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since: 12-04-03, id: 386463
Author has written 103 stories for Life, Fantasy, Religion, Young Adult, Song, General, and Biography.
Aim: pushescripples37

email: the_richesthobo37@hotmail.com

Habitat: Michigan, right around the thumb

fovorite band: Counting Crows

"Just down the street from your hotel, baby
I stay at home with my disease
And ain't this position familiar, darling
Well, all monkeys do what they see
Help me stay awake, I'm falling...
Down on Virginia and La Loma
Where I got friends who'll care for me
You got an attitude of everything I ever wanted
I got an attitude of need
Help me stay awake, I'm falling...

Asleep in perfect blue buildings
Beside the green apple sea
Gonna get me a little oblivion, baby
Try to keep myself away from me

It's 4:30 a.m. on a Tuesday
It doesn't get much worse than this
In beds in little rooms in buildings in the middle of these lives
which are completely meaningless

Help me stay awake, I'm falling...
Asleep in perfect blue buildings
Beside the green apple sea
Gonna get me a little oblivion, baby
Try to keep myself away from me

I got bones beneath my skin, and mister...
There's a skeleton in every man's house
Beneath the dust and love and sweat that hangs on everybody
There's a dead man trying to get out
Please help me stay awake, I'm falling...

Asleep in perfect blue buildings
Beside the green apple sea
Gonna get me a little oblivion, baby
Try to keep myself away from me
I can't keep myself away from me
How am I gonna keep myself away from me."

- Counting Crows ( Perfect Blue Buildings)

I like every kind of music (except for opera and polka) so i couldn't even name the other bands i like...

Stephen King is my god (or close to it)

I couldn't name my favorite movie... and if i tried, my head would probably explode from all the thought it would take in trying to decide...

My favorite song would be a tie between "name" by the Goo Goo Dolls and "Mrs. Potter's Lullaby" by the counting crows...

I play guitar... and i sing and play guitar in a band...

I usually always review people's work if they review mine, unless i'm sick in bed or can't get on the computer for some reason...

Reigning review champ: Sunburn (Frostbite) and Happy: 6 reviews

Favorite quote (at the moment): "When his life was ruined, his family killed, his farm destroyed, Job knelt down and yelled up to the heavens, "Why me god?" and God answered, "There's just something about you that pisses me off." -Stephen King.

It's odd, as I'm a happy person, that most of what I write is dark and depressing. I just have a fascination with the Macabre, and I enjoy looking deeper into the emotions of people.

I am officially 17!

I get reviews saying that i am a good writer, even though i think that i am not... i feel that i have the potential to be a great writer, but except for one odd poem i write every once in a while, i consider myself mediocre...

I want to be a highschool english teacher, and not an old fogeyish mean one either... i want my name to be remembered by my students when they are in college... I want to give barely any homework, and i want my students to write, and not just read books the whole year... yea, that would be fun...

- Addison (justaforgottenface37)

PS: if you have any questions about my writings, or want to talk or anything weird like that then i am usually on Aim around 8 to 10 most nights, and if not, just leave me an email and i'll respond to it when i get time...

