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Author has written 4 stories for Fantasy, Nature, and General. Hello! My name is David! If you're reading this you obviously found my writing. Uh, I hope you enjoy it, but moreso, I hope you will critique it. One cannot succeed unless they fail and try again. This is what I wish to do. So far, I have only succeeded at the failing part, and I need your help to try again. Thank you. | |||||||||||
1. Head North My ChildA hike through the forest. I'm curious to see what you all can make of it. Please critique. Warning: Excessive use of metaphorNature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 327 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-22-08 - Published: 10-22-082. AdulthoodWhen you look at yourself in the mirror, who do you see? Feel free to critique.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-22-08 - Published: 10-22-083. I Like JupiterTry to imagine a cardboard box with this drawn on it. That was my inspiration. Dedicated to all of the elementary school teachers who taught us about the solar system, way back when Pluto was a planet.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-21-08 - Published: 10-21-084. A Perfect Circle reviewsWill and Kyle move into a new house, but what will happen when they find that a hole in their staircase is a gate to another world...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 598 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-25-05 - Published: 5-25-05
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