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Author has written 192 stories for Love, Nature, Life, General, Family, General, Politics, Humor, Song, Haiku, Fantasy, Friendship, and Work. Intro: Male, 22, Hampshire, England. Life long golf and rugby league fan, Go Bradford Bulls!! I also enjoy ten pin bowling. I am currently working as a research scientist. I have played rugby from a young age and golf from my early teens. Writing is my non-sport hobby, my style is mainly love poems with the odd ones that are different. They are mainly up-beat but some are about other less happy subjects. I'm past my teens so I hope I have a mature but youthfull consistancy to my work. I have been writing poetry for about 6 years before I joined this site but only a few poems a year. I post because I want to improve my skills. I hope my works are read and enjoyed by the people who come across them as only I and only my closest friends have enjoyed them over the last few years. Please review my work as I really enjoy the thought of people reading them.My belief is that the best love and other genres of poems come from raw emotion and desires. I aim with the more serious poems I write to make people think and wonder as well as understand who I am inside even if they never meet me. I really hope I have achived this in my work. I guess after reading my poems they then know more about me than people I have met. I also enjoy reading other people work, I have become as serial reviewer too, over 1300 written infact! I have seen some amazing works on some fantastic subjects here by writers with incredible talent . Keep writing all of you! I have tried to write in other forms but a vast majority of my works are poems. I am very experiemtnal, I play with rhyme, line orientation, flow, pace, volume and many other things to reach my desired effect. I do put a lot of effort into my works but sometimes the way I put it just doesn't work out. One of my most recent works to involve ideas are "Chokes Time" and one of my oldest was "Even If I'm Blind". In that work I used the rhyming of the last two line sets to bring out their importance. Just to say thanks to some of my special regular reviewers: infinate smiles, finding sanity, till-iburnout, lisaslife. Special thanks go to: -Crytearsofdarkness - For reviewing almost all of my works including every chapter of Ailee's Village. I always enjoy reading her opinions and advice. Some may be hidden by the ruthless obscurer which is time but I have been told that if you are to read any of my poems you should read: -Even if I'm Blind ( Seems to be a little out dated compared to my more recent works as I wrote it so long ago. It is still said to be one of my best) News I recently wrote a poem called "Choosing" The wonderful news is I have now got the dream and finished my inbetween job! Notes: If you want me to point you in the right direction of poems of mine that would interest you tell me what you like and I will email a list back, or if you just want me to recommend my favorites. Please add "Poetry" to the subject bar. I often write response or anti poems to works, these are best read after the original to get the full picture and meaning. Just a recomendation to help people understand my works. I used to put my footnotes in asterix but now because of the new system it is just as easy to add the as italics at the bottom of the page under a dividing line. I dedicate my love poems to my beautiful, intelligent girlfriend. I wish our love to be forever. Thanx for listening... Nine Iron | |||||||||||||
1. Pre Poem: Dead Rose Lying there reviewsA poem explaining how after a VERY long time thinking about it how I see my poem Dead Rose Lying There can be explained.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-5-07 - Published: 9-5-072. You Look the Same reviewsCanadian Rockies and Scottish glens...Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-073. Waking up for Work reviewsFirst thing on mornings before workComplete - Work - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-074. Stood Up reviewsNot the most imadginative title but I dont want to give it all away now do I...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-4-07 - Published: 3-4-075. Red Lord Of the Shining Soldiers reviewsA longer version of the same idea about a lunar eclipse, I just needed to fully expand on the idea from my Red Lord haiku.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-076. Film Credits reviewsNames in credits. Reposted from being a chapter as I reorganise some of my works...Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-077. Red Lord reviewsThe red lord in the sky, its army around it.Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-078. Best Place for Ideas reviewsThe same place where I came up with my poem Product Testing and a place many poets use but do not talk about, I am breaking the silence!Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-079. If Only reviewsIf only you could be here, if onlyComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-3-07 - Published: 3-3-0710. Time Apart reviewsThe next time you visit...