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| Weeba |
Author has written 30 stories for Essay, Family, Kids, Biography, Life, Friendship, Young Adult, General, Nature, Mythology, General, Thriller, Politics, School, and Historical. This whole kitten-kaboodle (yes I do realize it is kit and kaboodle; I like it better this way) is dedicated to my friend Viva (nickname: Weeba (hence my penname); didn't give her real name, so don't get any ideas), who introduced me to writing (if unwittingly) in the first place, by showing me the wonderful world of fanfiction. Huggles, Weeba! Thanks. I am 14 years old, female, and I love to write. I started out with fanfiction, but got increasingly into narrative and poetry, and now fanfiction is a mere memory to me. I'd like to write a book, but I'm kind of spinning my wheels on that. I'm waiting for the fiction course I'll take next summer at CTY (I hope!). This whole thing actually stems from the writing course I took last summer, also at CTY; it really made me a better writer, and now I'm obsessed. Reviews are very much appreciated, with CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!!! Most of what I put up will not be on its final draft yet, but waiting for nice writer-people like you to give their opinions. However, flames are not necessary, so don't bother with them. Thank you. Things I want in reviews: -suggestions on how to make it better -if you don't have any suggestions, or you can't think of anything bad to say, why is it good? Things I DON'T want in reviews: -flaming without a reason; if you think it's bad, tell me why otterpaws P.S. If I reviewed you, and you'd like a particular work of yours reviewed that I didn't get to, drop me a line; I'm happy to help out. Come to that, do that even if I haven't found you yet. Also, I'm one of those nice people who reciprocates reviews, so reviewing me will get you something in return! I know how hard it is to get your work commented on. I encourage others to do this, too; it's just common decency in the writing world to give back what you get. Thank you! | |||||||
1. Brenna: Synesthetic Greetings reviewsDue 4/26 for a class. A meeting with my best friend, who is synesthetic.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-23-062. Joke's On You reviewsAn excerpt from a story about a camp for smart kids.Going to contest Nov.18, so PLEASE REVIEW!Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 949 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-25-053. Blocked reviewsDesperately grabbing at watery words that won't come through onto pages...Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-24-054. American Heritage reviewsAmerican heritage is different for everyone. I've always felt like I was somehow un-American because of mine. This is a short free-write about my story.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-22-055. Considering Stairs reviewsThinking about staircases at a writing camp makes strange ideas emerge...found a rough draft of this in a journal from said camp and modified it some.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 580 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-21-056. Connections Made at Midnight reviewsThere are some things you just don't think about...but sometimes you can't help it, and that's how wisdom begins, but it's also how sadness and tragedy begin.Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 754 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-7-057. Sensations of Summer reviewsSome of the less appreciated joys of summer...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-5-058. Candles for 911 reviewsBirthdays on the terrible day. No complaining about category; it'll be history someday, you know. It almost is now.Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-4-059. Pastel Patterns reviewsFollow a little girl's life from kindergarten to old age, all through her pastel creations...Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 605 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-24-0510. Poetry Assignment reviewsI hate poetry assignments. Read this and find out why.Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-24-0511. Counting Stars reviewsThe memory of Atlantis still bitter on their tongues, they talk desperately of trips to Mars and making peace and counting stars...Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-22-0512. Tangled and Torn reviewsLessons we learn the hard way...rated T for potentially distressing subject matter.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 503 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-4-0513. In a Dark, Dark Room reviewsWhat started as a game turns into a nightmare, and a whole circle of people stand helplessly by...Fiction: Thriller - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 576 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-24-0514. The Lost and Found reviewsWhat will you find in your school's lost and found? Maybe these things...Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-16-0515. Stone Doll reviewsShe and her village are lost, forgotten...Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-16-0516. The Night Watchman reviewsHigh, high above the earth, the Spinner of Tops sits working...Fiction: Mythology - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 602 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2-22-0517. Fireflies reviewsTheir lights create wonder on a lazy summer night...Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2-15-0518. Unfinished Sentence reviewsAn unfinished sentence, and so many people never even saw the beginning...Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 641 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-15-0519. Honeysuckle Year » reviewsIt sounds like a love story, but it's not. Lonely boy meets lonely girl. A bond is formed, and boundaries are broken. PG-13 for themes on..death.Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,331 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 11-6-04 - Published: 9-13-0420. The First Thing You Notice reviewsThe first thing you notice is their eyes... REVISED!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 403 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-15-0421. Coffee Shop Sketches reviewsJust what it sounds like. Sketches of people I see in coffee shops, restaurants, etc. PG for real life.Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 522 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-2-0422. Looking, Thinking, Feeling, Being » reviewsA little series of character explorations of people I know, from my crush of two years, to my underestimated chorus teacher, to my worst enemy. PreviouslyFiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 998 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 8-25-04 - Published: 7-21-0423. I Remember reviewsAbout growth, leaving things behind. Inspired by Nentikobe's "Miss". I recomment that one, by the way.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-13-0424. Black Sheep reviewsYou don't have to be in the spotlight to be special.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-10-0425. Nothing reviewsVery angsty; wrote it just after my best friend's parents got divorced. About my own reaction to it. Please R&R.Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-2-0426. When I'll Feel Like That reviewsMy brother and his girlfriend are so happy...a little poem on how I feel about them. Please R&R.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-1-0427. The Last Campfire reviewsJust a little account of the last day at my Girl Scout camp, my thoughts, reminisces, that kind of thing. Please R&R!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 969 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-22-0428. Watching from the Wings reviewsRather a sad little character thumbnail sketch of a little girl in the wings. Please R&R, I'm still working on it.Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-21-0429. A Child's Stories reviewsA little poem about my Nana Molly. Just read it, please. I think you'll like it.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-21-0430. A Desperate Chase Down Memory Lane reviewsAn essay playing with the idea of the "stroll down Memory Lane". I'm still working on it, so comments are very much appreciated.Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 815 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-21-04
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