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Author has written 20 stories for Life, Haiku, Romance, General, Love, Friendship, Song, War, Play, and Biography. My name is Val and I am ecclectic. I like to write. When I have an idea, I usually don't forget it. I get so escited about writing, but I don't know if I've ever finished a story. I'd like to finish a story. Maybe it's just my aversion to conclusions. I like lots of feedback so I know what works and what doesn't. I'm not going to beg for reviews, but I accept criticism-positive or negative. I'm also registered as a beta reader, if you need a beta. My remarks are generally blunt and to the point-frank if you'd like to say. I will admit that I cannot spell to save my life, but I make up for that in grammar and dialog. The links below are completed works of fiction that I admire. Hopefully, the links still work. I really need to clean out my favorite story list and put the ones that aren't in progress here. Oh well. Enjoy. :) | |||||||||
1. Lessons on Comradeship reviewsWritten several years ago for the school literary magazine. One of the favorite ones I have written.Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-26-08 - Complete2. Home » reviews"What the hell?" I was holding my breath and still leaning over him. He shook his head as if trying to clear it and then fell back against the pavement. M/MFiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,992 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 7-25-08 - Published: 3-28-083. Divine Wind reviewsfor Chris TizonPoetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-30-08 - Complete4. Caligula reviewsWhat can be said to do justice to a man such as Caligula?Fiction: Biography - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,428 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-28-08 - Complete5. Manor reviewsJohn Morrison has no idea just what he's gotten himself into now...Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-25-076. Bologna reviewsThis is just a short funny skit that my Bible teacher gave me the idea for. I wrote it for a comedy night at my school, hosted by the Bible Classes. Enjoy.Fiction: Play - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 404 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11-29-06 - Complete7. The Band » reviews"Where have you been?" Mike snapped when I walked onto the stage. "Making a phone call. The police are coming." "Why are the police coming?" "Bryce stole my keys and drove away in the bus. CURRENTLY REVISING CHAPTER 9Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 52,315 - Reviews: 115 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 12-8-048. Shadow of a Sigh reviewsHe's managed to disappoint me...againPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-20-059. River » reviewsMedieval times gangster girl young soldier out to get her T-R-O-U-B-L-E Every author's plead- read and review, thanks but i am terrible at simaries, lolFiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 21 - Words: 14,903 - Reviews: 70 - Updated: 12-11-04 - Published: 12-28-0310. Plague reviewsA PlaguePoetry: War - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-12-0411. Corrosion reviewsturned to dust and eaten away atPoetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-5-0412. Red » reviewsThis is a collection of poetry, illustrating the raibowPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 4 - Words: 257 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-5-04 - Published: 3-10-0413. Killing Us reviewsWe're killing each other in our own darknessPoetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-4-0414. Moment Gone Still reviewsThe world has ended and knives are twisting in my backPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-4-0415. Death on the Wind reviewssadness...people died...Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-10-0416. Knots reviewsFear of the world, fear of whatever is outside the cell you've been locked in...how lame does that sound? Oh well, it just involves a lot of fear, okay?Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-28-0417. Contrasts » reviewsDarkness...your worst enemy...Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-30-0318. sky is cut in two reviewsNature is uncontrolablePoetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-25-0319. my head is in the clouds reviewsi'm not here with you right now...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-25-0320. Me 'n' You reviewsThis happens to everyone...friends draw apart and their feelings toward one another change.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-23-03