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-2-07 - Published: 3-2-0711. Returning to Fictionpress reviewsReturning is hard with a fresh crowdComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-28-07 - Published: 2-28-0712. Anti Poem: Chokes Time reviewsFix the broken time pieceComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-27-07 - Published: 2-27-0713. Notepad at Night reviewsIdeas during sleepComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-27-07 - Published: 2-27-0714. Choosing reviewsThe first real chance to get that dream job and you have only just settled into your first one, to gain that vital experience. Ever happend to you? It's happening to me!Complete - Work - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-26-07 - Published: 2-26-0715. Looking Back at my Poems reviewsLooking back over my poems and how it made me feelGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-28-06 - Published: 8-28-0616. Inspiration is a Visitor reviewsInspiration is a visitor in my mind, a line from my poem "A Bet on a Sunrise"General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-0517. Your Just a Child, Aren't You reviewsScared, with only a small blanket for protection.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-0518. Road into Wales reviewsRoad into Wales, UKGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-0519. My Poetry Has Gone reviewsNot when inspiration leave like writers block but when the whole drive of your poetry leaves...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 6-16-05 - Published: 6-16-0520. I See Our Future reviewsFuture predictions for the life a releationshipLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-14-05 - Published: 6-14-0521. Response Poem to: My Longest Hair's Reach reviewsa possible solution?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-10-05 - Published: 5-10-0522. Fiji reviewsFiji shores are far from my feet to stand onGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-10-05 - Published: 5-10-0523. Longest Hair's Reach reviewsWhen again you are set to travel far from me... Just because of short term prioritiesLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-10-05 - Published: 5-10-0524. Anti Poem to: Love as a Metallurgist reviewsThe item cannot be made when love is this metallurgistGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-2-05 - Published: 5-2-0525. Surge of Euphoria reviewsAnother poem on the subject I have written about, this time focusing on the undetailed so far subject of the surge a listener feelsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 4-30-05 - Published: 4-30-0526. Response Poem to: Travel Days reviewsWe must have all said it at some timeLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-29-05 - Published: 4-29-0527. Travel Days reviews"Time must fly, it just has to"Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-29-05 - Published: 4-29-0528. Love as a Metallurgist reviewsTwo people become one metallurgistLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-25-05 - Published: 4-25-0529. Love You In The Open reviewsBeing able to tell of your feelings when not acceptable by many others because of the objects background.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-25-05 - Published: 4-25-0530. Chokes Time reviewsIs it possible to stop realtive time?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-13-05 - Published: 4-13-0531. Their Priorities Lie reviewsFalse frontsLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-13-05 - Published: 4-13-0532. Golf Poems » reviewsYeah, with a name like Nine Iron there was going to be a few golf poems. Enjoy.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-10-05 - Published: 4-10-0533. Shaded Glass reviewsPossible life lesson or metaphore? suggested but not a definate interpretation.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-6-05 - Published: 4-6-0534. I Caught Someone's Whipser reviewsA little lie, overheardGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-4-05 - Published: 4-4-0535. My Eyes The Focus reviewsIf your gaze would fall...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-3-05 - Published: 4-3-0536. Speech reviewsSpeechLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 3-28-05 - Published: 3-28-0537. Conclusion Poem: Advice Column reviewsA concluding piece for some of my recent worksFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-9-05 - Published: 3-9-0538. Anniversary reviews"Here, a present for you."Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-27-05 - Published: 2-27-0539. This Fountain Breathes No Life reviewsA poem written in english with a french stanza as part of the idea for it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-21-05 - Published: 2-21-0540. Dawn is the Colour reviewsA short poem of love at first sight that just was not ment to be.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-21-05 - Published: 2-21-0541. The Warm Electric Frost reviewsWalking home past this...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-14-05 - Published: 2-14-0542. It Must Be Done reviewsJust to find out if...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-12-05 - Published: 2-12-0543. Left Alone Again reviewsPopular demand a while back said "write a song again" So I eventually did!Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-9-05 - Published: 2-9-0544. The Beggining of a Sporting Specticle reviewsVery soon my most favorite of sports, rugby league kicks off againGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-6-05 - Published: 2-6-0545. My Wrinkled Hands, They Hold No Stars reviewsLife expressed in a poem, could be more, could be less.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-3-05 - Published: 2-3-0546. Envy a grip reviewsIn general because it depends on the reader.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-30-05 - Published: 1-30-0547. Lyrical Potency reviewsFrom songGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-30-05 - Published: 1-30-0548. Lime Street to Cleethorpes, One Change reviewsA train journey, late December 2004General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-12-05 - Published: 1-12-0549. You Save Your Eyes For Me reviewsJust sloppy mush for my girlfriendLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-10-05 - Published: 1-10-0550. She Bears Fair Clouds reviewsDedicated to Christine Redman Waldeyer.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-10-05 - Published: 1-10-0551. Fire Capturing reviewsSometimes this is better for loveLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-10-05 - Published: 1-10-0552. Response Poem to: Perforated Lines reviewsA response to the idea of tearing/not tearing out pagesGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-10-05 - Published: 1-10-0553. Response Poem to: CRW's The Greatest Sculptress reviewsA respone poem to Christine Redman Waldeyer's poemGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-9-05 - Published: 1-9-0554. Bodyless reviewsIt is just a bit corny but I couldnt help it.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-9-05 - Published: 1-9-0555. The Only Two Sounds I Hear reviewsLate, quiet.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-19-04 - Published: 12-19-0456. Pleasant Obscurity reviewsJust one in the crowdLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-19-04 - Published: 12-19-0457. Anti Poem to: Perforated lines reviewsNow the book is a many months old, used daily. I look back a the thoughts I first had when I opened it to use on the first occasion.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-04 - Published: 12-17-0458. The World is Lying to Me Now reviewsBlustery day on the banks of the MerseyNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-17-04 - Published: 12-17-0459. Warm as the Hill Tops reviewsInspired by some chinese art workGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-15-04 - Published: 12-15-0460. Won't You be my Serpentine reviewsDefinatly not the 14th of Feb!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-15-04 - Published: 12-15-0461. How Long You Have Been Gone reviewsTime in rose petalsLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 11-23-04 - Published: 11-23-0462. For Every Word reviewsAnother poem for Christine, inspired by you, about every word you write.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-21-04 - Published: 11-21-0463. Bitten by the World reviewsWishing time away, the world has defensesGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-20-04 - Published: 11-20-0464. Response Poem to: Self Control reviewsA response poem done slightly differently as I usually try to copy the layout and formatting of the original but in this I do not.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-20-04 - Published: 11-20-0465. Ailee's Village » reviewsA village lost in a violent snow storm of the likes not seen for generations of her ruling family. Ailee is trapped and her village needs saving. Written in what I hope is a different "poem/tale" style.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 22 - Words: 912 - Reviews: 25 - Updated: 11-18-04 - Published: 7-21-0466. Interlude of a Romance reviewsA poem of a short interlude not amusing a certain important person.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-14-04 - Published: 11-14-0467. I Did Not Need to Know Your Past reviewsAnother poem for Christine, she inspired me to write a few of my recent poems after she asked me to produce a few for her.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-14-04 - Published: 11-14-0468. At the Whim of Your Pen I read reviewsTaken from one of my reviews of Christine Redman Waldeyers poems. Her works are an inspiration.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-12-04 - Published: 11-12-0469. Club Soul mates » reviewsA poem of two parts and perspectives, on a bried two minute encounterLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-12-04 - Published: 11-12-0470. A Letter for You, Under Your Paper Weight reviewsWarmth of love during illnessGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-5-04 - Published: 11-5-0471. When Least Wanted reviewsPaths cross lines, representation of interactions resulting in negative situations.