Hey, I have just started to write stories, and poems, and I welcome any critiscm you have for me, as I would like to improve!

I'm not sure if I should write long stories, or short pieces, so you may see a lot of variation here.

Please review my writings :) I love getting reviews, it spurs you on to write something different! 

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1. You

My love cannot be expressed. You're too good to be true

Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 365 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-29-05 - Published: 12-29-05

2. Lifeboat

Life won't break us apart - I'll work my hardest to save us both

Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-29-05 - Published: 12-29-05

3. The door in the archway modified reviews

This is the prologue, please read and review! It has been modified and tweaked...a lot, since i last put it up here, so check it out :)

Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,375 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-31-04 - Published: 7-31-04

4. The Price of Money reviews

Mermaids, sailors, death, kidnapping, magic, anger, just read it! please? :)

Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,848 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-27-04 - Published: 6-27-04

5. Love and fear reviews

Without fear, would the love be as strong? Will these two people be able to overcome their fears, and admit their love?

Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,038 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-04 - Published: 6-25-04

6. Be yourself reviews

A day in the life...Hiding behind masks all the time, how can true feelings ever be shown? One girl can take no more

Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,388 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-04 - Published: 6-25-04

7. Who are you

Come out from where you have hidden, we want to see the real you, not some mask

Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-16-04 - Published: 6-16-04

8. Childhood Innocence reviews

Friends change, now I am an empty shell of a person

Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-16-04 - Published: 6-16-04

9. Forbidden reviews

Aradia is a Resuk, she has no magic, or at least thats what she and her kind think... yet Joshua, a Resuean, is among the most powerful of magical beings. When they meet, they are drawn to each other, for they are soulmates. Now they struggle to survive

Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,736 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-15-04 - Published: 6-15-04