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since: 04-21-04, id: 409429
Author has written 2 stories for Fantasy, and Fantasy.
Bio:

Quote of the Week!! Live, love, laugh; love like they are dying tommorrow, live like today is your last, laugh as if you could never laugh again.

Name: Lexi

Age: 14

Grade: eighth

Where I live: Minnesota (and I'm not a hick!)

Nicknames: teddy bear

Siblings: unknown

Fave Authors Tamora Pierce, dancersweetheart(that is not my doing), and whoever else I forgot to mention

Fave music groups: Jessica Simpson, Shania Twain, Toby Keith,

Fave Movies: Pirates of the Caribbean, Finding Nemo, Harry Potter,

Hair color: Dirty dishwater blonde.

Eye Color: Blue or green, it depends, i have very beautiful eyes.

Sports: Soccer, horseback riding,running, swimming just not at school.

pets: Horses; Shannon and Shadow, Cat; Dino, Dog; Goldie and Sugarbear

Story Stats:

Fire, Ice and Stars I have to say, this is one of my best stories. It is about young Princess Sadi, living a life that makes most jealous, until something haunts. She doesn't know who or what it wants with her. Can she survive or will she perish in some fate unknown to human-kind?

Sorry to my reviewers who are actually waiting for chapter two in Fire, Ice and Stars, I have the second chapter all written it just has to be reviezed, (hint, hint).

Okay this is for the reviews with the flames, (or sparks). I have to say who are very good with my mistakes!! I am amazed, but being a beginnning writer I still have lots to learned but have learned lots since I started a year ago.

Also I am only answering serious reviews. I know, I know, I am not a serious reviewer myself, but I read tons of stories when I on here and the little pansy stories with out any plot or fun, I just give the person something to read.

Acidic Quill-Okay who seemed to have missed the point, which isn't your fault, its mine. The whole point of the first chapter was the first scene, ...wait the whole point of the book! Have you had the scence that someone is staring right at you and your freak out? Every little twig snap makes you jump of your skin and where you begin to imagine things that aren't there to scare you more? Well that was the mood I was trying to create. To answer your question, yes someone is there, no it is not a bird. As for the action, it won't come to the max for a few more chapters.
Be patient,

Jeez, you expect that this one chapter is the whole story. *Shakes head*

And to my little reviewers Sadi is not stuck up!!!! She was scared out of her wits! I did get carried away though....

To kezya Thank you for your review and pointing out my mistakes, she is thin, and 5'9" tall not wide...Don't worry my little Sadi will get humbled...later... though. The first few chapters have to envolve you in the story and introduce the plot. (I hate books that the plot starts in the 8th chapter!) So she will get humbled. And when I say grumbled I probably meant mutter in an undertone.

To J.T Beaver Thankyou for your advise, sorry I took you off my fave's list...I needed to look up your story, doesn't mean I don't like you non the less. Semi-colons yes they are handy. Probably in a month or two I will take down my stories and have them edited once again. Maybe I'll check out your story and take the *cough*

Zoey7 Yes it is supposed to be fast so no worries. Srry about the spelling and mechanical errors, I don't know how I got into Advanced English!

To other reviewers I will try to get to your stories sooner of later and answers to your reviews but it all takes time and I am at school or doing homework a lot.

Recommended stories: Any of the works of Chicabobo are excellant I recommend her strongly.

Also a great story in the making is Disgraced by AlohaSunrise, I did kinda give them flames but Shaylee needs better treatment, but it is still my fave.

Also dancersweetheart is the best writer I know personally. Check her stories out!

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1. Fire, Ice and Stars » reviews
Princess Sadi's life is every girl's dreams, except for her terrible secret she is unaware of.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,180 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 10-2-04 - Published: 8-28-04
2. Dreams reviews
Who said dreams can't cpme true.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-31-04 - Published: 8-31-04
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