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since: 12-21-03, id: 389105, Profile Updated: 03-29-08
country: USA
Author has written 20 stories for Life, Haiku, Romance, General, Love, Friendship, Song, War, Play, and Biography.

My name is Val and I am ecclectic. I like to write. When I have an idea, I usually don't forget it. I get so escited about writing, but I don't know if I've ever finished a story. I'd like to finish a story. Maybe it's just my aversion to conclusions.

I like lots of feedback so I know what works and what doesn't. I'm not going to beg for reviews, but I accept criticism-positive or negative.

I'm also registered as a beta reader, if you need a beta. My remarks are generally blunt and to the point-frank if you'd like to say. I will admit that I cannot spell to save my life, but I make up for that in grammar and dialog.

The links below are completed works of fiction that I admire. Hopefully, the links still work. I really need to clean out my favorite story list and put the ones that aren't in progress here. Oh well. Enjoy. :)

Picture Perfect

To Save a Kingdom

Crazy for Love

Not Irish

Theory-sequal to Not Irish


1. Lessons on Comradeship reviews
Written several years ago for the school literary magazine. One of the favorite ones I have written.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-26-08 - Complete
2. Home » reviews
"What the hell?" I was holding my breath and still leaning over him. He shook his head as if trying to clear it and then fell back against the pavement. M/M
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,992 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 7-25-08 - Published: 3-28-08
3. Divine Wind reviews
for Chris Tizon
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-30-08 - Complete
4. Caligula reviews
What can be said to do justice to a man such as Caligula?
Fiction: Biography - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,428 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-28-08 - Complete
5. Manor reviews
John Morrison has no idea just what he's gotten himself into now...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-25-07
6. Bologna reviews
This is just a short funny skit that my Bible teacher gave me the idea for. I wrote it for a comedy night at my school, hosted by the Bible Classes. Enjoy.
Fiction: Play - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 404 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11-29-06 - Complete
7. The Band » reviews
"Where have you been?" Mike snapped when I walked onto the stage. "Making a phone call. The police are coming." "Why are the police coming?" "Bryce stole my keys and drove away in the bus. CURRENTLY REVISING CHAPTER 9
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 52,315 - Reviews: 115 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 12-8-04
8. Shadow of a Sigh reviews
He's managed to disappoint me...again
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-20-05
9. River » reviews
Medieval times gangster girl young soldier out to get her T-R-O-U-B-L-E Every author's plead- read and review, thanks but i am terrible at simaries, lol
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 21 - Words: 14,903 - Reviews: 70 - Updated: 12-11-04 - Published: 12-28-03
10. Plague reviews
A Plague
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-12-04
11. Corrosion reviews
turned to dust and eaten away at
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-5-04
12. Red » reviews
This is a collection of poetry, illustrating the raibow
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 4 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-5-04 - Published: 3-10-04
13. Killing Us reviews
We're killing each other in our own darkness
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-4-04
14. Moment Gone Still reviews
The world has ended and knives are twisting in my back
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-4-04
15. Death on the Wind reviews
sadness...people died...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-10-04
16. Knots reviews
Fear of the world, fear of whatever is outside the cell you've been locked in...how lame does that sound? Oh well, it just involves a lot of fear, okay?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-28-04
17. Contrasts » reviews
Darkness...your worst enemy...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-30-03
18. sky is cut in two reviews
Nature is uncontrolable
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-25-03
19. my head is in the clouds reviews
i'm not here with you right now...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-25-03
20. Me 'n' You reviews
This happens to everyone...friends draw apart and their feelings toward one another change.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-23-03