floorcollision
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since: 02-16-04, id: 398382
Author has written 58 stories for Life, General, Haiku, Love, Friendship, and Horror.
i write these stupid words and i love every one | weezer

01.21.04
It has been forever long since i have written anything decent. so here we go...
all my love
carly
10.06.04
wow- it has been a LOOOOOOOONG time!!
new poem.

depression o' depression. how i loathe thee, but welcome your delightful poem fodder.

9.15.04
yay! a new poem. you'd think with all that's happening in my crazy crazy life things would be much more turbulent as far as uploads go!
love to all-
carly marie

8.31.04
ABOUT TIME!!
a new poem!!

willing to tweak! give me advice, loves!!

me

8.12.04
can we not claim to be empty? i'd say no... because we are so very full.

overwhelmed with human beauty. i want to write it all.

uploaded his hate.

8.10.04
music. is. amazing.
what made God think of it. how'd he know that it'd touch so many people in so many ways. that it could change minds and melt hate and build such love and purity.

-|-|-|- THE SPECS -|-|-|-

i just write for fun but i really love doing well and i always try to improve my poetry...

i love free form and just letting stuff flow--
but haiku is so expressive in and of itself-- keeping my thoughts so concise and left to such diverse interpretation-- it makes me happy so i'm going to smile now (smiles)

spread love and happiness-- this world, so full of apathy, desperately needs your heart.

be friendly

i promise to review your work if you review mine.

peace&acceptance

carly

but you don't understand, you don't understand me, and i want to be understood. | lisa loeb


1. January 21 2005 reviews
interesting... quite pleased, one of my better pieces. please review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-21-05
2. two 9's, an 8, followed by a haiku reviews
this is for you.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-28-04
3. Quit reviews
quit
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-28-04
4. such was the choice reviews
no summary
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-23-04
5. insight reviews
a quick poem
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-6-04
6. ramble 2 reviews
just what came to my mind- actually i'm impressed with it, considering i've had a thought drought lately.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-15-04
7. what it is to melt reviews
never before did i want anything more, than when i wanted to melt into you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-31-04
8. at anthony reviews
hm. it's good- i'll tweak it later.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-19-04
9. his hate reviews
um- insightful or not. you decide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-12-04
10. my first experience with creation reviews
all i could do was cry... (music)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-10-04
11. a little like alice reviews
loosely based on lewis carrol's alice in wonderland but pretty much just jabberwocky. it was a dream i had.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-30-04
12. our photographs reviews
it's good- i like it. :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 7-24-04
13. calm repose reviews
inspired? :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-24-04
14. on the floor reviews
the simplicity that brings warmth and love. (this is an old piece)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-19-04
15. prozac reviews
about throwing the pills away.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-19-04
16. source reviews
if i write about the reason i write, maybe my reasons will change. that'd be nice.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-11-04
17. 71104 reviews
it's a shorty. about a friend who saved a part of me that needed saving.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-11-04
18. hit men reviews
i dunno where this came from. r/r
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-7-04
19. now i know reviews
put me on the shelf. ... i was angsty- dont' judge me. :) NEW REVISED SHINY VERSION!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-28-04
20. kelly reviews
please kel don't hate this poem. :) i love you girl
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-25-04
21. june 21 reviews
no better title. i'm writing more and more honestly. please r/r
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-21-04
22. i don't know yet » reviews
my first story- it's scary. :P PLEASE REVIEW, i need help! it's good, though, i think... The new chapters are very short- i'm working up to some closure! The First chapter has had some changes. :)
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,798 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-14-04 - Published: 6-13-04
23. Band of Brotherhood reviews
OLD one of my fave poems. it could have been better but i'm real proud of this one.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-13-04
24. energy reviews
OLD about love. typical, eh!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-13-04
25. lost books reviews
i lost my poetry notebooks :(:( this poem has no format whatsoever.. i was trying something new.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-9-04
26. call me amazing poet reviews
a funny little experimental poem. read it or else! :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-3-04
27. grin reviews
when you trusted someone and let them see the real u, and they tear you down and spread you around and lie about you. :( r/r
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-3-04
28. and something made that funny reviews
just doing random stuff with random people. its good stuff.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-3-04
29. nice gneiss reviews
totally random... totally random. i mean, really.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-24-04
30. inspire reviews
a revision of "glove me" and under a new name... about music (surprised)
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-18-04
31. Spire of Divinity reviews
individuality... the pain, discomfort- take pills for bloating. :)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-18-04
32. sorry for this reviews
actually a really okay poem. disappointed w/ the format but too lazy to fix it right now.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-3-04
33. day dream reviews
about... loneliness and what it's to dream loneliness... i guess. r/r?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-25-04
34. amongst the threads reviews
summaries aren't coming to me today. r/r.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-20-04
35. this happiness reviews
it's a short one - r/r?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-20-04
36. untitled for now reviews
this is incomplete, methinks. its undone. but please r/r... i do need help w/ this one!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-11-04
37. glove me reviews
haiku- r/r - will r/r back. :)
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-10-04
38. cold when i ask reviews
combination from "when i ask" - i prefer this over the original 2. it combines the best thoughts of both and i'm pleased with it.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-5-04
39. when i ask reviews
two haiku on asking myself about the meaning of life- interesting..
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-5-04
40. we never were that close reviews
pretty cool when someone makes you think you're super tight and then tears you down, eh?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-4-04
41. you're better reviews
haiku. - the clearer the mind the more honest the friendship.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-4-04
42. loneliness like rice reviews
i know why they stopped throwing rice at weddings. too many divorces afterwards. (so it's kinda strange- brought in eleanor rigby- now that's hard to do.)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-30-04
43. untitled reviews
oh people. how they suck.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-27-04
44. pavement reviews
about dishonesty in a friendship... i'm really pleased with this poem. EDITED 3.31.04 much better now.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-27-04
45. burned like pirate maps reviews
about a man near death reflecting on his horribly spent life... pg for subject...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-26-04
46. oh my head reviews
rant w/ association related to media/people... kind of cynic like.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-25-04
47. just a ramble reviews
just letting stuff out- pg for mild language...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-24-04
48. lick the politics reviews
the format is really screwed up- but it's not about politics hugely, so don't be fooled. :)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-24-04
49. scented memories reviews
oh sigh. lost love - it'll getchya every time.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-14-04
50. kurt reviews
the impact of cobain's journals compacted into a warm fuzzy haiku.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-14-04
51. charcoal reviews
i wrote this in nov. 2003. about being some i'm not and how it made me feel.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3-14-04
52. Confetti reviews
My first haiku- it's on crying.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 3-14-04
53. butter in the pan reviews
about warmth-energy between 2 people... weirdest mood
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-23-04
54. to be a beat reviews
about beat poets-kind of... it's in one of my crazy unique patterns.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-22-04
55. Harper reviews
about music and feeling... abstract.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-19-04
56. 21904 reviews
i'll edit this soon... it's a pretty personal poem, actually so it may not be understandable by anyone else. :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-19-04
57. Your Words reviews
when left in the dark things hurt worse.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-18-04
58. 21404 reviews
contrary to common understanding- i did not write this out of a romantic view of suicide- it is however about letting go of your facade and finally being freed. but you can take it how you want it. :)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-16-04