Recent writing projects:
maybe possibily (probably not) updating Key

Maybe possibily updating Waterman

begging god that i might be able to write another good poem someday

Begging Satan that i might be able to write another good poem someday




1. Humanity reviews
Not in the mood for a summary. Read it, you'll understand.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-07 - Published: 6-27-07
2. A Collection of somewhat true stories » reviews
This is a collection of somewhat true stories I have written, which include observations and analyzations of religon, situations, and or people, who may be real or fake. I currently have three stories out now, and others are sure to follow.
Biography - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,507 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-18-07 - Published: 1-26-07
3. 44th Street
This is a story written for 1st hour. The assignment was to create an illusion through rhetorical devices. I hope everyone enjoys it.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 845 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-07
4. Hope you Guess my Name
This is a short story I wrote for my 5th hour class. I hope you all enjoy it, because I consider it to be a somewhat wellwritten character study.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,761 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-07
5. All Lost Creatures
A poem written in response to a poem that attacked me, crafted by a certain, unnamed person. I felt this was an appropriate response.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-07
6. Mother's Kisses
Depressing narrative poem, but it seems to be missing something, another stanza perhaps... If anyone has any suggestions, please feel free to drop a line.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-07
7. Frank's Escape reviews
It's been a while, but I felt creative tonight, and I thought I'd share this with you. It's an engaging story, set in poem form. I hope you enjoy it.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 408 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-10-06 - Published: 12-10-06
8. The Train Ride Home
Dark, depressing, symbolic characterization poem about a weird day-dream I had. And I was able to fix the format, so it shows up with the stanzas! Hooray!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 445 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-24-06 - Published: 7-24-06
9. The Burning City
Set in 8 chapters, this is the short-story of a crazed man and the city he looks down upon... In the future, you will notice that I will narrate this story using different literary techniques. Look for the next chapter in 3rd person, past tense.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 406 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-12-06 - Published: 7-12-06
10. There is a Dance reviews
I can't really describe this one, it just came a few minutes ago. Hopefully it's good.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-9-06 - Published: 7-9-06
11. Why Sunsets?
Something I wrote while at camp, it's the story of a woman pining for her husband to return from the war... Or is it?
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 786 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-21-06 - Published: 6-21-06
12. Graffiti reviews
I was looking at Graffiti, and I thought of this.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-21-06 - Published: 6-21-06
13. Smoothie Soul
Life while looking through a particularly bad-tasting Smoothie
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-21-06 - Published: 6-21-06
14. For Sale
Inspired by "Soldier's Things" by Tom Waits.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-21-06 - Published: 6-21-06
15. 3 Roads
Very, very symbolic poem about a fictional, crazy gunman, his hatred towards "the villian", whom he blames his problems for, and the little girl who wishes to save him. The layout got messed up (thanks fictionpress), but it still holds some of its momentu
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 285 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-30-06 - Published: 5-30-06
16. I Want to Explode reviews
Something lighter, but still poignant and innappropriate. It's truly how I feel, and how I think everyone who is very nice feels, at some point in their existence. And it's also about breaking out, which we all need to do sometimes.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-9-06 - Published: 5-9-06
17. Nothing reviews
The format is really, really messed up, but whatever... I had a dry spell, where I couldn't seem to write anything; nothing would come to mind. So I realized, that it wasn't that I had lost my touch, it was that nothing inspired me to write. And then all-
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-06 - Published: 5-9-06
18. Drink It Down reviews
Odd little allegory/symbolism/character development story about an insane man who bounces back between reality, and a coffee shop where he holds conversations with his dead girlfriend...
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,837 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-28-06 - Published: 1-28-06
19. Graham
The prequel to my book. I have been sitting on this for a while, debating on if I should post this or not, and I finally decided to. There isn't much of a plot to it, but I made it to experiment with different writing techniques. I hope you enjoy...
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,073 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-20-05 - Published: 11-20-05
