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| Th' Tolimnes Davin |
Author has written 21 stories for Sci-Fi, and General. "Children of the Gods" really needs some love! I've been posting it on several sites, and I've gotten virtually no feedback. I needz the reviewz! I return in kind. Any and all critiques/opinions, bad or good, are greatly appreciated. Thank you! Hello, I'm another random person aspiring to write the next great classic novel. Not sure how well that's gonna work out for me, writing romantic science fiction stories, lol, but to quote Wowbagger the Infinitely Prolonged (my personal idol) from Mr. Adams' amazing Hitchhiker series, "A man can dream, can't he?" Anyway...I use to write a LOT in school. Ever since I graduated I've written VERY little, and I'm 25 now, so I'm trying VERY hard to write more. I'm heavily focused right now on what's probably my 4th rewrite of my story currently named "Children of the Gods". It is a temporary title, and a rewrite of my story "Sleight of Gods". I am in DESPERATE need of reviews, as they are my only form of motivation, and I think the lack of motivation right now is my biggest hurdle in my writing. My stories are pretty well all sci-fi, most of them written in my early teens, so don't expect the older stuff to be all that great. I am very much into astronomy, physics, and the UFO/alien abduction phenomena. I am a very scientific person, and I try these days to write hard science fiction, with an emphasis on the "science", while still trying to make it entertaining. So, without further delay, and before I drone on for several tens of thousands of more words, I bid you thanks if you read this far, and hope that you will move onward to my stories and write my some enlightening reviews, good or bad, constructive criticism welcomed. | |||||||
1. Children of the Gods (for now) » reviewsTwo friends are forced into the middle of an alien war. As they struggle to survive, they discover that the war is not so alien, and the fate of two galaxies rests on their shoulders. Please R&R, I've been posting this story on several sites and I've received virtually no feedback at all. ANY critiques/opinions, bad or good, are greatly appreciated. Thanks.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 10,426 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-15-13 - Published: 9-26-122. Sleight of Gods » reviewsThe last remaining earth ship is taken into custody after the earth's destruction. As the crew struggles to understand what's happening, they find themselves caught in the midst of an alien war as old as time, and must unravel the mysterious fate of earthFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 28,789 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-9-10 - Published: 2-15-063. The End is Begun reviewsAn ordinary assignment on earth gives an alien the unique oportunity to escape, search for something he lost, and fight for the salvation of his people.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,766 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-17-104. Jacob Riley Sequal »Jacob returns to earth to solve a new mystery and save Joan's life.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 9 - Words: 26,038 - Published: 8-9-09 - Complete5. The Mission of Jacob Riley »A strange new girl at school holds the key to the truth behind Jacob's infatuationFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 16 - Words: 16,495 - Published: 8-5-09 - Complete6. The Containers reviewsA young man's dreams could be the key to humanity's darkest secretsFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 520 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-17-067. Worlds Apart » reviewsAn alien ship crashes outside of Roswell New Mexico in 2005, and the girl who witnesses it has to deal with the sarcastic alien survivor.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,707 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-16-058. Velocity Star Yet Another Revised Edition » reviewsThe story of a ship and its small crew when they find themselves suddenly in the middle of an alien war and an intergalactic secretFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 14,164 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-9-04 - Published: 8-6-049. Anar » reviewsThe Alien take-over of earth, told from an alien's point of view, and his doubts on his peoples' actionsFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 4 - Words: 27,233 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-3-0410. Is Simple Flesh Enough for Love? reviewsA woman flees the earth when she was a teenager, with an alien, just before its destruction, now, seventeen years later, she still seeks vengeance...and the love of the alien who saved her.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15,099 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9-25-0411. Velocity StarThis is a really old story of mine about a group of people aboard a starship...it's really, really bad, almost all dialogue, I know, I wrote it when I was 14 so bare with me.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16,919 - Published: 8-5-0412. No Title Yet Would Appreciate Suggestions » reviewsThe story of a technologically advanced alien world where each individual is what humans might call psychologically disturbed, and everyone stays away from everyone. Very hard to describe, reads wellFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,725 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-28-04 - Published: 7-25-0413. Anonymity » reviewsThe American government discovers their misplaced faith in an alien race when they begin invading the earth, their target a single person masked too finely for even his friends to see what he is.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,088 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-23-04 - Published: 7-9-0414. The Wolsifier Story » reviewsThe story of two people aboard their cargo ship who find out that the universe isn't as quiet as they thought it was, and that they aren't as menial as they thought they were. The first chapter of a story I've been working on for years, beginning is slowFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 23 - Words: 135,088 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-18-04 - Published: 7-9-0415. Alien Abduction reviewsThe story of a young girl driven mad by the aliens that will never leave her alone.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,871 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-15-0416. Rebels reviewsWhen a group of alien rebels discover that nearly their entire faction has been annihilated, the remaining five of them seek refuge on earth.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,522 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-14-0417. I Died reviewsA young human reflects on his feelings for a an alien girl who had to leave him. Not one of my best, it's explicitly about his feelings, nothing elseFiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,339 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-9-0418. The Moment's Eternity reviewsAfter fleeing with her extraterrestrial friend when the earth faces inevitable destruction, they return to find their worst fears confirmed.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,161 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-8-0419. Soul's End reviewsInfatuation gone too far.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,870 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-8-0420. Final Confrontation reviewsA young man's obsession leads the object of all of his desires to the most desperate measures.Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,341 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-8-04
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