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since: 06-09-04, id: 418001
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Author has written 84 stories for Love, Life, Religion, War, General, Humor, Friendship, Essay, Romance, Haiku, General, and Action.

Hi. I like to write poetry alot. Poetry is way to let me express myself in a way that I could never do. I've been writing poems for almost 6 to 8 years now. Please read and review my writing. I am eager to know what people really think about my writing.

What kind of poetry I like to write? anykind, I love to write soo much. I really love writing short stories, poetry, and the dreams. Thank you to who read and review my poetry. Thank you for your time for revewing it, I really am thankful towards all of you. If your review my poetry, I will gladly to review your poetry. :-)

Have a nice day that is full of happiness and joy and luck

thank you

P.S If I need improvement on anything that you think that will be helpful to me, Please tell me. Thank you again

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UPDATE: Hey all, sorry i've been soooo busy wit everything and i didn't have the time to update and return the reviewing of all of your poems.....gladly i have more poems and galdy i'll review all of the new poetry that you'll put on here.. :-)

i am glad to be up here again....and watch out for my smooooooooooooooooooooookin poetry that will have crazy line but have deeper meaning to them....

I'm glad to be back and I just wanted to thank you all who kept reviewing my work.... THANK YOU!!!!!

Much Much LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Update: I'm mooody right now.......lol...... hmmm i can't remember what i was gunna say.....hmmmm

lol..anyways..its all good...

so far...i read so many good poetry and stories on here......

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!

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O noooooooooooooooooo it that time again...the time for an Update:

Update:....

well that was corny..lol anyone who think that is corny.......say Corniess....lol that is even more corneri...hahaha now i am just rambling...lol

I am going o change my pen name for Fictionpress and i guess i know what it will be....i have made some choices and i hope you all like the names....here they are......

Poet unseen or unseen poet

SoulWithinMind

Soilders of words

i am gunna let you all pick for me...since i am soooooo bad at picking...lol

Ok.,..now for the poems coming up ahead of time will be somewhat meaningful and somewhat. ------------- i am not going to ruin the surprise for you all...haha

the suspense of not knowing what it is will drive the sane into insaneity which will be in couple of days which the transformation will be completed...haha....that was evil..........

like i said before and always will say....... Thank you for read and reveiwing work.......When you all review my poetry...I'll review your poetry..:-)

Like in my poetry "Mind" what it say..........

" Mind can be a powerful thing and a sign to your intelligence as well........

Look at the work you’ve done over these past years.....

See what has your mind created while your mind was working on your emotions.....

What words can we say without our minds? ........."

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)