20. Coke Can reviews
The style of this poem is also unique from my others, it has kind of a loose rhyme to it, even though it it a non-rhyming poem. A lot of people liked it, so i decided to post it here.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-30-05 - Published: 8-30-05
21. Memory reviews
Well, this is a lot different than most of my other poems, in the sense that it's not the style i usually write in... but i've been told that it's really really good, so i hope everyone else enjoys it.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 383 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-30-05 - Published: 8-30-05
22. 3 Jakes reviews
Starts off slow, but if i pull it off then this could be my best story ever... it seems like a drama now, but it's much more. note: the 8's are page breaks, and not actually part ofthe story. ch.1 out so far.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,429 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-19-05 - Published: 8-19-05
23. Chemical reviews
Angry.Sad.Confused. read.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 331 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-13-05 - Published: 8-13-05
24. Perception reviews
Weird addison rhyming poem... just read it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-3-05 - Published: 8-3-05
25. The Old House
Two Boys and a girl go to a haunted house, and one boy is dared to go inside... I didn't focus on the plot as much as the imagery and plot devices, but it's still pretty good...
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 656 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-16-05 - Published: 7-16-05
26. Where The Skeletons Dance reviews
Yea, so i'm really happy right now, which is weird because this is sort of dark... weird...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 7-15-05
27. The Philosophical Conversation reviews
My grandma and i were having a conversation about daddy long - Legs while cleaning the garage...
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 428 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-11-05 - Published: 7-11-05
28. Faded Image »
I Finished it! WIth an Afterward! Hooray!...Short (chapter) story of a blind morphine addict who regains his vision, and then goes in search of the woman he loves...
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,724 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-7-05 - Published: 7-4-05
29. I Dreamt of a Dead Man reviews
What do you dream of?
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-5-05 - Published: 7-5-05
30. Back Alley reviews
I wrote this pretty quickly... it's a short story about a dying homeless man having a deep ethical conversation with his murderer...
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,247 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-29-05 - Published: 6-29-05
31. The Hiding Spot
Yea, i am finding and posting all of my old poems that i didn't post before... and i stumbled upon this one from almost 2 years ago...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-28-05 - Published: 6-28-05
32. The Teddy Bear
Yea, so i said that the homeless man was my first poem ever... but i found this, and it's from an earlier date... so this is actually the first poem i've ever written... ok well here it is
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-28-05 - Published: 6-28-05
33. The picture reviews
I'm not sad, i was just told that i had to post this... i wsn't sad when i wrote this either, in fact, i'm really really happy... ok, here it is...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-23-05 - Published: 6-23-05
34. Pillaging reviews
it'sa poem about things i suppose... read it... it may not be a waste of your time...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-28-05 - Published: 4-28-05
35. It's Summer reviews
well hello again... it's been a while, but i decided to write something else... it's pretty much my opinion of summer put into poetry... because the only time of year i really like is the first few days of spring... then it sucks... well, enjoy...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-17-05 - Published: 4-17-05
36. Asleep reviews
hey everybody, this is my brand new poem... i don't know why i wrote it, just some things come to mind... i realize it doesn't have a lot of rythim, but it's a non rhyming poem...i can't get the double spacing out of the poem, so just know that there are
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 342 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-2-05 - Published: 1-2-05
37. Faceless reviews
I return again for another poem... i am not angry at all, which is why i was baffeled when this poem just burst out of me... it's more of a traditional poem of mine (it rhymes though)... it sounds alot like the way i used to write, with emotion, not satir
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-3-04 - Published: 12-3-04
38. Cancerous reviews
It's been a while folks, but i decided to see if i could still write a poem... it's about America really, although it's a little hard to tell from the words...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-30-04 - Published: 10-30-04
39. Madeline »
This is a confusing poem ( i know, i wrote it), so if anyone is confused after reading this, just read my incredibly long, almost never-ending author's note which comes after the poem...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Parody - Chapters: 2 - Words: 447 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-16-04 - Published: 8-16-04
