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David Mackinnon
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since: 05-11-04, id: 412731
Author has written 1 story for Thriller.
 
1. Sacrifice » reviews
Prologue Has lots of gore, Not so much in the story until later though. Bad language, but very descriptive. So far at chapter 3. Planning to go to 20 or 30. Help me out, please tell me how to make this better.
Thriller - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,234 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-14-04 - Published: 5-14-04
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