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-2-04 - Published: 11-2-0472. Self Control reviewsIt is about how to use self controlGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-30-04 - Published: 10-30-0473. My Sky is Bluer reviewsThe underside of a cloud bank as seen on a recent eveningNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-27-04 - Published: 10-27-0474. I Dreamt of Washing My Feet in Soap Powder reviewsJust another idea from the same place as 'Blue Infomation'General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-0475. Blue Infomation reviewsObservations during the normalityGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-0476. I am in Love with the Book that I Hold Every Night reviewsDrifting off to sleep with a poetry bookGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 10-20-04 - Published: 10-20-0477. No Matter How Old reviewsThe time owned does not define importanceGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-18-04 - Published: 10-18-0478. Keepsies » reviewsAfter requests and to indulge my intrests in poetry I have attempted my first haiku, be brutal. It is a extrapalation from an idea for a song I wrote. The later ones are more recent haiku after much practise so I hope for some improvements.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 10-18-04 - Published: 4-25-0479. Love Burnt onto a Compact Disk reviewsA CD symbolises a releationship.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-18-04 - Published: 10-18-0480. My Wooded Path is Gone reviewsThe loss of this treasured thing.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-8-04 - Published: 10-8-0481. It Can be Seen reviewsAn expression of the ups and downs of a releationshipLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-5-04 - Published: 10-5-0482. Lime Green Skies reviewsA poem I wrote over a year ago I found just today, it is a good comparison to how I used to write and how I write now, I think practise has helped me improve my whole style.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-4-04 - Published: 10-4-0483. Jersey Coast's Words reviewsA poem for Christine, she write one about my works on here and included it in her latest book so I returned the favour as much as I possibly could.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-30-04 - Published: 9-30-0484. A Bet on the Sunrise reviewsA poem about betting on inspiration in the early hoursComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 9-27-04 - Published: 9-27-0485. Standing on an Eighties Wonder reviewsCrossing the humber bridge on a very late summers eveningNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-27-04 - Published: 9-27-0486. A View Up Through a Pergola reviewsJust lazy afternoons as the summer ends, always inspiringGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-24-04 - Published: 9-24-0487. Liverpool, City of Poets reviewsI am studying in a city with a recent history in one of my pastimes.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-24-04 - Published: 9-24-0488. I See reviewsWritten about a skylight as seen by bored young soul.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 9-24-04 - Published: 8-13-0489. Lord Montague's Last Stand reviewsImagination, childhood and someones livleyhood clashGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-14-04 - Published: 9-14-0490. Singing and Sleeping reviewsMeeting new peopleGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-14-04 - Published: 9-14-0491. Contemplation Rises reviewsEnd of the day ...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-4-04 - Published: 9-4-0492. Anti Poem to: Slow Rain reviewsAs the poem slow rain is about standing under cover away from the shower, this is about embracing it by stepping out to stand under those dark clouds and feeling the event.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-13-04 - Published: 8-13-0493. A Spark reviewsAbout times when a beacon at night was the only way to cross to ones destination.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-13-04 - Published: 8-13-0494. Half a Moon reviewsWhat seems to be clearest to meNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-7-04 - Published: 8-7-0495. I'm Taken In reviewsTaken in by a situation or feeling and how it affects an individualLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 8-6-04 - Published: 8-6-0496. The Harsh Whip of Summer reviewsThe harshness for a small area on the north side of Ben Nevis, ScotlandNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-6-04 - Published: 8-6-0497. Save Me reviewsCry out for help to the one who can protect youGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-6-04 - Published: 8-6-0498. Money Behind the Clock reviewsA poem written today from a conversation about moving on, it is open to interpretation.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-4-04 - Published: 8-4-0499. Band Across The Moon reviewsOne night I saw thisNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-3-04 - Published: 8-3-04100. Too Far Away reviewsMy world is too far awayLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-3-04 - Published: 8-3-04101. Slow Rain reviewsTypical obsessed over British weather.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-22-04 - Published: 7-22-04102. Celebrate You reviewsCelebration of youLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-21-04 - Published: 7-21-04103. Unnatural Green reviewsHow a country garden can be unnaturaly greenNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-21-04 - Published: 7-21-04104. Natural green reviewsA city garden and how it does have natural greenNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-21-04 - Published: 7-21-04105. Eowyn reviewsAn acrostic poem susing a name. The saxon name Eowyn meaning sheild princessGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-10-04 - Published: 7-10-04106. Greek Siesta reviewsA poem inspired by Lindos in Rhodes, Greece.