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Author has written 24 stories for Religion, Fantasy, Action, General, Romance, Sci-Fi, Life, and General. I return reviews! And I know most people must say that, but I really do. Just as a head note: I tend to tamper a lot with stories and ideas, and then upload them onto here to see what people think. Half of them I never finish, but if there is something you'd like me to continue with, please let me know, and I'll dabble with the idea a bit more. I can't, however, make any guarantees that I'll be able to finish everything I start. With most things I begin, I don't know where it is going at all, so criticism is greatly appreciated. It helps me know where to go with something. He Was a King: He Was a King (Part One) follows a man named Malik, the Thief King, and it goes through his adventures with his closest friends and most villainous enemies. It begins with a quest for the Dormac, a sword of legend that is said to give the bearer immortality and invincibility. This quest is meant to help Aredt, the king's nephew, to assume the throne, for the crown prince Cameron has given up his right to his cousin, Aredt. Not only do Malik and Cameron, also known as Luke, take part in this intrepid quest, but also a pair of twins with magical abilities, a farm boy with infinite knowledge of the Dormac legends, a spirited thief girl, a cynical sorcerer, and two average, ordinary people. Each of them has something to offer in the search for the magical sword, and each of them starts to discover secrets about the others. But they're on their way to get the Dormac, whether they manage to do so or not. He Was a King (Part Two) begins with Damian, a man who, for all points and purposes, has no past. Having been found on the beach nearly dead and with no memories, he starts anew with a merchant family on the beach, beginning his new life. Three years later, a new king has been crowned and the island begins to stir with old whispers. Damian slowly starts to recollect moments of his life, moments that, when understood, change the way he sees his new life. He begins to remember who he was before his near death, and when everything comes back to him, he realizes that more than just a new king has happened to him and his old friends. He Was a King (Part Three) takes place sixteen years after the Great Thief battle. Theivery is all but gone on the island, destroyed by King Cameron in his attempt to destroy all memories of his closest friend. He had named young Kara as the heir to the throne and life on the island is peaceful. But when an old acquaintance returns and begins to meddle with the peace, a new group of men step up to save the island from terror. Jak, the stranger from the mountains, is enlisted to help though he'd much rather spend his time doing his own things. Along with him is Merke, the noble boy who spent most of his childhood learning the ways of the street and searching for adventure, and who is hopelessly in love with Kara and would do anything for her safety. Together with Amell, Jak and Merke risk their lives to save the island until a shocking secret is discovered and everything is turned upside down. (As a sidenote I wasn't going to write a part three, but when I couldn't ignore the characters in my head anymore, I had to write more for them and give them longer lives. So here it is.) Okay, so I'm awful with summaries and cannot even begin to make these stories sound interesting, but, quite honestly, I've worked extremely hard on them and I believe that, though the summaries do not illustrate it, they are definitely worth reading. Please give them a try and tell me what you think! A Bit About Me: If one were to describe me... I'm a writer and completely unclassifiable in any way, so I won't even try. I work mainly with fantasy, considering the past two years of my life have been dedicated to writing, rewriting, re-rewriting, and completely restarting my He Was a King series, which isn't really a series at all since it's only a two-parter. And yet it still needs work. Such a shame... I wish I had more time to write, but what with classes and all, it can get difficicult. But I do my best, and anything that seems interesting to me always runs through my head, which means that half the time I can't pay attention in class anyway. College can be killer, but this next semester shouldn't be too bad and I'll do what I can to finish stories I've started as soon as I can. Basically I have no life other than what I write and only a portion of what I do ends up online, but if you see something you like, please let me know so I can know what to continue, if anything. In the meantime, I will try to get more of a variety up so I at least have something for most people to enjoy. | |||||||||
1. The Letter I » reviewsJack knows that he is the only one who can stop the imminent destruction of his people, but his past tends to get in his way more often than he'd like. To add to his problems, a young noble keeps getting in his way, which could lead Jack's plans to ruin.Action - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,067 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-27-09 - Published: 8-27-092. Malik's Story » reviewsThe untold story of the thief king's childhood. As Malik is finally able to be free from his parents' assassin training, he soon learns that not everyone on the island is his enemy. With two friends, one a prince, the other an outcast, he starts a new lifAction - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,148 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-3-09 - Published: 8-8-073. He Was a King Part Three » reviewsEver since the great battle, the country has been peaceful. But then Jak arrives, a man who'd spent his life in the mountains, and with him comes unrest. Only one man could possibly make things better, and he's been dead for sixteen years.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 84,827 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-31-09 - Published: 12-2-084. On a Normal Day » reviewsWhen Alex is attacked by more than one group wishing to kill him, he starts to wonder if he really is just a farm boy after all. Teaming up with the most unlikely of friends, he attempts to save his own life, and maybe the whole kingdom, as well.Action - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 13,025 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-27-08 - Published: 5-22-085. Mutton reviewsWe never realize how much we affect those around us until it is too late to change.