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since: 01-09-04, id: 392042, Profile edited: 05-16-08
Author has written 52 stories for Supernatural, Young Adult, Friendship, Nature, Fable, Biography, Sci-Fi, Life, Humor, Humor, Mythology, War, Religion, Fantasy, Horror, General, Mystery, Spiritual, Love, and Fantasy.

The first novel I published here, to many praises and kind comments, was "Halloween Romance". It received a whopping 171 reviews and 44 favorites. I am flattered and pleased. However, I had to delete it, because.. I GOT A PUBLISHING DEAL! (So it can't be free any more.)

After three and a half years of trying, I have landed a contract with Eternal Press. Right now they're only doing eBooks, but pretty soon they'll start doing POD, and they're thinking of slapping Halloween Romance and Bite Me together as one book. If they accept it, that will disappear from the site as well. It'll be some months before they're commercially available, but the eBook version will be all nicely polished with a cover and everything, and cost only 5. I have never asked anyone to pay me for my novels before, but I'm asking you to do so then. Only five bucks. I get 35 percent royalty of eBook, 8.5 percent of print book (which might cost 10). They want to see the rest of the Laconia series (all my current novels), so they will start vanishing from here, "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind" style.

They didn't ask how old I was and they didn't state an age minimum. Now I tell them how old I am, and it turns out Eternal Press' publishing of adult material means that someone my age can't work for them. In October 2008 I can resubmit. The editor who was going to edit me is still going to edit me, so the book will be all polished and ready and we don't waste any time.

I can't put "I Come to You Defenses Down" up here, because it's a script, but it recently won an Honorable Mention in Arena Stage's Young Playwright's High School 10-minute Play Contest. Anyone who wants me to send them the file can message me.

For new people, here is a list of the Laconia stories in order, along with which characters they are principally about.

1. Halloween Romance (deleted) - Ferdinand and Selene

2. Bite Me - Ferdinand, Selene, Dianne, Nat, and Matthew

3. Waking Echoes - Taylor and Derrick (in his previous life, when he was known as Riq)

4. Humans and Demons and Elves, Oh My! - Edofine, Lira, Kryvek (Edofine's cousin), and Krith

5. Dad and I Are Sort of Human - Dianne, Ferdinand, Nat, Edofine, and Lira

6. The Raw Ghosts of Thailand - Ferdinand, Nat, Taylor, Rivki (born), and Sally (minor but first introduced here)

7. The Fantasy Coup - Everybody previously mentioned, as well as new children Amaranth and Opal Jangoral, Sandi (daughter of Dianne), and Puffin (adopted son of Edofine).

8. Puffin: Private Elf Investigator - Puffin, Sandi, Ladamus, and Whyllit.

9. The Enigma Person (in-progress because it's a collaboration and my partner has a lot of stuff going on) - Charity, Puffin, Sandi, Taran, and Kris.

10. Where is Derrick Jangoral? - The Jangoral family, Nat, Jai Narai

11. Awfully Square for a Vampire - Rivki, Ferdinand, Val, Sally, Nat, Krith

12. I Come, Greymalkin (Will begin sometime this summer; will be the last of the series proper. I am considering writing a book about Pisces Jangoral to raise money for saving the environment and the oceans in particular. But first I want to do something TOTALLY different but hopefully just as awesome.) - You'll just have to find out who is going to be in it. Some are going to die.

Oh, and vote in my polls, please!




