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Author has written 45 stories for Supernatural, Life, General, Horror, Fantasy, Nature, General, Fantasy, Love, Humor, Essay, War, Friendship, Work, and Family. I'm Kindre, go figure. I have about a zillion other nicknames, but that's the one that matters here. I'm a twenty-year-old female and an art student at the University of New Mexico; I'm also a waitress at Sushi-Hama. I love to write and draw and read and look at art. I also love bread, but that's irrelevant. Please review! I welcome compliments and constructive criticism freely, whether you liked it or not. I want to know what you honestly think, not what you think I want to hear. The only comments I don't want are flames. They burn everything I've made to the ground, and then I have to start over again. It's extremely frustrating. And review everything you read, regardless of who wrote it or what you thought of it. If the writer can't take a little criticism, then you can simply feel superior because you're a better person and took the time to try and help the ungrateful puke. I consider everything here a work in progress; I just list some of them as complete so you know I don't intent to write subsequent chapters or add a great deal to the story. So I would love to hear from you on anything and everything you think I can do to make my writing better. I guess my recommended reading would be: "Black Snow," "Human," "Bone-White," "Video Games and Violence: Mario Made Me Do It," "Frankenstein Prison Experiment," and "iSermon." The first three are poems, the next two are essays, and the last is a satire. So I guess go for whichever genre you'd like best. Or if you're into Mature-rated horror, I have Shadows Fester in the Cracks of A Soul. You can also visit my Fanfiction.net account if you so desire. And, uh, read "Glass," please? | |||||||||
1. Shyness AnonymousSix steps to combating shyness. A personal essay slash creative nonfiction piece discussing the experience of being shy and the slow, impossible to force beginning of overcoming that shyness.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,829 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-27-09 - Published: 11-27-092. The Work of PsychohistoriansTo reach the outcome desired by the Seldon Plan, psychohistorians find a balance between the massive, sweeping predictions of psychohistory and the comparatively miniscule events that drive the Seldon Plan forward. An essay on Asimov's Foundation Novels.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,673 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-27-09 - Published: 11-27-093. BondsI ran out of paint a few months ago, and no one can find any more—besides the peeling, dying paint on walls like the one behind my back. That’s what the world is like, I think, it’s faded and dying with the skin peeling off.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,907 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-27-09 - Published: 11-27-094. Shadows Fester in the Cracks of a Soul » reviewsI wanted to make vampires evil again; they are monsters, not boyfriends. Masaccio is one of the worst, and now he's set his sights on high school junior Kylara Scott.Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 6 - Words: 25,592 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-13-09 - Published: 5-29-095. Daddy Left reviewsShe doesn't know why Daddy left.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-09 - Published: 7-1-096. I Want to See You Smile reviewsI want to see you smile, and I want to see you laugh.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-27-08 - Published: 7-27-087. CaptiveA soft reminder at your ear, an escape from the vulgarity of a Gun.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-21-08 - Published: 7-21-088. The Door reviewsFirst thing, I ran to the door. On the way, I considered opening it to see what waited on the other side, but I decided it was too dangerous. I could look out from my window. So instead, I turned the lock.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 296 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-26-08 - Published: 4-26-089. Power reviewsPower was not something Nic was accustomed to, but that didn’t matter, not at all.Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 575 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-0810. Frankenstein Prison ExperimentWhat makes a villain? This essay examines Marry Shelley's Frankenstein and the Stanford Prison Experiment to explain it.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,607 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-2-07 - Published: 12-2-0711. Pursuit of Immortality reviewsEssay on human life, death, and inability to be something more.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,570 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-12-07 - Published: 10-12-0712. Charcoal Wings reviewsHer unmarked page hid even from skillful Pegasus’ bright eyes the drawing it was fated to hold.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 335 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-1-07 - Published: 10-1-0713. The Dearly Departed reviews…lie rotting in boxes six feet beneath hardpacked earth and a mocking layer of grass.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-23-07 - Published: 9-23-0714. Bone White reviewsHe reaches for my ankles with bone white fingers and a calm, toothy smile.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-4-07 - Published: 9-4-0715. Fear reviewsMountains of stone weigh on my shoulders, not of responsibly and what I know I must do, but of what I can’t, of fear.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 287 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-17-07 - Published: 8-17-0716. Black Snow reviewsI remember the first time it happened. My children hid in the house and stared, fear shining brightly in their youthful eyes, from behind the purple window curtains, while they took great gulps of hot chocolate and burned their throats in haste.