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since: 07-23-04, id: 426874
Author has written 13 stories for Life, Love, and General.
My names Melody and I wanted to have a place where I could post my poems and get some honest feedback. Im going to put all of the poems Ive written on here even though I hate almost all of them. Please leave me reviews and tell me what you honestly think even if you think they suck. 



1. Will You Still Love Me? reviews
Sometimes I feel like no one really knows my soul and if they ever did, they wouldnt love me anymore.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-25-05 - Published: 2-25-05
2. Big Brother
I wrote this poem about my brother. Its probably hard to understand w/o knowing everything thats happened with him and my family but I hope you can get the jist of it.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-3-04 - Published: 10-3-04
3. Free reviews
This poem might be hard to understand without knowing the story behind it so basically.. one of my only true friends doesnt accept me anymore because I dont believe in God. She doesnt accept who I am if I dont accept God. Sorry its in paragraph form.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-12-04 - Published: 8-12-04
4. Everything Is Fine reviews
This is what goes through my mind when Im cutting myself...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-10-04 - Published: 8-10-04
5. Numb reviews
Lately I've been really confused about how I feel. I just want to lay down and die sometimes.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-10-04 - Published: 8-10-04
6. Untitled reviews
I wrote this about my boyfriend. I love him more than aaaanyone else in the world and I worked hard on this poem so I hope you like it!
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-29-04 - Published: 7-29-04
7. Something Real reviews
I really dont like this one but I wanted to put in here anyways. I had a hard time getting out the feeling I was having but this is basically about how everyone thinks Im conceited but Im really not.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-26-04 - Published: 7-26-04
8. I Dont Know Anything reviews
I love David soooooo much.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-24-04 - Published: 7-24-04
9. I Love Him reviews
I wrote this right after an amazing guy asked me out. I had recently been spiraling very deep into depression and I did not want to have to deal with another hurt. Luckily though its 5 months later and we're still together.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 203 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-24-04 - Published: 7-24-04
10. Leave reviews
I was in a very suicidal mood when I wrote this one. It was over a period of a few days and more and more questions just kept popping up in my head and I had to get them out somehow.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-24-04 - Published: 7-24-04
11. Everyday
This one is about all of the self-hate that I used to carry with me. Luckily thats all pretty much over now but I can still feel what I felt when I wrote this.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-24-04 - Published: 7-24-04
12. Why? reviews
This one came to me one day when I was at school. I had relapsed into self mutilation and I was very confused and depressed.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-24-04 - Published: 7-24-04
13. Whats Missing? reviews
I think this is my best poem so far. I wrote it one night when I was really depressed. Thats basically when I write all of my poems but oh well.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-24-04 - Published: 7-24-04
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