40. PillSized Sunshine reviews
This is my first non-rhyming poem in a while... But it's a dark little poem about prozac and bad days...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-19-04 - Published: 7-19-04
41. A Modern Machine reviews
This is a very dark poem, and it talks about how we all conform eventually, no matter what it is...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-15-04 - Published: 7-15-04
42. Water Man » reviews
Chapter three is here!... it's about a man with a bad past who moves into a small Oregon town, befriends a sisteen year old boy, and faces prejiduce... oh, and did i mention that he could control water? (read the Author's note before starting the story)
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,584 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-12-04 - Published: 7-8-04
43. Caroline Street reviews
This is my first song, but i think i did a good job... i was listening to "the counting crows" while i wrote this, so if it sounds like them then at least i did a pretty good job...
Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-9-04 - Published: 7-9-04
44. Forever a Storm reviews
This poem is about how everybody is so hypocritical... it's kind of depressing, and i wrote it in a very weird way (as in one stanza rhymes and one doesn't) but i liked it and i hope however reads it does too.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-7-04 - Published: 7-7-04
45. Sunburn Frostbite reviews
Out of all the poems i've written, this one is my favorite... it took more than fifteen minutes to write (like two hours), it rhymes, and has a very deep feeling to it, with a great meaning... I hope if you read it you like it as much as i do...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-7-04 - Published: 7-7-04
46. Leaving This Town reviews
I was listening to a song, and i thought i'd write a poem about it... some days i wish that i was a different person, and this poem is knid of like that... oh, and the town that i talk about is symbolic...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-04
47. The Homeless Man reviews
This is the very first poem I wrote, and while i was hesitant to submit it onto fictionpress because of the way i wrote it, i decided it was the best thing to do...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-04
48. The Irony of Dying Twice reviews
This is a poem about a person who believes that they're dead, and how they come to understand their personal beliefs... it's not meant to offend anyone's beliefs, and if you are offended anyway then you take things way too seriously...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-04
49. Happy reviews
this is mainly about how i feel society is now, and while i know that it's kind of hipocritical to write bad things about what you're a part of, i just have a problem with how life has gotten simple...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-5-04 - Published: 7-5-04
50. The Day I Ate My Face reviews
This poem is something i just wrote, and it describes my worst day ever... which happened sometime last october... oh, and the first sentence of every paragraph rhymes with the last sentence of the last paragraph...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-5-04 - Published: 7-5-04
51. Just Another Rainy Day reviews
I wouldn't consider this angst, but it is my depression that wrote this... It's been raining all day, and i was all mad, so my dad told me to write a poem about it... so i did.. oh, and this rhymes...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-04
52. I Wish I Was reviews
This is for people like me, who don't like being the normal person or the average Joe... it is slightly on the humorous side (Slightly), so if you read this and chuckel at it's stupidity then i will take no offense...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-26-04 - Published: 6-26-04
53. Sirens Darkest Blue Sky
I wish i knew why i wrote this...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-24-04 - Published: 6-24-04
54. Switchblade reviews
This is an angst poem, and that's why i wrote it... i wrote this with the intention of turning it funny but in the end it wound up becoming this twisted rhyming poem about sadness... so read it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-24-04 - Published: 6-24-04
55. My Pet Rock
i have no idea why i wrote this poem... i think i wrote it to show that sometimes other things in life keep you from what you want to be... but i don't really know...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-23-04 - Published: 6-23-04
56. Yesterday It Stopped
I don't really know why i wrote this, maybe to fill the blank in my heart, but i don't know... it seems like everything i say is a bigger metaphor for how i feel, so i guess this is what i believe...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-23-04 - Published: 6-23-04
57. Hopeless And the Song my Snow Globe Plays reviews
This is without question the weirdest poem i've ever written... i don't know how or why i did it, but i know it happened... P.S: it may look like none of it makes any since, but it all has a meaning and it all makes since when you read it a couple of time
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-21-04 - Published: 6-21-04
58. That Echo reviews
I try my hardest to stay away from angst, i don't like the feeling that goes along with it, but i just had to write this, i just had to let it out...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-12-04 - Published: 5-12-04