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-10-04 - Published: 7-10-04107. Foundations Up reviewsAbout taking down an old shedGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-20-04 - Published: 6-20-04108. Departure reviewsThe departure board reads...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-20-04 - Published: 6-20-04109. Heather reviewsA poem inspired by HeatherGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04110. Too Much reviewsThe reason to why a couple splits in a poem.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04111. Written on the Wrong Page reviewsA poets notebook has many mistakes.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04112. Fall together reviewsA droplets brief romantic encounterNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04113. Factory on the Hill reviewsA poem on the now disused mills of Pennine townsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04114. Atlantic Herring reviewsHerring HaikuHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04115. Archipelago of Clouds reviewsThe non-visable eruptions form temporary islands.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04116. A Dressed Double Bed reviewsYouthful search for ones princess.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-19-04 - Published: 6-19-04117. Charcoal Pollution reviewsAnother poem about an artist, as all us poets are in a way.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 5-19-04 - Published: 5-19-04118. Waking on a New Years Day » reviewsA poem describing waking on a new years day. Didnt actually do it but it is a composite of some experiences with fiction. Some ideas were from the original idea I have re-worked this from.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 221 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-19-04 - Published: 4-19-04119. Vocal Luminescence reviewsA mixture of two brewing ideas, that melded to form this poem.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-19-04 - Published: 5-19-04120. Perforated Lines reviewsIt does not have a specific catagory, each person that reads it would probably put it somewhere else.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-17-04 - Published: 5-17-04121. In Two reviewsSubject unknown. It was written with a big mixture of ideas flowing about.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-17-04 - Published: 5-17-04122. Anti Poem to: On a Night of Rapture reviewsAn anti poem to On a Night of Rapture.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-16-04 - Published: 5-16-04123. Pastel Morning » reviewsA short series of poems about a time only hours before my poem The Grey Sun is UpNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 5-16-04 - Published: 5-15-04124. The 100 Club » reviewsA group of very short descriptive prose. Any input welcome as I am trying to improve my writing skillsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 640 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-15-04 - Published: 3-1-04125. Sitting Inside: Through the Two Panes of a Window reviewsOut of my flats windowNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-15-04 - Published: 5-15-04126. Giving it the Little Push reviewsA poem about how I was inspired for many of my earlier and some of my newer poems. Another poem from the idea for "Plastic Inspiration"General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-14-04 - Published: 5-14-04127. Tear a Rose Petal reviewsA poem open to interpreatation. I see it as about closure on a releationship.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-14-04 - Published: 5-14-04128. On a Night of Rapture reviewsA poem about a main thing in my life, music and how it makes me feel. Thanx to Zeriae for corrections.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 5-13-04 - Published: 2-24-04129. Plastic Inspiration reviewsA poem about how I get my inspirationGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-13-04 - Published: 5-13-04130. Reaching Out reviewsI guess putting it in life sort of gives it away.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-11-04 - Published: 5-11-04131. Jelousy Haiku » reviewsJelousy HaikuComplete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 5-11-04 - Published: 4-25-04132. Bedside Light reviewsJust a poem about a bedside light and how important it can be.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-11-04 - Published: 5-11-04133. Summer Waits reviewsSummer is waitingNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-10-04 - Published: 5-10-04134. Threads of Ideas reviewsA poem about co-authoring, which I have done abit of with Christine Redman-Waldeyer.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-10-04 - Published: 5-10-04135. A Poem She Wrote reviewsA poem for Christine Redman-Waldeyer, a great author. It isn't about any specific poem she wrote but she is very good.