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1. Duality

Poetry. I would really appreciate reviews, interpretations, criticism, thoughts, opinions, or any kind of feedback. Pretty please.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Published: 5-16-13 - Complete

2. Private Voyeur

Please review. It's an "I" poem, which I generally don't like and I kind of think it's crappy all on its own. I'd love to get some serious, critical feedback.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Published: 4-17-13 - Complete

3. Bad Poet reviews

Opinions would be awesome. Thanks for reading.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-18-13 - Complete

4. Unhappy Mollusk

I re-uploaded it because there was an error.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Published: 10-12-12 - Complete

5. Blind reviews

I wrote it because I like someone. Reviews and criticism are pleaded for.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-12-12 - Complete

6. Corners Cutting

Short and to the point. And it's not formatted how I want. Waah.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Published: 10-8-12 - Complete

7. Sir, Please Focus

A short, blurry, not-very-good poem that I scribbled out. Your thoughts are welcome and appreciated.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Published: 10-20-11 - Complete

8. traversion reviews

Poetry. Constructive criticism and interpretations are encouraged and greatly, greatly appreciated because I don't think this is very good.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 325 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-13-11 - Complete

9. So You Can Hit Yourself reviews

While struggling to overcome writer's block, I concocted this half-decent little poem.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-22-11 - Complete

10. The Capital Woman

A short story I wrote for class. It's basically an extended metaphor. Any constructive criticism is appreciated, but please be gentle; I fancy myself a poet, not a fiction writer. Rated for language.

Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,009 - Published: 4-24-11 - Complete

11. Image of a Man reviews

A poem I wrote for class. My professor said that the speaker isn't clear and I'm concerned that the overall message gets lost. Constructive criticism on these things would be appreciated.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-24-11 - Complete

12. Comfort Wasted reviews

I must break this habit of posting so late. This is a brief poem I wrote for class. What grade do you think it deserves?

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-2-11 - Complete

13. Where was Miss Cleo? reviews

As usual, I have no confidence about my poetry. This poem is pretty different for me stylistically. Consider it a dramatic monologue. I am begging you for feedback.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 474 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-12-11 - Complete

14. Norm

Such a bummer.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Published: 2-11-11 - Complete

15. Fever 104 reviews

A poem inspired by Fever 103 by Sylvia Plath. Any constructive review is appreciated because I have no idea if this is any good.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-15-10 - Complete

16. Still reviews

Take from it what you will. Nobody wants to read poetry this late.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-7-10 - Complete

17. Grow Up Kid reviews

Eh. Read it if you don't have anything better to do.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-23-10

18. It Came from a Monkey reviews

A timeline of the death of hope.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-27-10 - Complete

19. Monster Mouth

You Oughta Know. Kind of a mediocre poem written out of anger.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Published: 12-26-09 - Complete

20. To the Victor Goes

Just read it.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Published: 10-2-09 - Complete

21. Aliens Should Invade reviews

Hippie bullshit.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-10-09 - Complete

22. Fantasy Energy reviews

I dunno. It's not great. And it's too late right now, no one will read it. lol.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-7-09 - Complete

23. Parking Brake Lovers reviews

Missed messages.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-6-09 - Complete

24. Monopoly

Eh. I dunno.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Published: 4-30-09 - Complete

25. The Future Is reviews

Let me know what you think.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-28-09 - Complete

26. Please Save Me reviews

Kind of a piece of crap.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-30-09 - Complete

27. Reprobate

I actually don't think this poem is all that awful. lol.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Published: 2-3-09 - Complete

28. If You Really Looked at the Stars

A fairly mediocre poem. It's more of a splurge of emotion than anything and that's not something I do often so, you can be certain the next poem I post will be very political. lol.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Published: 1-31-09 - Complete

29. I Wrote this at the Office

Like the poem I posted yesterday, this one is not great. But, it's not toally suckish. Check it.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Published: 1-28-09 - Complete

30. Trading Sloppy Blowjobs reviews

A poem I wrote the other day. It's no work of art but, I suppose it doesn't suck. lol. Lemme know what you think.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-27-09 - Complete

31. Who's Killing Us? reviews

This poem is little rambly. It's not the best that I've ever written. But, here it is. lol.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 357 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-4-09 - Complete

32. Why We Should be Socialist

I wrote this in, what I consider to be, an interesting format. Check it out.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Published: 11-17-08 - Complete

33. The Last Love Song

Nothing matters anymore.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Published: 11-3-08 - Complete

34. Youth reviews

The world.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-15-08 - Complete

35. These Laws of Physics

If we were stars.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Published: 9-30-08 - Complete

36. Hurricane Force reviews

This poem is unlike any other I've ever written. It's a little more raw and in-your-face. I crave feedback on it. So, read and review. Please.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-17-08 - Complete

37. All we need is Love reviews

And this is how we go about making it.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-13-08 - Complete

38. Oblivious reviews

A short poem I wrote just before my Social Problems class. Tell me what you think.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-8-08 - Complete

39. Criticism reviews

Take what the critics say.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-26-08 - Complete

40. The One Way Out reviews

A different kind of poem than I've written before. Take what you will from it. Reviews are always appreciated.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-26-08 - Complete

41. The Big Sleep reviews

Sleep is our most significant waste of time. Kind of some fun with my screenname in this poem.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-3-08 - Complete

42. Tortoise reviews

So what?

