Name: Ash
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Status: With my boyfriend, Tony.
American
Sports: Soccer, Tennis, Cross-Country
NEW -Updated 07/30/08-
Fantasize in Nightmares: Chapter 8 - in the process
7/22 = 31 Percent Completed
NEW~I posted Chapter 8 of FIN and I am far from happy with the people who have read it so far. Nearly 40 people have read the last chapter now and still no reviews. I'm getting the feeling that the story has been worn out or something because even though I will still be writing it, I definitely won't be posting it here anymore. I'm sorry, but it is seriously stupid that people can't take one minute or less to say hey, good job.
I have just redone the first few chapters of Fantasize in Nightmares and I am really, finally, liking the turnout. I never liked my first few chapters, but I think that I am finally getting what I want out of it. Calista is now a little bit older than before, so her life is a bit more adult orientated now, thus the changes in the beginning of the story. I am working on Chapter 8, and yes I am taking a long time, sorry. I have a new character that I must outline because I must not get him wrong. He must be perfect, as he himself believes him to be.
My new story As Fragile As A Rose, has just been posted. This will be a nice twisted story for all you dark romance lovers out there.
I have suddenly realized that Fantasize in Nightmares is most likely going to be much longer than 22 chapters. Try aiming for the 30's perhaps. I do intend to publish once I finish rewriting all the chapters and editing her age, etc. I already know how it ends, and I already know the tenative name of the sequel. This is most likely going to be a trilogy. I am really excited as to what I am producing for chapter 7. A new, extremely important character will be introduced and I absolutely love how twisted he is.
For those of you who are curious, I have found who I think looks very similar to Calista in Fantasize in Nightmares.
http://www.weddingbee.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/24/rachel-02.jpg -
Also, I think the story will be undergoing a huge change because I want to shift her age up little so that she is a college student. I have figured out that I can't write teenagers well just because...well, I can't stand reading stories about teenagers (which is why I read adult books). You probably won't notice the difference, because only a few small things will be tweaked. The storyline will not change, only her age.
New Story In The Making!
It will probably be a long while before this comes out and it will be more geared towards adults because I plan to publish it. I do plan to see what I can do with FIN but we'll see. FIN will probably be a teen romance novel. Who knows?
Anywho...I do feel like letting the audience know up front; yes, I do write smut, but no, when I am making a good well thought out story I refuse to through my much loved characters into random love scenes. I build up to the moment. I am sick of reading stories on here where the characters just get together after 8 short chapters. NO! Readers don't feel the aw inspiring romance theme then and often find themselves disappointed because the characters were not close enough to even be having sex yet!
Sorry...I was just a little aggravated...anyway...
I used to be theLoverAsh
-The Other Stuff-
Here is the links to my Fanfiction.net and LiveJournal profile. YAY! Check them out!
(aka my daily life) Personal LiveJournal.com: http://www.livejournal.com/users/revolizandiditt/
Fanfiction.net aka the Pit: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/654739/
Favorite Movie Quotes:"Stupid, Fat Hobbit!!" - Lord of the Rings
"This is the captain speaking. We're having some trouble with our clearance so we may experience some turbulance
...and then explode." - Serenity
"I'm taking your sister under my protection here. If anything happens to her, anything at all, I swear to you, I will get very choked up. Honestly, there could be tears." - Serenity
"Hey...hey you! Bear fucker! Do you need assistance?!" - Super Troopers
"Sing it again, Rookie Biyaatch!" - Super Troops
"We should have taken him out back and shot him months ago." - Super Troopers
"We're expendable assets, and we've just been expended." - Resident Evil: Apocalypse
"I'll fart in your general direction." - Monty Python and the Holy Grail
"That's the most foul, cruel, and bad-tempered rodent you ever set eyes on!" - Monty Python and the Holy Grail
Favorite Bands:
Within Temptation
Baby Bash
Gazette
Plumb
Three Days Grace
Benny Benassi
Breaking Benjamin
LAme Immortelle
Evanscence
Icon and the Black Roses
Disturbed
HIM
Hmmm...I usually have a friendly disposition, just a hot temper.
I used to be a huge fan of fanfiction. Now I have gotten bored of it mostly...kinda sad. It gave me something to do when I was bored. Now I get bored reading it because no one writes good stuff these days. My penname is TheEvilSurgeon. I am a big fan of anime also...sometimes.
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