1. Masks reviews
we are all wearing masks in the eyes of love
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-08
2. I Need To Know reviews
A big need to know if your love will be always with you
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 549 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-08
3. The Wall finally broke reviews
A wall that is inside of each person that fills up with tears when it's hard to shed tears
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-08
4. cycle of decption
knowing the signs
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-2-08 - Published: 3-2-08
5. Go Away reviews
A poem that I Wrote About what emotions can make you feel after you notice what a big mistake we all make
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 265 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-1-08 - Published: 3-1-08
6. memory reviews
What memory really means...all the events in your life...were they pricless or just nothing at all...its how u look at them
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 546 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-16-05 - Published: 9-16-05
7. Niagara Falls reviews
My trip to the most beautiful place...Niagara Falls
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 455 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-16-05 - Published: 9-16-05
8. some poems » reviews
some randoms poem...
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 6 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 6-17-05
9. People reviews
it says it all in the title...:)
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 6-17-05
10. Mind reviews
Mind and Life has some connection to each other...If you know what the connection is...then you know you are alive just like I am
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 517 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-12-05 - Published: 6-12-05
11. Hardship reviews
Hard times comes and goes...but friend stick together whatever happens..friends that care for each other
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-05
12. limits reviews
we all have limits..can you ever reach beyond your limits?
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-05
13. Racist reviews
People can be mean...is like they habe no soul...being Racist is against all that is good.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-05
14. Aeternum vale reviews
beit's about being free... people think freedom is good..but when the soul is free..it's hard to accept thier gone..."Goodbye forever" ( my friend)
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-05
15. Love reviews
when u really feel love in your soul..flwoing through your blood..knowing its real..Best feeling in the world
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-05
16. Friendly Ghost reviews
says all in the title.. :)
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 539 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-05
17. struggling reviews
i was messing around wit my poems...and i put some pieces of some part or my poems in this poem..it kinda came out good..lol
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-05
18. cultures reviews
cultures clash can be so sad...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-05
19. Inner war reviews
To find inner peace
Action - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,422 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-05
20. battle of the Dragons reviews
it's all in the title
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,260 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-23-05 - Published: 5-23-05
21. Magic reviews
how is magic real? what ways does it flow...from where to where does it go?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-22-05 - Published: 5-22-05
22. within reviews
within ourself is who we are...within you...do you really know who are you? and if you do..are you really sure that you know yourself?
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-21-05 - Published: 5-21-05
23. desire reviews
says it all in the title
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-20-05 - Published: 5-20-05
24. Celestial reviews
says it all in the title.. :)
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-20-05 - Published: 5-20-05
25. how can reviews
the pain that no one will understand
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-18-05 - Published: 5-18-05
26. fear reviews
if you think you know fear...you have no idea what you are messing wit...
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-18-05 - Published: 5-18-05
27. kingdom of Clouds reviews
clouds contins a different kingdom...which no one ever heard of...until now
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-15-05 - Published: 5-15-05
28. illusions reviews
dont trust nature...nature will play illusions on you
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-05
29. purity reviews
do wee all have a demon inside os us...or do we have purity within us?
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-05
30. waves reviews
you never know waht behind unless you trun around and face the danger...
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-05 - Published: 5-13-05
31. myself reviews
finding myself during night time
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-05
32. True Love reviews
Havingto know you are so Blessed to have the Love of your life next to you
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 527 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-05
33. Being still reviews
Say it all in the title. :)
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-05
34. fighting back reviews
fighting back our own evil inside of us...rooting for the good to defeat the evil..the good as Love and Evil as Hate...a classic war
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-15-05 - Published: 3-15-05
35. Ying yang reviews
Another way to explain "ying yang"
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-13-05 - Published: 3-13-05
36. It reviews
Break "IT" is a good thing..if you are curious...please R&R
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-10-05 - Published: 3-10-05
37. mythic times reviews
it says it all in the title..:) (please R&R) thank you
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-05
38. LovenJealousy reviews
love and Jealousy doesn't mix together
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-05
39. Knowing reviews
Knowing is what really get the best out of you..if you really wnat to know something...just do something about it
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-1-05 - Published: 3-1-05
40. would you ever notice reviews
says it all in the title..:)
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-27-05 - Published: 2-27-05
41. HOPE reviews
in life..you only need to hope for the good things
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-05
42. the real deal reviews
why isn't love there when you need it the most?
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-05
43. one sunday night reviews
a tale of love beginning and betrayel...
Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 735 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-05
44. my childhood reviews
knowing what was perfecting and not knowing that imperfection made the person whole.
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-23-05 - Published: 2-23-05
45. Thinking of you reviews
to think about your True love every single second of your life is truly a bliss
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-05
46. Honest and Friendly reviews
the summary...look at the title..it really says it all..:)
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-05
47. fate of the world reviews
decide whats good or bad, right or wrong, Pure or evil...Decide what's the world fate would be...what you think is very important
War - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-05
48. freedom reviews
what do you really think about freedom...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-05
49. fate's destiny reviews
love and fate always make people lead to thier destiny to find thier soul mates
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-17-05 - Published: 2-17-05
50. Friend reviews
Saving a friend and saving your life
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
51. Karma reviews
what goes around..comes around
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
52. laying down reviews
do people care at all? if they do, what do they care about?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
53. weird reviews
this poem came to me when i was bored..it's silly
Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
54. only one reviews
the onle and only..the very specail one in your life
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
55. face reviews
to do anything for that specail person and ss their smile..it's worth it
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
56. Winter night reviews
Unforgettable winter night... (pg-13..the use of making love..the word)
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
57. Date reviews
when you are on a date..you'll never know what fate is planning
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
58. night reviews
there are nights that are so Beautiful when your outside seeing someone you love so dearly
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
59. love's fool reviews
look at the title
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
60. far and wide reviews
Love is soooo Beautiful
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
61. Dream girl reviews
look at the title..it says it all
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
62. fight with all your might reviews
True love always win
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
63. You are my Everything reviews
how I really feel about my girl
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
64. Meaning of I Love You reviews
Meaning of I Love You...the true meaning of it..
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
65. full of emotions reviews
we all have emotions..
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
66. a wishing desire reviews
a wishing desire that i want to come true
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
67. I LOVE YOU reviews
The way I feel about who i love sooo much..my girl
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
68. inwardly reviews
vety confusing to understand..the meaning it's deep in a way taht you'll never thought of
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
69. Pain reviews
Pain..nothing can get rid of pain..pain will always be here
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
70. deja vu reviews
you'll never know when a deja vu will happen to you
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
71. time to come
when you will least expect love..love will hit you
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
72. Love and life reviews
i guess at one point in life..we all feel life this.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
73. The One
there is one mater..we all know who that is..if you wanto to know..let your curiousity take over
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
74. phantom
Revenge is a phantom in all of us...treat it carefully before it's too late
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
75. one of a kind reviews
each person is one of a kind..different and unique
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
76. Lie reviews
love's other evil side
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
77. Cut Throat Assassination reviews
deathg is only around the corner
War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
78. light of day reviews
i dunno what to say...hehe
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
79. before my last breath reviews
i'll do anything before my last breath to make you life a living paradice
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 340 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
80. You reviews
A simple love poem
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
81. simple love kiss reviews
love can be so unexpected so beware
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
82. Prophecy reviews
wake up before it's too late
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
83. Life dreams reviews
We need to stop lvinig in our dream world and sometimes when we live in our dream world..you'll never know whats real or fake
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-15-05 - Published: 2-15-05
84. love's insanity reviews
insanity comes into play when your deeply in love
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-9-04 - Published: 6-9-04
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