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Author has written 105 stories for Song, Action, Life, School, Love, General, and Thriller. My name's Keith. Some of my stuff is really old, most of it isn't very good. IM me if you want my screen name is yea its all good PS. The format of my poems keeps getting messed with when I upload them, so imagine your own stanzas (and I don't repeat the first lines of any poems, that's a mistake too). | |||||||||
1. The Observer reviewsHey I don't usually look for feedback but please review this one. Thanks!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-13-09 - Published: 2-13-092. Also to WriteAutobiographical and metaphorical, but not as ambiguous as you'd think.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-08 - Published: 12-1-083. What Will You Do?Yep.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-08 - Published: 12-1-084. Bike CrashBicycle is the superior mode of transport, except for when you're hammered and fall off.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-08 - Published: 12-1-085. Love Poem IIFor Ashley. Love is such a difficult thing to articulate, though .Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-08 - Published: 12-1-086. Lover or MotherHere is the textual version of an existing visual poem that compares and contrasts parental and romantic love. They are similar and synergistic.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-1-08 - Published: 12-1-087. Summer in AmherstThere's nothing poetic about eating sandwiches in parking lotsComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-31-08 - Published: 8-31-088. August on the East CoastMany people will die without the experience of having spent a summer in New Hampshire.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-31-08 - Published: 8-31-089. The ShepardA poem about activism and ignoranceComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-6-08 - Published: 6-6-0810. PreSasquatch reviewsstraightforwardComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-08 - Published: 5-31-0811. MetapoemI wrote this poem about the poem I wrote. It was difficult to write.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-31-08 - Published: 5-31-0812. Conventional PrisdomI think this poem may have a certain universality for this community.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-31-08 - Published: 5-31-0813. The TrainwreckWho is a poet who is also not cynical?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-31-08 - Published: 5-31-0814. Love Poem reviewsIt's short, but I think you'll find that it's sincereComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-31-08 - Published: 5-31-0815. Sunday MondayThis is the first poem I've written since first studying poetry at college. There's a certain richness in life that manifests itself best in the context of a series of such experiences.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-9-08 - Published: 5-9-0816. Man and Beastthe first poem i've written since beginning a college educationGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-11-07 - Published: 10-11-0717. The Universe reviewsI just wrote thisComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-21-07 - Published: 2-21-0718. All of my Life reviewsWrote it early first periodComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-22-06 - Published: 11-22-0619. Bright reviewsThis is a poem that I tried to write all of last summer. It's about the association of light to positivity and the converse relationship of dark to negative concepts.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-0620. Hot Days reviewsWow, my first poem back in a couple years I think. Uh make of it what you'd like.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-0621. Set the Controls for the Lows of my Soul Part II reviewsThe second installement in some sort of era in my life.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-16-05 - Published: 9-16-0522. Set the Controls for the Lows of my Soul Part I reviewsAbout another girl who hurt me.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 393 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-16-05 - Published: 9-16-0523. The Will to Live » reviewsA group of desperate teenagers with nothing to loose form a plot against corperate america, But things beging to happen before they can take their own livesThriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 8 - Words: 7,955 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-29-05 - Published: 6-13-0524. You'd Forgive Me reviewsI should have written this poem a long time ago.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-25-05 - Published: 5-25-0525. Sooner or Later reviewsI like this oneGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-17-05 - Published: 5-17-0526. Chemical WarfareIt's totally got two meanings.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-9-05 - Published: 5-9-0527. A Pure Thing reviewsAn attempt at a love poem. Tell me what you think.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-9-05 - Published: 5-9-0528. A Conversation with the Sun reviewsI'd also like some reviews on this one as well, I'm considering entering it into a poetry contest.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-16-05 - Published: 4-16-0529. Each Human reviewsI'd like some reviews on this, I'm considering entering it into a poetry contest, tell me if you think it will do well.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-16-05 - Published: 4-16-0530. Carnaval Night reviewsI won $500 cash for this poem.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-9-05 - Published: 4-9-0531. Language reviewsA poem for youSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-6-05 - Published: 4-6-0532. Using a Storm as a MetaphoreCan you tell I've been going through a metaphorical freeform style lately?Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-6-05 - Published: 4-6-0533. A Problem Occurs reviewsPoerty should return to the simplicity of the transfer of thoughts and emotionsSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-5-05 - Published: 4-5-0534. Foxtrot India Romeo EchoI have a strange obsession with the NATO phonetic alphabetSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-4-05 - Published: 4-4-0535. The Flying Dream reviewsI've never tried love poetry before.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-1-05 - Published: 4-1-0536. All by myself reviewsI ruined my life all by myselfSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-30-05 - Published: 3-30-0537. Drops reviewsDropsSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-30-05 - Published: 3-30-0538. Arsenic and Oleander reviewsActually if you don't have the and, and run the word together it has 'nicole' in the name. But that's not who it's about.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-05 - Published: 3-23-0539. A Poetic Documentation of Life Part IIIThe third installation in the series of myself.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-8-05 - Published: 3-8-0540. A Poetic Documentation of Life Part II reviewsJust a system of phrases that explain the feelings inside of me during the point of time where I wrote themLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-20-05 - Published: 2-20-0541. A Sad Sappy Sonnet reviewsThe title says it allLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-20-05 - Published: 2-20-0542. I Find Myself reviewsDoes this even count as poerty?School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-2-05 - Published: 2-2-0543. Halfway To Inebriation reviewsJust any old iterpretational poem to express my feelings at the time.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-22-05 - Published: 1-22-0544. Done With Indifference reviewsHow's this for your rhythmn?Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-19-05 - Published: 1-19-0545. You Will Judge Me reviewsMostly satirical. I was t ring out rhythemn and I lost everything I was trying to say. I took a shot at hypocrasySong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-5-05 - Published: 1-5-0546. The New Indifference reviewsTypical situational poetry.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-5-05 - Published: 1-5-0547. Orion reviewsPersonal experienceSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-7-04 - Published: 11-7-0448. My Life is an Ashtray reviewsMetaphorical writing about my lifeSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-23-04 - Published: 10-23-0449. Way to go reviewsIt's a song about a girl that hurt me.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-23-04 - Published: 10-23-0450. PassI'll Pass, thank you.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-23-04 - Published: 10-23-0451. Theist FistsIf you son't know what a theist is, you're in way over your headSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-18-04 - Published: 8-18-0452. Two Parts of the Machine reviewsI'm not sure how to make a summary. It's a reoccuring phrase that enters my mind.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-9-04 - Published: 8-9-0453. A Poetic Documentation of Life reviewsI don't expect you to understand anything.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-6-04 - Published: 7-6-0454. Laughter Drowns out Tears reviewsYou know how it is.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-17-04 - Published: 6-17-0455. Spare the Time reviewsDid you really think you could enter my mind?Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-31-04 - Published: 5-31-0456. Canvas reviewsYour freind's guitar plus your altered consciousness equals this songSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-30-04 - Published: 5-30-0457. Story Book Ending reviewsYou'll understandSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-22-04 - Published: 5-22-0458. Double Yellow Lines reviewsLife is just one complex system of roads and trailsSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-9-04 - Published: 5-9-0459. Defect reviewsAmateur, I wrote it in study hall (No rhyming dictionary)Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 357 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-9-04 - Published: 5-9-0460. In Pain, In Esctasy reviewsSomething dark that grew from my own lonliness.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-2-04 - Published: 5-2-0461. Spell reviewsI don't see whats so great about love.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-2-04 - Published: 5-2-0462. I'm HollowI'm hollowSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-0463. Perhaps reviewsMake it what you wantSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-21-04 - Published: 4-21-0464. Just One Day reviewsAs you can tell.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-21-04 - Published: 4-21-0465. To Each reviewsEverypne has their own problems, and you should respect thatSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-18-04 - Published: 4-18-0466. Lying Next To Me reviewsUghhh... It seemed so real.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-16-04 - Published: 4-16-0467. It is time reviewsIt amazes me how life presses onSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 476 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-9-04 - Published: 4-9-0468. If Our Hearts Could Cry reviewsIt seems the last song had a similar title, but they both have different concepts. This one's about me and everyone else; seperatedSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-7-04 - Published: 4-7-0469. In My Heart reviewsI went soft.