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Author has written 85 stories for Love, Life, Religion, War, General, Humor, Friendship, Essay, Romance, Haiku, General, and Action. Hi. I like to write poetry alot. Poetry is way to let me express myself in a way that I could never do. I've been writing poems for almost 6 to 8 years now. Please read and review my writing. I am eager to know what people really think about my writing. What kind of poetry I like to write? anykind, I love to write soo much. I really love writing short stories, poetry, and the dreams. Thank you to who read and review my poetry. Thank you for your time for revewing it, I really am thankful towards all of you. If your review my poetry, I will gladly to review your poetry. :-) Have a nice day that is full of happiness and joy and luck thank you P.S If I need improvement on anything that you think that will be helpful to me, Please tell me. Thank you again ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- UPDATE: Hey all, sorry i've been soooo busy wit everything and i didn't have the time to update and return the reviewing of all of your poems.....gladly i have more poems and galdy i'll review all of the new poetry that you'll put on here.. :-) i am glad to be up here again....and watch out for my smooooooooooooooooooooookin poetry that will have crazy line but have deeper meaning to them.... I'm glad to be back and I just wanted to thank you all who kept reviewing my work.... THANK YOU!!!!! Much Much LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Update: I'm mooody right now.......lol...... hmmm i can't remember what i was gunna say.....hmmmm lol..anyways..its all good... so far...i read so many good poetry and stories on here...... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- O noooooooooooooooooo it that time again...the time for an Update: Update:.... well that was corny..lol anyone who think that is corny.......say Corniess....lol that is even more corneri...hahaha now i am just rambling...lol I am going o change my pen name for Fictionpress and i guess i know what it will be....i have made some choices and i hope you all like the names....here they are...... Poet unseen or unseen poet SoulWithinMind Soilders of words i am gunna let you all pick for me...since i am soooooo bad at picking...lol Ok.,..now for the poems coming up ahead of time will be somewhat meaningful and somewhat. ------------- i am not going to ruin the surprise for you all...haha the suspense of not knowing what it is will drive the sane into insaneity which will be in couple of days which the transformation will be completed...haha....that was evil.......... like i said before and always will say....... Thank you for read and reveiwing work.......When you all review my poetry...I'll review your poetry..:-) Like in my poetry "Mind" what it say.......... " Mind can be a powerful thing and a sign to your intelligence as well........ Look at the work you’ve done over these past years..... See what has your mind created while your mind was working on your emotions..... What words can we say without our minds? ........." :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) | |||||||||||
1. Accented Rhythm reviewsAccented Rhythm of life.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-5-09 - Published: 6-5-092. Masks reviewswe are all wearing masks in the eyes of loveComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-083. I Need To Know reviewsA big need to know if your love will be always with youLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 549 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-084. The Wall finally broke reviewsA wall that is inside of each person that fills up with tears when it's hard to shed tearsComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-085. cycle of decptionknowing the signsComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-086. Go Away reviewsA poem that I Wrote About what emotions can make you feel after you notice what a big mistake we all makeComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-1-08 - Published: 3-1-087. memory reviewsWhat memory really means...all the events in your life...were they pricless or just nothing at all...its how u look at themFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 546 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-16-05 - Published: 9-16-058. Niagara Falls reviewsMy trip to the most beautiful place...Niagara FallsEssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 455 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-16-05 - Published: 9-16-059. some poems » reviewssome randoms poem...General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 6 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 6-17-0510. People reviewsit says it all in the title...:)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 6-17-0511. Mind reviewsMind and Life has some connection to each other...If you know what the connection is...then you know you are alive just like I amLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 517 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-12-05 - Published: 6-12-0512. Hardship reviewsHard times comes and goes...but friend stick together whatever happens..friends that care for each otherFriendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-0513. limits reviewswe all have limits..can you ever reach beyond your limits?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-0514. Racist reviewsPeople can be mean...is like they habe no soul...being Racist is against all that is good.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-0515. Aeternum vale reviewsbeit's about being free... people think freedom is good..but when the soul is free..it's hard to accept thier gone..."Goodbye forever" ( my friend)Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-0516. Love reviewswhen u really feel love in your soul..flwoing through your blood..knowing its real..Best feeling in the worldLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-0517. Friendly Ghost reviewssays all in the title.. :)General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 539 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-0518. struggling reviewsi was messing around wit my poems...and i put some pieces of some part or my poems in this poem..it kinda came out good..lolGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-0519. cultures reviewscultures clash can be so sad...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-0520. Inner war reviewsTo find inner peaceAction - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,422 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-0521. battle of the Dragons reviewsit's all in the titleGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,260 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-0522. Magic reviewshow is magic real? what ways does it flow...from where to where does it go?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-22-05 - Published: 5-22-0523. within reviewswithin ourself is who we are...within you...do you really know who are you? and if you do..are you really sure that you know yourself?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-21-05 - Published: 5-21-0524. desire reviewssays it all in the titleLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-20-05 - Published: 5-20-0525. Celestial reviewssays it all in the title.. :)Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-20-05 - Published: 5-20-0526. how can reviewsthe pain that no one will understandHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-18-05 - Published: 5-18-0527. fear reviewsif you think you know fear...you have no idea what you are messing wit...