Jezsh
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since: 01-23-04, id: 394305, Profile Updated: 04-07-11
country: Japan
Author has written 73 stories for Life, Love, Friendship, Humor, General, General, Fantasy, Romance, and Young Adult.

I am aware this sounds slightly aggressive but:

I want my poetry to be judged - not me. Criticise my poetry, tell me how to make it sound better. But do not criticise me. I am not here to be judged as a person. I only want to be judged as a poet. I am not here to become a better person, just a better writer. I'll do the rest in everyday life.

I don't know what my style is and I don't know who I am sometimes.

But I'll get there in the end.

Visit my blog One More Little Line for a new daily poem


1. Paula reviews
...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,530 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-9-10 - Complete
2. Dancing reviews
this silver lining
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-25-08 - Complete
3. Hitchike reviews
travel through it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-23-07 - Complete
4. Thaw reviews
older piece.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-6-07 - Complete
5. Breathe, breathe reviews
steam of words
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-11-07 - Complete
6. Blackcurrant reviews
You move on in some ways, but some things are set in stone.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-12-07 - Complete
7. Oil reviews
All encompassing.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-30-07 - Complete
8. Purge reviews
I haven't time.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-12-06 - Complete
9. More reviews
Fairly old. I was always unsure about it. You decide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-12-06 - Complete
10. Two AM reviews
The pain of loss is not great enough for regretPolite critiques would be wonderful on this one, firstly because it's my first piece in a while and secondly because I'd like to give it to someone hence if you know me, do not read it please.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-5-06 - Complete
11. Burst reviews
our space is anything but empty
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-19-06
12. Outside reviews
I guess fear just makes me think of spring. Another for someone who may never see it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-23-06
13. Headphones reviews
start broadcasting out; begin to hear
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-6-06
14. Little Poems » reviews
a collection of smaller tidbits and odd ends of poetry
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 7 - Words: 353 - Reviews: 25 - Published: 7-17-06
15. Diamonds and Plastic reviews
pulse pulse pulse
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 29 - Published: 6-12-06
16. Modern Art » reviews
One-shot. A girl replays a doomed relationship. Contains themes of self harm, sex and suicide (the three s's)
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,036 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 6-6-06
17. Hard Candy reviews
broken bottles shattered on railings after long nights on pub crawls (very red).
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 5-31-06
18. City Rain reviews
I am your product. You just say I'm perfect.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 5-27-06
19. Tattoo reviews
Ok so it's a bit cheesy but sometimes there is a limit to writing, tried to express that. And anyway it's a nice break from being bleak and cynical :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-21-06
20. Tankas » reviews
5-7-5-7-7 no title (an unrelated collection)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 5-16-06 - Published: 1-29-06
21. Snakeskin reviews
vetch: an english wildflower. Who knows.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-9-06
22. Athena reviews
broken-glass beautiful
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 4-27-06
23. Cling reviews
can't decide how much I like it, but it's been hanging around long enough that I should let someone else decide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-19-06
24. s c r e a m reviews
oh yeah
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 4-19-06
25. Ultraordinary reviews
Fake words and forged opinions are tedious.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-9-06
26. Apocalocyntosis reviews
: the act of being turned into a pumpkin. Aha, magic.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-5-06
27. New Day reviews
Label me.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-2-06
28. Everyday Reincarnation reviews
White light before you can arise, blink, open your eyes on me
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 3-13-06
29. Summer's End reviews
It's the most beautiful things that break us. Tweaked repost from a long time ago.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 779 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-12-06
30. Fading Glitter reviews
love and age. Man, I wish I was Shakespeare.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 3-12-06
31. Stand to fall apart reviews
what next? (somehow she reminds me of me, not in actions but thought processes) I almost want to write a sequel.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,423 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-12-06
32. This is called Determinism » reviews
Everybody who'd ever seen him naked fell head-over-heels in love with his hipbones.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,293 - Reviews: 28 - Published: 3-2-06
33. Ever After reviews
I forgave him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2-23-06
34. Shampoo Promises reviews
therapeutic...I won't like it in a week but it sums up how bitter but determined I feel just now.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 2-11-06
35. Finger Music reviews
Well, pretty much all of us do it right? Light-hearted and simple.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2-8-06
