| peaceman4ever |
Author has written 85 stories for Love, Life, Religion, War, General, Humor, Friendship, Essay, Romance, Haiku, General, and Action. Hi. I like to write poetry alot. Poetry is way to let me express myself in a way that I could never do. I've been writing poems for almost 6 to 8 years now. Please read and review my writing. I am eager to know what people really think about my writing. What kind of poetry I like to write? anykind, I love to write soo much. I really love writing short stories, poetry, and the dreams. Thank you to who read and review my poetry. Thank you for your time for revewing it, I really am thankful towards all of you. If your review my poetry, I will gladly to review your poetry. :-) Have a nice day that is full of happiness and joy and luck thank you P.S If I need improvement on anything that you think that will be helpful to me, Please tell me. Thank you again UPDATE: Hey all, sorry i've been soooo busy wit everything and i didn't have the time to update and return the reviewing of all of your poems...gladly i have more poems and galdy i'll review all of the new poetry that you'll put on here.. :-) i am glad to be up here again...and watch out for my smooooooooooooooooooooookin poetry that will have crazy line but have deeper meaning to them... I'm glad to be back and I just wanted to thank you all who kept reviewing my work... THANK YOU!!!!! Much Much LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update: I'm mooody right now...lol... hmmm i can't remember what i was gunna say...hmmmm lol..anyways..its all good... so far...i read so many good poetry and stories on here... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!! O noooooooooooooooooo it that time again...the time for an Update: Update:... well that was corny..lol anyone who think that is corny...say Corniess...lol that is even more corneri...hahaha now i am just rambling...lol I am going o change my pen name for Fictionpress and i guess i know what it will be...i have made some choices and i hope you all like the names...here they are... Poet unseen or unseen poet SoulWithinMind Soilders of words i am gunna let you all pick for me...since i am soooooo bad at picking...lol Ok.,..now for the poems coming up ahead of time will be somewhat meaningful and somewhat. -- i am not going to ruin the surprise for you all...haha the suspense of not knowing what it is will drive the sane into insaneity which will be in couple of days which the transformation will be completed...haha...that was evil... like i said before and always will say... Thank you for read and reveiwing work...When you all review my poetry...I'll review your poetry..:-) Like in my poetry "Mind" what it say... " Mind can be a powerful thing and a sign to your intelligence as well... Look at the work you’ve done over these past years... See what has your mind created while your mind was working on your emotions... What words can we say without our minds? ..." | |||||||
1. Accented Rhythm reviewsAccented Rhythm of life.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-5-09 - Complete2. Masks reviewswe are all wearing masks in the eyes of lovePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-2-08 - Complete3. I Need To Know reviewsA big need to know if your love will be always with youPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 552 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-2-084. The Wall finally broke reviewsA wall that is inside of each person that fills up with tears when it's hard to shed tearsPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-2-08 - Complete5. cycle of decption reviewsknowing the signsPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-2-08 - Complete6. Go Away reviewsA poem that I Wrote About what emotions can make you feel after you notice what a big mistake we all makePoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-1-08 - Complete7. memory reviewsWhat memory really means...all the events in your life...were they pricless or just nothing at all...its how u look at themPoetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 592 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-16-058. Niagara Falls reviewsMy trip to the most beautiful place...Niagara FallsFiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 457 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-16-059. some poems » reviewssome randoms poem...Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 6 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 23 - Published: 6-17-0510. People reviewsit says it all in the title...:)Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-17-0511. Mind reviewsMind and Life has some connection to each other...If you know what the connection is...then you know you are alive just like I amPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 539 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-12-0512. Hardship reviewsHard times comes and goes...but friend stick together whatever happens..friends that care for each otherPoetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 6-4-0513. limits reviewswe all have limits..can you ever reach beyond your limits?Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 6-3-0514. Racist reviewsPeople can be mean...is like they habe no soul...being Racist is against all that is good.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-3-0515. Aeternum vale reviewsbeit's about being free... people think freedom is good..but when the soul is free..it's hard to accept thier gone..."Goodbye forever" ( my friend)Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-3-0516. Love reviewswhen u really feel love in your soul..flwoing through your blood..knowing its real..Best feeling in the worldPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5-23-0517. Friendly Ghost reviewssays all in the title.. :)Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 541 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-23-0518. struggling reviewsi was messing around wit my poems...and i put some pieces of some part or my poems in this poem..it kinda came out good..lolPoetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-23-0519. cultures reviewscultures clash can be so sad...Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-23-0520. Inner war reviewsTo find inner peaceFiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,430 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-23-0521. battle of the Dragons reviewsit's all in the titleFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,278 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-23-0522. Magic reviewshow is magic real? what ways does it flow...from where to where does it go?Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-22-0523. within reviewswithin ourself is who we are...within you...do you really know who are you? and if you do..are you really sure that you know yourself?Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-21-0524. desire reviewssays it all in the titlePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-20-0525. Celestial reviewssays it all in the title.. :)Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-20-0526. how can reviewsthe pain that no one will understandPoetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-18-0527. fear reviewsif you think you know fear...you have no idea what you are messing wit...Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-18-0528. kingdom of Clouds reviewsclouds contins a different kingdom...which no one ever heard of...until nowPoetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-15-0529. illusions reviewsdont trust nature...nature will play illusions on youPoetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-13-0530. purity reviewsdo wee all have a demon inside os us...or do we have purity within us?Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-13-0531. waves reviewsyou never know waht behind unless you trun around and face the danger...Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-13-0532. myself reviewsfinding myself during night timePoetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 3-16-0533. True Love reviewsHavingto know you are so Blessed to have the Love of your life next to youPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 548 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-16-0534. Being still reviewsSay it all in the title. :)Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-16-0535. fighting back reviewsfighting back our own evil inside of us...rooting for the good to defeat the evil..the good as Love and Evil as Hate...a classic warPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-15-0536. Ying yang reviewsAnother way to explain "ying yang"Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-13-0537. It reviewsBreak "IT" is a good thing..if you are curious...please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-10-0538. mythic times reviewsit says it all in the title..:) (please R&R) thank youPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-3-0539. LovenJealousy reviewslove and Jealousy doesn't mix togetherPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-3-0540. Knowing reviewsKnowing is what really get the best out of you..if you really wnat to know something...just do something about itPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-1-0541. would you ever notice reviewssays it all in the title..:)Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-27-0542. HOPE reviewsin life..you only need to hope for the good thingsPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-25-0543. the real deal reviewswhy isn't love there when you need it the most?Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-25-0544. one sunday night reviewsa tale of love beginning and betrayel...Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 822 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-25-0545. my childhood reviewsknowing what was perfecting and not knowing that imperfection made the person whole.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 428 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-23-0546. Thinking of you reviewsto think about your True love every single second of your life is truly a blissPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2-17-0547. Honest and Friendly reviewsthe summary...look at the title..it really says it all..:)Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2-17-0548. fate of the world reviewsdecide whats good or bad, right or wrong, Pure or evil...Decide what's the world fate would be...what you think is very importantPoetry: War - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-17-0549. freedom reviewswhat do you really think about freedom...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-17-0550. fate's destiny reviewslove and fate always make people lead to thier destiny to find thier soul matesPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-17-0551. Friend reviewsSaving a friend and saving your lifePoetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-15-0552. Karma reviewswhat goes around..comes aroundPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Suspense/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-15-0553. laying down reviewsdo people care at all? if they do, what do they care about?Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0554. weird reviewsthis poem came to me when i was bored..it's sillyPoetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-15-0555. only one reviewsthe onle and only..the very specail one in your lifePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0556. face reviewsto do anything for that specail person and ss their smile..it's worth itPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-15-0557. Winter night reviewsUnforgettable winter night... (pg-13..the use of making love..the word)Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0558. Date reviewswhen you are on a date..you'll never know what fate is planningPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0559. night reviewsthere are nights that are so Beautiful when your outside seeing someone you love so dearlyPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0560. love's fool reviewslook at the titlePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0561. far and wide reviewsLove is soooo BeautifulPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0562. Dream girl reviewslook at the title..it says it allPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0563. fight with all your might reviewsTrue love always winPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0564. You are my Everything reviewshow I really feel about my girlPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-15-0565. Meaning of I Love You reviewsMeaning of I Love You...the true meaning of it..Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-15-0566. full of emotions reviewswe all have emotions..Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0567. a wishing desire reviewsa wishing desire that i want to come truePoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0568. I LOVE YOU reviewsThe way I feel about who i love sooo much..my girlPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-15-0569. inwardly reviewsvety confusing to understand..the meaning it's deep in a way taht you'll never thought ofPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0570. Pain reviewsPain..nothing can get rid of pain..pain will always be herePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0571. deja vu reviewsyou'll never know when a deja vu will happen to youPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0572. time to comewhen you will least expect love..love will hit youPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Published: 2-15-0573. Love and life reviewsi guess at one point in life..we all feel life this.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0574. The Onethere is one mater..we all know who that is..if you wanto to know..let your curiousity take overPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Published: 2-15-0575. phantomRevenge is a phantom in all of us...treat it carefully before it's too latePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Published: 2-15-0576. one of a kind reviewseach person is one of a kind..different and uniquePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0577. Lie reviewslove's other evil sidePoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-15-0578. Cut Throat Assassination reviewsdeathg is only around the cornerPoetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0579. light of day reviewsi dunno what to say...hehePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0580. before my last breath reviewsi'll do anything before my last breath to make you life a living paradicePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 417 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-15-0581. You reviewsA simple love poemPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-15-0582. simple love kiss reviewslove can be so unexpected so bewarePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-15-0583. Prophecy reviewswake up before it's too latePoetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2-15-0584. Life dreams reviewsWe need to stop lvinig in our dream world and sometimes when we live in our dream world..you'll never know whats real or fakePoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-0585. love's insanity reviewsinsanity comes into play when your deeply in lovePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-9-04