre-marital drug use! Ha, ha, what the heck? Well, I don't think people should do drugs at all."
"So, neither one, pre-marital or marital?"
"Ha, ha, no."
"Ok, what do you think about post. . . natal, cocaine use?"
"Natal. . . natal. . . what's natal?"
"It's like. . . after you have a baby."
"Oh, ok. . . I don't think that, either, cause when you do that, you're done like that!"
"Ok. . . I'm sorry I'm asking you these questions."
"No, it's ok!") -Me and Justin-
"She's a cali-tabby!" -Mom-
"Oh, cuss!" (instead of saying a cuss word or a bad word, she says that! lol) -Mrs. Davis-
"Don't say that word in my classroom! Say 'inhales profusely'!" (haha, instead of saying "sucks") -Mrs. Davis-
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