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Author has written 36 stories for General, Fantasy, Nature, Biography, General, Fantasy, Friendship, Life, Love, Religion, and Fable. My name is Ceci and I want to be a writer someday. I want to write poetry like Percy Shelley and novels as good as Robin McKinley's. I'm not nearly at that point yet, so a review would be nice, to let me know what I need to work on. :) | |||||||||||
1. Feelings reviewsI don't know if it's a love poem or not. I don't know what to call this. It's just words, and words are weak.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-09 - Published: 7-17-092. Quartet »There are four: a sheltered, spoiled teenaged girl; the boy trying to collect the reward by bringing her home; a servant with a penchant for stealing things; and an intelligent, powerful, and ancient female vampire. Who is the hero, and who the villain?Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,249 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-6-09 - Published: 4-4-093. The Killer and the Queen » reviewsOld friends: she the orphaned ruler of a medium-sized country, he a winged man searching for his kin. By the end of the story, they are both dead; they destroy each other, all in the name of what they call love.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,536 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-22-09 - Published: 1-16-094. 17I am a different person today than I will be tomorrow; but here is a picture of me today, on my seventeenth birthday.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 462 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-17-09 - Published: 1-17-095. Elegy to the Space Behind the Railroad Tracks reviewsThis is to the place that I went to in order to escape, the place they destroyed.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-14-08 - Published: 12-14-086. The Demon's Coming reviewsAlmost a true sonnet; the rhyme scheme isn't exact, but it is in iambic pentameter.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-10-08 - Published: 12-10-087. Molding reviewsShe thought she loved him, until she stumbled by his window one night... Not to be taken literally, I meant this to be a sort of allegory or fable about people's intentions.Complete - Fable - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,061 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-3-08 - Published: 12-3-088. to see it all againMy relationship with music is not what it used to be, so to speak. I used to have music color synesthesia, but now I don't. I know I've written a lot of poetry about that already but I just wanted to show in simple terms what listening to music was likeComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-13-08 - Published: 11-13-089. 8 July reviewsWithout you I can breathe, but I cannot truly live.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 291 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-29-08 - Published: 10-29-0810. Searching in the Spaces reviewsI know this poem is self-centered. I just want to find something to hold. I want a savior... This is how I really feel, to those wondering. I do sometimes write poetry from my point of view, and this is one such piece.Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-14-08 - Published: 10-14-0811. Unnecessary Wings » reviewsA vain angel, a spoiled runaway, a cowardly mercenary, and an illegitimate prince are four strangers brought together by selfishness. When left with the results of their actions and facing war, they wonder, how selfish can love really be? -COMPLETE-Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 30 - Words: 46,785 - Reviews: 33 - Updated: 10-14-08 - Published: 8-12-0612. Longing for You reviewsIf you could see into my heart, you would laugh...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 423 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-29-08 - Published: 8-29-0813. Would You? reviewsJune 30, 2008, I was working in a store that was robbed at gunpoint. These are my thoughts about others' responses to the event.Complete - Biography - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 359 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-4-08 - Published: 8-4-0814. Skin and Song reviewsWhen she is reunited with an old friend she never should have seen again, Kaea realizes she'll never be the person she thought she could become. The rating may change.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,099 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-28-08 - Published: 6-28-0815. Greed reviewsTwo teenagers, practically strangers, run away to an isolated field in order to escape life.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,148 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-4-08 - Published: 5-4-0816. With Clipped Wings » reviewsFor all the world, he looked like a god, or perhaps some fallen angel...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,786 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-10-08 - Published: 4-8-0817. The Likes of Us reviewsI couldn't get this out of my head...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-7-08 - Published: 4-7-0818. Until Forever reviewsLet's run...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-0819. The Vowels reviewsThey may be just lines on a piece of paper or a screen, but, to me, a synesthete, they have their distinctive colors and often even personalities as well, which I tried to capture in this poem.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 324 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-0720. The Colors in the Music reviewsA sestina about myself, growing up. A few months ago, I was positive I was a synesthete. Now, I'm not so sure.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-10-07 - Published: 6-10-0721. Falling reviewsHow can they expect miracles where miracles won't be?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-4-07 - Published: 2-4-0722. Goddess reviewsI was randomly inspired by a song. This is what came out :Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-15-06 - Published: 12-15-0623. There Will Not Be a Chapter Two reviewsIt was never written, but if you know her, you can almost guess what happens next.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-0624. Beneath the Surface » reviewsChlorin is a vampire strategist who finds out what happens when humans and vampires mix. Rating may change.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,051 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-12-06 - Published: 5-26-0625. Sun Kissed Prisoner reviewsOn a beach beside the sea, there were a few minutes of heaven as he painted her portrait. Yet she knew that she couldn't stay like that forever...Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-9-06 - Published: 9-9-0626. Fate reviews"She will come on wings like daggers..." A poem about the lady Fate, whose touch changes all. (My first rhyming poem)Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 9-8-06 - Published: 9-8-0627. Glimmer » reviewsTwo older freeverse poems. Not my best work, but on the more heartfelt angle of things. Both of these are from my perspective as opposed to a character's.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 460 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-28-06 - Published: 5-3-0628. Gray » reviewsPrayer is a girl thrust from her bizarrely sheltered life into the arms of a tribe made up of bloodthirsty children who only want to avenge their parents' deaths. Rating may change.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,952 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 3-26-06 - Published: 3-25-0629. Color reviewsWhen I come in, I naturally draw their eyes. Maybe humans are attracted to color, or maybe just the irregular. Either way, they look, and I laugh.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 1-1-06 - Published: 1-1-0630. Her reviewsSometimes we see a picture that haunts us: A moment we have never seen, but cannot forget. This is one such photograph.Biography - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 278 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-0531. The Ancient Questions reviewsA poem about how we forget legends and myths, and how they influence us. Not one of my favorites. It's my improv poem! Yay!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-0532. The World Inside the Sea reviewsThe mysteries of the ocean, from the perspective of a diver.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-0533. White Wings reviewsThis poem is about angels, I guess. I have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote it, though it's my favorite of my poems.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 6-17-0534. In the Sea's Embrace reviewsBased on a very vivid dream I had a long, long time ago. . .Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-9-05 - Published: 6-9-0535. I Will Live By the Sea reviewsThis is just a random poem I wrote, because I love the sea and mountains. Take it literally, or as a metaphor for something else.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0536. Cat Randomness reviewsA poem of random words from a cat magazine! Very strange.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-3-04 - Published: 7-3-04