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-6-07 - Published: 8-6-0717. Innocence reviewsInnocence sprouted in brilliant wings from our backs it has faded now, but I remember its shining days before we shattered our souls to create room for adulthoodComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-6-07 - Published: 8-6-0718. Bucket reviewsBetween the blades of a broken fan, the cracked ceiling leaks fat droplets to the floor, deepening the maroon of carpet where it lands. The cook brings a bright green bucket, squarish, plastic, and ugly, to catch the water as it falls.Complete - Work - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-1-07 - Published: 8-1-0719. Ugly reviewsGiddy children run through rays of sunlight and puffs of grass as I watch, hidden behind musty curtains, green like vomit. I remember once, long ago, I ran through shards of laughing friendship.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-1-07 - Published: 8-1-0720. freezing reviewswhen the cold sets in...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-1-07 - Published: 8-1-0721. I saw him die reviewsWaiting, near yet apart, at the crosswalk. A few cautious feet separated us, strangers, while pavement and waiting connected us, stranger still.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-31-07 - Published: 7-31-0722. Waiting reviewsHe said he’d call when he went on break, after noon, so I’d be awake. It’s after two now I’m still waiting.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-31-07 - Published: 7-31-0723. Human reviewsBlood pours from the sky, staining every soul bound to this sunless field of murder.Complete - War - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-31-07 - Published: 7-31-0724. Video Games and Violence: Mario Made Me Do It reviewsA research paper on the effect of video games on the violent nature of society, or lack there of.Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,562 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-30-07 - Published: 7-30-0725. iSermon reviewsA satire on religion and technology. If you'll be offended, don't bother looking at it. It's meant for humor, not to insult anyone. It's an Apple centric parody of a sermon.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 604 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-26-07 - Published: 7-26-0726. My Hands reviewsI don’t have pretty hands. my palms resemble lumpy squares, squashed and deformed into flesh.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-26-07 - Published: 7-26-0727. Haunting Memory reviewsI’ve shattered my soul, torn it to shreds like you did my heart. I'm broken entirely now.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-26-07 - Published: 7-26-0728. Found reviewsThe stories say the ring is beautiful, and that any who looks upon it will be destroyed by lust for it.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,369 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-25-07 - Published: 7-25-0729. Final Victory reviewsI raise my heavy fist, the tattered crimson cloth clutched tight in my bloody and bandaged fingers. Cheers fill the air to bursting and carry the men to heaven on the greatest and simplest high: victory.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 453 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-25-07 - Published: 7-25-0730. The World Beyond My Own reviewsI reach above me, desperately, to grasp a world brighter than my own.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-07 - Published: 7-22-0731. Never Ending reviewsI’ll never tell You’ll never know. My thoughts, my thoughts, I’ll never show.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-22-07 - Published: 7-22-0732. Leaf reviewsThe leaves fell brittle to the ground, in red, orange, yellow, and brown.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-22-07 - Published: 7-22-0733. His Own Hand reviewsThey reach for sunlight, but it burns. Blind to their blight, they refuse to learn.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-22-07 - Published: 7-22-0734. The Star Fell reviewsThe star fell, and the wing snapped. I clung to shattered shards of glass, my life.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-07 - Published: 7-21-0735. Pennies reviewsIt tastes like a penny, metallic and dirty.Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 531 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-07 - Published: 7-21-0736. SilenceI’m no good with words. When I need to use them: I avoid it, or I say “I don’t know,” But most often, I say nothing.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0737. ReflectionCrying, sighing, am I dieing? Defeat has finally come. Lying, trying, now I’m flying, and my body has gone numb.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0738. Fire reviewsThe hunger I feel can never cease. The unquenchable thirst will never leave. Searching, tearing, finding, stealing Make it all go away.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0739. EscapeDie, all of you, with your life spans and searches for intelligence and expectations that there are answers out there somewhere.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0740. Shadow reviewsI see the bloody shadow, spreading in a pool, beautiful and terrible.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0741. Lonliness reviewsWandering, lost, throughout this world the pain of loneliness unfurled.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0742. Death reviewsIt stalks us, its pace never slowing.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0743. Above All reviewsRaging, raging waterfall, sitting, sitting above all.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0744. The River reviewsAs I rummage through my books and things, I realize they aren’t really mine. Listening to the melody the wind always sings, I look around, seeking a sign.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-2-04 - Published: 6-2-04
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