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since: 05-12-04, id: 412895, Profile edited: 09-16-08
Author has written 42 stories for Life, General, Love, Nature, Family, Humor, Friendship, Religion, War, Song, and Essay.

Hi there! You've reached the former page of KarakurenaiFushichou, aka the Crimson Phoenix. I'm writing under a new name, and I just go by GiZMo now; it's much easier to say, spell, and type. It's been AGES since I've done ANYTHING, but check back for new stuff anytime because you never know when I'll actually have enough time and be dumb enough to upload stuff. I still have all of my Honors World Lit 10 and AP Language/Literature stuff, so I'll be putting those up...in my spare time. Which is to say, never, haha. No, actually, once I'm done swimming, I'll be able to write again. Thanks to all of my reviewers; your criticism (if there IS any...) is greatly appreciated. By the way, to any new readers who happen to have stumbled across this, I'm one of those crazy authors that welcomes criticism - when it's actually constructive. No flames, no empty praise: big egos are hard to get through the door and flames/flamers are not good for my blood pressure (or so I've been told). That's all for me. Later!

GiZMo




1. Angeli e Demone reviews
Title means "Angels and Demons". Poem in English. First draft, reviews greatly appreciated.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-16-08 - Published: 9-16-08
2. Ode to Icarus
Written after discussion in Lit. First draft. Comments appreciated.
Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-16-08 - Published: 9-16-08
3. Silhouette reviews
Inspired by "Scar Night" by Alan Campbell. My response to Valentine's Day. I was surprised that a published poet actually couldn't find anything wrong with this; critiqued during a workshop at school.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-19-08 - Published: 2-19-08
4. To Kill a King's Man reviews
An essay written for my AP Language class. A comparison between To Kill a Mockingbird and All the King's Men.
Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 827 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-28-07 - Published: 8-28-07
5. Lifeguard reviews
I'm a lifeguard it's my job to save people. But I can't seem to save the person who matters most to me. Written for Nomadchan.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-2-06 - Published: 11-2-06
6. What I Never Said to You reviews
I dreamt that I the guy from the last poem I wrote died before I could tell him how I felt; my response.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-25-06 - Published: 9-25-06
7. You Are reviews
I didn't realize how much I really liked him, until I wrote this. It's cheesy, it's lame, but I love it because it really puts my feelings for him out there. Bad summary. Review please.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-9-06 - Published: 9-9-06
8. Forgive Us Our Sins » reviews
Although I've turned my back on you, know I'm truly remorseful. Written based on a picture I drew a month or so ago soon to be uploaded on my site.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-20-06 - Published: 1-4-06
9. To You reviews
It's a little late, I know, but this is a poem I wrote for my boyfriend for Valentine's Day. We live an hour and a half away from each other, so he doesn't even have his present yet. Oops.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
10. Stay the Same
You've changed so much, your personality's like Jekyll and Hyde/I didn't fall in love with the drugs the sex the lies
Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
11. My Own Apocalypse
I brought on my own apocalypse.
Song - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
12. If I Lost You reviews
I've been having dreams in which I keep losing my boyfriend, and I'm having issues telling him, so I wrote him a poem.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
13. Grey
A poem based on the color of the sky during first period Honors World Lit during December/January.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
14. Fall reviews
I always tried to hide stuff from everyone...
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
15. Snuffed reviews
She left me; she was my life. Written based on a rejected proposition for art class.
Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 280 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
16. Fallen Angel reviews
You only see what you want to see.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
17. Burned
A sucky poem I wrote a while ago I was tired of people looking at me and not seeing past my clothes and actions. They still don't, but it was worth a shot.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
18. Just Because
I walked away from you because you kept playing games with me; I didn't intend on you ignoring me. I only want to come back to you.
Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
19. Rain reviews
Look at how far I've fallen...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-06
20. Mind Games reviews
Stop playing these games with me!
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-06
21. Lost Valentines Day
I've lost you, my only; I'll avenge you...
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-06
22. Chills
I want you, but I can't have you I'll have to settle for the chills you send racing up and down my spine.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-06
23. Blood Price
How many more people have to pay the ultimate price?
Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-06
24. Lifesaver
I was drowning, but you saved me. You're an angel on Earth, come to save my lost soul.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-06 - Published: 1-4-06
25. Call on Me reviews
You know you can call on me at any time and I'll be there for you.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-4-06 - Published: 1-4-06
26. Pain
I can ignore all pain save one; the one you cause my heart.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-06 - Published: 1-4-06
27. Look at Me reviews
If I'm unsure at first, don't be worried; I've never done this before. But if you'd only hold me, maybe you'd see...
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-4-06 - Published: 1-4-06
28. The Reason You Can't Date a Swimmer reviews
A list of the reasons why it's not such a good idea to date a swimmer.
Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-05
29. The Care and Keeping of Swimmers reviews
Rated for mild language. A complete, comprehensive guide on how to care for your teenage swimmer!
Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-05
30. Begging reviews
I'm begging you, please just say it!
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-05
31. You reviews
Sonnet written for my World Lit class. Based off of a picture from swim camp.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-14-05 - Published: 12-14-05
32. Breakup reviews
I was blind to what you were doing to me I let myself be hurt. But then someone came along who believed in me...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-12-05 - Published: 12-12-05
33. Copycat reviews
My little brother needs to get a life preferably NOT MINE! If I'm unique, and he tries to be me, then I'm not unique anymore, and I want to be unique. I think at age 12 he can be his own person, don't you?
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-12-05 - Published: 12-12-05
34. Bleak December
A poem written for my World Lit class. The assignment was to write a poem about a season, and I chose winter 'cause that's what it is right now and I'm depressed 'cause it's cold.
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-11-05 - Published: 12-11-05
35. My Lord Protector
Written for my boyfriend. You make me feel safe, and wanted. Thank you.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-11-05 - Published: 12-11-05
36. Blame It on the Stairs reviews
Written for a guy I like, but can't have because we both have our respective commitments. Why do we always want what we can't have?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-8-05 - Published: 12-8-05
37. Empty Promises reviews
Why do you lie to me?
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-5-05 - Published: 12-5-05
38. Shut Up reviews
You shut me out, you won't listen to me, why should I listen to you?
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-18-05 - Published: 8-18-05
39. This Ain't My Life reviews
I shouldn't be living like this; I don't deserve it, I don't belong
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-18-05 - Published: 8-18-05
40. Unseen reviews
Try as I might, no one can really see ME
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-18-05 - Published: 8-18-05
41. Ghost reviews
I feel like a ghost; I'll never be able to be one of them...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-7-05 - Published: 5-7-05
42. Reflecting reviews
Life is an ocean, and I'm drowning in it...someone, help me...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-7-05 - Published: 5-7-05
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