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-6-04 - Published: 4-6-0470. American Dream Denial reviewsThis song is about my name. Has no corealtion with the System of a Down songSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-5-04 - Published: 4-5-0471. No sign of Sena » reviewsAbandonedAction - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,783 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-4-04 - Published: 3-7-0472. Love reviewsYour love is my hateSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0473. First Thoughts, Last Words reviewsThe best way to see is to recognizeSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-30-04 - Published: 3-30-0474. Finshed the Search reviewsI've finshed my search, have you?Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-28-04 - Published: 3-28-0475. Meadow of Regretful Souls reviewsThinking about how all too many people needd me to beleive in something I don'tSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-28-04 - Published: 3-28-0476. Green to Grey reviewsPretty self-explanitorySong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-27-04 - Published: 3-27-0477. Burned Away reviewsIt has a lot of hidden symbolism. This one came from somewhere deep in my mind.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-24-04 - Published: 3-24-0478. I Want Peace reviewsThis one is about fighting, and how politicians don't value lives as people, but as foot soldiers. I really do want peace.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-22-04 - Published: 3-22-0479. Mud and Salt reviewsThis should be the last song in a series of anti-organized religion poems I was letting it all out. Someone who knows where I'm comming from please R/RSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-21-04 - Published: 3-21-0480. No one Forgives reviewsThe title says it allSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-21-04 - Published: 3-21-0481. This Life reviewsAskew. The point is there.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-04 - Published: 3-17-0482. My Expense reviewsI feel guilty for being happy, Is that wrong?Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-17-04 - Published: 3-17-0483. I Don't see the way you do reviewsThis isnt aimed at anyone. This is how I feel, and I'm just blowing off some steam in hopes that someone who thinks like me will read this.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-16-04 - Published: 3-16-0484. Truth reviewsI'm pretty sure I was trippin' when I wrote this. It's pretty stupid, but I think deep down in my subconscious it meant somethingSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-16-04 - Published: 3-16-0485. Tainted reviewsChristianity is corruptSong - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-16-04 - Published: 3-16-0486. Nothing to Say reviewsAnother interpretive oneSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-13-04 - Published: 3-13-0487. Taken me Down reviewsUhhh... See what you thinkSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-13-04 - Published: 3-13-0488. Smile and a Wink reviewsEveryone else has corny heartbreak songs.. Why shouldent I?Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-5-04 - Published: 3-5-0489. The Irony of Everyone reviewsI realize it's a little forced, See if you like it.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-3-04 - Published: 3-3-0490. Again reviewsCompletly interpretive, Tell me what it means to you.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-1-04 - Published: 3-1-0491. Always Behind reviewsJust another song..Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-1-04 - Published: 3-1-0492. A Little Bit Sweeter reviewsThis is a combo of an old song and some new stuff I added to it. You probably can tell but the message. I personally love this song. It just poured out of me.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-1-04 - Published: 3-1-0493. Let's Pretend reviewsI know it's short, but I think it makes a point.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-29-04 - Published: 2-29-0494. Write a Song reviewsBesides being a complete cliché, It is what it is...Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-28-04 - Published: 2-28-0495. There reviewsThere's alot of metiphores in here.. They are what you make them to be.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-28-04 - Published: 2-28-0496. They all Say reviewsPlease don't read this one If you're religious. These are my views and experiences and I'm not trying to offend anyone. If you don't have anything nice to say about it..then don't say anything.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-0497. Repressionology reviewsI'm angry at the government.. Can you tell?Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-27-04 - Published: 2-27-0498. The Forest reviewsI created this one while I was thinking alot, I dunno..see if you like it.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-0499. Hippie Anthem reviewsAlot of kids call me a Hippie (even though I hate stereoptypes), and alot of kids that I know are "hippies" too, so I wrote this in tribute to all of you tree huggin, pot smoking non-conformationists out there.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-04100. Let it Go reviewsThis one is about my frustration with God and ChristianitySong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-04101. Time to Kill reviewsThis started off as a rhyming guide for all of my other songs, but when I said it outloud it sounded cool. I eventually put a tune to it.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-04102. I Remember reviewsI really like this oneSong - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-04103. Not Doing AnythingI personally like this one, but I know it's still pretty primativeSong - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-04104. The World Song Part II reviewsThis is another pretty bad one from me. Its all the stuff that didn't go into Part one.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-04105. The World SongThis is one of my oldest works, its pretty amature. Its about how messed up the world is, Like most of my songs.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-25-04 - Published: 2-25-04
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