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| Daffodil Elizabeth |
Author has written 35 stories for War, Haiku, Nature, General, Politics, Sci-Fi, Humor, Life, Family, Friendship, Love, and Mystery. This is currently a work in progress. Please bear with me. | |||||||
1. RoseMy attempt to describe something with indescribable beauty. Roses are feminine, delicate, lovely, yet strong and hardy. Just read it, please, and tell me what you think. This is my first poem in a very long while and I think I need some criticism.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-30-07 - Published: 6-30-072. Have you ever loved a lie?My musings on the nature of lies how you know they are so wicked, yet you cannot seem to want to escape them.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-30-06 - Published: 11-30-063. Trivial Conversation reviewsWhat the little words really mean.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-4-06 - Published: 11-4-064. November reviewsNovember is my least favorite of all the months so bitterly cold without any snow to make it beautiful.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-3-06 - Published: 11-3-065. The Test reviewsOh, I'm awful at summaries. Why don't you just read it and tell me what you think of it. I'd gladly return the favor.Mystery - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 757 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-3-06 - Published: 11-3-066. Iris reviewsI wrote this poem about my poor irises, which basically stopped blooming a few days ago. I had to cut them all down.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-8-06 - Published: 6-8-067. My thoughts on a smile reviewsJust my thoughts during studyhall in poetic form. Please read and review.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-24-06 - Published: 5-24-068. Sunrise in October reviewsIt is short, but sweet (I hope.) Please R&R. This is the first time I've ever written a poem this short.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-24-06 - Published: 4-24-069. Fall reviewsJust my thoughts on love. I've never seen someone "fall" into it before. Please R&R!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-19-06 - Published: 4-19-0610. Had it snowed? reviewsThis poem is sort of haiku-ish. I saw something in nature that really just connected with my life. I hope you see the symbolism.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-20-06 - Published: 1-20-0611. Glass Candles reviewsI poem that I wrote when I was trying to figure out one of those brain-teasers.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-21-05 - Published: 12-21-0512. Holiday shopping reviewsPlease read and review. It even sounded wierd to me, so I'd like some feedback on it.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0513. Time reviewsA poem written about the one thing that seems to define our lives from birth until death - time.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0514. Fluorescent lights keep no secrets reviewsA funny little poem about how very unflattering fluorescent lights can be.Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0515. A writer's legacy reviewsA poem that came to mind as I was writing something else. I hope that, as a writer, I leave some sort of legacy.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0516. Friendship reviewsHmm... I'd rather not put up a summary.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-0517. Conch Shell reviewsI took a good, long look at might life. I didn't want to see what I saw, but I saw it. I wrote this poem when I had a eureka of sorts.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-0518. A man was born and died Fin reviewsI wrote this last night. I was feeling very inspired. I'd like to see what you think it means.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-0519. Irony reviewsJust a short little poem that, for some reason, I was inspired to write when thinking of someone I know.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-0520. Shadow reviewsI originally wrote this for an English assignment. Please R&R! Enjoy!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-5-05 - Published: 12-5-0521. AwrySorry, I have some spacing problems. I line indicates a space between stanzas. Let's just see if you can figure out what it was my mother said...Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-2-05 - Published: 12-2-0522. SleepThis is just a short little poem that I wrote after I fell asleep in the middle of writing an essay.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-18-05 - Published: 9-18-0523. Petals reviewsI found this poem in an old diary of mine, along with a short little entry about the transience of life.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-18-05 - Published: 9-18-0524. A writer reviewsJust a poem in dedication to those that write.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-13-05 - Published: 8-13-0525. Concrete Hearts reviewsJust a funny little poem that was inspired by my sidewalk.Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-2-05 - Published: 6-2-0526. Confessions of a Narcissist reviewsJust my idea of how a narcissist thinks every day of their life.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-28-05 - Published: 4-28-0527. Pull the blinds, there's too much sunYes, the title is awful... Anyway, this story kind of "predicts the future", if you will. I would love some reviews!Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,950 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-22-05 - Published: 4-22-0528. Summer Is reviewsJust a poem about what summer is to me! I really hope that you'll read and review!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-7-05 - Published: 4-7-0529. I just closed the window reviewsI've been having some spacing problems lately, just assume that all rulers indicate a space! Oh, lots of symbolism, by the way.Politics - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-30-05 - Published: 3-30-0530. The Painted Face reviewsMostly me realizing what sheep people are... Well, I suppose this is rather hypocritical of me, but I don't care. Any feedback would be nice!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-26-05 - Published: 1-26-0531. Blind Prejudice reviewsThe inspiration for this work was a comment I heard in the lunchroom as some ignorant kids laughed over the weight problems of others... It really saddens me to see how people treat each other...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-13-05 - Published: 1-13-0532. Crocus reviewsAhh... what a lovely haiku about spring!Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-19-04 - Published: 11-19-0433. Winter reviewsWho's to say that winter is a desolate season?Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-19-04 - Published: 11-19-0434. Foggy Day reviewsI wrote this as I walked through a fog, and was reminded of how life can seem like that sometimes...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-19-04 - Published: 11-19-0435. Empty Chair reviewsAn MIA?War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-1-04 - Published: 7-1-04
