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Author has written 31 stories for Action, Life, Religion, General, Nature, Essay, School, Play, Spiritual, and Friendship. I am blank faced and spastic at the same time. Expressionless and yet always energetic and the first to jump in my seat when someone in my class drops their binder (on average this happens about 3 times everyday.) I am 11 years old and in 6th grade, but please do not let my age interfere when critquing my writing. I know I'm quite young physically, but in my mind I feel a bit like an equal to you teenagers and adults who I discuss important topics about in message forums, and that if I was just a little bit older, I could do a lot more for the world and for Christ. God be with you all.
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1. UnsatisfactionI gain no satisfaction from when the smallest fraction of the audience deciphers the act- even if they did not destroy it, keeping it to themselves, can you still say the act was unbeaten?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-12-05 - Published: 1-12-052. SnapshotAnalyzing the scene and feeling full comprehension of one snapshot, quick moment, tracing back footsteps that you found yourself to answer questions they didn't ask you so you could have a scene to yourself.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-12-05 - Published: 1-12-053. Revolution of the EyeWho can detect the revolution of the eye? The iris of one soul piercing another, streaming music meaning pouring instantly. Who can stop them now? They've stayed throughout all ages and still the epiphanies are rising.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-6-05 - Published: 1-6-054. The Games, the Gossipers and the Gone reviewsThey're all the same. You who cry yourself to sleep, the gossipers, the people who don't gossip but don't stop the gossipers either...don't you all the play the games? If you don't stop them, you play them. Don't deny it.School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-045. A Mocking Chocolate reviewsA morsel of chocolate dropped on the tip of a dull tongue The numbed sense can see the action It imagines its rewarding taste...A taunting hint of sweetness leaves it only wanting more...grr, I think this is my worst one yet...sorta cliched...what do youGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-046. Unnatural reviewsThe frozen grass cries that what is now isn't natural...it's anything it's meant to be...does this ring a bell? Is this like something, somebody...ourselves?...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-14-04 - Published: 12-14-047. Are We Thankful? reviewsYeah, I know this is around Thanksgiving time. But I really don't think that we're thankful enough, not thankful enough of just being alive. We're all supposedly "thankful" of everything life GIVES us, but do you ever really savor life itself?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-21-04 - Published: 11-21-048. Tension, Plight and the Meaning of Salvation reviewsWhat does it mean to be saved? Gasping, choking, trapped, gyring faster, near the end, can you, will you, should you...confess to the light? Now clouds and darkness no longer satisfy...yes! awaken unto new life...Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-10-04 - Published: 11-10-049. A Signal of Dwindling reviewsThe atmosphere gives a signal, if only to one eye, that the day is dwindling away it's splendor now. These hurried spurs of midday whispers are too groaning and tired to mend. These cannot satisfy the beast. Written during study today.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-27-04 - Published: 10-27-0410. Of Nests and Banquet Hall Debate Arenas reviewsI envy those people who are like nests- people go over to them when they are tired and beaten and spill their day on them. I- I am the banquet hall, where they stroll down just to give a good impression once in a long while.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-20-04 - Published: 10-20-0411. An Armor of Faith reviewsWe are filled with a stronger sensation of grace as we wear this armor of faith. It is a faith where we know love is real and truth is nigh, where we will not runaway from battle and things unseen are found. We no longer belong to this world, but to God,Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-16-04 - Published: 10-16-0412. If You've Ever Been Forgotten reviewsIf you've been forgotten, if you're very name has been cursed by others, if you ache from lost love or had lies about you poured out across the skies, know that God has felt this thousands by thousands ever since starlight began.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-8-04 - Published: 10-8-0413. Life's Not Luck reviewsLife isn't luck. Luck is just something some people believe in because God is someone they don't want to trust. Life's bigger then something like luck that to explain it.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-19-04 - Published: 9-19-0414. Math Skit Powers ExponentsA skit I wrote for Math (I'm trying to get extra credit, because I haven't been very active in class and am trying to make a good impression on the teacher) explaining powers and exponents. Light Reading.Play - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,218 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-16-04 - Published: 9-16-0415. The RemnantI was reading the short book of Zephaniah, and I had the sudden urge to write this poem. Sort of based on the things said in Zephaniah, but not entirely. Not everyone will enjoy, I guess. Tell me what you think.