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-18-05 - Published: 5-18-0528. kingdom of Clouds reviewsclouds contins a different kingdom...which no one ever heard of...until nowHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-15-05 - Published: 5-15-0529. illusions reviewsdont trust nature...nature will play illusions on youHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-0530. purity reviewsdo wee all have a demon inside os us...or do we have purity within us?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-0531. waves reviewsyou never know waht behind unless you trun around and face the danger...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-0532. myself reviewsfinding myself during night timeHaiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-0533. True Love reviewsHavingto know you are so Blessed to have the Love of your life next to youLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 527 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-0534. Being still reviewsSay it all in the title. :)Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-0535. fighting back reviewsfighting back our own evil inside of us...rooting for the good to defeat the evil..the good as Love and Evil as Hate...a classic warLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-15-05 - Published: 3-15-0536. Ying yang reviewsAnother way to explain "ying yang"Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-13-05 - Published: 3-13-0537. It reviewsBreak "IT" is a good thing..if you are curious...please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-10-05 - Published: 3-10-0538. mythic times reviewsit says it all in the title..:) (please R&R) thank youLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-0539. LovenJealousy reviewslove and Jealousy doesn't mix togetherLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-0540. Knowing reviewsKnowing is what really get the best out of you..if you really wnat to know something...just do something about itLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-1-05 - Published: 3-1-0541. would you ever notice reviewssays it all in the title..:)Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-27-05 - Published: 2-27-0542. HOPE reviewsin life..you only need to hope for the good thingsLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-0543. the real deal reviewswhy isn't love there when you need it the most?Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-0544. one sunday night reviewsa tale of love beginning and betrayel...Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 735 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-0545. my childhood reviewsknowing what was perfecting and not knowing that imperfection made the person whole.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-23-05 - Published: 2-23-0546. Thinking of you reviewsto think about your True love every single second of your life is truly a blissLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-0547. Honest and Friendly reviewsthe summary...look at the title..it really says it all..:)Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-0548. fate of the world reviewsdecide whats good or bad, right or wrong, Pure or evil...Decide what's the world fate would be...what you think is very importantWar - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-0549. freedom reviewswhat do you really think about freedom...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-0550. fate's destiny reviewslove and fate always make people lead to thier destiny to find thier soul matesLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-0551. Friend reviewsSaving a friend and saving your lifeFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0552. Karma reviewswhat goes around..comes aroundLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0553. laying down reviewsdo people care at all? if they do, what do they care about?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0554. weird reviewsthis poem came to me when i was bored..it's sillyHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0555. only one reviewsthe onle and only..the very specail one in your lifeLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0556. face reviewsto do anything for that specail person and ss their smile..it's worth itLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0557. Winter night reviewsUnforgettable winter night... (pg-13..the use of making love..the word)Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0558. Date reviewswhen you are on a date..you'll never know what fate is planningLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0559. night reviewsthere are nights that are so Beautiful when your outside seeing someone you love so dearlyLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0560. love's fool reviewslook at the titleLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0561. far and wide reviewsLove is soooo BeautifulLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0562. Dream girl reviewslook at the title..it says it allLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0563. fight with all your might reviewsTrue love always winLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0564. You are my Everything reviewshow I really feel about my girlLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0565. Meaning of I Love You reviewsMeaning of I Love You...the true meaning of it..Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0566. full of emotions reviewswe all have emotions..Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0567. a wishing desire reviewsa wishing desire that i want to come trueLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0568. I LOVE YOU reviewsThe way I feel about who i love sooo much..my girlLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0569. inwardly reviewsvety confusing to understand..the meaning it's deep in a way taht you'll never thought ofGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0570. Pain reviewsPain..nothing can get rid of pain..pain will always be hereGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0571. deja vu reviewsyou'll never know when a deja vu will happen to youGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0572. time to comewhen you will least expect love..love will hit youLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0573. Love and life reviewsi guess at one point in life..we all feel life this.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0574. The Onethere is one mater..we all know who that is..if you wanto to know..let your curiousity take overGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0575. phantomRevenge is a phantom in all of us...treat it carefully before it's too lateLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0576. one of a kind reviewseach person is one of a kind..different and uniqueLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0577. Lie reviewslove's other evil sideLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0578. Cut Throat Assassination reviewsdeathg is only around the cornerWar - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0579. light of day reviewsi dunno what to say...heheLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0580. before my last breath reviewsi'll do anything before my last breath to make you life a living paradiceLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 340 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0581. You reviewsA simple love poemLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0582. simple love kiss reviewslove can be so unexpected so bewareLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0583. Prophecy reviewswake up before it's too lateReligion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0584. Life dreams reviewsWe need to stop lvinig in our dream world and sometimes when we live in our dream world..you'll never know whats real or fakeLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-0585. love's insanity reviewsinsanity comes into play when your deeply in loveLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-9-04 - Published: 6-9-04