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Author has written 20 stories for General, Life, Love, Romance, Friendship, and School. I'm 17 years old, and I love to write poetry and stories. Writing is like fuel to me, it keeps me going. I need feedback for my writing though. Since I do someday wish to make this my career. So if you would review my work I would appreciate it. My poems I am hoping will be published someday. But please, point out spelling errors to me so I can go back and fix it. Thanks xoxox. | |||||
1. Bleeding Heart »People ignore you when your down. And by time they notice your pain, its too late.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 10 - Words: 1,086 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-12-05 - Published: 11-27-042. My Heart Is Always Yours reviewsI love him so much... i wrote this for him trying to reach into the deepest part of my soul to express how I feel right now..Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 355 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-2-05 - Published: 3-2-053. The Greatest Gift is you reviewsYou're the love of my life... the fire of my soul... Marcelino, this poem is to you. I love you so much.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-18-05 - Published: 1-18-054. Fighter » reviewsA poem about my ex boyfriend, who was a jerk. And another guy who helped me through the hard times when my ex and his friends tried to destroy my life. R&RLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 410 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-7-04 - Published: 4-1-045. The Phantom Of My DreamsAbout a boy that I liked, and he seemed to like me back. Then her backstabbed me after I trusted him. Funny thing is, I'm dating him now. Damn my tender heart.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-29-04 - Published: 11-29-046. Crying Empty Soul reviewsAnother sap poem about feeling lost in the world. And yearning for a guy, who is never there for you. But for some idiotic reason, you still want him.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-29-04 - Published: 11-29-047. Immunity reviewsAfter a while the rumors get old, and you grow a immunity to their voices. But their words still hurt to the core, which makes you numb.School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-29-04 - Published: 11-29-048. Winter Kisses reviewsA poem about no one in particular. For some reason, it just popped into my mind! Its about making love during winter.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-29-04 - Published: 11-29-049. Sweet Love reviewsShort, simple, and sweet.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-27-04 - Published: 11-27-0410. Memories reviewsThis is dedicated to my Senior class of 2003. I miss you all so much! Remember what Krissy loves you!Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-27-04 - Published: 11-27-0411. No Life Without You reviewsWithout you I am nothing inside. Only when I am with you I am real.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-27-04 - Published: 11-27-0412. Numbness reviewsAbout people in general ignoring my pain and how I feel so numb by it. Don't you ever feel like an empty shell? You don't know the half of it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-28-04 - Published: 10-28-0413. Save Me » reviewsJoan’s wild and carefree nature is being engulfed in flames from the wrath of her abusive father. She moves to a new town, far away from everything she once knew. And now she is about to experience friendship, courage, and perhaps even, love. R&R!Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,865 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-16-04 - Published: 8-12-0414. Never Dark reviewsI love stars... I love everything about them. Enough even, to write about them and how I feel. - Please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 732 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0415. Shallowing the Pain reviewsKind of suicidal, but all in all its one of my prized poems. Please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0416. PathWhich path will you choose before your fate is sealed? Please R&R.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0417. Droplets of Rain reviewsA somewhat depressing poem, but happy in the end. It’s worth the time to read if you love good quality poems.wink wink nudge nudge R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 744 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-1-04 - Published: 4-1-0418. My Drug reviewsI thought up this poem when I was pondering about all the symptoms that you have when you have a crush on someone. It’s rather funny, at least to me it is. Anyway, R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-28-04 - Published: 3-28-0419. Hold on to me reviewsYou never know when one moment, the one you love will be gone. - Read and ReviewLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-12-04 - Published: 3-12-0420. Broken Wings reviewsEver feel like your broken? - Please review.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-12-04 - Published: 3-12-04