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,177 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-26-08 - Published: 10-26-086. He Was a King Part Two » reviewsWith the magical sword, the Dormac, found, a new king takes reign, creating a new regime and new laws. A stranger named Damian, however, begins to learn why he cannot remember his past and why everyone seems to know him except himself.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 27 - Words: 146,058 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-22-08 - Published: 5-14-087. To Each His Own »Damik's father disappeared with the promise to return. After ten years, Damik wonders if he'll ever see him again, until he is suddenly sold as a slave and thrown into the very world that stole his father from him. Now he just needs to find him...Action - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 14,943 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-14-08 - Published: 8-14-088. The Writings of a Child » reviewsI found poems that I wrote years and years ago, most of which have absolutely no rhyme or reason to them. I just thought I'd share with the world my past self, before I learned that writing actually took some work.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-13-08 - Published: 8-13-089. Cherry Pie reviewsThe result of writer's block mixed with sleepiness and a random urge to write about trolls.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 660 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-7-08 - Published: 8-7-0810. Justice and Mercy reviewsA short story about the demands of Justice and the saving power of Mercy.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,277 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-21-08 - Published: 7-21-0811. The Duchess of Bergeny » reviewsEmmie wants Andrew, who likes Sarah, who's after Rattan, who likes Emmie, while Nicole, who is good friends with Andrew, likes Alec, who acknowledges her but really likes Christine, Andrew's sister, who couldn't care less. The story of a life half lived.Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,975 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-21-08 - Published: 7-16-0812. The Guardian reviewsThe Guardians were the ultimate protectors of the world, but when the world lost faith in them, one by one they were killed off. Now, with only one remaining, the age of the Guardians can only lead to one thing: failure. Or can it do something more?Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 702 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-27-08 - Published: 6-27-0813. Frozen Faith reviewsWhen one has limited time to live, what does one do? Give up hope, or do what one can to stay alive? This is a short story set in a time of war, and involves different views on what is to happen. Dunno, read and tell me what you think...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 690 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-19-08 - Published: 6-19-0814. Simplicity » reviewsLanna was a noble that wanted to write her life's story, even though it was considered illegal. But she had nothing to write. That is, until she met the handsome stable hand that began working for her father. Then her perfect life was turned upside down.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 20,017 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-29-08 - Published: 11-30-0715. Life is What You Make It reviewsI discovered an amazing format of poetry--the pantoum--and decided to try writing about life and how only we can change our futures. It really works out well. Hopefully it isn't too cliche...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-17-08 - Published: 5-17-0816. Treasure Hunt reviewsI'm not a big poetry writer but I wrote about life and all its obstacles, but in the end everything works out and we are happy.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-23-08 - Published: 2-23-0817. Down to Earth reviewsMy first attempt at science fiction - Leah has lived in orbit above Old Earth her entire miserable life, and when a team is organized to travel back in time to when Earth was still inhabitable, she eagerly volunteers even though she may be stuck there.Complete - Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,512 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-20-08 - Published: 2-20-0818. Shade » reviewsAfter escaping the castle prison with the rebellion leader, San begins fighting for the monarchy that had been overtaken. But the more she learns, the more she starts to realize that the boy she thought she knew is something entirely different.Action - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,112 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-19-08 - Published: 8-8-0719. Simple » reviewsCatherine, the only child of Lanna and King Alad, has no intentions of following in her mother's lifestyle, and when an unexpected incident takes her across the sea, she finds love in an unlikely man while at the same time learns about who she really is.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 20 - Words: 39,283 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 2-18-08 - Published: 2-18-0820. The Warrior reviewsWe all have heroes in life, no matter how strong or brave they may be. Basically this is super cheesy, so enjoy.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 652 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-21-06 - Published: 1-16-0621. Dragonthief » reviewsFive people are sent to save the country of Korelia, only they don't know it. There are dragons to help, but those that they are against are very powerful as well. It takes a lot to keep things going right...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 24 - Words: 34,777 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 3-30-06 - Published: 8-2-0522. The Harp reviewsA depressing story that delves into the danger of too much imagination.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 672 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-16-06 - Published: 1-16-0623. Battle of Pride reviewsI wonder why... A young king with too much pride and not enough sense. Nothing good can happen there...Complete - Action - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,988 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-10-06 - Published: 1-10-0624. Never Alone reviewsA poem about how to keep going when everything around you seems to be falling apart.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-28-04 - Published: 2-28-04
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