36. Hematomancy reviews
hematomancy: divination using blood (I can see the future)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 1-31-06
37. More Peter Rabbit reviews
Secret messages, eh? I've got this he said she said thing going on, and this is growing on me.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 1-29-06
38. Choke reviews
take off the rose tinted glasses, though you'll still see her the same (and wished you could help.)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 1-24-06
39. helplessly Untitled reviews
it's true, sometimes you just cannot find the words. Had to get it out of my system, I wanted more emphasis but I'm sick of formatting.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 1-18-06
40. Because you broke Mine reviews
I hope he reads it...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 1-13-06
41. Snapshot reviews
fascinated with everything.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-7-06
42. Touched reviews
I realised that in my desperation for you to live up to what I wanted...I made you more than what you are.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1-5-06
43. His Misogyny reviews
I muse about a friend; this came out differently than I expected. Rather like we did. It must be said this is not a poem of heartbreak, more of that ache of not-knowing.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 1-3-06
44. If You Can reviews
this is like an insult
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 12-30-05
45. Sunburn reviews
some people just make you live, don't they?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 12-30-05
46. Pray reviews
this is hard to explain. All I can say is I feel like the weaker link in my relationship - I dream of other lives - but there is nobody I want more and nothing I want more. Just a little confused.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 12-27-05
47. Payback? reviews
It's how you know you're up and over them. Old piece.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-24-05
48. kills curiosity reviews
I always was curious, and I always liked this one.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 12-24-05
49. Could Have reviews
if I had, we'd have burned ourselves so spectacularly out. I tried to express the words as actions in writing if that mades sense...like exploding flowing out, and burst expanding, falling. Guess you'll have to read it to understand what I'm on about :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-22-05
50. Hopscotch reviews
forced to grow up too fast, look how I've changed. Who'd have thought society would have that effect?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 12-21-05
51. Til Morning reviews
Extract from a larger story about the extraordinary in the ordinary. F-f sexual content but nothing explicit, I'd appreciate r r on this one and return reviews.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,213 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-21-05
52. Lovebound reviews
written a long time ago, guilt when feelings die
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-21-05
53. Meat reviews
deals with sexual abuse/harassment. I got more angry as I wrote this. Can be read with or without the brackets.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12-21-05
54. Print reviews
he's got the right idea from the start, but I have to work my way through issues first. It'll work.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-17-05
55. And if only I could run reviews
I'm getting desperate.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-6-05
56. From High Places reviews
personal, this is how it goes. Then I guess you can only go up again.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-30-05
57. Because reviews
spiritual sensuality perhaps?
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-30-05
58. Burned reviews
It's old and I love it
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-30-05
59. Stale reviews
the best comedies are always tragic, everything might end?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-30-05
60. Cherry Pip reviews
I don't not like you anymore, I just have depression.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-30-05
61. Honey reviews
Sensual.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-31-05
62. Disguise reviews
About someone I used to be friends with...but he made it extremely hard. (just to explain, a lot of the imagery is to do with the language/culture barrier)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-05
63. Dark Chocolate reviews
Just a musing about the nature of some things.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-3-05
64. Blueprint reviews
Hmmm...r r would be good on this one, I dont know if I like it
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-3-05
65. Magic Tricks reviews
Always remember it's me here, I'm here...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-3-05
66. Devoured reviews
About a friend of mine, sacrificing one thing for another...friendships for lovers. But everything's good for her, so she's lucky.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-05
67. Spiral reviews
I know, I should have more faith. Depression versus care.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-05
68. White Wine Suicide reviews
something I feel good about
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-23-05
69. Escape reviews
Cute little thing. It rhymes!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-1-04
70. Not Love reviews
Can you see the interesting way it rhymes?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-25-04
71. How not to Win, when the Odds are With you reviews
I dislike how my mind works
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-9-04
72. Glance reviews
That look you gave me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-9-04
73. Enid's Ghost reviews
Connection to the film Ghost World...she has my dreams.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-31-04