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Author has written 7 stories for Life, General, and Family. Hey, I just started on this site, and I'm really hoping for constructive critism or at least a little feedback for my few lonely stories that I've posted. If i get some feedback, I'll probably post more stories, since i have many started. In the mean time, I decided to write a few things about myself! •Name: Jennifer. But my friend Sam calls me Red. Don't ask why, just know that it involves a lack of sleep, and her slapping me in the face in the middle of the night. Thanks for listening to my semi-coherent rambling! ~Silver-sin8 Now, I'll get to what you may or may not need to know: Info about my stories! •Poems: this goes for all my poems, and it's fairly obvious. Although if people want more poems like those, i'd be happy to put more on the next time i get that confused, fuzzy, inspired feeling. However, i'm not going to add on to any of them. That goes for my short stories too, actually. •Need: I wrote this simply because...actually, I'm not quite sure why I wrote it. Probably just venting frustration. It came out of nowhere, from very, very, very old memories. The only thing I'm afraid of is that people are going to see this, get slightly creeped out, and not want to read the rest of my stories. Well, if that's the case then, oh well. I really want people to have an open mind with this. It's not really a story, just feeling and descriptions. •Colorado: I love this story. Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to brag about my own work. I just love the story itself, mainly because I somehow managed to remind myself exactly what my vacation was like. This is also some of my best imagery, although it definitely has a psychological twist. i can't seem to get away from that. Not that i really want to. Anyway, this is what it was like to go to Colorado with my best friend and my parents. Please enjoy! •Trials of Sin: Like i said, i wrote this for a contest. it was extremely frustrating because i wanted to keep certain things in the story mysterious so that the reader would think about it long after they'd put it down. However, i wasn't able to explain the story at all when i submitted it to the judges, and i was terrified that they wouldnt understand it at all. Maybe i just have too little faith in humanity. Nah. •Devotion: I really like this one.I love writing characters like Salome. They intrigue me, really; just the idea of having such a completely different sense of reality. I love tampering with that. The idea for it came out of nowhere. I guess I'm getting over my writer's block. Thank goodness!!!!! Anyway, i have the basic plot planned out, but i dont have any more of the story written than what's on here. I'm not sure if it's such a smart thing to do; updating before i finish, just in case i need to make changes to fit the plot, but i felt like putting it up, so i did. Yay! Thank you for reading and please remember that i LOVE reviews, and they really do help me a lot! | |||||||
1. Broken Hero reviewsA poem about the pain caused when I realized one day that my big brother and childhood idol was exactly the kind of person I didn't want to be.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-052. Someone Secret reviewsA poem about the current state of my relationship with someone in my family.Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 334 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-31-04 - Published: 12-31-043. Need reviewsA day in a young girl's life falls apart when she can't control her needs and doesn't know how to feel normal again. A short story about a day in the life of a young girl with Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,312 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-04 - Published: 12-30-044. Colorado reviewsA short story about how it felt to be exactly where I was supposed to be, even if just for a little while. This place affected me endlessly, and nothing I experienced there could possibly occur anywhere else. I love this story, so please read and reviewGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 956 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-30-04 - Published: 12-30-045. Trials of Sin reviewsA girl wakes up one morning with a guilty conscience as a person she's never met before. No one recognizes her for who she really is, and as her guilt continues to plague her, she begins to leave herself behind.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,328 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-30-04 - Published: 12-30-046. Unknown From Absence reviewsShe waits, she cries, she constantly hides. And through it all, she never feels. My best poem.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 567 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-047. Confliction of Self reviewsA semi-literate poem about my internal struggle between being my own influence and allowing myself to regress.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 385 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-18-04 - Published: 10-18-04