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-9-04 - Published: 5-9-04136. Atlantic, Cousin To Cousin reviewsA co-authored poem by Nine Iron and Christine Redman-Waldeyer. It describes seasons on either side of the Atlantic with the aim to mix styles and ideas of both authors.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-9-04 - Published: 5-9-04137. Response Poem to: Even If I'm Blind reviewsA response poem toLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-7-04 - Published: 5-7-04138. Next To Me reviewsJust about my loveLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 5-6-04 - Published: 5-6-04139. A Poem About Fiction Press reviewsA poem I worte after describing how hard it was to get noticed on this site in a review.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 5-6-04 - Published: 5-6-04140. In a Vase Stands reviewsA life metaphoreLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-6-04 - Published: 5-6-04141. Blossom reviewsA poem that came to mind while caught in an april shower. I have tried to be as original as I can.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-5-04 - Published: 5-5-04142. Response Poem to: The Grey Sun Is Up reviewsA response poemLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-4-04 - Published: 5-4-04143. The Grey Sun in Up reviewsHow morning felt to me after a night of not sleepingLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-4-04 - Published: 5-4-04144. Still Remain reviewsI dont know exactly what the thing is, it was just an idea.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-3-04 - Published: 5-3-04145. Until I Miss You reviewsAbout how the subject will soon have to be two months away from their only love.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 5-2-04 - Published: 5-2-04146. No Rain on My Window reviewsIt doesnt have to be the cliche to have as much emotionLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-2-04 - Published: 5-2-04147. Life's an Itch reviewsFor all those with eczemaLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-04148. Teenage Flame reviewsA make up poem for a friendship once in tatters.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-04149. She Paints reviewsA painting by a hurt womanLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 4-28-04 - Published: 4-28-04150. Stop Wanting reviewsA poem about reaching the limit. Not to be read on the "linear", it can be read in different ways.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-27-04 - Published: 4-27-04151. I Love Your reviewsA poem about "I Love Yours"Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-27-04 - Published: 4-27-04152. Trapped reviewsTrapped by them, idea coming from the idea of On a Night of Rapture. I think the title is abit misleading. Its not about being trapped by the usual things.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-26-04 - Published: 4-26-04153. Rain In Here reviewsAn experimentation expanding on requests to write haiku.About raining in places.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-26-04 - Published: 4-26-04154. A New Begining reviewsA poem about turning a life aroundLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-24-04 - Published: 4-24-04155. Come Capture Me reviewsTrance style song, After many requests I finally got around to it so it is only my first song, any comments welcome.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-24-04 - Published: 4-24-04156. Field reviewsA field at night, the moon and the oneGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-22-04 - Published: 4-22-04157. Product Testing reviewsA poem I wrote after examining the soap when I went to was my handsHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-21-04 - Published: 4-21-04158. My Loves Heart » reviewsA poem inspired by an awful compliment that went down wellLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-20-04 - Published: 4-17-04159. Forever in my Heart reviewsA poem about trying to gain strength to counter the other poems I have posted recentlyLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-19-04 - Published: 4-19-04160. Dead Rose Lying There reviewsA slighlty upsetting poem, made my stomach hurt abit. I still havent worked out which one recived the rose yet and I wrote it, lol.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 4-19-04 - Published: 4-19-04161. Forever Yours reviewsAbout the subject "Forever Yours"Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 4-17-04 - Published: 4-17-04162. Provocation reviewsA poem through the angry tears of a young woman. This poem is all about the volume of the speaker, I have tried my best to convey this in my own way.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-17-04 - Published: 4-17-04163. Childhood and a Window reviewsFrom memories of myself when I was younger.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-3-04 - Published: 4-3-04164. Lost in the Night reviewsI do not know myself what this poem is about, it is totally up to interpretation.