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Lakona
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since: 03-22-04, id: 403689
Author has written 57 stories for General.

I just recently decided to share some of my poetry, the inspiration of it comes from my life's expirences. I have not had the best of lifes, though I know it is not the worst. The most important things to me, as reflected in my poems are Ideas of Love and compasion. I feel that without love, we are dead. So many people forget about important ideals, love and morality are replaced with lust and material desires. The world has changed from what it was, gone are the days of duty and honor, of friendship and loyalty, gone is the Love for all. Although I am not that old, people refer to me as an old soul. I live online, where it is easier to hide. Please review my poems, it makes me smile when people do so. I am hoping that eventually every one of my poems will have at least one review. I have become some what of an online helper for those in need of empathetic help, and I love being able to help people, so if you want to contact me feel free to do so. May the journey in this life treat you well, and may we remember what is truly important in the world.

What is a life without love and without living? What is a friend without trust and without friendship?Who are we without our humanity?

my msn is rocketmanjc210@hotmail aim is rocketmanj210 and yim is rocketmanj210

Thank You




1. Hate Me reviews
This poem is my reaction to recent actions that have been taken out against me at my college. Please Read and Review, it has been a while since I published a new poem and I am looking forward to hearing what people think about it. Many Thanks
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-17-07 - Published: 11-17-07
2. My Best Friend reviews
We’ve made it through so much, why leave now? Thank you for all the great things you’ve done for me. I don’t want to lose how close we are. Please don’t make it end.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-27-05 - Published: 9-27-05
3. Could it be? reviews
A more positive one from me, for a change just wish I knew the ending. In dedication to my friends. Please read and review.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 542 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-6-05 - Published: 9-6-05
4. Death Come to me reviews
When your heart is broken yet again.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-5-05 - Published: 9-5-05
5. As I say Goodbye reviews
Some would call this suicide; some would call it selfish ignorance. Its better then a life cast away and isolated. Please read and review, my poems are personal to me, and I want to hear what people think of them. The writing may be week, but the emoti
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-05
6. Alone reviews
Disappointed in myself after once again having false hope; Life is a sick twisted joke, hard to be happy at good news which leaves you behind. Not that great of a poem, written in feelings ignoring form. Please R&R; that would mean a lot. Thanks.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-4-05 - Published: 7-4-05
7. Crying Alone in the Rain reviews
Anyone ever stood up or left alone can relate. Please read and review.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-9-05 - Published: 5-9-05
8. Friendship reviews
Those that walk alone understand what I say, others can’t even come close to understanding its full emotion. Please read and review, the more reviews, the more I can improve. Thanks
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-05 - Published: 5-9-05
9. Disappointment reviews
I fall into the trap of positive thinking too much, never a good thing to do. Please read and review, I love being reviewed.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-2-05 - Published: 5-2-05
10. Sacrifice reviews
Something I started while in a good mood, but due to recent events, ended the typical way. Please review.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-23-05 - Published: 3-23-05
11. Failure reviews
What keeps holding me back in life.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-19-05 - Published: 3-19-05
12. In Blood reviews
What I was feeling like. The dark depression that is me, Life lost without Love.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-8-05 - Published: 3-8-05
13. Because we are Closed reviews
Not so much a poem, well It is different.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-8-05 - Published: 2-8-05
14. Back to the Silence reviews
Title tells.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-16-05 - Published: 1-16-05
15. This Deep Desire reviews
Desire can lead to ones downfall.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-15-05 - Published: 1-15-05
16. Crying without Rain reviews
Certain days of the year are hard for me, I am reminded of how lonely life can be.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-25-04 - Published: 12-25-04
17. Walk on By reviews
What it is like to be loved by words alone.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-04 - Published: 12-8-04
18. Bittersweet Life reviews
Not that great, I need to develop this farther
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-4-04 - Published: 11-4-04
19. Avoidance
Self-explanitory
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-31-04 - Published: 10-31-04
20. Let Go reviews
Self explanitory
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-04
21. Left reviews