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-20-04 - Published: 8-20-0416. A Lack of ThunderThoughts and questions describing the lack of thunder outside the wind of my box of rantings this summer. It's been forever since I last wrote a poem, so it's all sum-all-the-happenings-of-the-wind.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-4-04 - Published: 8-4-0417. Phillis Wheatley reviewsAn essay thing on Phillis Wheatley that I wrote for school a few months ago.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,056 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-30-04 - Published: 7-30-0418. This Guy reviewsI wrote this a long time ago, and it's also posted on my fanfiction.net account. However, on fanfiction i didn't get any reviews on it so I'm posting it here. A short, warm-ish story about a very little girl named Cara.Spiritual - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 582 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-29-04 - Published: 7-29-0419. MakeUp reviewsMakeup. The wording is interesting. As though whoever invented it thought you could make up who you were with such man-made shallowness adding to what naturalness God meant you to be.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-26-04 - Published: 6-26-0420. Math Skit reviewsI wrote this with a friend several months ago for extra credit, except we never got around to doing it. It's fun, and about how 2 kids learn the importance of math.For light reading.Play - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,177 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-22-04 - Published: 6-22-0421. End of the School Year reviewsIt's end of the school year.I'm in fifth grade,and moving on to something bigger.Whether you're a fifth grader,an 8th grader,or a 12th grader,either one,you are too.We're leaving something behind.School - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-13-04 - Published: 6-13-0422. DARE Final Reflection Essay reviewsThis year at school my grade had a program called DARE: Drug Abuse Resistance Education. We're close to finishing the program,and we had to write an essay on what we thought and learned.This is mine.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,077 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-29-04 - Published: 5-29-0423. Life of an Ant reviewsAnts.We don't hesitate to step on them when they crawl into our kitchen,do we? But we don't stop to think about the sad life that the ant leads.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-28-04 - Published: 5-28-0424. Songs of Regret and Questions reviewsMy SISTER wrote this! I'm merely putting it up on FictionPress so she can see what other people think of her writing.Talk of fate,regret,stars,etc.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-22-04 - Published: 5-22-0425. Inspiration and Remedies reviewsBelievers,yes,we disagree with non-believers and those who strike out against at us.But,we have our own faults.Don't you remember?It's called love and forgiveness that sometimes we lack.Open to all readers.Comments appreciated.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-18-04 - Published: 5-18-0426. The Sky reviewsThe world has gone so wrong. And through all those years, the sky was there. Watching. (metaphorical with other unmentioned topics.)Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-04 - Published: 5-13-0427. Futile Remedy reviewsA short poem on revenge and what heavy consequences that we deserve when we take our revenge. Such a futile remedy.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-10-04 - Published: 5-10-0428. Who Am I? reviewsWho are we all? You can't tell who we are by just some titles to write down on 'Hello I Am ' tags.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-30-04 - Published: 4-30-0429. A Tear of Guilt reviewsWe go around saying "This is wrong! Why are you doing that? This is so stupid! Why won't you listen?..." But it's really our own faults for the way the world is today.Repent and be forgiven!Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-26-04 - Published: 4-26-0430. Best of Fifth Grade Poetry reviewsLooking through my files, I found a little file of some poetry, and I'm posting up the ones here that I think are the best. And, as I'm in 10 years old, let's see what you think of a fifth-grader's poetry. Just take a look please,and maybe review !Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 413 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-26-04 - Published: 4-26-0431. Birds of Prey » reviewsHelen and Clarice and tons of other orphans live at the home. They spend their days working and being treated harshly with hardly any liberties from the owners of the home, fearfully only called "them".One day they escape.What will happen next?Action - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,176 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-04 - Published: 4-24-04
