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Author has written 32 stories for Love, General, Politics, Religion, Nature, Fantasy, Haiku, and Life. You say you want a revolution Well you know We all want to change the world You tell me that it's evolution Well you know We all want to change the world But when you talk about destruction Don't you know you can count me out Don't you know it's gonna be alright Alright Alright You say you got a real solution Well you know We'd all love to see the plan You ask me for a contribution Well you know We're doing what we can But when you want money for people with minds that hate All I can tell you is brother you have to wait Don't you know it's gonna be alright Alright Alright You say you'll change the constitution Well you know We all want to change your head You tell me it's the institution Well you know You better free your mind instead But if you go carrying pictures of Chairman Mao You ain't going to make it with anyone anyhow Don't you know know it's gonna be alright Alright Alright "Revolution"- The Beatles Favorite anime's: cowboy bebop Furi Kuri Inu-Yasha Yu-Yu-Hakusho Trigun Favorite Movies: Primal Fear The usual suspects Fight Club LOTR, the two towers The Empire Strikes Back favorite songs: "the decline"- NOFX "Last breath"- the Mad Caddies "Revolution"- The Beatles "Just the Way you are"-Billy Joel "Sympathy for the Devil"- the Rolling Stones "Bullion"- Millencolin "Lithium"- Nirvana "Choke"- Lagwagon "Paint it Black"- Rolling Stones "Sporadic Movement"- CKY i keep having this dream... it's you and me on a beach with no sign of civilization around and it's storming the lightning reflecting on the water the thunder and rain giving us rythm to dance to, singing at the top of our lungs to the music in our heads because there's no one there but us - they arent there to tell us that the way we do things is not "socially acceptable"- not like we'd care anyway but it's just nice without the nagging and, for a moment we fall silent and still letting the wind do circles around us, the rain pound through us, and the light flash over us. and regardless of what my mind's screaming, my heart feels perfectly safe being out here in this storm because it knows that was are the ones giving it life: with every touch of our bodies we make the thunder; the electricity in our kisses causes lightning to shoot across the sky; and the rain? the rain falls to try to put out the fire in our hearts... but baby, we laugh because we know it never will and now as i'm lying here waiting for sleep to finally come and claim me i find myself praying only to have that dream again because tonight follows a day that blew me away almost as much as you did the first time we met and if you were here with me i wouldn't feel so godamn guilty cuz everything here is screaming your name but you're too many miles away to hear it and i'm trying my best to relay the message but hearing is so much different than feeling it and maybe, if i could stay in that dream long enough, i could hitch a ride on a lightning bolt and wake up where you are... because baby, i miss you with my whole heart. I love you andi... | |||||||
1. Alone reviewsumm... same with through. please no offending wanted.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-042. Through reviewsI wrote this early in the month, I was mad. anyone who this poem is about, don't get offended.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-043. Photograph reviewsthis is my pictureGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-044. twilight's dance reviewsa poem for a special someone on valentine's dayLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-14-04 - Published: 2-14-045. Ever Green reviewsI love you Jessi, this poem's for you. Happy AnniverseryLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-16-03 - Published: 12-16-036. in out in reviewsI don't really feel like writing a review. but please R&R.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-12-03 - Published: 12-12-037. Middle finger salute reviewsAhhh, in ligt of recent critical acclaim, I've decided to write another political poem!Politics - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 12-11-03 - Published: 12-11-038. Slow motion picture killing me reviewsa few years ago I used to have visions of my death, most of the time I was commmiitting suicide. It obviously didn't happen though and I'm over it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-25-03 - Published: 11-25-039. Leaving me alive reviewsI don't know, I was in a bad mood yesterdayGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-14-03 - Published: 11-14-0310. The elements within reviewsA poem, read and review.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 11-12-03 - Published: 11-12-0311. her part II reviewsagain not based on personal experience, I just felt compelled to write them. review please, along with part 1Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 11-6-03 - Published: 11-6-0312. Her reviewsNot based on personal experience. I suppose about a girlLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 11-3-03 - Published: 11-3-0313. The soulstorm reviewsLet the rain become my tears, let the wind become my voice, let the lightning be my sword, let the thunder be my roar. review pleaseNature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 10-29-03 - Published: 10-29-0314. Flashing steel, Singing blade reviewsA poem I wrote awhiles ago, review pleaseGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-28-03 - Published: 10-28-0315. Sleep's healing reviewsthe poem changes style and ryhtem, and the last part should be read faster and faster until the last two lines, which are slow.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-28-03 - Published: 10-28-0316. Too many reviewsanother of my parenthetical poems. enjoyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-28-03 - Published: 10-28-0317. Is it better? reviewsWell, is any better? review pleaseGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-28-03 - Published: 10-28-0318. The falling leaf reviewsIts all metaphorical...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-28-03 - Published: 10-28-0319. Destiny reviewsI suppose a resentment of fate is a primary genre for me, first haiku on this site for me, please critiqueHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-28-03 - Published: 10-28-0320. Locusts of faith reviewsnot too bad. kind of two subjects thoughReligion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0321. Destiny's blade reviewsI guess its about a character I came up with, Kiro Yukai, destny's bladeFantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0322. The wilderness and you reviewsMe missing my girlfriend when I was campingLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0323. Winter's Heart reviewsI hate winter, but I've been told I've captured its cold escence quite well, opinions?Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0324. The Tyrant, inspiration reviewsA poem about inspiration, and how I feel when the idea comesGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0325. Forsake me reviewsI wish to live my own life, is that too much to ask?Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0326. Cameron reviewsHow violence will always return to youGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0327. Eternal moments reviewsSomething I wrote for my girlfriend, I hope you enjoyLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0328. America the dead reviewsCould be seen as very contraversial, more of my feelings on the governmentPolitics - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 10-27-03 - Published: 10-27-0329. The clown reviewsI guess my feelings about myself and my inablity to speak to others about my problemsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-26-03 - Published: 10-26-0330. The land of the notsofree reviewssome of my feelings on the bush administration n poetry form.Politics - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-26-03 - Published: 10-26-0331. Boredom's fist reviewsA poem about being bored to death, some days nearly litterlyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-26-03 - Published: 10-26-0332. Demon in Disguise reviewsA poem I wrote when I was having some problems with my girlfriend, I like it, I hope you do tooLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-26-03 - Published: 10-26-03
