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Author has written 71 stories for Life, Love, Friendship, Humor, General, General, Fantasy, Romance, and Young Adult. I am aware this sounds slightly aggressive but: I want my poetry to be judged - not me. Criticise my poetry, tell me how to make it sound better. But do not criticise me. I am not here to be judged as a person. I only want to be judged as a poet. I am not here to become a better person, just a better writer. I'll do the rest in everyday life. With that out of the way: I very much like: Carol Ann Duffy. Haruki Murakami. Alexander McCall Smith. Shakespeare. The Animals of Farthing Wood. Mighty Max. The X-Men. Comic Books. Old Sega games. Tragedy. Finding inspiration in others' work. Hard rock and heavy metal. Original fashion. Cats. Foreign films. Sunshine. Thunderstorms. Woodland. Nature documentaries. Enigmas. Space weather. Drawing in biro. I don't know what my style is and I don't know who I am sometimes. But I'll get there in the end. I try to return reviews. Because beautiful poetry isn't just going to find me on its own. Feel free to add me on Myspace if you'd like to chat. Enjoy the day. | |||||||||||
1. Dancing reviewsthis silver liningComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-25-08 - Published: 3-25-082. Hitchike reviewstravel through it.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-23-07 - Published: 5-23-073. Thaw reviewsolder piece.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-6-07 - Published: 5-6-074. Breathe, breathe reviewssteam of wordsComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-11-07 - Published: 3-11-075. Blackcurrant reviewsYou move on in some ways, but some things are set in stone.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-12-07 - Published: 2-12-076. Oil reviewsAll encompassing.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-30-07 - Published: 1-30-077. Purge reviewsI haven't time.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-12-06 - Published: 12-12-068. More reviewsFairly old. I was always unsure about it. You decide.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-12-06 - Published: 12-12-069. Two AM reviewsThe pain of loss is not great enough for regretPolite critiques would be wonderful on this one, firstly because it's my first piece in a while and secondly because I'd like to give it to someone hence if you know me, do not read it please.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-5-06 - Published: 12-5-0610. Burst reviewsour space is anything but emptyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 9-19-06 - Published: 9-19-0611. Outside reviewsI guess fear just makes me think of spring. Another for someone who may never see it.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-23-06 - Published: 8-23-0612. Headphones reviewsstart broadcasting out; begin to hearGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-6-06 - Published: 8-6-0613. Little Poems » reviewsa collection of smaller tidbits and odd ends of poetryGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 358 - Reviews: 25 - Updated: 7-17-06 - Published: 7-17-0614. Diamonds and Plastic reviewspulse pulse pulseLife - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 29 - Updated: 6-12-06 - Published: 6-12-0615. Modern Art » reviewsOne-shot. A girl replays a doomed relationship. Contains themes of self harm, sex and suicide (the three s's)Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 2,931 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 6-6-06 - Published: 6-6-0616. Hard Candy reviewsbroken bottles shattered on railings after long nights on pub crawls (very red).Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 5-31-0617. City Rain reviewsI am your product. You just say I'm perfect.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-27-06 - Published: 5-27-0618. Tattoo reviewsOk so it's a bit cheesy but sometimes there is a limit to writing, tried to express that. And anyway it's a nice break from being bleak and cynical :)Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-21-06 - Published: 5-21-0619. Tankas » reviews5-7-5-7-7 no title (an unrelated collection)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 5-16-06 - Published: 1-29-0620. Snakeskin reviewsvetch: an english wildflower. Who knows.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-9-06 - Published: 5-9-0621. Athena reviewsbroken-glass beautifulLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 4-27-06 - Published: 4-27-0622. Cling reviewscan't decide how much I like it, but it's been hanging around long enough that I should let someone else decide.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-19-06 - Published: 4-19-0623. s c r e a m reviewsoh yeahGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 4-19-06 - Published: 4-19-0624. Ultraordinary reviewsFake words and forged opinions are tedious.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-9-06 - Published: 4-9-0625. Apocalocyntosis reviews: the act of being turned into a pumpkin. Aha, magic.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 4-5-06 - Published: 4-5-0626. New Day reviewsLabel me.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 336 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 4-2-0627. Everyday Reincarnation reviewsWhite light before you can arise, blink, open your eyes on meLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 3-13-06 - Published: 3-13-0628. Summer's End reviewsIt's the most beautiful things that break us. Tweaked repost from a long time ago.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 769 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-0629. Fading Glitter reviewslove and age. Man, I wish I was Shakespeare.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-0630. Stand to fall apart reviewswhat next? (somehow she reminds me of me, not in actions but thought processes) I almost want to write a sequel.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,373 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-12-06 - Published: 3-12-0631. This is called Determinism » reviewsEverybody who’d ever seen him naked fell head-over-heels in love with his hipbones.Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,147 - Reviews: 28 - Updated: 3-2-06 - Published: 3-2-0632. Ever After reviewsI forgave him.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 2-23-06 - Published: 2-23-0633. Shampoo Promises reviewstherapeutic...I won't like it in a week but it sums up how bitter but determined I feel just now.