Name: Kildiazar the Unwanted Ghost
A.K.A.: Eidolon Barker,
Valwique the Impulsive, Deathbringer, Star-Skin, and lastly
She-who-has-a-multi-personality-disorder
Age: 665 and a half years old
Country: Adunar (somewhere between Abyssinia and Zanzibar)
Complete Address: 159 Eldritch Street, Gothador Avenue, Sanguine City
Favorite
Foods: Souls, sandwiches of dead flesh, Blood juice and unborn,
unfertilized and fresh heaps of fetuses and placenta. (Oh so you think
I'm disgusting. You with your preservatives, oil, cholesterol, GMO's
artificial foods, junkfoods, and heaps of sausages and hamburgers and
other carcinogens and toxinsfrom countless fast food chains, Etc)
Species:Windigo(creature that eats souls)
Physical Characteristics:body of snow beast with a wolf's head
Likes:
Lord of the Rings, eating souls, spreading sheer terror, eating souls,
helping others, eating souls, Harry Potter, eating souls, Kain, eating
souls, Raziel, eating souls, TIBERIUS CAIN, eating souls, daydreaming, eating souls, writing, eating souls, Legacy of
Kain, eating souls, horror stories and/or movies, humor and tragedy and
did I mention eating souls?
Dislikes: Very long fanfics, Snots, fanfics featuring sick, male pregnanncy and gay characters and not being able to eat souls.
Crushes:
TIBERIUS CAIN! Aragorn! Samwise Gamgee, Zorro, Doctor Ira Kane, Orko,
Steve Irwin, Macgyver, Faramir. Tiberius Cain forever!
Message: Hi to you all! I am a rookie writer and I wish for your support. I LOVE TIBERIUS CAIN!
P.S.
Don't even think of telling me off as a ghost that eats souls. Let me
explain to your pathetic mind that souls and ghosts are very different
things. A soul is more like an essence or a life force. It is very
delicious and tastes like a nice refreshing shot of Baileys. Ghosts on
the other hand are completely different. Ghosts are unwanted things that
can melt into walls so much they actually can become part of the
wall.Ghosts also enjoy scaring the living daylights out of wimpy
mortals who keep on saying they DON'T BELIVE IN GHOSTS! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA
P.P.S. SOULS ARE DELICIOUS!
REAL IDENTITY:
Name: Eidolon Barker
Location: Sanguine City in the land of the rising sun
Age: 18 years old
Favorite Foods: Tempura, fried chicken and soup
Likes: Tiberius Cain, Raziel, Tiberius Cain, Kain, Tiberius Cain and friends and oh yeah, Tiberius Cain
I
desire to be Gothic but I live in a place where anything Gothic is
evil, taboo and is shunned by society. I have a love for vampires and
almost everything supernatural. In truth Crucifixes, crosses and
Scapulars DO BURN me, by a strange twist of fate. And what's worse is
that I live in a catholic country. (this should give you a few hints
where to find me) How tragic it is to live in a place where the only
vampires that "supposedly" do exist devour unborn babies and nothing
else and are repelled by pepper, spices and vinegar. They are called
the Aswang. In retaliation, I am taking up Arnis or self defense with sticks. But I'm just a yellow belt with two bronze medals.
Now you must be asking "Why did I review you?"
Take your pick from any of these options:
1. Something in your story sparked my interest.
2. I have deemed your writing style utterly brilliant and superior to mine and I would like you to review any of my works
OR
3. Your story is so damned cliche, I just had to flame you/your story sucks.
4. I'll add other reasons when I remember them.
What I look for in a good story/my standard criteria for a good story:
1. Atmosphere and Character depth
2. Use of language
3. Logic of the story
4. Incremental Perturbation
5. Satisfying ending
6. Last but not least, I cannot stress this enough!!! ORIGINALITY
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