1. Awfully Square for a Vampire » reviews
I'm forty eight but look sixteen, am HIV positive, work as a tour guide for my magic intensive hometown, and am very active in my church. I'm coming of age when I'm not completely alive. The eleventh book in a series - you can read it alone but beware.
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 22,715 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 4-28-08 - Published: 3-6-07
2. Your Deadly Sin reviews
Most people can relate to seeing someone they love follow an increasingly self-destructive course. This poem is dedicated both to the fallers and to those who try to catch them.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-18-08 - Published: 3-18-08
3. On Charges of DWA
The bouncer's having a rough night. In tribute to some of the most darling quirky people I've known.
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 316 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-13-08 - Published: 3-13-08
4. The Place Where the Socks Go reviews
Have you ever wondered where the other sock goes? The people of Monsoon want to know where these odd objects are coming from.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-23-08 - Published: 1-23-08
5. The Rabid Italic Squirrels reviews
A satire about interviewing a deathmetal band. I'm an Alternative Rock gal.
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-23-08 - Published: 1-23-08
6. A Poem About Hating Poetry reviews
This was written for a Creative Writing exam, and I like how it turned out.
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-23-08 - Published: 1-23-08
7. The Unselfish Alchemists reviews
The Jangoral family, chronicled in many other stories and books, have always done great things for both human and animal kind. Will Helena and her daughters surpass their forebears?
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 462 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-23-08 - Published: 1-23-08
8. My Life as an Octopus reviews
Humans have known for quite a while now that octopi are the most intelligent of invertebrates. One scientist, a Nobel Prize winner, wanted to know how much. He says I've surpassed his wildest dreams. This may or may not continue.
Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-23-08 - Published: 1-23-08
9. Where is Derrick Jangoral? » reviews
Of the Jangorals, Opal can control snakes, Amaranth can control birds, and Taylor is psychic. Derrick is the most powerful, so how and why did he get kidnapped? Joining their hunt are a friendly vampire, Nat, and a creature from Thai myth, Jai Narai.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 26,096 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 1-6-08 - Published: 8-8-07
10. The Unceremonious Dunking of Pisces Jangoral reviews
Derrick Jangoral chronicled in story and song for his animalcharming ways, but as the generations go on, the inherited powers become more and more specific. His grandson can only control fish, plus a few secondary talents. What good is that?
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,649 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-1-08 - Published: 1-1-08
11. The Enigma Person » reviews
This Elf can no longer live among her people, because her overcharged empathetic power causes the other Elves too much psychic pain. She joins the human world and meets Kristophe, who needs her help. Fortunately, her new mother is a detective.
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 15 - Words: 28,564 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 12-23-07 - Published: 6-13-07
12. The Homeless Lady reviews
A homeless person's home might just be somewhere else. And a lady to you might be a Lady to someone else. Inspired by a dream, and a commentary on stereotypes.
Complete - Fable - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,001 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-23-07 - Published: 9-23-07
13. Summer Unlove reviews
The demigod of summer spends the other three seasons selecting someone to steal when school gets out. But he's met his match with this gutsy girl.
Complete - Mythology - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,962 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-07 - Published: 7-22-07
14. Mr Narai reviews
He wanted a Thai tutor, and he wanted to meet Thai supernatural beings. Little did he know that this sweet little professor was both. Inspired by my halfThai heritage.
Complete - Mythology - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,097 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-12-07 - Published: 7-12-07
15. Wants and Fears reviews
Taylor and Derrick are psychic only with each other. Taylor has terrible nightmares every night as a result of psychological problems but the worst nightmares are the ones that pretend to be dreams.
Complete - Fable - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 811 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-11-07 - Published: 7-11-07
16. The Nerd Romances » reviews
Yes, you can kiss while wearing glasses. Also, the science fiction section of a bookstore is a fine place to put an arm around your sweetie. Gaming stores are as good a place as any for romantic drama. Click to learn more!
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 672 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07
17. Never Doubt Again reviews
A plea to my best friend, who has terrible selfesteem along with emotional and mental problems. She needs a psychiatrist and everything.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 382 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07
18. Send the Guardians reviews
A prayer for some people I love. You may know others like them.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07
19. Summer's Time
A celebration.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07
20. Stray Friend reviews
A poem about love, forgiveness, and acceptance.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07
21. Songs of Friendship »
Celebrating, honoring, uplifting, and just in general writing about my friends.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 1,240 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07
22. Puffin: Private Elf Investigator » reviews
Puffin's opera opens in Baltimore, but he wants to fight crime, too. His new wife, Sandi, is a forensic pathologist and parttime wolf. The first Elf professor at John Hopkins is dead. Could a medical discovery and something like the KKK be involved?
Complete - Mystery - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 26,521 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 5-11-07 - Published: 1-21-07
23. It Must Be Fulfilled reviews
They were religious young people, and both had seven hours left to live. Esther suddenly was able to travel anywhere instantly, and brought Martin along.
Complete - Spiritual - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,099 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-8-07 - Published: 4-8-07
24. Possible Side Effects of Medication reviews
A short little tale, appropriate for repeating during a sleepover, a campout, or Halloween party. Inspired by spring allergies. Kind of gruesome in a nonviolent way.
Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 313 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-1-07 - Published: 4-1-07
25. The Caramel Factor reviews
This actually is more magical realism than fantasy. It looks like it's just a woman making cookies with Skittles and daydreaming, but it's actually a meditation on how real dreams are, and how we can learn from them. Inspired by a true story.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,165 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-14-07 - Published: 2-14-07
26. The Fantasy Coup » reviews
Three families, the Jangorals, the AnghelSpirallis, and the Fletchers are trying to raise their not quite human children as best they can. But when the humans are flooded by Elf refugees, politics mixes with magic, and life becomes more perilous.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 32,951 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 1-19-07 - Published: 12-4-06
