Arfean
PM . Follow . Favorite . Feed
since: 04-15-04, id: 408242, Profile Updated: 12-21-12
country: Australia
Author has written 11 stories for Supernatural, General, Fantasy, Friendship, Fantasy, Spiritual, and Essay.

Hello,

I am a university student from Sydney, Australia. I've been on this site for years now, so if you scroll down, you'll find some very old samples of my writing. Please don't judge me too harshly for them, everyone has to start somewhere.

About my stories:

A Vampire's Love: this is something that I scribbled down in about ten minutes and posted up without even editing it properly. It was a bit of a surprise to realise that this story is the most popular story I published on this site. I am sorry to say, there will not be a sequel.

By Any Means: my NaNoWriMo novel from 2012. I still don't have an ending, but the first 90,000 words have been written.

Reviews:

Every review makes my day, but I am also looking for constructive criticism. Your thoughts on my syntax would be particularly appreciated, English is not my native language and sentence formation has been a problem in the past.

If you write prose, I'll be glad to return the favour and review your work.

PS: I have nothing against poetry, but I don't write it much and would have no idea how to give a fair critique.


1. Murphy's Law
Three friends set out on a tour of Europe, their fencing gear in tow. Seven weeks, four countries, four world-class calibre fencing competitions. What can possibly go wrong?
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,150 - Published: 1-21-13
2. By Any Means » reviews
Cerianno and Aleanna, younger children of a minor Ellerian noble turned merchant, know that one day they will escape the oppressive atmosphere of the family manor and have the chance to make their own mark on the world. Life, however, likes to throw out surprises.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,267 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-19-12 - Published: 12-6-12
3. Children of the Revolution » reviews
Among the sweeping changes the revolution brings are always the personal stories of those involved. Too often those few in the centre of the events pay a high price for the idealism of the many. Formerly known as 'The Little King'
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,568 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-22-07 - Published: 10-11-06
4. A Vampire's Love reviews
Quick piece about a vampire and a human in a dark garden
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 401 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-21-07 - Complete
5. Othello reviews
An essay written for English class on the Post-Modernist interpretation of 'Othello'
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,451 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-9-06
6. For Iscar »
A look at the life of a man in a highly militaristic society. Inspired by Orwell's 'Nineteen Eighty-Four '.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,075 - Updated: 9-28-06 - Published: 6-11-06
7. Death's Daughter reviews
Ahh...this is rather hard to summarise. Story of two children in a world that does not care for anyone. Please do read.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: M - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 752 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-1-06
8. Once reviews
A poen about tle loss of innocence in maturity
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-10-06
9. The Tortured
A poem that began as part of a fanfiction story, but has evolved to becme an independant piece. Please read and review
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Published: 6-10-06
10. Sudden Death reviews
a short piece on the sport of fencing, please review!
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,552 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-18-06
11. The Gift reviews
A stranger appears at the door and the events unfold, one-shot scribbled down last week
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 871 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-12-05