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1. Derivative of a Vengeance Dream reviewsA poem about, uhh, seduction, I guess. Thoughts?General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-7-05 - Published: 11-7-052. Near Andromeda reviewsa poem i wrote last night while watching the perseid meteor shower.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-053. Impromptu reviewsa love poem that's actually true for once. true enough i guess.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 355 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-05 - Published: 7-21-054. Merengue and Sundays reviewsnot happy with the title. It's kind of intense. Deals with suicide and all that stuff, even though it's short. Like a quick shot. Tell me what you think. i could use a review.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 494 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-7-05 - Published: 3-7-055. The Ego on Me reviewsrated for language. another short one. Tell me what you think. it's hard to explain...you kind of have to read it, but that's ok, because it's short.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 483 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-6-05 - Published: 3-6-056. Things You Can Tell Just By Looking at Her reviewsi'm trying to get this published. it's 500 words exactly because that's the upper limit. is this publishable?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 500 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-27-05 - Published: 2-27-057. Dialogue reviewsthis is all dialogue, and it's short so it goes really quickly. tell me if it works. thanks.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 545 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-26-05 - Published: 2-26-058. Covering My Window reviewsa poem i wrote a while ago, and just found. wouldn't mind a review, and it's short.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-24-05 - Published: 2-24-059. The Train reviewsplease read and review. i could use the feedback. it's about love and politics and there's explosions and everything! haha. can't tell if i'm serious or not.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,818 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-23-05 - Published: 2-23-0510. In Which the Hero Dies in the End reviewscan you say post post modern? I need some serious feedback on this. even if you don't like it. especially if you don't like it. it's short...please!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 441 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-16-05 - Published: 2-16-0511. Will Manheim reviewsumm, the first two chapters of a work in progress. i don't really know what it is or where it's going, but any feedback would be helpful.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,178 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-16-05 - Published: 2-16-0512. In the Morning on the Way to School reviewssomeone has offered to publish this for me in a school literary journal, and i want to know if it's good. tell me what you think...it's short.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 546 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-10-05 - Published: 2-10-0513. Knowing Jim reviewsanother short one. please tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 742 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-26-05 - Published: 1-26-0514. Falling Through the Ice reviewsyes, this is about falling through the ice, among other things. reviews would be appreciated.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 771 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-26-05 - Published: 1-26-0515. On Darjeeling Tea reviewsi haven't posted in a while. this is a really short story about a couple and shoveling snow and darjeeling tea. please read it and tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 824 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-23-05 - Published: 1-23-0516. the sun alonesomeness reviewsyeah, it's kind of random. please tell me what you think becuase i can't tell with this one, and whether you like it or not, it's probably interesting to read.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-04 - Published: 10-30-0417. Littler Than a Snowflake in the Sun reviewsi could use some reviews. pleaaaase. this poem can't really be explained unless you read it i guess. maybe it's about wanting to disappear. i don't knowGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-30-04 - Published: 10-30-0418. Gently Grazing Twigs reviewsspecifically about autumn, but broadly about so much more, as usual. i'd really like some feedback on this because i don't really know what i'm talking about and most of you do.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-26-04 - Published: 10-26-0419. It's So Much Easier Not To reviewsabout missing someone terribly terribly much. and it's different from any other poem about missing people so i think you should read it and tell me what you think. plus i like getting reviews...good or bad.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-19-04 - Published: 10-19-0420. New England Cries Tonight reviewsthe yankees need to go away. we were so happy last week (Read my last poem...New England Sighs Tonight). What happened?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-16-04 - Published: 10-16-0421. New England Sighs Tonight reviewsa short poem about 85 years of baseball. please read and tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-8-04 - Published: 10-8-0422. Nothing in this world is sweeter than a tangible reviewsrhyme without rhythm. i kind of need some feedback on this, because i don't know what to think of it at the moment.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-4-04 - Published: 10-4-0423. The Sunlight on Your Breath reviewsit's about missing someone and being confused. PLEASE REVIEW! i haven't been reviewed in a long time.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-3-04 - Published: 10-3-0424. An East Coast Tainted Bizarreok, this is probably the strangest thing i've ever written. there's a lot of incidental symbolism in it and a lot of purposeful symbolism in it, and i don't really know what it means. please please please read and review, because i need some feedback onGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-25-04 - Published: 9-25-0425. My love's deep, in all parts unrevealinga follow up to my previous poem "my love's (unceasing, such unknowable", with a much more optimistic conclusion...love provides the meaning to this every weariest of worlds. