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Author has written 25 stories for Humor, Life, General, Love, General, Supernatural, Essay, Thriller, and Play. Mini-Blog on stories and what not: -January 22nd, 2008 3:47pm: As you may have noticed, I never followed through with my last update. Once again school is very distracting and I apologuise for not updating, and making new and old readers wait. I know I need to start updating more, or succum to losing fans! : Hopefully everyone enjoys the story enough to put up with this behavoir, but I promise that I'm going to follow through this time. Chapter 7 is still being worked on, but I'm getting closer to the end. Forget the major plot turn...I changed my mind...but it'll def. happen later...in a chapter or so. Warning/good news: the chapter about to be uploaded is going to be far more vulgar than the previous ones. Be prepared and exited! As for other stories: nothing. My heart entwined is really hard to focus on right now...but I'm trying. I have a new short story idea I want to finish soon as well, maybe I'll upload before Jan. is over...maybe. So yeah! Message me for any feedback or just to chat! -October 28th, 2008 4:21pm: Paint me a Picture, chapter 7, is being worked on this week. Expect a HUGE turn in the plot and it's elements. Hopefully you'll like them! Sorry I've been a little inactive. Summer was hectic, as is my first school year here at Oakland University. Finding time to write, and being alone, is very rare. However, I'm going to try as hard as I can to update in two weeks or so! So make sure to see what's going on! By the way, notice a new short story/memoir that I posted titled "Wendal". Check it yo...it's good! -July 19th, 2008 12:00pm: My Heart Entwined has FINALLy been totally revamped and a new chapter has been posted! It's taken a good 3 years...hahah. sorry! But now I'm working on Chapter 7 of Paint Me a Picture...which is going a little slower than I would have hoped, so bare with me! I know in 3 months it'll be one year since I've updated that one, but good chapters take time. Anywho, enjoy the updates of My Heart Entwined! Oh and if you have the chance, check out my Fictionpress community! http://www.fictionpress.com/community/Fictionpress_Veterans_UNITED/1957/ -June 25th, 2008 10:12pm: I've decided to start a mini blog on my profile. To update my readers on what stories I'm working on. Paint me a picture is currently being updated with Chapter 7, finally. Sorry about the wait. I just graduated high school and summer has been hectic. Expect some major turns in Paint me a picture. Also, I might be revamping "My heart entwined." which will include an entire run through of old chapters, fixing spelling and grammar errors, and changing some plot elements I no longer enjoy. I promise to keep my word to all these things! Message me if you want to know more! -Delanie To sum my life up: I attend Oakland University. I love a guy named Mitch White. I'm a Communications Major with an English Minor. I don't really write poetry, and any poetry posted is either old or my pathetic attempt at trying to understand it. So basically, if you read my poetry and tear it apart in your review, I'll yell at you because you have been warned that it is already terrible. Another warning: Much of my writing on here is older, so a lot of my writing lacks maturity (due to my laziness of updating older chapters and what not). Also, I have many pieces posted that I started but never finished, so please inquire about any piece you're not sure will be finished.
My Heart Entwined: Chrissy needs a savior. A savior from her work obsessed mother, abusive enemy, cracking relationships, and terrible school life. But what do you do when your savior comes in the form...of a demon? Paint me a Picture: Amber is a dreamer who lives in a dream world, trying to block out reality, until she is kidnapped by Tristin, a vampire. He makes her decide between two types of dying. After she decides, he gives her a task. To, "Paint him a Picture". Rated for Masochism, Sadism, and LANGUAGE! My Friend Zan: Tiani and Zans are best friends in highschool. Only, Zan is a vampire. This story is about the dramatic and humourous lives of Zan and Tiani. (One of my first stories ever on here, so mind the changing of writing style and maturity as chapters go on). The ones above are only my personal favorites. Note: That does not mean I'll finish any of them. I love it when people tell me dead on what they don't like about my writing. I hate it when people sugar coat their criticism. Also, if you end up reading a story and think that something is wrong with it, please tell me. Until then, Delanie | |||||||||||||
1. Paint me a picture » reviewsHer name was Amber. His name was Tristan. She was a human. He was a vampire. Taken against her will, Amber decided her own fate in 30 seconds and forced to become his pet. Rated for Language, Masochism, and Sadism. UPDATE: New Prologue!Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 8 - Words: 17,912 - Reviews: 59 - Updated: 1-22-09 - Published: 5-16-052. WendelA girl unable to swallow her food, finds consolance in her guardian angel. R&R. True story about yours truly.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,036 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-28-08 - Published: 10-28-083. My heart entwined » reviewsChristina yearns for a savior. A savior to save her from her life of neglect and confusion. Finally a savior comes to her, but saviors come in all shapes and sizes. Even if it’s in the form of a demon. UPDATE: Completely revamped and a new chapter!Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 15,127 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 7-18-08 - Published: 6-24-054. A Writer's EducationIn this essay, to Oakland University, I have answered their college prompt on what I plan to accomplish with a college degree.R&R Please!Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 535 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-18-07 - Published: 11-18-075. Replacing GregGreg, Dan, Steve, and Janet are friends. When Greg leaves the group of friends, the group holds try outs to see who can replace their old best friend. Ironically, all the people who try out are...less than perfect. Please R&R.Complete - Play - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,958 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-1-07 - Published: 11-1-076. Sex Addict » reviewsJulian Bradford is a sex addict. Nik is a girl who lacks closure, is confused about herself, and has a strange facination with Julian. Julian is a Sex Addict. And Nik wants to find out...why, but what will she do to find out?Thriller - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,909 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 7-16-06 - Published: 4-1-067. Hospital » reviewsA girl works at hospital gift shop. One day a stranger causes her to re-live the memories of a bad past relationship that she had for so long, been trying to get rid of, and makes her realized thats she's not as okay as she wants to believe.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,004 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 11-20-058. Meredith » reviewsSam witnesses her father killing her mother. She is sent to a mental hopital. She meets Meredith who is always alone and never talks. Sam befriends Meredith and attemts to talk to her...help her...while trying to fight her own personal demons.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 826 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-14-06 - Published: 3-2-069. Silver God reviewsA poem based on my ex-boyfriend...Please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-9-06 - Published: 3-9-0610. Wax Flowers » reviewsA girl and boy shared a twisted love. The girl then passes away and the boy finds that he can't die. He lives in pain and misery of past memories, helping people with their problems. Then someone comes to help him with hisSupernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,238 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-22-06 - Published: 1-20-0611. Blood has innocence » reviewsAstrid is taken by a vampire. His original plan was to keep her has a blood pet. Astrid attempts to escape many times, but cannot succeed. That is, until a door is opened that she never saw before. Rated for language, masochism, and disturbing textSupernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,169 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 1-3-06 - Published: 4-30-0512. Cold Autumn Week reviewsA poem that recalls a memory I wish to forget. It's quite vauge, but maybe you can put it together in your own interpretation.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-18-05 - Published: 10-18-0513. The word, Love reviewsMy thoughts on the word that most people are hesitant to say. Please R&R.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 384 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-13-05 - Published: 6-13-0514. Bandages reviewsA poem that is a little vauge, and a bit rushed. It's about cutting.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-1-05 - Published: 6-1-0515. In the girls locker room reviewsA girl who's past friends hate her, over hears 2 guys planning to shoot people at school. What will she do? This is a short story I will be entering for a scholorship. Please r&r.Thriller - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,000 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-26-05 - Published: 5-26-0516. Inner ME reviewsI have been trying to find myself for a while now. But I finally have, and here is a poem about it.Please R&R, it would be appreciated.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-16-05 - Published: 5-16-0517. Banning lighters reviewsI wrote this for a personal response essay in english. I thought I would post it see what other people thought.Essay - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 400 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-4-05 - Published: 5-4-0518. The unknown reviewsOkay, this is a short story I have to write for english. But I don't know where to go from here. Please read, and tell me what I could do.Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,436 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-30-05 - Published: 4-30-0519. My friend Zan » reviewsTiani lives a normal life, and has a best friend Zan. Only Zan is not your average 11th grader. Best friends forver, Zan is a vampire. Read my funny and dramatized story, about a girl trying to get through highschool with her vampiric best friend.Humor - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 13 - Words: 22,544 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 4-5-05 - Published: 11-6-0320. My last ray of hope » reviewsA girl who has died on the inside, struggles to survive. She is in so much pain that she feels nothing. Until someone comes along, and helps her to feel again. Rated R for Language, sexual content, and slightly disturbing textGeneral - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,188 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-12-05 - Published: 4-10-0421. My Crucifixion reviewsThis is a song I wrote about how I felt after a terrible event in my life. I am very vague in the song. Please R&RGeneral - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-22-05 - Published: 1-22-0522. So cold reviewsThis is really a song but originaly started out as a poem. Its pretty much based on this girl I hate, but yet this is what I think is really going on inside of her. R&R,pleazGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-22-04 - Published: 6-22-0423. The rose reviewsAbout a rose...um...yea! lol, well, just read it pleazLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-14-04 - Published: 6-14-0424. A bundle of Chrysanthemums reviewsNo real description for it. A poem that starts with a sad theory, but ends with a moral.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-14-04 - Published: 6-14-0425. How come? reviewsWhy do we even live? This is a poem I wrote when I felt like my world was caving in on me, and I couldn't trust anyone, not even my best friend. Please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-14-03 - Published: 11-14-03
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