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-2-04 - Published: 4-2-04165. A Rose Given to Save a Love reviewsAnother poem to add to my many about roses, I hope its not an obsession. This one is about that time between the last given atempt and the final loss of a releationshipLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-31-04 - Published: 3-31-04166. The Weather is so Forgetful reviewsA poem written for all those who once trusted the weatherNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-29-04 - Published: 3-29-04167. The Child of the Wind reviewsA poem expanding from an idea, just hoping it came out well. About the child of the wind and its mischeifNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 3-20-04 - Published: 3-20-04168. A Novel Written reviewsA poem inspired by my girlfriend writing her FanficLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-20-04 - Published: 3-20-04169. That Time Between 7:30 and 8:00 AM reviewsa poem about morningsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-17-04 - Published: 3-17-04170. Cocktails and a Light Show reviewsSitting on a beach at one am with a cocktail last summerNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-15-04 - Published: 3-15-04171. Just Because You Can reviewsA poem about 'would you's'Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 3-15-04 - Published: 3-15-04172. North Sea Cod Stocks are Diminishing reviewsA poem about the future of cod stocks in the north sea.Politics - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-6-04 - Published: 3-6-04173. Rose and Rhyme reviewsA poem about a rose in a vase on a bedside tableLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-6-04 - Published: 3-6-04174. Thankyou Fear reviewsA poem I wrote to decribe the events of how I came to be with my girlfriend that got twisted and elaborated in the making.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-5-04 - Published: 3-5-04175. My Escape reviewsA poem about a beach on the north coast of Scotland that I just can't forgetGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 3-3-04 - Published: 3-3-04176. Reminder Notes reviewsA poem expanding from a valentines day gesture, a reminder note with the flowers saying 'I love you'Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-28-04 - Published: 2-28-04177. Admiration of the Love reviewsA poem I wrote inspired by an event that recently happend in the city centre of where I am at Uni. I know it isnt the worlds greatest poem but I had to write it as I have strong feelings.Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-04178. What Happens on a Sunday in Winter reviewsA poem about that strange group of people who bare the winter weather to persue their favorite past timeGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-26-04 - Published: 2-26-04179. For a Second reviewsA poem I wrote while walking to Uni, Its about What happend to me as I drew a breathGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-23-04 - Published: 2-23-04180. A Poem about Punctuation in Poetry reviewsI guess the title says it all.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 2-23-04 - Published: 2-23-04181. Two Sides of a Sidewalk reviewsJust a little poem about the airGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-16-04 - Published: 2-16-04182. An Old Rose in a Draw reviewsA poem about the futureLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-16-04 - Published: 2-16-04183. Holding reviewsA poem about holdingLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-16-04 - Published: 2-16-04184. On those cold days when it rains reviewsA poem about one of my favorite memories, a walking holiday in ScotlandNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-12-04 - Published: 2-12-04185. How She Killed My Christmas Gift reviewsA poem about a poor little tree I got my girlfriend for christmas and how she 'looked after it'Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-11-04 - Published: 2-11-04186. Alone reviewsThe idea for the poem came from when I saw a guy alone in a waiting room. Strange eh? I hope it workedLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 2-11-04 - Published: 2-11-04187. I Could Only Stare reviewsA short poem about how my girlfriend dumped my in a dream without saying itLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-11-04 - Published: 2-11-04188. Waiting for a Rainbow reviewsA poem taken from memories of waiting outside my grans house in a carNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-10-04 - Published: 2-10-04189. Even if I'm Blind reviewsI poem I wrote at 2am while on holiday in Canada, It just came to me. I wrote it about 3 years before I joined FP so I was only in my mid teens. I thni it was the second proper poem I every wrote.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 58 - Updated: 2-10-04 - Published: 2-10-04190. It Once was a Photograph reviewsA poem about a keyring photo that ran after a field trip (nothing to do with the couple in the poem thought)Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 2-10-04 - Published: 2-10-04191. Why don't you call anymore? reviewsTo express my past sadness in a made up person and situation.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 2-5-04 - Published: 2-5-04192. I got me a Nicola reviewsFor my sweetieLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 2-2-04 - Published: 2-2-04
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