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-24-04 - Published: 9-24-0426. A Phrase Beyond Your Ears reviewsThis is one of those ones where i can't tell if it's good or pitiful. i'd really love some feedback...anything you're willing to offer. thanks.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-20-04 - Published: 9-20-0427. My Life is a Falling, Falling reviewsi really like this. and by really like this i mean i really like the first line. tell me what you think. i could use some reviews to boost my falling falling lifeGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-18-04 - Published: 9-18-0428. Did You Awake to See the Stars Again? reviewsabout confusion and sorrow and emptiness in the broadest sense. about a breakup specifically. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-16-04 - Published: 9-16-0429. Of Love's Distant Templesabout how real love is really fleeting, but how that may be a good thing. or something like that.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-8-04 - Published: 9-8-0430. Omniscience, Omniscience, Omnisciencesort of an 'ignorance is bliss" piece. although i'm not even sure i believe that it's true.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-6-04 - Published: 9-6-0431. Later Nights Lamenting reviewsi've written so many poems in the last 24 hours with no subsequent reviews. why is that?General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-6-04 - Published: 9-6-0432. And I Alone Nearby Soon Cry, Soon Cry reviewsi hate myself for writing this poem. i hate myself for it being true. the only thing that could make this worth while would be if this were a good poem, but i honestly have no idea, because i'm really low right now.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-6-04 - Published: 9-6-0433. The Artist Tortured Eternal reviewsi really like this one too. i don't know why, the language just kind of wanders and flows around the main point...that the stupidity of others creates most great art. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-5-04 - Published: 9-5-0434. My love's unceasing, such unknowablei really like this poem, mainly because of how true it is. i think i captured my mood perfectly. tell me what you think and if it struck you emotionally (i hope it did)General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-5-04 - Published: 9-5-0435. One is Beautiful reviewsA poem i wrote while sitting in an airport observing the people i saw. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-4-04 - Published: 9-4-0436. He Puts His Head Down on God and Goes to Sleep » reviewsan updated chapter 4 of my latest story. the beginnings pretty intense. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 16,572 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 9-4-04 - Published: 8-9-0437. Chaosthis is disturbingly autobiographical. except for the last two words. and it happened recently. is happening now i suppose. please read.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,136 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-1-04 - Published: 9-1-0438. I Tremble reviewsi am freaking out. i'm literally trembling.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-1-04 - Published: 9-1-0439. Of Dreamless reviewsmy first poem in a while, but i like it. the language is...lavish? whatever, just read it and tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-31-04 - Published: 8-31-0440. Hail to the Thief reviewsmy first political piece! it started out as more of a sad observation piece, but i just got angrier and angrier. all americans should read this.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-5-04 - Published: 8-5-0441. Secrets reviewsit's about someone looking for love or someone/something to love in various places and beliefs and not being able to find itGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-4-04 - Published: 8-4-0442. Your Smoothness Skin reviewsmy best love poem to date i think, although i don't even know if i'm in love, it is about someone specific.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-3-04 - Published: 8-3-0443. Immemorialanother experimental piece where i open a book, take the first word i see, and write a poem about it, or out of it i guess. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-3-04 - Published: 8-3-0444. Followers reviewshaving a little fun by myself. i opened a book and the first word i saw was 'followers', so i wrote a poem from everything that stemmed from that word and this is what i came up with.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-2-04 - Published: 8-2-0445. In Death's Warm Acceptance reviewswoah, it's pretty heavy. tell me what you think. i have no idea if this is any good.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-1-04 - Published: 8-1-0446. Drops of Ink reviewssemi autobiographical poem that i don't really like...i feel like it's missing something stylistically. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-31-04 - Published: 7-31-0447. Your kiss, a cancer reviewsi really like this. of course i literally just finished it. but i still really like it. please tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-30-04 - Published: 7-30-0448. Bear down upon my shoulders reviewsand now for something completely different...tell me if it works.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-30-04 - Published: 7-30-0449. I can a kiss reviewscan anyone say ee cummings? read it and tell me if this works. i like it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-30-04 - Published: 7-30-0450. Across the Crowded Room reviewsThere's actually symbolism in this. woah. anyway, read it and tell me what you think. it's not hard to read and it's pretty short. thanks.