Left in Love, Left in Life. Now what?
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-18-04 - Published: 10-18-04
22. Death and Life reviews
You can't always get what you want.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-17-04 - Published: 10-17-04
23. The Haunted Dream
Same as Title
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-16-04 - Published: 10-16-04
24. Illiterate Cost reviews
Inspired from an English essay
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-16-04 - Published: 10-16-04
25. Blood reviews
Nothing special.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-9-04 - Published: 10-9-04
26. I Forgot reviews
The title tells all about life.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-7-04 - Published: 10-7-04
27. Happy reviews
Not what it seems
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-6-04 - Published: 10-6-04
28. Abandoned and Abused reviews
small and simple
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-6-04 - Published: 10-6-04
29. Fire from the Saint reviews
The beauty of mount St. Helen inspired this, as well as the path humanity walks.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-6-04 - Published: 10-6-04
30. Simply me reviews
Simply me
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-30-04 - Published: 9-30-04
31. Indifferent reviews
Indifferent Existence
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-30-04 - Published: 9-30-04
32. Dreams reviews
I often dream about what it would be like, to be alive.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-29-04 - Published: 9-29-04
33. Invisible Death reviews
Just what i felt like today.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-04 - Published: 9-23-04
34. It is Here reviews
Inspired by the hate mandkind has for itself
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-21-04 - Published: 9-21-04
35. Internal Conflict reviews
Inspired by a painting, what only I see
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-10-04 - Published: 9-10-04
36. My Gift to you reviews
I gave all I could, it wasn't enough
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-31-04 - Published: 8-31-04
37. Betrayal reviews
I betrayed myself.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-10-04 - Published: 8-10-04
38. I never learn
I make the same mistake, just to make it again. Love isn't meant for me. I want to belive a lie, and end up just with more pain.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-9-04 - Published: 8-9-04
39. What now
Far too offten I end up in this situation.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-9-04 - Published: 8-9-04
40. Not that it matter's reviews
I found a group of friends. They were my family. I now leave them in shame. Not that they care.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-9-04 - Published: 8-9-04
41. Loss of my Day reviews
The day I thought I had was merely a dream.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-8-04 - Published: 8-8-04
42. The Cold
I let my hopes up, to fail myself and lose a freind.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-8-04 - Published: 8-8-04
43. Scar of Time reviews
Time dosent change everything, some scars run too deep.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-29-04 - Published: 7-29-04
44. It wasn't meant to be reviews
It's self explanatory
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-15-04 - Published: 6-15-04
45. Nights reviews
what i miss
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-4-04 - Published: 6-4-04
46. This is not life
what life turned ou to be
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-4-04 - Published: 6-4-04
47. Be Done
What's left for me
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-4-04 - Published: 6-4-04
48. My Mask reviews
To keep a friend, I wear this mask
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-13-04 - Published: 5-13-04
49. My Life reviews
What it is like to be me
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-04 - Published: 5-13-04
50. Goodbye Friend reviews
This is after a long lost freindship I thought I had
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-15-04 - Published: 4-15-04
51. I thought I had a Freind reviews
I thought I had a freind, she is christian, then it became clear she befriended me to convert me.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-13-04 - Published: 4-13-04
52. Hear Me reviews
an older poem of mine
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 544 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-04 - Published: 3-22-04
53. Love's Realities reviews
what love should be
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,772 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-04 - Published: 3-22-04
54. Isolation's Reality reviews
Life lived alone
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 966 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-04 - Published: 3-22-04
55. My Plea reviews
also a dark poem
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 534 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-22-04 - Published: 3-22-04
56. Existance reviews
what life is like for me
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 943 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-04 - Published: 3-22-04
57. MY Desire reviews
This showes the darker nature within me
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 763 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-22-04 - Published: 3-22-04
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