Victor Soulstorm
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since: 10-26-03, id: 380233
Author has written 32 stories for Love, General, Politics, Religion, Nature, Fantasy, Haiku, and Life.
You say you want a revolution
Well you know
We all want to change the world
You tell me that it's evolution
Well you know
We all want to change the world
But when you talk about destruction
Don't you know you can count me out
Don't you know it's gonna be alright
Alright Alright

You say you got a real solution
Well you know
We'd all love to see the plan
You ask me for a contribution
Well you know
We're doing what we can
But when you want money for people with minds that hate
All I can tell you is brother you have to wait
Don't you know it's gonna be alright
Alright Alright

You say you'll change the constitution
Well you know
We all want to change your head
You tell me it's the institution
Well you know
You better free your mind instead
But if you go carrying pictures of Chairman Mao
You ain't going to make it with anyone anyhow
Don't you know know it's gonna be alright
Alright Alright

"Revolution"- The Beatles

Favorite anime's: cowboy bebop
Furi Kuri
Inu-Yasha
Yu-Yu-Hakusho
Trigun

Favorite Movies: Primal Fear
The usual suspects
Fight Club
LOTR, the two towers
The Empire Strikes Back

favorite songs: "the decline"- NOFX
"Last breath"- the Mad Caddies
"Revolution"- The Beatles
"Just the Way you are"-Billy Joel
"Sympathy for the Devil"- the Rolling Stones
"Bullion"- Millencolin
"Lithium"- Nirvana
"Choke"- Lagwagon
"Paint it Black"- Rolling Stones
"Sporadic Movement"- CKY

i keep having this dream...
it's you and me on a beach
with no sign of civilization around
and it's storming
the lightning reflecting on the water
the thunder and rain giving us
rythm to dance to,
singing at the top of our lungs
to the music in our heads
because there's no one there but us -
they arent there to tell us that
the way we do things is not "socially acceptable"-
not like we'd care anyway
but it's just nice without the nagging

and, for a moment we fall silent and still
letting the wind do circles around us,
the rain pound through us,
and the light flash over us.
and regardless of what my mind's screaming,
my heart feels perfectly safe being
out here in this storm because it knows
that was are the ones giving it life:
with every touch of our bodies
we make the thunder;
the electricity in our kisses
causes lightning to shoot across the sky;
and the rain? the rain falls to try
to put out the fire in our hearts...
but baby, we laugh because we know
it never will

and now as i'm lying here
waiting for sleep to finally
come and claim me
i find myself praying only
to have that dream again
because tonight follows a day
that blew me away
almost as much as you did
the first time we met
and if you were here with me
i wouldn't feel so godamn guilty
cuz everything here is screaming your name
but you're too many miles away to hear it
and i'm trying my best to relay the message
but hearing is so much different than feeling it
and maybe, if i could stay in
that dream long enough,
i could hitch a ride on a lightning bolt
and wake up where you are...
because baby, i miss you
with my whole heart.

I love you andi...


1. Alone reviews
umm... same with through. please no offending wanted.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-29-04
2. Through reviews
I wrote this early in the month, I was mad. anyone who this poem is about, don't get offended.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-29-04
3. Photograph reviews
this is my picture
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-29-04
4. twilight's dance reviews
a poem for a special someone on valentine's day
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-14-04
5. Ever Green reviews
I love you Jessi, this poem's for you. Happy Anniversery
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-16-03
6. in out in reviews
I don't really feel like writing a review. but please R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-12-03
7. Middle finger salute reviews
Ahhh, in ligt of recent critical acclaim, I've decided to write another political poem!
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 12-11-03
8. Slow motion picture killing me reviews
a few years ago I used to have visions of my death, most of the time I was commmiitting suicide. It obviously didn't happen though and I'm over it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-25-03
9. Leaving me alive reviews
I don't know, I was in a bad mood yesterday
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-14-03
10. The elements within reviews
A poem, read and review.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 11-12-03
11. her part II reviews
again not based on personal experience, I just felt compelled to write them. review please, along with part 1
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11-6-03
12. Her reviews
Not based on personal experience. I suppose about a girl
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 11-3-03
13. The soulstorm reviews
Let the rain become my tears, let the wind become my voice, let the lightning be my sword, let the thunder be my roar. review please
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-29-03
14. Flashing steel, Singing blade reviews
A poem I wrote awhiles ago, review please
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-28-03
15. Sleep's healing reviews
the poem changes style and ryhtem, and the last part should be read faster and faster until the last two lines, which are slow.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-28-03
16. Too many reviews
another of my parenthetical poems. enjoy
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-28-03
17. Is it better? reviews
Well, is any better? review please
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-28-03
18. The falling leaf reviews
Its all metaphorical...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-28-03
19. Destiny reviews
I suppose a resentment of fate is a primary genre for me, first haiku on this site for me, please critique
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-28-03
20. Locusts of faith reviews
not too bad. kind of two subjects though
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-27-03
21. Destiny's blade reviews
I guess its about a character I came up with, Kiro Yukai, destny's blade
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-27-03
22. The wilderness and you reviews
Me missing my girlfriend when I was camping
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-27-03
23. Winter's Heart reviews
I hate winter, but I've been told I've captured its cold escence quite well, opinions?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-27-03
24. The Tyrant, inspiration reviews
A poem about inspiration, and how I feel when the idea comes
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-27-03
25. Forsake me reviews
I wish to live my own life, is that too much to ask?
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-27-03
26. Cameron reviews
How violence will always return to you
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-27-03
27. Eternal moments reviews
Something I wrote for my girlfriend, I hope you enjoy
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-27-03
28. America the dead reviews
Could be seen as very contraversial, more of my feelings on the government
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 10-27-03
29. The clown reviews
I guess my feelings about myself and my inablity to speak to others about my problems
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-26-03
30. The land of the notsofree reviews
some of my feelings on the bush administration n poetry form.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-26-03
31. Boredom's fist reviews
A poem about being bored to death, some days nearly litterly
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-26-03
32. Demon in Disguise reviews
A poem I wrote when I was having some problems with my girlfriend, I like it, I hope you do too
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-26-03