| Jezsh |
Author has written 73 stories for Life, Love, Friendship, Humor, General, General, Fantasy, Romance, and Young Adult. I am aware this sounds slightly aggressive but: I want my poetry to be judged - not me. Criticise my poetry, tell me how to make it sound better. But do not criticise me. I am not here to be judged as a person. I only want to be judged as a poet. I am not here to become a better person, just a better writer. I'll do the rest in everyday life. I don't know what my style is and I don't know who I am sometimes. But I'll get there in the end. Visit my blog One More Little Line for a new daily poem
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1. Paula reviews...Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,530 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-9-10 - Complete2. Dancing reviewsthis silver liningPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-25-08 - Complete3. Hitchike reviewstravel through it.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-23-07 - Complete4. Thaw reviewsolder piece.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-6-07 - Complete5. Breathe, breathe reviewssteam of wordsPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-11-07 - Complete6. Blackcurrant reviewsYou move on in some ways, but some things are set in stone.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-12-07 - Complete7. Oil reviewsAll encompassing.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-30-07 - Complete8. Purge reviewsI haven't time.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-12-06 - Complete9. More reviewsFairly old. I was always unsure about it. You decide.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-12-06 - Complete10. Two AM reviewsThe pain of loss is not great enough for regretPolite critiques would be wonderful on this one, firstly because it's my first piece in a while and secondly because I'd like to give it to someone hence if you know me, do not read it please.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-5-06 - Complete11. Burst reviewsour space is anything but emptyPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-19-0612. Outside reviewsI guess fear just makes me think of spring. Another for someone who may never see it.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-23-0613. Headphones reviewsstart broadcasting out; begin to hearPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-6-0614. Little Poems » reviewsa collection of smaller tidbits and odd ends of poetryPoetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 7 - Words: 353 - Reviews: 25 - Published: 7-17-0615. Diamonds and Plastic reviewspulse pulse pulsePoetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 29 - Published: 6-12-0616. Modern Art » reviewsOne-shot. A girl replays a doomed relationship. Contains themes of self harm, sex and suicide (the three s's)Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,036 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 6-6-0617. Hard Candy reviewsbroken bottles shattered on railings after long nights on pub crawls (very red).Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 5-31-0618. City Rain reviewsI am your product. You just say I'm perfect.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 5-27-0619. Tattoo reviewsOk so it's a bit cheesy but sometimes there is a limit to writing, tried to express that. And anyway it's a nice break from being bleak and cynical :)Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-21-0620. Tankas » reviews5-7-5-7-7 no title (an unrelated collection)Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 5-16-06 - Published: 1-29-0621. Snakeskin reviewsvetch: an english wildflower. Who knows.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-9-0622. Athena reviewsbroken-glass beautifulPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 4-27-0623. Cling reviewscan't decide how much I like it, but it's been hanging around long enough that I should let someone else decide.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-19-0624. s c r e a m reviewsoh yeahPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 4-19-0625. Ultraordinary reviewsFake words and forged opinions are tedious.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-9-0626. Apocalocyntosis reviews: the act of being turned into a pumpkin. Aha, magic.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-5-0627. New Day reviewsLabel me.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-2-0628. Everyday Reincarnation reviewsWhite light before you can arise, blink, open your eyes on mePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 3-13-0629. Summer's End reviewsIt's the most beautiful things that break us. Tweaked repost from a long time ago.Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 779 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-12-0630. Fading Glitter reviewslove and age. Man, I wish I was Shakespeare.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 3-12-0631. Stand to fall apart reviewswhat next? (somehow she reminds me of me, not in actions but thought processes) I almost want to write a sequel.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,423 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-12-0632. This is called Determinism » reviewsEverybody who'd ever seen him naked fell head-over-heels in love with his hipbones.Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,293 - Reviews: 28 - Published: 3-2-0633. Ever After reviewsI forgave him.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2-23-0634. Shampoo Promises reviewstherapeutic...I won't like it in a week but it sums up how bitter but determined I feel just now.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 2-11-0635. Finger Music reviewsWell, pretty much all of us do it right? Light-hearted and simple.Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2-8-0636. Hematomancy reviewshematomancy: divination using blood (I can see the future)Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 1-31-0637. More Peter Rabbit reviewsSecret messages, eh? I've got this he said she said thing going on, and this is growing on me.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 1-29-0638. Choke reviewstake off the rose tinted glasses, though you'll still see her the same (and wished you could help.)Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 1-24-0639. helplessly Untitled reviewsit's true, sometimes you just cannot find the words. Had to get it out of my system, I wanted more emphasis but I'm sick of formatting.Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 1-18-0640. Because you broke Mine reviewsI hope he reads it...Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 1-13-0641. Snapshot reviewsfascinated with everything.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-7-0642. Touched reviewsI realised that in my desperation for you to live up to what I wanted...I made you more than what you are.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1-5-0643. His Misogyny reviewsI muse about a friend; this came out differently than I expected. Rather like we did. It must be said this is not a poem of heartbreak, more of that ache of not-knowing.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 1-3-0644. If You Can reviewsthis is like an insultPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 12-30-0545. Sunburn reviewssome people just make you live, don't they?Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 12-30-0546. Pray reviewsthis is hard to explain. All I can say is I feel like the weaker link in my relationship - I dream of other lives - but there is nobody I want more and nothing I want more. Just a little confused.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 12-27-0547. Payback? reviewsIt's how you know you're up and over them. Old piece.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-24-0548. kills curiosity reviewsI always was curious, and I always liked this one.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 12-24-0549. Could Have reviewsif I had, we'd have burned ourselves so spectacularly out. I tried to express the words as actions in writing if that mades sense...like exploding flowing out, and burst expanding, falling. Guess you'll have to read it to understand what I'm on about :)Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-22-0550. Hopscotch reviewsforced to grow up too fast, look how I've changed. Who'd have thought society would have that effect?Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 12-21-0551. Til Morning reviewsExtract from a larger story about the extraordinary in the ordinary. F-f sexual content but nothing explicit, I'd appreciate r r on this one and return reviews.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,213 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-21-0552. Lovebound reviewswritten a long time ago, guilt when feelings diePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-21-0553. Meat reviewsdeals with sexual abuse/harassment. I got more angry as I wrote this. Can be read with or without the brackets.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12-21-0554. Print reviewshe's got the right idea from the start, but I have to work my way through issues first. It'll work.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-17-0555. And if only I could run reviewsI'm getting desperate.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-6-0556. From High Places reviewspersonal, this is how it goes. Then I guess you can only go up again.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-30-0557. Because reviewsspiritual sensuality perhaps?Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-30-0558. Burned reviewsIt's old and I love itPoetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-30-0559. Stale reviewsthe best comedies are always tragic, everything might end?Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-30-0560. Cherry Pip reviewsI don't not like you anymore, I just have depression.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-30-0561. Honey reviewsSensual.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-31-0562. Disguise reviewsAbout someone I used to be friends with...but he made it extremely hard. (just to explain, a lot of the imagery is to do with the language/culture barrier)Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-0563. Dark Chocolate reviewsJust a musing about the nature of some things.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-3-0564. Blueprint reviewsHmmm...r r would be good on this one, I dont know if I like itPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-3-0565. Magic Tricks reviewsAlways remember it's me here, I'm here...Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-3-0566. Devoured reviewsAbout a friend of mine, sacrificing one thing for another...friendships for lovers. But everything's good for her, so she's lucky.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-0567. Spiral reviewsI know, I should have more faith. Depression versus care.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-0568. White Wine Suicide reviewssomething I feel good aboutPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-23-0569. Escape reviewsCute little thing. It rhymes!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-1-0470. Not Love reviewsCan you see the interesting way it rhymes?Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-25-0471. How not to Win, when the Odds are With you reviewsI dislike how my mind worksPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-9-0472. Glance reviewsThat look you gave me.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-9-0473. Enid's Ghost reviewsConnection to the film Ghost World...she has my dreams.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-31-04