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 2-11-06 - Published: 2-11-0634. Finger Music reviewsWell, pretty much all of us do it right? Light-hearted and simple.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 2-8-06 - Published: 2-8-0635. Hematomancy reviewshematomancy: divination using blood (I can see the future)Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 1-31-06 - Published: 1-31-0636. More Peter Rabbit reviewsSecret messages, eh? I've got this he said she said thing going on, and this is growing on me.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0637. Choke reviewstake off the rose tinted glasses, though you'll still see her the same (and wished you could help.)General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 1-24-06 - Published: 1-24-0638. helplessly Untitled reviewsit's true, sometimes you just cannot find the words. Had to get it out of my system, I wanted more emphasis but I'm sick of formatting.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 1-18-06 - Published: 1-18-0639. Because you broke Mine reviewsI hope he reads it...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-0640. Snapshot reviewsfascinated with everything.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-7-06 - Published: 1-7-0641. Touched reviewsI realised that in my desperation for you to live up to what I wanted...I made you more than what you are.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-5-06 - Published: 1-5-0642. His Misogyny reviewsI muse about a friend; this came out differently than I expected. Rather like we did. It must be said this is not a poem of heartbreak, more of that ache of not-knowing.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 1-3-06 - Published: 1-3-0643. If You Can reviewsthis is like an insultLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-0544. Sunburn reviewssome people just make you live, don't they?Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-0545. Pray reviewsthis is hard to explain. All I can say is I feel like the weaker link in my relationship - I dream of other lives - but there is nobody I want more and nothing I want more. Just a little confused.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 12-27-05 - Published: 12-27-0546. Payback? reviewsIt's how you know you're up and over them. Old piece.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-24-05 - Published: 12-24-0547. kills curiosity reviewsI always was curious, and I always liked this one.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 12-24-05 - Published: 12-24-0548. Could Have reviewsif I had, we'd have burned ourselves so spectacularly out. I tried to express the words as actions in writing if that mades sense...like exploding flowing out, and burst expanding, falling. Guess you'll have to read it to understand what I'm on about :)Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-22-05 - Published: 12-22-0549. Hopscotch reviewsforced to grow up too fast, look how I've changed. Who'd have thought society would have that effect?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-0550. Til Morning reviewsExtract from a larger story about the extraordinary in the ordinary. F-f sexual content but nothing explicit, I'd appreciate r+r on this one and return reviews.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,014 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-0551. Lovebound reviewswritten a long time ago, guilt when feelings dieLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-0552. Meat reviewsdeals with sexual abuse/harassment. I got more angry as I wrote this. Can be read with or without the brackets.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-0553. Print reviewshe's got the right idea from the start, but I have to work my way through issues first. It'll work.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0554. And if only I could run reviewsI'm getting desperate.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-6-05 - Published: 12-6-0555. From High Places reviewspersonal, this is how it goes. Then I guess you can only go up again.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-30-05 - Published: 11-30-0556. Because reviewsspiritual sensuality perhaps?Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-30-05 - Published: 11-30-0557. Burned reviewsIt's old and I love itHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-30-05 - Published: 11-30-0558. Stale reviewsthe best comedies are always tragic, everything might end?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-30-05 - Published: 11-30-0559. Cherry Pip reviewsI don't not like you anymore, I just have depression.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-30-05 - Published: 11-30-0560. Honey reviewsSensual.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-0561. Disguise reviewsAbout someone I used to be friends with...but he made it extremely hard. (just to explain, a lot of the imagery is to do with the language/culture barrier)Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-0562. Dark Chocolate reviewsJust a musing about the nature of some things.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-0563. Blueprint reviewsHmmm...r+r would be good on this one, I dont know if I like itLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-0564. Magic Tricks reviewsAlways remember it's me here, I'm here...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-0565. Devoured reviewsAbout a friend of mine, sacrificing one thing for another...friendships for lovers. But everything's good for her, so she's lucky.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-0566. Spiral reviewsI know, I should have more faith. Depression versus care.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 271 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-0567. White Wine Suicide reviewssomething I feel good aboutLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-23-05 - Published: 8-23-0568. Escape reviewsCute little thing. It rhymes!Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-1-04 - Published: 11-1-0469. Not Love reviewsCan you see the interesting way it rhymes?Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-25-04 - Published: 10-25-0470. How not to Win, when the Odds are With you reviewsI dislike how my mind worksLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-9-04 - Published: 4-9-0471. Glance reviewsThat look you gave me.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-9-04 - Published: 4-9-0472. Enid's Ghost reviewsConnection to the film Ghost World...she has my dreams.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-31-04 - Published: 1-31-04
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