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-29-08 - Complete

43. God is Not Dead Yet reviews

Orignally, this poem was a response to something I had heard Rush Limbaugh make. The poem is not about him at all. lol. Read it and tell me what you think of it. What it makes you think about. etc.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-11-08 - Complete

44. All It Takes

If there were heroes left.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Published: 5-11-08 - Complete

45. Jejune reviews

I wrote this poem while intoxicated. Please go easy on it.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-16-08 - Complete

46. Nullified reviews

I write for you.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-1-08 - Complete

47. The Sociopath reviews

Negative thinking.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-16-08 - Complete

48. Shadow reviews

Where the light breaks.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-29-08 - Complete

49. The Apple of My Eyes reviews

A rather fruity love poem. :

Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-08 - Complete

50. The First Verse reviews

Where has God gone?

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-30-08 - Complete

51. Give In reviews

Please read it. Please tell me what you think about it. Please tell me what you think it's about.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-4-07 - Complete

52. Abort! Abort! reviews

Ah...I'm not sure what to say. Just read it, please?

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-3-07 - Complete

53. Amen reviews

So be it.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-30-07 - Complete

54. Remorse reviews

The sun exploded.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-23-07 - Complete

55. Wrinkling reviews

A sonnet that I wrote by request of a friend quite a while ago. I'm just posting it since my writer's block has yet to lift. I wrote it on a whim but, I think it came out pretty good. Let me know what you think.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-07 - Complete

56. Squint reviews

Driving. Please review, it would mean a lot to me.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-19-07 - Complete

57. Retrospect reviews

I'm honestly nervous about posting a poem that is SO short but, it's four lines and a haiku is only three so, I guess it counts. lol. It's kind of political but, it's short so, give it a read? And reviews are always great.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-16-07 - Complete

58. Gravity reviews

Kind of a romance poem. Little bit spur of the moment so, the structure is...nonexistant. lol. But, I think it's kind of neat so, read and maybe tell what me what you think? :

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-24-07 - Complete

59. Dirt and Water reviews

Thinking and overthinking. Once more, as is character of my personality, I post this with little confidence. lol. I'm not certain that even I have interpretted each nuance in the poem. Please read it and give me some feedback. I would much appreciate it

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-5-07 - Complete

60. Hazard Inc Destruction Company reviews

Um, it's...alright. lol. I never have any confidence after I've finished writing. But, it's alright. lol. Please read it. Kind of an emotional poem, nothing with any real meaning.

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-4-07 - Complete

61. The Aryan reviews

Kind of a short piece that I'm not very proud of. I just scrawled it out of boredom in school. It's extremely short, only six lines, so, I'd appreciate some feedback. :] Kind of an antiwar thing.

Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-29-07 - Complete

62. Cancer Cure reviews

Ah...it's a bit iffy. Just read it, please? Lots of anger in this poem. Any opinion would be appreciated.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-20-07 - Complete

63. With You reviews

I'm craving some real feedback for this one. I'm not sure how well it's written. Any kind of review would be appreciated. I really want to know if the poem can be understood.

Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-2-07 - Complete

64. The Folly reviews

It's short. It's mediocre. I wrote it spur of the moment so, don't expect much but, please read it and tell me what you think. :]

Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-23-07

65. Zirconium reviews

I owe the correct spelling of the title of this poem to no.peace.los.angeles: A very fine writer whose work you should check out.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-13-07 - Complete

66. None of That reviews

When the breathing keeps you awake.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-27-07 - Complete

67. Fungus Clouds reviews

To our warriors. Antiwar poem. Read and interperet.

Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-23-07 - Complete

68. Speak Not of Missing Breath reviews

Poetry. He doesn't admit to his sadness because, to him, there's nothing wrong.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - Spanish - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-8-07 - Complete

69. Putrefy reviews

Adding injury to injury. Reviews would be awesome.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-19-06 - Complete

70. Context Clues reviews

I think it's reasonably good but, it contains personal facts and my own experiences that make it less than appealing to the casual reader. But, perhaps you could lemme know what you think anyways?

Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-8-06 - Complete

71. In the AM reviews

A poem that I am extremely proud of. I'd tell you what it's about but, literature is meant to be interpretted and I'd like to hear what someone else thinks of it. ANY kind of review would be greatly appreciated as long as it isn't mean or something. lol.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-19-06

72. IRE reviews

He lost himself in the rage that he fed. Not a lot of planning went into this, it just kind of happened. Reviews would be super cool.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 427 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-22-06

73. hahahaFuck You reviews

He was imperfect.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 286 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-20-06

74. Dead Man's Chest reviews

A fun interpretation of the title of the new Pirates of the Caribbean. When you lose love that you can't forget, you live inside his chest.

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-5-06

75. The Prophecy of the Dying Sky » reviews

The Sky is falling. Kind of a series I'm doing. They don't have much to do with one another except for the sky concept. Please R R

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 496 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-23-06

76. Nothing Exists reviews

I know it's out there somewhere

Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 357 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-1-06

77. The Baby Disease reviews

Anti-abortion. Rather harsh. Please R R.

Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 11-22-05

78. No One's There reviews

That dial tone just won't go away. No matter what I do, No One's There. Please Read and Review.

Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-22-05

79. But reviews

I'm not sure where this poem came from but, here it is. Please read and review.

Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-10-05

80. Emancipation Obliteration reviews

Love. Everytone understands this. Everyone but the one person that really matters.

Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 445 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-29-05

81. The Second Face of Love reviews

You'd never think it was about America

Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-5-05

82. Child Fucker reviews

Political poetry, you can tell I really love my country. Please read a review, I always appreciate it.

Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3-18-05

83. Inside The Copy reviews

This turned out to be a religous poem even though that's not how it started. I'm a little concerned that you guys will understand what I'm trying to say in this so, if you get it, tell me in a review so I'll know the message got across.

Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-20-04