"Tonight, Tonight

On a night like this,

The thunder rolls,

The lightening will clap,

The hail will storm,

The rain is coming,

And as MidNight approaches,

All those not in bed,

Will be eaten by Roaches."

~MidNight Roaches (It's silly, and it rhymes, but I find it very amusing.)

I enjoy reading, and love to write, but I'm not very good with the rules of writing. My grammar and punctuation, has never been very good and will no doubt take serious practice to fix. But until then please understand me when I say that "You misspelled the third word of the fifth line, and you're missing a comma in the fourth line after 'so on.' "is not a comment or anywhere close to constructive criticism. Constructive criticism is "the flow from line three to four is interrupted by the repetition of the word 'beat.' " Writing and reading are my favorite hobbies, so please don't bombard me with mechanical errors, I can fix grammar and punctuation in two seconds, but that does not help me create a better story, or learn how to tell it better. I want to be a good storyteller so help me tell you a better story, don't get hung up on typos and easily remedied details. Thank you for you time.