59. Blind reviews
Definatly wrote this because i saw someone i missed... i wanted to talk to her, but before i could, this poem came to mind...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-12-04 - Published: 5-12-04
60. Sunbeams and Rain Clouds reviews
I haven't written in a while, so i thought i'd write this. It's not a happy or sad poem, but more of a mix of both. It's a poem about irony with shell silverstein like humor but with metaphors and better writing.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-2-04 - Published: 5-2-04
61. Shit reviews
... i haven't written in a while, but i am so mad that i felt i had to write this. i might not be good, but it's how i feel... i've never felt this mad... but now that i have, i know it's time to get it out...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-6-04 - Published: 4-6-04
62. Silent reviews
this poem sounds like angst, but it isn't... digging graves can change you..
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-17-04 - Published: 2-17-04
63. Wishing Well reviews
This is a very weird poem that i have written, and it has alot of different meanings to it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-8-04 - Published: 2-8-04
64. Larry's Angels reviews
A poem i wrote a little while ago for my great uncle Larry, who died of heart failure...
Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-28-04 - Published: 1-28-04
65. Reaping of The Crop
... Symbolism. Period.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-28-04 - Published: 1-28-04
66. Thirtyseven reviews
hello... this is a poem about society, which i like to write about sometimes... P.S: Key chapter three will be out soon...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-13-04 - Published: 1-13-04
67. Imperfection
Hello everyone... this is a poem i've been meaning to write fro a while... it's about a twon that we've all been to... P.S: anyone who fallows my story that i'm writing called "key"... i will put chapter three in soon...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-11-04 - Published: 1-11-04
68. Key » reviews
the first story i've written on fictionpress... the second chapter is here!... anyway it's about a man who finds a map to a key, a key that can unlock anyone's heart...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,436 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-7-04 - Published: 1-7-04
69. Thunderhead reviews
... this is basically a personification of the sun... if you'd ask me why i wrote it, i don't think i could answer... but i could say that it's one of my better poems...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-5-04 - Published: 1-5-04
70. The Almost Apology reviews
forty-...Nevermind... it's a personal poem, and some (my friends) who read this will know who this is to, i'm starting to slip back into the poetry glove, but groan now, because i'm warning you that it's one of addison's crap rhyming poems... well whateve
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-5-04 - Published: 1-5-04
71. Feeling reviews
idon'tevencarewhatnumberanymore poem!... i don't know why, but some gear has slipped and now all i write is dirt... i start poems.. but can't seem to finish them.. well this one isn't too good, but i hope it starts my writing back up...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-3-04 - Published: 1-3-04
72. Captured In a Picture reviews
FORTYITH POEM... Please R&R... this is a very confusing poem... but i consider it to be one of my best, even if you don't understand it it should still be appealing...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-22-03 - Published: 12-22-03
73. Sunset Over Miami reviews
Thirtyninth poem... Please R&R... THIS IS NOT ABOUT MIAMI!... It is a very metaphorical poem.. and i chose Miami becausae i consider it to be the most beautiful place in the world (besides Italy)...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-22-03 - Published: 12-22-03
74. The Forgotten reviews
Thirtyeighth poem... Please R&R... i wrote this for everyone who's never remebered...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-22-03 - Published: 12-22-03
75. Lost In Twilight
Thirtyseventh poem...Please R&R... this is a very sad poem... it's about being lost in something so beautiful, that you can't notice what's going on around you...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-21-03 - Published: 12-21-03
76. One Last Breath reviews
Thirtysomethingth poem... please R&R... I don't know who i wrote this for... if it was for my ex-girlfriend whom i miss dearly.. or the new girl i met... i but i had to get it off my chest...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-21-03 - Published: 12-21-03
77. A Memory reviews
Thirtyfifth poem... Please R&R... This is for someone i once knew... but i really don't know who she is anymore... it's been so long since i've seen the real "her"...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-18-03 - Published: 12-18-03
78. Empty
Thirtyforth story... PLEASE R&R... i just feel really sad right now... so i wrote this...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-18-03 - Published: 12-18-03
79. The Web reviews
Thirtythird poem... please R&R... this is without doubtthe deepest and probably the best poem i've written yet... also the saddest... it's about society... very hidden meaning but you'll get it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-16-03 - Published: 12-16-03
80. The Same reviews