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-29-04 - Published: 7-29-0451. Her Emptiness reviewsthe capitals are not a typo. this is kind of a new style...tell me if it works and if you like it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-0452. So Much Youngerstrange that i'm only 17. i'm not really happy with the title, but i like the poem. it's about love i suppose. and hate. who knows? tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-7-04 - Published: 7-7-0453. You Shared a Pillow reviewsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0454. With Your Softest TouchGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0455. Speak to Me reviewsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0456. Ivory Clouds reviewsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0457. Blue Summer SkyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0458. The Flapping of the CurtainGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0459. The Chirping of the Crickets reviewsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0460. It was Summer, Pt 2i've been away for 2 weeks and i'm posting the poetry i wrote while i was gone so i'm not going to do a summary for all of them, but i recommend you do read at least one.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-4-04 - Published: 7-4-0461. It Was Summer reviewsi haven't been reviewed in a while, and i kind of want to know what people think of this. it's completely free verse and for the most part true.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-18-04 - Published: 6-18-0462. I'll Be Here If You Need Methis is not sappy. don't be fooled. you've been warned.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-15-04 - Published: 6-15-0463. This Love Thing reviewspart of me feels this poem should be a bob dylan song. please read it and tell me what you think. it's kind of a new style for me and i want to know if it works. thanks.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-13-04 - Published: 6-13-0464. Solemnitythis is stupid, but true i guess. like a shel silverstein poem for adults. or like the bob dylan song visions of johanna - "little boy lost, he takes himself so seriouly".General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-13-04 - Published: 6-13-0465. Invention No 2 reviewsummmmm, i kind of like this. i feel like it should be sung. maybe by michael stipe or someone along those lines.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-7-04 - Published: 6-7-0466. Deep Silent Eyes reviewsblah blah blah, whatever. just read it if you want to know what it's about.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-6-04 - Published: 6-6-0467. Two Strangers reviewsthis is my first story that i've posted. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE read it. i really want to know what people think of it.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,084 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-6-04 - Published: 6-6-0468. In the Heat of the Night reviewsthis is stupid, but i haven't posted in a while.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-5-04 - Published: 6-5-0469. Remains of the Day reviews? i don't really know what it means, but it's short so you might as well read it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-23-04 - Published: 5-23-0470. To be the Eyes of God reviewsthis poem is rather simple and utterly depressing. please read it, and tell me what you think, even if you hate it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-17-04 - Published: 5-17-0471. Umbra reviewsi use a thunderstorm as a medium to say something else. read it and tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-15-04 - Published: 5-15-0472. The Four Seasons reviewsis this cliche? please read it. i haven't been reviewed in a while and it's shortGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-12-04 - Published: 5-12-0473. Mutual Despair reviewsi really really like this poem. and i usually hate everything i write. the only part i don't like is the title. please read it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-04 - Published: 5-9-0474. Untitled Rhymethis was sort of fun to write. don't know if it means anything or if it detracts from itself. it's short and i think you'll like it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-8-04 - Published: 5-8-0475. Of a Disapproving God reviewsis this good? i have no idea.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-1-04 - Published: 5-1-0476. Contradicion Cantabile reviewsnot happy with this title either, but i like that poemGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-04 - Published: 4-25-0477. Proverbial Discordancei really like the last stanza. any thoughts on a title? i don't like that one i have. tell me what you thinkGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-25-04 - Published: 4-25-0478. Piece de Existence reviewsthis is a combination of past poems that i've written and posted on this site and realized were pretty bad and self indulgent, so i did a little editing. tell me if this works or if it just sounds choppy.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-18-04 - Published: 4-18-0479. Invention No 1 reviewscould someone please tell me what the hell this is and what it means. i wrote it but i honestly would be completely open to interpretation because i have no ideaGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-14-04 - Published: 4-14-0480. Sinless reviewsanother one that rhymes. it's about being in love. i like it, even though most of my poetry is dark and such. not happy with the titleGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-11-04 - Published: 4-11-0481. River Flowing reviewsit rhymes. i like it. i don't really know what it means to me yet. feel free to explain what it means to you, i'd be interested.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-10-04 - Published: 4-10-0482. Split In Two reviewsabout being divided within yourself and not knowing which way to go. inspired in latin class from reading the aeneid. not sure if i'm happy with itGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-7-04 - Published: 4-7-0483. Emptiness reviewsempty empty empty empty empty. that is me.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-2-04 - Published: 4-2-0484. The Loneliness of a Crowded House reviewsinspired by carson mccullers. i don't know if i believe it or not, but here it is.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-28-04 - Published: 3-28-0485. To a Child reviewsthe poem's pretty self explanatory.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-21-04 - Published: 3-21-0486. The Wanderer reviewsthis is the longest poem i've ever written, but it somewhat culminates much of my previous work. please take the time to read it, it goes pretty quickly. and if you start it, just promise you'll get to the end. and i'm not happy with the title.