27. The Raw Ghosts of Thailand » reviews
The Thai word for vampire means raw ghost. Ferdinand is feeling pretty raw right now on his vacation with his friend and psychiatrist, who is hiding something. Also, someone thinks vamps are the cure to AIDS, and is looking for them.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 12 - Words: 23,989 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 12-1-06 - Published: 11-4-06
28. REM On the Way to the Opera reviews
My first night at the opera, when I was sixteen.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-12-06 - Published: 11-12-06
29. Death to Pets R Us reviews
The owner of our favorite magical pet store hates, hates, HATES chain stores. So he takes some measures when one opens in his hometown, and it's quite a sight.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,274 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-8-06 - Published: 11-8-06
30. In Each Other's Heads reviews
What's a man who remembers a previous life in another world and can talk to animals and has a fiancee thousands of miles away to DO?
Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,017 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-5-06 - Published: 11-5-06
31. The Bipolar Blues » reviews
Bipolar disorder, also called manic depression - here's how it feels from the inside.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 35 - Words: 7,071 - Reviews: 38 - Updated: 11-4-06 - Published: 11-18-05
32. Dad and I Are Sort of Human » reviews
Dianne Anghel tries being a superhero for money to go to grad school, despite a gang out to capture her, a clinically depressed vampire for a father, and confusion about where her life is leading.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 16 - Words: 39,627 - Reviews: 47 - Updated: 11-4-06 - Published: 8-26-06
33. Anxiously Engaged In a Good Cause reviews
Derrick Jangoral, star of many tales as a person who can control animals, student, missionary, and Mormon Bohemian, is getting married! Taylor Calvin is possibly the only girl as oddly talented as he is. More a sliceoflife than actual plot.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,957 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-26-06 - Published: 10-26-06
34. Working Girl, Working Girl
Comparing myself to bees and spiders - all working hard.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-06
35. Humans and Demons and Elves, Oh My! » reviews
Three humans, two Elves, one Archaedemon, and one halfElf halfEudemon, all friends in one apartment building.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 17 - Words: 41,114 - Reviews: 41 - Updated: 8-18-06 - Published: 6-7-06
36. Dressing Up as Human reviews
Our favorite goodguy vampires celebrate Halloween.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,871 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-7-06 - Published: 8-7-06
37. The Temple Voices reviews
A celebration of proxy baptism for the dead (a Mormon ordinance).
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 356 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-28-06 - Published: 6-28-06
38. The WheelChild reviews
The demon priestess is doomed to forever be her own parents unless the missionary can save her.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,757 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-28-06 - Published: 6-28-06
39. Waking Echoes » reviews
Taylor Calvin, dedicated student, feels like the world will end if she messes up on her next test. Perhaps this is because, as Tylianvornika, she messed up on a test and the world DID end. But she doesn't remember this, at least until now...
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 20 - Words: 51,495 - Reviews: 65 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 11-20-05
40. Bite Me » reviews
Dianne Anghel known by friends for imagination and gallows humor. Known by enemies as a geek with a creepy family. She herself thinks that having vampire and werewolf parents is pretty unique, especially with several new complications.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 16 - Words: 38,527 - Reviews: 142 - Updated: 4-10-06 - Published: 5-19-05
41. The Vampire Veteran reviews
A vampire tells his story of fighting in the Vietnam War.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,868 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-25-06 - Published: 3-25-06
42. Intellectualism for Dullards reviews
Derrick Jangoral knew Laconia College would be a new experience, but he didn't expect a mystical obstacle course and a quest for selfknowledge just to get to class.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,945 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-11-06 - Published: 2-11-06
43. Junglelaughter's Pet Pavillion reviews
A pet store of a different kind.
Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,133 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-12-06 - Published: 1-12-06
44. Lost to Time and Distance » reviews
A series of poems in non-chronological order. It's great living in lots of places, but one loses too many friends along the way.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 764 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-18-05 - Published: 7-13-05
45. Words of Faith » reviews
A collection of religious verse, much of it connected to Latter-Day-Saint (Mormon) beliefs, and all centered on Christ.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 7 - Words: 2,021 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-18-05 - Published: 7-18-05
46. Two Girls reviews
The worst of it was that they would have been friends.
War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-8-05 - Published: 3-8-05
47. Contrasts reviews
A sort of antidote to some of the angsty works on this site some of which I've contributed myself. My thougts upon awakening after a teary night to a beautiful morning.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-8-04 - Published: 10-8-04
48. Nationality Identity reviews
We've all had an identity problem sometime in our lives, though for an expatriate, such problems are aggravated. This is my attempt to try to decide what is my home country, and explain my situation and why I'm having such a hard time figuring this out.
Biography - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,384 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-30-04 - Published: 4-30-04
49. Insect Femme Fatale reviews
Once upon a time, I had to write a fable involving a trickster character and a moral for English class. A mixture of The Far Side and Monty Python influenced me in this, and the teacher ended up highly amused. Mild PG, rated for mantis cannibalism.
Fable - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 626 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 3-25-04 - Published: 3-25-04
50. Swim with the Stars reviews
My science class is currently doing astronomy, and I wrote this as an extra credit assignment. The teacher liked it so much that I decided to post it. Free verse. Opinions are appreciated.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,199 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-21-04 - Published: 2-21-04
51. In Memory of You reviews
A poem of gratitude, written originally for my friends, but extending to my wonderful parents and many others as well.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,237 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-20-04 - Published: 2-20-04
52. We Need to Talk reviews
During a period of time when I was seeing my counselor a great deal, I wrote this and read it to her, trying to express my feelings at the time. She said that others might find it meaningful. Please review and tell me if she was right.
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 680 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-3-04 - Published: 2-3-04
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