Thirtysecond poem... Please R&R... By far one of my saddest poems... i keep trying to overcome my bad rhyming... so i wrote another rhyming poem... it's about life, and being weak...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-15-03 - Published: 12-15-03
81. Storm on the Horizon
Thirtyfirst poem... please R&R... I consider this to be one of my much deeper poems... it's about happiness...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-14-03 - Published: 12-14-03
82. Tomorrow
BIG THIRTYITH POEM!... Please R&R... It's mostly angst, but i put it under spiritual because it has alot of metaphors and deeper meanings... find the meaning... and i think you'll like the poem...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-14-03 - Published: 12-14-03
83. Shadow
twenty-ninth poem (i think)... Please R&R... My really good friend just got out of an extremely bad relationship, and asked me to write a poem about it... so it did... I don't know if it's too good, but i think it's good enough...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-12-03 - Published: 12-12-03
84. DoubleEdged Sword reviews
twentyseventh poem... Please R&R... it's about how somtimes in life you only hurt yourself when you try to solve your problems... alot of people can probably relate to this...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-11-03 - Published: 12-11-03
85. Careless reviews
twenty fifth poem... R&R please.. R&R all of my stuff... please... it sucks writing so much stuff and having no one recognize it or critique it... anyway this about being you and careless...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-9-03 - Published: 12-9-03
86. Numb reviews
twenty forth poem... Please R&R... read and review all of my stuff please... it helps... Well this is kind of a dedication... it's to anyone who thinks it's better off to feel nothing then to possilibly be hurt... in any situation...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-9-03 - Published: 12-9-03
87. The past reviews
twentysecond poem ( i think)... please R&R... review all of my poems i don't care... it just boring not getting any feed back on the things you write... anyway this is about the past calling to someone...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-8-03 - Published: 12-8-03
88. Moments
twentyfirst poem... this one is alot like the one i wrote called chances... but with a somewhat different message... i would consider it a follow up to chances... please R&R
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-7-03 - Published: 12-7-03
89. Dreamer
twentyith poem!... i think they keep getting better each time i right them... anyway this is about a dreamer (duh)... Please R&R.. ummm... R&R all of my stuff.. i would greatly appreciate it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-7-03 - Published: 12-7-03
90. Lost reviews
sixteenth poem... definatly one of my better ones... Choices are hard to make... don't get lost on the road of life...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03
91. Head reviews
fifteenth poem... i don't rhyme too well... but i've been trying to overcome that by writing alot of rhyming poems... this is about all of the things that go on inside someone's head...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03
92. raining blood reviews
twelfth poem... i'm not a good rhymer but i tried with this one... a somewhat gloomy poem but i'll let the people decide...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03
93. breathe reviews
eleventh poem... my uncle died during the summer... i wrote this in dedication to him...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-03
94. king of nothing reviews
big tenth poem!... this one is a little lighter than the other... a LITTLE lighter... and A LOT shorter... but i wrote it because i wanted everyone to know that no matter how bad they have it, at least they are the king of nothing... (oh.. look for the me
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-03
95. chances reviews
ninth poem... i wrote this like 2 years ago, but i thought some of you might like it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-03
96. beauty reviews
eighth poem... i don't know why i wrote this... i guess beauty is in many things...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-03
97. the walking man reviews
seventh poem... i'd like to think of it as a tale of a more recognizable grim reaper... i like to always put a meaning in my poems... so find the meaning for this one...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-03
98. star swirling reviews
sixth poem... it's a little confusing but the meaning is easy to see once you find it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-03
99. Eyes reviews
fifth poem... a real quick one this time... it's not about being ugly... just sometimes your eyes judge quicker than your heart can
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-03
100. Forget it reviews
fourth poem... i wrote this when i broke up with my girlfriend like 5 months ago... i don't think it's too good...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-03
101. teardrops reviews
now u all know my name... but it doesn't matter... third poem... just something i wrote...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-03
102. Gone Away reviews
second entry... i was just thinking snd i guess i wrote a poem... the meaning is what it's about...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-03
103. The tree of bones reviews
this is my first entry... it's about a tree.. look for the meaning...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-03
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