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 785 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-17-04 - Published: 3-17-0487. To Anyone, Everyone, and MyselfI don't even know what the hell i was writing here. This is the culmination and manifestation of an incredibly bad mood. Please read it and tell me what you think. If anything you'll at least think i'm insane.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-13-04 - Published: 3-13-0488. Something About You reviewsmy first love poem. it makes me sick how cliche i've become, but nontheless i wrote this and i do mean it to whomever it's written to. please tell me what you think and if it's any good at all, since this is my first and i'm open to suggestionLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-9-04 - Published: 3-9-0489. Love reviewsthis isn't really at all about love, but really about my playing with the english language and punctuation. but it's not all that bad, and it's short. tell me what you think. does it make any sense?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-5-04 - Published: 3-5-0490. Dear Somebody, reviewsi have no idea if this is good or not. please tell me because this could just be my own personal rant that no one else wants to hearGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-5-04 - Published: 3-5-0491. Deceived reviewsit's kind of dark even though it rhymes. sort of a new style for me, but i like it. please tell me what you think. i haven't been reviewed in a while and have an irrational need to hear other people's opinionsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-2-04 - Published: 3-2-0492. Time Bends to the Tune reviewsthis started out as a poem about a guitarist i recently heard at a concert, and this is where it went. please tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-0493. Nothingness Aboundsdon't let the title fool you. it's not all that depressing. it's short. please tell me what you thinkGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-20-04 - Published: 2-20-0494. Upon Destiny's Doorstepi guess it's kind of dark, but i think it's alright. free will's better than nothingGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-20-04 - Published: 2-20-0495. Bitter Bitter Bitter reviewsit's really experimental. tell me if it works or if you can even understand it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-11-04 - Published: 2-11-0496. Untitled reviewsI think it's self explanatory, and i couldn't think of a good title. please read it and tell me what you thinkGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-11-04 - Published: 2-11-0497. As of Yet Untitled reviewsi'm not looking for a title. that is the title. it's short. please read it and tell me what you thinkGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-9-04 - Published: 2-9-0498. I Sing reviewsit's sort of whitman-esque. i like it. please tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-3-04 - Published: 2-3-0499. How Lovely reviewshow existential. it's short, please read it and tell me what you thinkGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-2-04 - Published: 2-2-04100. Recoiled From the World reviewsi dunno. it's pretty short, so it doesn't really need a summary. i like the ending. please tell me what you thinkLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-1-04 - Published: 2-1-04101. I Looked to You For Inspiration reviewsI'm sort of writing to myself and nature at the same time. tell me what you think. does it work?General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-28-04 - Published: 1-28-04102. In the broadest of Light reviewsi need to stop writing about myself. it's short, please read itGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-27-04 - Published: 1-27-04103. Upon Discovering Myselfover inflated self indulgent crap. it's kind of dark too. read it and review if you want, for some reason i still find pleasure in the opinion of othersLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-27-04 - Published: 1-27-04104. In the Randomness of Myself reviewsi don't really like it, but then again i don't like most of my poetry. please read it and tell me what you think.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-26-04 - Published: 1-26-04105. As Darkness Falls reviewsi don't really like it, but what the hell. tell me what you think.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-26-04 - Published: 1-26-04106. While Walking to the Bathroom reviewshahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. it's so stupid. i love it.Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 1-23-04 - Published: 1-23-04107. That Would Be Enough reviewsanother short one that i'm not really happy with. i feel like there's one little thing missing from it. any advice?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-23-04 - Published: 1-23-04108. Time Transcends Me reviewsIt's really short. please read it. no explanation is really neededGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-21-04 - Published: 1-21-04109. Upon the Threshold of the Absence of Light reviewsthis is the first poem i've written in a while. i was really inspired. about going for a walk in the snow and so much more. pretty much true with a few exceptionsLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 313 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-19-04 - Published: 1-19-04110. Freedom Unto Your Own reviewshad to write it for class, so i had to mimick olde tyme style. my teacher said it sounded like frederick douglass which is coolGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 810 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03111. Writer's Blocka little exaggerated maybe, but i'm still sort of working on itGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03112. snow reviewsthis is really badNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03113. the runner approaching the final hilli swear i'm not schizofrenicGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03114. First Frost reviewsfirst frostNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 280 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03115. The Heavens reviewsthe heavensLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-6-03 - Published: 12-6-03
